初中九年级英语写作专题训练50题-含参考范文一、话题作文1 . 假如你是B ob.你现在在中国四川,请给你的好友John写封信, 介绍你在中国四川的情况,不少于50个词, 开头和结尾部分已给出.Dear John,I'm in Sichuan now.I'm glad to be here.Yours,Bob【 答案】Dear John,I'm in Sichuan now. I make a lot of new friends and they are friendly to me. My schoolis not far from my home. So I usually walk to school. It takes me about fifteen minutes to getthere. The teachers are also very good and kind to me. They help me study Chinese. Iespecially like the food here. They are very delicious. For breakfast, Td like an egg and someapples. I have lunch at school. I usually have chicken and rice. I have dinner at home with myparents. Tm glad to be here.Yours,Bob【 详解】这篇作文要求我们以Bob的身份给自己的好友John写信,告诉他你在四川的情况。
短文只给出了主题,具体的写作内容需要学生们自己发挥想象力进行补充,然后用正确的英语表达出来审题可知,这封信是写给熟悉的朋友的,关系比较亲密,信中可以给他介绍你在四川的日常生活,如你的学校、同学、老师,你在那里的起居、饮食习惯等等文章应使用一般现在时、第一人称来叙述写作时应注意:首先要根据题目要求介绍自己的日常生活,不能偏离主题,写一些无关的东西合理安排各部分之间的内容,注意层次清晰,内容充实其次应注意英语句式的结构和表达习惯,不能根据汉语思维,逐词翻译,写汉语式的英语选择适当的单词、短语和句型去表达,句式结构以简单句为主,易于掌握,表达也比较清晰、明了同时注意整篇文章的连贯性,可以使用一些衔接成分【 点睛】这是i篇优秀的作文,短文作者根据题目要求给自己的好朋友写信,介绍了自己在四川的情况首先短文内容充实,符合题目要求短文从自己交新朋友、学校、老师以及自己的一日三餐等方面进行介绍,表达准确,叙述清晰、完整其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,语法规范,用词准确,句式结构完整,符合英语的表达习惯以简单句为主,简洁、明了短文中使用了一些较好的短语和句型,如 Imake a lot of new friends and they are friendly to m e .、My school is not far from my home.So I usually walk to school.、It takes me about fifteen minutes to get there. > For breakfast,rd like an egg and some apples. > I have dinner at home with my parents 等等。
2 . 你的上个周末是怎么度过的?请你以My busy weekend为题,用英语写一篇短文,介绍你的周末写作要求:1 .文中不得出现真实校名和师生姓名;2 . 语句通顺、意思连贯,标点正确;3 . 词数60左右 答案】例文One possible version:My busy weekendI was very busy last weekend. On Saturday I did my homework at home. After I finishedmy homework, I helped my mother clean the room. Though I was a little tired, I was veryhappy. In the evening I played the guitar. I like reading books and playing guitar very much.On Sunday I went to the zoo with my family. I saw many kinds of animals. We had a goodtime there.I had a happy and busy weekend. I enjoyed myself last weekend.【 详解】I. 题干解读:题目要求根据提示要点,介绍自己忙碌的周末情况,可以适当的发挥,写作时要运用正确的英语表达,要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导:写作时要紧扣主题,本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容;时态采用一般过去时;在介绍内容时,力求语言准确,内容完整,保证行文连贯,条理清晰3 . 书面表达以“ How to keep healthy”为题,写一篇短文要求:条理清楚,字迹工整,60—80词 答案】How to Keep HealthyHealth is very important for everybody. Then how can we do to keep healthy? You can try thefollowing tips:First, you should have healthy eating habits. You should eat more vegetables and fruit. Ifsgood fbr you. Don't eat too much meat. Don't drink coffee too much.Second, you can play sports. Sports can make you stronger and healthier. You can playbasketball with your friends when you are free. You can go to the mouuntains with yourfamily.Third, be happy. A happy man lives longer than a sad man .So sing a song or watch a funmovie. You can do anything to make yourself happy.At last,stay away from smoking and drinking. Smoking and drinking are too bad fbrmen .They can cause terrible illness.If you do these things, I believe you can be a healthy man.【 详解】试题分析:这篇短文要求我们以How to keep healthy为题写一篇作文。
在题目中给了我们这篇短文的重点词汇,如 healthy habits健康的习惯,eating habits饮食习惯,be good for对. . .有好处,do exercise进行锻炼, keep fit保持健康我们要围绕这些重点词汇组织短文的写作其他很多内容都需要我们自己去充实,让它变得完整、合理,内容丰富,这就需要花费我们的想象力,以及我们平时积累的知识另外,写作时,还需注意语句间的衔接,使文意连贯,表达流畅写作亮点:这是一篇比较不错的作文作者从健康的习惯、锻炼等几个方面,告诉我们如何才能保持健康,层次非常的清晰短文中需要作者自己补充的内容完成得也不错 如 Health is very important for everybody. Then how can we do to keep healthy?等 这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要,意思也很连贯文章中还用了一些比较好的句型,如If you do these things ,1 believe you can be a healthy man. At last,stay away from smokingand drinking.等。
考点:话题类作文4 . 运动可以让我们更健康,爬山成为很多年轻人喜爱的运动假如你和同学计划本周日去爬山,请根据提示,写一篇60词左右的短文要求:层次清楚,结构完整提示词:classmate, Sunday, meet, school gate, leave, take, guitar, bread, water, fun【 答案】例文This Sunday my classmates and I are going to climb mountains. We plan to meet at theschool gate. We are leaving at 8:30 a.m. They are going to take many things, such as somedelicious food, different kinds of drinks, the guitar and so on. I am going to take some breadand water. When we have a rest, Li Kang is going to play the guitar and sing some songs forus. I think we must have fun.【 详解】1. 题干解读:该题目属于记叙文写作,内容是根据提示,写一篇60词左右的短文,介绍一下你和同学本周日计划去爬山的情况。
2. 写作指导:本文应该用第一人称来叙述作文内容;时态采用一般将来时为主,用 begoing to 描述场景;首先提出周末计划;其次具体介绍活动安排:最后是祝愿5 . 阳光中学校报英文版正在为其栏目“ 你所熟悉的身边人” 征稿请根据提供的信息,以“My friend”为题撰写一篇稿件,介绍你的好朋友Jack注意: ( 1)要点清楚,语言流畅,字数80词左右( 2 ) 短文须包括所有要点内容,不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥SchoolNameJackAge13Comes fromEnglandLives inChinaSunshine Middle SchoolClass2Grade7Lookstall and strong , short hairBe good atMaths,drawingHobbiesSports , a member of the school basketball teamHis dreama basketball playerHeroYao MingMy friendI have a good friend.【 答案】My friendI have a good friend. His name is Jack. He is 12 years old. He comes from England, but nowhe lives in China. He is a student in Class2 Grade? in Sunshine Middle School. Jack is talland strong, he has short hair. He is good at Maths and drawing. He likes sports and he is amember of the school basketball team. He hopes to be a basketball player like Yaoming.Because Yaoming is her hero.【 详解】试题分析:考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题,确定文章的中心。
注意文章文体、人称和时态本文主要应用一般现在时来描写人物,所以在写作时,要尤其注意一般现在时的表达方式同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性温馨提醒:考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等 亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少. 如: be good at,comes from 等,还有注意an d 和 because等连接词的用法 学习中注意总结, 牢记一些固定句式及短语, 写作时就可以适当引用, 使文章的表达更有逻辑性, 更富有条理考点:提纲作文6 . 健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们非常重要,请以“How to Keep Healthy”为题写一篇作文,谈谈你的看法提示:可以从饮食健康、锻炼身体以及良好的生活习惯等方面入手要求:1 .词数80左右2 . 要点完整、层次清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯 答案】例文:How to Keep HealthyAs we all know, health is very important in our life. So how can we keep healthy?First, it is necessary to keep a balanced diet. We should eat more fruit and vegetableswhich are rich in vitamins. Also, we should have meals regularly. Second, to have a strongbody, we should exercise more. If we don't have much time to exercise, we can try to ride ourbikes or walk to school. Ifs also good exercise. Third, get up early and never stay up late.They are both good for our health. We must make sure we sleep at least eight hours a day.Besides these, we must keep away from some bad habits, such as smoking and drinking.I believe if we can form good living habits, we are sure to live a healthy life.【 详解】1. 题干解读:题目要求以“How to Keep Healthy”为题写短文谈谈如何保持健康,要包括提示中的几个方面。
2. 写作指导:写作时要以第一 人 称为主,时态采用一般现在时文章可分为三段式:第一段点题;第二段给出具体方法;第三段收尾要做到无单词拼写和语法错误7. 你听说过某些濒临灭绝的动物吗?请你结合自己所学的知识,以“Why should wesave wild animals? ” 为题,用英语写一篇短文,简述保护野生动物的原因80词左右Why should we save wild animals?[ 答案】 Why should we save wild animals?I think there are many endangered animals in the world, such as tigers and pandas. Why arethey in danger? There are many reasons. First of all, humans cut down forests, so tigers canhave few places to live in. Second, people kill many tigers for fur to make money. Forpandas, there are also few places to live in.But we couldn't live without animals around us. So we should know the importance of savingthese animals, and we must stop people from killing wild animals.【 详解】这篇作文要求我们以Why should we save wild animals为题, 介绍一下我们所知道的濒危的野生动物,以及我们为什么要保护他们。
这是一个开放性的作文,题目中只给出了题目,而具体的写作内容,需要学生们自己发挥想象力,来组织语言,连接成文在文章中应先介绍一些濒危的野生动物,简单叙述他们濒危的原因,并谈论我们要保护他们的重要性写作时,要注意文章内容的条理性,叙述要清晰、完整还需要注意英语表达和汉语习惯的不同,不要写汉语式的英语,而应从句子的整体考虑,使用恰当的句型、短语来表达句子之间使用一些副词或者连词,增强文章的连贯性点睛:这是一篇优秀的作文,短文作者按照题目要求给我们介绍了我们要保护野生动物的原因首先短文内容完整、充实,短文可以分成三个部分,首先是介绍了一些濒危的野生动物;然后分析了他们濒危的原因;最后讲述了我们要保护他们的重要性结构很完整,叙述也很清楚、明了其次短文中的语法规范,时态准确,句式表达符合英语的表达习惯,整体比较流畅、连贯短文中有一些较好的句型,如 I think thereare many endangered animals in the world, such as tigers and pandas. > Second, people killmany tigers for fur to make money > So we should know the importance of saving theseanimals, and we must stop people from killing wild animals 等。
8 . 书面表达请向你的同学介绍一下,你都能会些什么约 30-50词 答案】My name is Li Darning. I'm a 15 years old boy. I'm active ,lovely and clever. In theschool,my favourite subject is math . I also like sports very much. I can play football andbasketball. I can swim and I am good at it. At home I can help my mother do housework.【 详解】亮点说明:文中使用了非常好的短语,例如in the school, my favouritesubject, 15 years old, active Jovely and clever, like sports, very much, play football andbasketball, be good at, at home, help sb. do等虽然习作的句式和内容都较简单,但层次清楚,表达流畅,是本文的最大亮点。
点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数二、小作文9 . 健康饮食很重要,请列举出5 个你最喜欢吃的健康食品 答案】例文:I like milk. It tastes good.I like eggs. I always have an egg for breakfast.I like eating apples because there is an old saying, €tAn apple a day keeps the doctoraway.^^I often have vegetables because they can make me healthy.I also like eating chicken. It can provide me with the necessary nutrition.【 详解】I . 题干解读:题目要求写出自己喜欢的五种健康的食物,写作时要运用正确的英语表达,要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2 .写作指导:写作时要注意是健康食物,本文应该用第一人称描写;时态采用一般现在时;在介绍内容时,力求语言准确,内容完整,保证行文连贯,条理清晰1 0 .书面表达假如你是Li M in g ,你的英国朋友William对中国的传统文化很感兴趣春节将至,请结合图片内容,并适当发挥,用英语写五个完整的句子,向他介绍春节注意:句中不得出现真实姓名或学校信息①____________________________________________________________________________________________________②____________________________________________________________________________________________________③_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _④____________________________________________________________________________________________________⑤____________________________________________________________________________________________________【 答案】①Spring Festival is a traditional festival in China.②Chinese people have a big dinner with family at the festival.(3)At Spring Festival, we often watch TV together after dinner.©Children always get lucky money at the festival.⑤We often make big lanterns before Spring Festival.【 详解】1. 题干解读:该题目属于看图写作,然后根据图片内容,写五个完整的句子,向英国朋友William介绍春节,可适当发挥。
2. 写作指导:句子应该用第一人称和第三人称叙述;时态采用一般现在时;介绍春节及春节活动时,应详细具体,语句通顺,逻辑性强,保证条理清晰1 1 .请仿照例句,用方框中提供的信息,写一写你的真实的经历(情况) ,并说明理由或感受Example:A. I have read Treasure Island once. I think it is an interesting story.B. I have never swum in the river. It is dangerous.C. I have eaten stinky tofu many times. It doesn't smell good but it tastes delicious.I have visited ... I have been to ... I have read ... I have never... I ...1.2.____________________________________________________________________________3.____________________________________________________________________________4 .____________________________________________________________________________5.____________________________________________________________________________[ 答 案] 【 小题 1 】I have visited the Bird's Nest twice. Tm really prould of it.【 小 题 2] I have been to the Great Wall many times. I think the it is an unusual wonder inthe world.[ 题 3 ] I have read Journey to the West twice. I think it is very exciting.[ 小题 4] I have never been to Japan before. It's too far away from my home.【 小题 5 ] I have tried Beijing Duck before. I think it's very delicious.【 详解】1. 题干解读:该题要求按照所给的要点提示,根据例句进行仿写,描述自己的真实的经历,并说明理由或感受。
2. 写作指导:根据例句可知,本题主要采用现在完成时;人称以第一人称为主写作可以结合自身的经历,描写去过的地方,读过的书等注意写五点即可,但是要确保语句通顺,无单词语法错误三、材料作文1 2 .生活中有很多东西会使我们心情低落作为学生,我们常常会遇到学习、生活、天气、环境等等方面的问题,它们可以让你感到疲惫和焦虑但我们可以通过一系列方法消除这些情绪,让自己快乐起来具体措施如下:1 . 听一些让人放松的音乐;2 . 做你最喜欢的运动;3 . 多与别人交流,寻求意见;4 . 读你自己最喜欢的书;5 . 吃可口的食物等等请根据以上信息,以“How to Keep Happy”为题,写一篇70词左右的短文,可以适当发挥 答案】例文:How to Keep HappyEveryone dreams to live happily. There are some ways to keep you happy.First, you can listen to some relaxing music. Second, do some exercises that you likemost. Next, you can use your spare time to talk to people and seek for some advice. Then, itwill also be helpful to read some books that you love. Finally, if you are still in a bad mood,you can eat some delicious food.Happiness can keep your life going well, so you need to keep happy all the time.【 详解】L 题干解读:本题要求以“How to Keep Happy”为题,根据提示内容写一篇70词左右的短文,内容包括让自己快乐起来的一些具体措施。
2 . 写作指导:本文时态主要采用一般现在时;写作时应紧扣提示内容进行发挥,注意开头或结尾的总起和概括;写作完成后应确保文章内容齐全,行文流畅,语言符合英文表达习惯1 3 .旅行是一种享受,江河湖海,名胜古迹,让人领略到祖国山河的美好暑假就要到了,假如你计划去北京旅游,请根据以下提示内容,制定你的旅游计划提示:( 1) Why do you want to go to Beijing?(2) Who will you go with?(3) How will you go there?(4) What will you do there?(5) How long will you stay there?要求:( 1)短文须包含所有提示要点, 可适当发挥;( 2 ) 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名;( 3 ) 词数70词左右 答案】例文The summer holiday is coming. I want to go on a trip to Beijing with my parents.Beijing is a beautiful city with a long history. Ws the capital of China. We will go there bytrain. We will stay there fbr 3 days. We are going to visit Tiananmen Square and the GreatWall. We will go to Tiananmen Square to watch the raising of the national flag and we willtake a lot of photos on the Great Wall. I hope well have a great time.【 详解】1. 题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。
介绍暑假去北京旅游的计划2. 写作指导:本文主要采用一般现在时和一般将来时,人称以第一人称为主介绍旅行的交通方式,跟谁一起去,计划去参观哪些旅游景点写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误1 4 .假如你是李华,你的外国朋友Sam打算作为交换生来到你校进行交换学习,为更好为到你校学习做准备,发邮件想了解你的学习与生活作息,并对学校的校规、课程和社团活动表示感兴趣请根据提示信息,给他回一封邮件介绍一下相关情况短文词数约80词,不包含给出的开头和结尾内容:1 . 你的日常生活作息( 至少两点) ;2 . 你的校规;3 . 你的课程和社团活动;要求:1 . 所写内容应包括所提供的信息、意思连贯、语法正确2 . 可适当发挥“ 短文词数约80词左右开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数3 . 不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息Dear Sam,Thanks for your e-mail. I am very happy to tell you something about my life at schooland home.Yours,Li Hua【 答案】例文Dear Sam,Thanks for your e-mail. I am very happy to tell you something about my life at schooland home.I always get up early every day and go to school on foot. We have 7 classes on weekdaysand I like English and science best. After school, I first finish my homework in the classroomand then play table tennis with my classmates.There are many interesting clubs in my school, such as sports club, cooking club, musicclub and so on. I join in the sports club because I love table tennis.However, there are some rules at school. For example, we should wear school uniformand we can't eat in the classroom. The rules are strict but they will help us develop goodhabits.I hope it will help you get to know our school better.Yours,Li Hua【 详解】1. 题干解读:本文要求给外国朋友Sam写- - 封邮件,介绍一下你的学习与生活作息,学校的校规、课程和社团活动:注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2. 写作指导:本文主要用第一人称进行写作,时态主要用一般现在时写作时认真审题,根据提示内容,列出写作要点以及每个要点可能用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作,围绕主题准确使用词汇、语法和句型;语言表达要符合语法结构和英文表达习惯;做到层次分明,条理清晰1 5 .书面表达:请你以学生会主席吴兵的名义,根据下列提示,给学校方校长写封推荐信,推荐林涛获得本年度的新星奖,字 数 100词左右,开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数能力聪明,学东西快学习努力,擅长弹钢琴、打排球个性考虑事情周全,把每件事情都计划的很好,经常参加为有困难的孩子举行的筹款活动事迹非常勇敢,上学期,他的邻居,7 9 岁的孙奶奶的厨房着火了,他冲进去,用湿毯子裹住孙奶奶将她救了出来,他受了重伤,住院两个月Dear Mr. Fang,I would likeWe all thinkthat______________________________________________________________________Yours faithfully,Wu Bing【 答案】Dear Mr. Fang,I would like to recommend Lin Tao to get the new star award this term. Lin Tao is very cleverand he learns things very quickly. He studies hard. He is good at playing the piano andplaying volleyball. He is considerate and always plans things well in advance. He is ready tohelp others and he often attend activities to help poor children. He is brave. Last term, hisneighbor Grandma Sun's kitchen was on fire. He rushed in and took Grandma Sun out with awet blanket. And he was badly injured and stayed in hospital for two months.We all think that Lin Tao is such an excellent boy that he is the best choice for the new staraward. I hope you can consider my advice.Yours faithfully,Wu Bing【 详解】试题分析:这篇作文要求我们以吴兵的身份,给方校长写一封推荐信,推荐林涛获得这个年度的新星奖。
这是一封推荐信,在信中,我们首先应表明写这封信的目的;其次我们要阐述推荐林涛的原因,这是作文的主体部分,题目中已给出了具体的写作内容,我们需要用英语将这些内容表达出来;最后重申自己的建议,并希望校长考虑接受自己的建议通过分析可知,这篇短文主要应使用一般现在时态,而在最后一条介绍林涛的事迹的时候,应使用一般过去时态人称应使用第三人称,因此我们应注意一般现在时态中,谓语动词第三人称单数形式的变化以及一般过去时态中,动词的过去式的变化写作时,不要逐条翻译,要注意上下文的连贯,应使用符合英语表达习惯的词汇和句型,避免汉语式的英语使文章表达流畅,还应使用一些好的句型写作亮点:这是一篇优秀的范文,短文中作者按照题目的要求,给方校长写了一封推荐信短文共包括三个主要的部分,首先是向方校长表明写信的目的,I would like Irecommend Lin Tao to get the new star award this term, 一句话点明,简洁明了接下来作者介绍了林涛的一些情况,使用了丰富的句型和短语,如 He is good at playing thepiano and playing volleyball > He is ready to help others and he often attend activities to helppoor children、He rushed in and took Grandma Sun out with a wet blanket; 最后作者重申了自己的提议,并希望校长予以考虑。
短文的结构非常完整,内容很充实这篇短文还使用了正确的人称和时态,注意了谓语动词形式的变化,符合英语的语法规范考点:提纲类作文16 . 人类对热带雨林的不断砍伐和破坏,导致雨林的面积逐渐缩小现请你以“How to Protect Rainforests”为题,写一篇80词左右的文章来倡导大家保护雨林,以及告诉大家怎样保护雨林建议:1. 向人们展示并说明热带雨林的重要性;2. 节约用纸,少用纸;3. 让人们不要砍树;4. 让人们多植树提示词:save ( 节约), use, less, paper, importance ( 重要性), show, ask, encourage ( 鼓励)【 答案】例文How to Protect RainforestsRainforests are very important to us. They are the lungs of the earth. However,rainforests are becoming smaller and smaller, so we should protect them. But do you knowhow to protect them? Here are some suggestions.First, we can show and tell people the importance of rainforests. Second, we should useless paper. When we use paper, we must use both sides of the paper. Send e-cards instead ofletters. Third, we should ask people not to cut down the trees. Finally, we can encouragepeople to plant more trees.I hope we can try our best to protect rainforests.【 详解】1. 题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。
以“How to Protect Rainforests”为题,根据要点提示,写一篇作文告诉大家怎么样保护雨林2. 写作指导:本文时态采用一般现在时;人称以第一人称为主写作时可分为三段,第一段介绍雨林的重要性,以及雨林正在减少的现状;第二段介绍如何保护雨林;最后一段表示自己的祝愿行文确保语句通顺,无单词语法错误1 7 .书面表达假如你是李明,你的美国笔友戴夫(Dave)来信向你询问你所喜欢的人你非常喜欢作家韩寒,请根据下面的信息,向你的笔友写封回信介绍一下你喜欢的作家信的开头和结尾已给出( 不计入总词数) 韩寒出生年月和地点1982年 9 月 2 3 日,上海爱好写作、踢足球和跑步成就1998年荣获全国新概念作文大赛一等奖,1999年开始写小说,他在年轻人中很受欢迎参考词汇:新概念作文大赛New Concept Composition Contest;小说novel要求:1. 语言通顺,流畅;2.70词左右Dear Dave,Yours,Li Ming【 答案】Dear Dave,Thank you for your letter.! am writing to tell you something about the person I like.I like HanHan very much.He is a writer.He was born on September 23, 1982 in Shanghai.He likeswriting, playing soccer and running.He won first prize in the National New ConceptComposition Contest in 1998.He began to write novels in 1999.He is very popular withyoung people. I hope he can write more great books.Yours,Li Ming【 详解】介绍韩寒平时的情况,句子用一般现在时,句子的主语用第三人称单数,介绍他曾经的获奖情况,句子应该用一般过去时,所写的句子要符合英语语法,不要遗漏要点,要用自己熟悉的单词及句型。
点睛:I) 作文动笔之前一般都要先打腹稿确立以什么做中心,文章分为几段,各段分别表达哪些要点,用哪些语句来支撑各段落的主题句2) 考虑好写多少句子,搜索记忆中哪些词汇和句型适用于这个语言环境3) 边写边思考内容的连贯性,语言和句子的准确性注意分段、详略搭配、注意连贯行文连贯是指要点之间的连接词语或过渡语句运用得当,使得作文不是一句句孤立的汉译英;因此行文时多用关联词、引导词,把文章句子通过各种关系整合起来,达到起承转合,运用自如的目的,从而获取高分1 8 .书面表达:假如你是Sandy,给你在美国的笔友David写一封信介绍一下你的情况要点如下:今 年 12岁,和家人一起住在苏州;高而苗条,短头发,戴眼镜;每天步行去学校,最喜欢的学科是英语,老师同学都对你很好;喜欢打网球,是校网球俱乐部一员;李娜是你的偶像;6. 总是有太多家庭作业,没有时间看电视注意:1.70词左右;2. 所有提示要点必须都用上,并可作适当的发挥Dear David:My name is Sandy.Best wishes,Sandy[答案]I'm tall and slim. I have short hair and I wear glasses. I walk to my school everyday. There are four lessons in the morning and three in the afternoon. English is my favoritesubject. My teachers and classmates are all nice to me. In my free time, I like playing tennis. Iam a member of our school tennis club. Li Na is my hero. I have too much homeworkevery day. I don't have much time to watch TV.【 详解】试题分析:这是一篇给材料作文。
本文所给材料比较详细,我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来动笔前要认真阅读材料,不可遗漏要点,并适当发挥根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态,主语是第一人称,注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系 亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少汝口: tall andslim 身材修长,favorite subject 最喜欢的科目,, In my free time, I like playing tennis. I ama member of our school tennis club. Li Na is my hero.喜欢打网球, 是校网球俱乐部一员等, 学习中注意总结, 牢记一些固定句式及短语, 写作时就可以适当引用, 使文章的表达更有逻辑性, 更富有条理.考点:提纲作文19. 假 如 你 是M ary,上周六天气晴朗,你和妹妹Linda上午去公园游玩,中午在餐馆吃饭,下午去电影院看电影,你们度过了快乐的一天请根据下面的要点提示,用英语写一篇约60-70词的短文,可适当发挥要点提示:1. What did you do in the park?2. How was the food in the restaurant?3. How was the movie?要求:( 1)短文须包括提示中的所有要点,可适当发挥;( 2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;【 答案】例文:It was sunny last Sunday. My sister Linda and I took a bus to the park in the morning.We enjoyed ourselves in the Park. First we watched the monkeys, then fished by the lake.Finally we played games with some children. At noon we ate lunch at the restaurant. The foodin the restaurant was delicious. We liked the food there. After lunch, we went to the cinema. Itwas an interesting movie. We had a good laugh over it. What a good time we had last Sunday!【 详解】1. 题干解读:该题目属于材料作文。
短文必须包括在公园里做了什么:餐馆里的事物怎么样;看的电影怎么样等要点2. 写作指导:本文应该用第一人称来叙述故事内容;时态采用一般过去时叙述的时候可采用适当的连词连接句子,要叙述完整,保证条理清晰,行文确保语句通顺,无单词语法错误2 0 .书面表达写一篇短文介绍你自己50词左右 答案】Hi! My name is Tony. I am 12 years old. I am a middle school student now. I am inClass Two, Grade Seven. I like playing football, singing, painting and swimming. And appleis my fauvourite fruit. I like rice, too. I am good at English. I am helpful. I often help myparents do housework. I am out-going and kind. I want to be your friend. Do you want to bemy friend?【 详解】试题分析:试题分析:本文属于话题作文,题目是介绍自己,先审题,弄清写作要求审题是写好作文的前提,也是书面表达的基础。
如果写偏了题,语言表达再好也很难得高分审题时要注意两个方面:理清思路,确定体裁、框架结构和内容尽量用上自己最熟悉的词来组织如课文里的句子根据自己的实际情况改编从而避免单词拼写的错误 亮点说明】:这是一篇比较优秀的作文作者很好介绍了自己的爱好,性格特点,希望成为大家的朋友思路清晰,表达准确,句式灵活使用熟悉的句型My name isTony. I am 12 years old. I am a middle school student now. I am in Class Two, GradeSeven.,语言表达要符合英语习惯,准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯没有单词拼写和语法方面的错误考点:考查话题类作文2 1 .书面表达假如星期天你和朋友一起去仁爱农场( Ren'aiFarm )去野餐,请对当时的情况展开合理的想象,以 David的身份给Mary写一封信,写一篇70词左右的短文. ( 注意书信格式)【 答案】Dear Mary,How is it going? I hope you are fine. I want to tell to something about myself.On Sunday, my friends and I went to Ren'ai Farm to have a picnic. We met at eight in themorning and went there by bike. It took us about one hour to get there. The farm was very bigand there were a lot of animals such as sheep, pigs, geese and so on. We had a picnic on thegrass. We took our lunch there. We had some bread, beef, orange juice and some fruits. Whenwe ate, we could see many trees and small hills. It was very beautiful. We enjoyed ourselves.Though we were tired, we were very happy.Best wishes.Yours sincerely,David【 详解】试题分析:这篇作文要求我们以David的身份,给 Mary写一封信,给她介绍你周日和朋友们去仁爱农场野餐的事情。
题目中并没有规定我们要写什么内容,因此具体的情况需要我们自己展开想象,这对于学生们来说是比较困难的,在文中,学生们要合理想象野餐的情景,要有内容,也要符合题目的要求如我们可以考虑写清楚什么时候去的,怎么去的,在那里看到了什么、做了些什么等因为这是描述一件己经发生了的事情,因此这篇短文我们应使用一般过去时态,我们要注意谓语动词形式的变化,尤其是不规则动词的过去式形式写作时,还需要使用一些较好的句型和短语,使文章的表达流畅、连贯写作亮点:这是一篇优秀的作文,短文中作者给我们描写了他和朋友去仁爱农场野餐的事情,根据题目要求,作者展开了合理的想象,使短文的内容非常充实、完整首先作者写了他和朋友是什么时候、如何去农场的;然后描写了他们在那里所看到的东西;重点写了他们的野餐情况,最后还写了对这次活动的感受其次作者使用了正确的时态和人称,全文主要使用了一般过去时态,动词都变成他们的过去式,尤其是一些不规则的动词,如 took, ate, had, went等最后作文中也有一些比较好的句式,如 Ittook us about one hour to get there > The farm was very big and there were a lot of animalssuch as sheep, pigs, geese and so on、When we ate, we could see many trees and smallhills> We enjoyed ourselves. Though we were tired, we were very happy.等等。
考点:话题作文22. 忙碌而又愉快的一学期就要结束了在这个学期你有哪些收获?哪件事最让你难忘?暑假你有什么打算?请根据提示用英语写一篇短文,介绍给你的同学们内容提示:1 . 已经学习了大约400个新英语单词,已经学习打篮球……2 . 难忘的一件事. ( 你做了什么及感想)3 . 暑假有何打算写作要求:1 . 语句通顺;表达正确;2 . 内容必须包括提示的信息;可适当发挥;3 . 文章的开头已经给出,不计入总词数词数:60-80词左右The busy and happy term has come to the end. I have gained ( 收获) a lot. I have【 答案】例文:The busy and happy term has come to the end. I have gained ( 收获) a lot. I havelearned about 400 new English words. I have learned to play basketball and swim.l didn't goto school for two weeks because I was hurt badly last semester. My friend Liu Gang helpedme with my lessons. I really appreciated his help. Without his help, I could not pass the exam.In the coming summer vacation, I plan to travel to Beijing to relax myself. Besides, Iam going to help my parents do some housework. I think they will be very pleased.【 详解】1 .题干解读:本文是•篇材料作文。
回顾这一学期自己的收获以及对于暑假的打算首先是介绍学习、运动等方面的收获,接下来是介绍难忘的一件事和自己的感想,最后是介绍暑期的计划2 . 写作指导:本文主要采用现在完成时,一般过去时和一般将来时人称以第一人称为主开头已给出,分为两段式:第一段描述这学期在学习、运动等方面的收获,并且讲述难忘的一件事以及感想第二段介绍了自己暑假的计划写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误23. 假 定 你 是 L isa ,上周末和同学们一起参加了郊游活动请根据下面思维导图提示,以“My last weekend”为题,用英语写一篇短文,简要介绍活动情况,并谈谈你的感受T T巫 c How did you get there?How was the weather? / --------- 工 ——5---------\ / What did you do there?Where did you go? _ -weel^吧—How long did you stay there?Whom did you go with? ) \注意:1)短文须包括所有要点,可适当增加细节;2)文中不得出现与你真实身份相关的信息;3)词数:8 0 左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My last weekendHello, everyone! I'm Lisa. I'd like to tell you something about my last weekend.【 答案】例文:My last weekendHello, everyone! I'm Lisa. Td like to tell you something about my last weekend.It was sunny last weekend. I went to my grandpa's farm with my classmates. It wasn'tvery far so we went there by bike. We stayed there for a whole day and had great fun. In themorning, we milked a cow and fed the chickens. Then we flew a kite in the field. In theafternoon, we learned to ride a horse. In the evening, we cooked with firewood and had a bigmeal together.What a great weekend!【 详解】1. 题干解读:题目要求根据思维导图提示,以“My last weekend”为题,写短文介绍自己上周末的活动情况及感受。
2. 写作指导:写作时要以第一人称为主,时态用一般过去时可分三段式写作:第一段用己给出开头,开篇点题;第二段介绍具体的活动;第三段介绍自己的感受要做到无单词拼写和语法错误24. 假如你们学校要开展以“ 家乡的过去与现在” 为主题的英语有奖征文活动请你从以下几个方面写一篇英语短文,介绍你家乡的变化提 示 :( 1)房屋;( 2)交通;( 3 ) 人们的工作情况要 求 :( 1 ) 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称2) 100词左右 答案】例文:The Past and Present of My HometownSince the 1980s, my hometown has changed a lot. In the past, people lived in old andbroken houses. There were few buses or cars. People had to walk or ride bikes to go out.Many people had no jobs and they lived a hard life.But situations in my hometown are quite different now. With the help of the government,people now live in new houses. Many people have their own cars. Factories have appearedone after another in my hometown. Ifs easy fbr people to find jobs and make money.Now my hometown has become a popular tourist attraction. Welcome to my hometownand you will have a good time.【 详解】1. 题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文,要求以“ 家乡的过去与现在“ 为主题写一篇短文,介绍自己家乡的变化。
2. 写作指导:本文时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主:人称主要以第三人称为主;文章可分为三段式:第一段从三方面( 房屋、交通和人们的工作情况)介绍家乡过去的情况;第二段从三方面介绍现在的家乡情况;最后一段呼吁大家来自己的家乡游玩在写作时要做到无标点和语法错误,正确运用好几种时态2 5 .为迎接党的二十大胜利召开,21st Century Teens杂志社开展了“ 喜迎二十大,争做好少年” 的主题活动,现向各位同学们征稿啦!本期题目是“A Pioneering ( 先锋)Student",你想向杂志社投稿请根据以下写作提纲介绍一下你最好的朋友Suzy,向大家宣传她的优秀品质be interested in outdoor activities...,love animals and take good care of them...注意:1 .文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;2 .词 数 80左右短文的开头已经写好,不计入总词数A Pioneering StudentSuzy is a 14-year-old girl who I think has all the good qualities to be a pioneeringstudent.【 答案】例文:A Pioneering StudentSuzy is a 14-year-old girl who I think has all the good qualities to be a pioneeringstudent.She is interested in outdoor activities. She often plays badminton after school. She iscaring, and she often takes part in some volunteering activities to help elderly or animalsduring the holidays. Once on her way home from school, she saw an injured stray cat. Shetook it home without thinking and took good care of it. Now the kitten has recovered and theyhave become good friends. She is helpful and brave. She once bravely fought against badstudents and helped them leam. She also often does what she can do to help the class.I think Suzy has all the good qualities to be a pioneering student. She deserves all of usto learn from her.【 详解】1. 题干解读:该题目属于材料作文写作,写作时应承接短文开头,然后根据表格介绍好朋友Suzy的优秀品质,可适当发挥。
2. 写作指导:本文应该以第三人称来叙述内容;时态综合采用一般现在时和•般过去时;介绍好朋友的品质时,应详细具体,语句通顺,逻辑性强,保证条理清晰2 6 .每个人都不可能没有烦恼当你有烦恼时,请试着控制你的情绪,因为情绪可以影响你生活中的很多方面所以生活中我们应当相信自己,笑对人生,多与父母、朋友沟通请展开你丰富的联想,写一篇短文要求:意思连贯、通顺,词数在70・ 80之间提示词语: feel happy, control, affect, help others, need, believe, smile at, talk with ....【 答案】例文Nobody can be happy all the time. When you become unhappy, you should try to controlyour feelings. Because bad feelings can make you lose your friends and give you other badeffects. Here are some ways to make you feel better.1. Look in the mirror and speak to yourself, 'Tm the best in the world. I can doanything.^^2. Do something for others. You will feel happy if you always help others in need.3. Smile when you get up in the morning and believe you will have a nice day.4. Write down your thoughts, dreams or anything you want. Writing always helps youexpress your feelings.5. Stay with your family. You may talk with your parents, relatives, and friends and soon.【 详解】1 .题干解读:本文要求展开丰富的联想,写一篇短文,介绍一下,当你有烦恼时,如何控制你的情绪。
2 .写作指导:本文应该用一般现在时,采用第二人称来叙述作文内容;首先介绍情绪对生活有哪些影响;其次是从五个方面详细地介绍如何控制自己的情绪;在书写时,应该用上所给的提示词语;行文连贯、通顺2 7 .请根据思维导图内容,以“My Best Friend”为题写一篇不少于60词的英语短文,向大家介绍一下你最好的朋友,并说明你们能成为好朋友的原因 ( 开头己经给出,不计入总词数)W h y 1 ik<' hiin /h«»rf ii vo r*i tev o i-i Hj »<>v*l v o i*i 1 < -1 i K I il >f a v o r ite * f<>oclMy Best FriendHi, I'm Li Jun. I'm in Grade Seven now. This term, I make some new friends.【 答案】One possible version:My Best FriendHi, I'm Li Jun. I'm in Grade Seven now. This term, I make some new friends. And WeiHui is my best friend. He is 12 years old and his birthday is on October 18th. He likes sports,and basketball is his favorite sport. He always plays it with me after school. Fruit andvegetables are his favorite food. He likes vegetables for dinner, so he is healthy. At school, helikes P. E. and science. He thinks they are interesting. I like to play with Wei Hui because healways helps me a lot.【 详解】1、题干解读:该题目属于材料作文写作,写作时应承接短文开头,然后介绍好朋友的个人信息,最后介绍好朋友最喜欢的食物、科目和运动,可适当发挥。
2、写作指导:本文应该以第一人称和第三人称来叙述内容;时态采用一般现在时为主;介绍好朋友时,应详细具体,语句通顺,逻辑性强,保证条理清晰28. 假如你是一名来自美国的交换生,名叫汤姆,请根据提示,以“Life in China”为题写一篇80词左右的短文开头已给出,不计入总词数提示:1 . 我现在在在阳光镇,这是个现代化的城镇,乘地铁去市中心只要10分钟:2 . 我在北京阳光中学上学,这里的老师和学生都很友好,并且乐于助人;3 . 我喜欢美味可口的中餐;4 . 我打算参观中国的许多地方;5 . 我在这儿过得非常快乐Life in ChinaMy name is Tom. I comefrom__________________________________________________________________________【 答案】例文Life in ChinaMy name is Tom. I come from the USA. Now I live in Sunshine Town. It is a moderntown in China. It takes only ten minutes to go to the city center by underground. So it's awonderful place to live. I study in Beijing Sunshine Secondary School. The teachers andstudents here are friendly and helpful. I like delicious Chinese food very much. I am going tovisit many place in China. I am living a happy life here.【 详解】1 . 题干解读:该题目属于材料类作文写作,以“Li命in China”为题写一篇短文,写作时应承接短文开头,根据提示要点写作,可适当增加细节。
2. 写作指导:本文应该以第一人称来叙述内容;时态以一般现在时为主;短文内容需要包括:阳光镇和北京阳光中学的基本情况,“ 我” 最喜欢的食物和地方以及“ 我” 在中国生活的感受在写作时要做到无标点符号和语法错误,注意上下文逻辑紧密,符合逻辑关系,表达要具有条理性2 9 .假如你有一只宠物狗Wangwang,请你根据以下信息写一篇不少于60词的英语短文,介绍一下你的狗狗姓名Wangwang年龄2颜色毛发棕色卷曲性格聪明友好有时有点懒能力会直立行走会跳舞食物肉 骨头关系和我一起玩一起看电视 答案】Hello, everyone. Td like to introduce my pet dog-Wangwang to you. He is twoyears old. His hair is brown and curl. He is very beautiful. He is very clever and friendly, too.Sometimes he is a little lazy. He likes sleeping. He can walk straight and dance. He likesbones and meat. After school, he plays with me and we watch TV together. I like him verymuch.【 详解】试题分析:这篇作文要求我们介绍一下自己的宠物狗Wangwang。
题目中给我们列了一张表格,有关于这只狗的详细信息我们可以根据表格中的信息来完成这篇作文通过分析可知,这篇短文应该主要使用一般现在时,第三人称单数来写,因此我们要特别注意每句话中谓语动词的形式这一点是学生们容易忽略的写作时注意要有逻辑性,可以适当增添一些信息,使内容更完整多使用连词和好的短语,使文章衔接紧密,意思连贯【 亮点说明】这是一篇比较好的范文这篇短文中作者按照表格中所列的信息介绍了自己的小狗,内容完整,意思流畅从作者的描写中,我们可以看出作者对自己小狗的喜爱首先作者介绍了小狗的外貌,He is two years old. His hair is brown and curl.;然后作者介绍 了小狗的性格,He is very clever and friendly, too. Sometimes he is a littlelazy:最后作者写了小狗的喜好以及他喜欢小狗的原因,After school, he plays with meand we watch TV together. I like him very much,考点:提纲类作文3 0 .李华是光明中学的学生,她是一位“ 乐于助人,快乐自己” 的同学。
假如你是李华,在明天英语课的“Talk Show”上,请你根据下面表格提示,用英语分享你上周末做过的事情的小短文时间事情周六上午雨天, 帮助王奶奶买菜、包饺子,打扫房间……周日下午晴天,帮助李大爷在社区种花,照顾小孩子……累并快乐写作要求:1、60词左右;2、根据要点提示,可适当发挥;3、文中不要出现真实的姓名与校名参考词汇:help sb do sth, make dumplings, clean the room, plant flowers, look afterHi, I,m Li Hua.I come from Guangming Middle School.【 答案】例文Hi, I'm Li Hua. I come from Guangming Middle School. I like to help others. LastSaturday morning, it rained heavily. I helped Grandma Wang buy some vegetables. Then Imade dumplings with her. I also clean the room fbr her. Last Sunday afternoon, it was sunny.I help Grandpa Li plant flowers. I also looked after his little grandson.I was a little tired when I help them, but I was very happy.【 详解】1. 题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。
根据表格提示,写一篇作文分享你上周末做过的事情2. 写作指导:本文时态采用一般过去时;人称采用第一人称行文写作内容需包含时间和事情以及你自己的感受叙述时可适当运用短语句型使文章层次分明、连贯最后确保语句通顺,无单词语法错误3 1 .无规矩不成方圆,每个家庭都有家规请以“My Family Rules”为题,写一篇英语短文,从休息时间,晚间活动,帮助做家务等方面介绍至少三条家规,以及你的感受60词左右My Family Rules【 答案】例文My Family RulesI'm Tom. I am a student. There are too many rules in my family. Every day I have to getup at 6:00 in the morning. Then I eat breakfast quickly and I must do the dishes. I run toschool because I can't be late.I can't play computer games or watch TV on school days. After dinner, I can't relaxbecause I must read a book. And I have to be in bed by 10:00 p.m. Also, I have to do somehousework. I feel terrible. The rules are too strict. What can I do?【 详解】1. 题干解读:该题目属于提纲类写作,写自己家庭的家规。
在写作时,要从四个方面介绍:休息时间,晚间活动,帮助做家务和你的感受2. 写作指导:本文应该用第一人称来叙述;时态采用一般现在时,因为是家规,可能会用到can, t/must/havet等表示必须或禁止的词叙述要完整,表达要条理清晰连贯通顺,适当使用介词、副词和固定句型及短语保证语法、单词拼写和标点使用正确32. 2020年 1 月 2 日晚,白鳄(Chinese paddlefish)灭绝的报道被各大媒体转发,无数网友惋惜不已然而,还有许多动物同白鲍白铜一样,被世界自然保护联盟(TUCN)列为“ 极危” 等级,它们的出路又在何方?请你就此写一篇短文,谈谈你对动物保护的看法和建议提示:1 . 当前生物存在灭绝危险的原因主要在于人类的活动——污染、捕猎和走私;2 . 我们可以采取什么措施来保护动物——政府制定法律;增强人们的动物保护意识:拒绝食用濒危动物或者买卖濒危动物制品3 . 文章中不得出现真实的校名和人名,词数不少于90词参考词汇:濒危动物 endangered animals;灭绝 extinct (adj.);走私 smuggle (v.);增强意识 raise awareness【 答案】例文Animals are our friends. However, many of them are endangered or even extinct. TheChinese paddlefish was recently reported to have been missing. Why are some animals indanger? It is mostly because of human activity.Pollution makes animals lose their homes. Hunting and smuggling directly kill animals.Nature has its own rules. Once one species disappears, other animals will be affected.We need to protect animals in order to keep the biodiversity of our planet.It's time to take action to protect animals. First of all, governments can make stricterlaws. They can make a list of endangered animals and ban hunting or smuggle them. Second,animal protection organizations can raise awareness of the importance of protecting wildanimals. Third, we can refuse to eat any endangered animals or use products made with partsof their bodies, such as their fur or teeth.【 详解】1. 题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。
要求根据提示内容,谈谈对动物保护的看法和建议注意要点齐全,可适当发挥2. 写作指导:写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文,时态用一般现在时作文可分为四段,第一段提出动物是我们的朋友;第二段介绍为什么一些动物处于危险中;第三段提出自然有自己的规则:第四段提出关于保护动物的措施和建议要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误3 3 .书面表达每个人的生活方式和习惯都不相同请根据表格提示,比较两个好朋友不同的生活习惯,并简要发表自己的看法并作出评价要求:70词左右 开头已给出,不计入总词数)ActivitiesBillTinaExercise一周两次每天一次Go online每天一次一周两到三次Eat junk food经常偶尔Watch TV for 2 hours几乎每天每周一到三次[ 答案】I have two friends.They are Bill and Tina.They both like sports.Bill exercises twicea week.Tina takes exercise every day.They both like going online.Bill goes online everyday.Tina goes online twice or three times a week.Bill likes eating junk food very much.ButTina seldom eats junk food. Bill watches TV for 2 hours every day.But Tina watches TVonce to three times a week.I think I shouldn't eat too much junk food.It id bad for ourhealth.Watching TV too much is not good for our eyes.【 详解】试题分析:这是一篇材料作文,表中内容就是本文的写作要点。
这些要点构成写作的基本框架我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来,并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点动笔前要认真阅读材料,不要遗漏要点,并适当发挥根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写,要注意主谓一致等问题写作中要适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系点睛:首先认真审题,看清题目中的要求和要点;然后根据表中提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作,在写作过程中,要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡,必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词,使文章过渡平稳,自然流畅;最后要细心复核检查,确保正确无误3 4 .根据下面的汉语故事提示,写一篇英文故事故事开头已经给出,你可以接着写下去生金蛋的鹅从前,一位农夫发现自家的鹅窝中有一只黄色的蛋他将蛋带回家,惊喜地发现这是一个金蛋此后,农夫每天都能得到一个金蛋,他靠卖他的金蛋变得富有起来后来农夫变得越来越贪婪( grecdg) ,他想一下子得到鹅肚子中所有的金蛋于是他杀死了鹅. 但是,鹅肚子中什么也没有The goose ( 鹅)that can lay gold eggs八ce upon a farmer went to his goose's 八八d saw a yellowegg there.【 答案】The goose( 鹅)that can lay gold eggsO^ce “p。
八 a 七 ' 侬 也 〃 farmer went to his goose's 八est.a八d saw ayellow egg there. He took the egg home. To his jog, he foui^d. tkat it wasM egg of gold. From then 〜ke got a gold egg every day. And hes 八 became rick by selling his eggs. Lateir thefarmer became more MW w^ore greedy. He waited to get all the goldeggs at ov^ce. So he killed the goose. When he looked insid" he found.八 曲 ‘八g i八its body.【 详解】这篇作文要求我们根据提示来写一个故事这篇作文是叙事的,而且题目中已经给出了汉语提示,我们只需要根据这些提示将这个故事表达出来即可,但是这种情况学生们容易犯一个错误,就是会受汉语表达习惯的影响,写出汉语式的英语,这是学生们尤其要注意的。
因为是讲故事,因此这篇作文的使用应使用一般过去时态,注意每句话中的谓语动词都要变成过去式,尤其是要注意一些不规则动词过去式的形式写作的时候,要使用一些平时积累的句型和短语,在句子之间使用一些适当的连词,使文章表达流畅,意思连贯点睛:这是一篇优秀的作文短文中作者按照题目的要求叙述这样的一个故事首先这篇短文中使用了正确的时态,短文使用了一般过去时态,每句话中的谓语动词使用了过去式,尤其是正确使用了不规则动词的过去式形式,如 went, took, found, got等;其次短文内容完整,叙事有顺序,有感染力短文给我们清楚地讲述了这个故事,没有遗漏题目中的要点最后短语使用了一些好的连词和句型,如下his jog, hefound that it was M egg Made of gold.、Lateir the farmer became w\oream.d More, greedg.、So he killed the goose. When, he looked inside, hefound 八 thing in its body 等3 5 .请你根据以下提示,写一篇90词左右的英语短文。
提示:1.“ 五一” 期间你和家人去杭州旅游,在那儿待了三天;2 . 第一天乘船赏西湖美景,漫步苏堤,参观了著名的雷峰塔;3 . 第二天去了西溪国家湿地公园,拍了很多照片;4 . 第三天去了吴山广场购物、吃美食;5 . 你们玩得很开心,希望将来有一天能再去那儿游玩参考词汇:苏堤Su Causeway西溪国家湿地公园Xixi National Wetland Park【 答案】One possible version:My family and I went to Hangzhou during the May Day holiday. We stayed there forthree days. On the first day, we enjoyed the beauty of the West Lake by boat, walked alongthe Su Causeway and climbed onto the famous Lei Feng Tower. On the second day, we wentto Xixi National Wetland Park and look many photos there. On the third day, we went loWushan Square. We did some shopping and enjoyed delicious food there. We had awonderful time in Hangzhou. I hope to visit there again some day.【 详解】1 .题干解读:题目要求根据提示要点,介绍五一假期的旅游情况,包括不同的景点、美食及感受等,写作时要运用正确的英语表达,要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2 . 写作指导:写作时要紧扣主题,本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容;时态采用一般过去时;在介绍内容时,可适当运用过渡语使文章通畅,力求语言准确,内容完整,保证行文连贯,条理清晰3 6 .书面表达假如你是Ann, Amy是你的同班同学,你们两个在相貌上有很大不同请根据下表中提供的信息,描述一下你和你同桌的外貌特征NameThe colorof eyesHairBuildAnnbluebrown, long,straightshort andheavyAmybrownbrown, short,curlytall andthin【 答案】My name is Ann.I have a classmale.Her name is Amy. We are good friends.But we have different looks.I have blue pyes,and she has brown eyes.We bolh have brow n』air,but my hair is long and §traiqht,and she has short curly hair.I'm shorl and heavy.She_ is lall and thin.Weoften help each other」 like my deskmate yery much【 详解】 【 亮点说明】这篇习作的层次清晰,内容饱满,表达流畅。
文中使用了非常好的短语, 例如 be good friends, different looks, long and straight, short and heavy, talland thin, help each other, very much 等而 We both have brown hair, but my hair islong and straight, and she has short curly hair.长句复杂结构的运用,是本文的最大亮点点睛:这是一篇材料作文,根据表格内容可知用一般现在时,可把提示的内容逐条翻译并拓展成不同的句子,最后把这些句子连在一起即可3 7 .书面表达Sandra是一名转学生她住在纽约的大桥路她家附近有一个公园,她经常在公园里弹吉他和散步公园的对面有一家超市,超市很大,可以买到很多东西超市后面有一家中国餐馆假设你是Sandra,你会怎样描述你家周围的环境呢?要求:60词左右 答案】My name is Sandra.I am from America.Mv home is on Bridge Street in New York.Do YOU want to know something about mv .neighborhood?There is a park near my house.I often play the guitar and take a walk in the park.There is a supermarket across from the park.This is a big supermarket.You can buv many things in it.There is a Chinese restaurant behind the supermarket.It's a beautiful place.Do you like it?【 详解】这是一篇给材料作文,介绍我家周围的环境。
结合所给材料•,可知本文主要考查一般现在时,人称为单数第二,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:My name is......., I am........;There is.......; You can........;Do you like........?等句式的应用写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系点睛:本文结构紧凑,语言简练开头介绍了我的名字和家庭住址,接下来介绍我家周围的环境,最后询问你是否喜欢这个漂亮的地方此处be from, want to do sth, take awalk, across from等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少四、书信作文38. 假 如 你 是 Simon, 一位动物保护志愿者为了保护白鳍豚(white-flag-dolphin), 你准备给当地政府写一封信白鳍豚是世界上最珍惜的动物之一但是由于人们的过度捕捞和环境污染,白鳍豚已濒临灭绝请根据以下提示,介绍白鳍豚的基本信息并提出合理的保护措施要求:80词左右,可适当发挥135-230kgDear sir or madam,Yours,Simon【 答案】例文:Dear sir or madam,White-flag dolphins are freshwater whale endemic to China. They are about 2 meterslong, and weigh from 135 kilograms to 230 kilograms. They have many teeth. They can singand jump high out of the water. They now live in the Yangtze River and feed on fish.They are critically endangered because of water pollution and people's overfishing. It'stime to protect white-flag dolphins. Then laws should be made to ban the killing of white-flagdolphins. Besides, the government had better establish a nature reserve on the Yangtze River.Yours,Simon【 详解】1 .题干解读:题目要求写一封信,呼吁保护白鳍豚;要求包含所有提示内容。
2 .写作指导:此作文时态用一般现在时;采用第三人称口吻可采用2 段落格式,第一段:描述白鳍豚的基本信息;第二段:阐述保护白鳍豚的措施3 9 .李华的学校正在开展中外学生信件交流活动,同学们通过书信交流,向外国学生介绍了自己,结交了更多的朋友假如你是李华,请根据以下提示和要点,写一篇英文信件向外国学生Sally介绍你自己姓名李华年龄13岁日常生活饮食习惯:上学方式;学校规则学校有很多规则 比如…… ( 列举两条)、 业余活动周末喜欢 ;也喜欢去动物园最喜欢的动物是 ,因为Dear Sally,fm glad to make friends with you in this way. My name is Li Hua.I hope to make friends with you.Best wishes.Yours,Li Hua.【 答 案 】例文Dear Sally,I'm glad to make friends with you in this way. My name is Li Hua. I am 13 years old. Ihave a healthy diet. I usually have fruit and vegetables and I seldom eat sweet food. I oftenride a bike to school because it is healthy. I sometimes take the bus if it is rainy.There are many rules in our school. We can't eat or drink in the classroom. We can't runin the hallway or fight with classmates.I like playing basketball at weekends and I also like to go to the zoo. Animals are ourfriends. I like pandas best because they are cute.I hope to make friends with you.Best wishes.Yours,Li Hua【 详解】L题干解读:本文是一篇书信作文。
要求根据提示内容,向 Sally介绍自己的相关情况,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥2. 写作指导:写作时要以第一人称来介绍,时态用•般现在时作文要分别介绍自己的姓名,年龄,日常生活,学校规则和业余活动要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误4 0 .下面是大明写给他的朋友Tom的信,信中描述了他的烦恼请你以他的朋友Tom的身份,给他写一封80词左右的回信,在信中指出他的问题并给他提出建议信的开头己给出,不计入总词数Dear Tom,My classmate, Lucy, bought a new pen. I liked it very much, so I used it without herpermission. Unluckily, I broke it. Then I put it back secretly. Now she finds out the truth andis very angry with me. I don't know what to do. Can you help me?Yours,DarningDear Darning,I know your problem.___________________________________________________________Yours,Tom【 答案】Dear Darning,I know your problem. You've made two mistakes. First, you used your classmate's penwithout her permission. Second, when you broke the pen, you didn't tell her the truth. Yes,you must tell her immediately. If you tell her the truth, perhaps she'll be angry with you, butat least you'll prove you are honest.Then I think you should offer to pay. You can use your pocket money to buy a new pen forher. She will realize that you're truly sorry.I hope the advice can help you. Tm sure you will make up with her soon.Yburs,Tom【 详解】提出Tom的错误,并提出意见。
错误一定要清楚,建议要实用时态涉及一般现在时和一般过去时写作时要灵活运用时态,注意区分一般现在时和•般过去时的区别文章逻辑清楚,重要语言点包括:first, second... , tell sb. the truth, be angrywith sb., make up with sb.等4 1 .书面表达假如你是王朋, 你在美国的笔友杰克(Jack)来信告诉你说他总是觉得很疲惫, 导致上课不能集中精力听讲请你根据下面的英文提示词, 给他写封回信, 向他提一些建议, 信的开头和结尾已给出英文提示词: should, help, exercise, keep healthy, sleep, try要求: 1 .英文提示词供选用;2. 70词左右, 已给出部分不计入总词数Dear Jack,I am sorry to hear that you often feel tired. Let me give you some advice.Yours,Wang Peng【 答案】Dear Jack,I am sorry to hear that you often feel tired. Let me give you some advice. First you should eatbreakfast every morning. Eating breakfast can help you study well. Then you should do moreexercise after school. Doing exercise can make you keep healthy. It is also very important tosleep eight or nine hours a night. Good sleep can make you feel good and study well in theday. Try to have a healthy lifestyle and then you can study well.Yours,Wang Peng【 详解】试题分析:这是一篇提建议的书信作文,提示内容就是本文的写作要点。
这些要点构成写作的基本框架我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来,并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点动笔前要认真阅读材料,不要遗漏要点,并适当发挥根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写,适当穿插祈使句式要注意主谓一致等问题写作中要适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系点睛:首先认真审题,看清题目中的要求和要点;然后根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作,在写作过程中,要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡,必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词,使文章过渡平稳,自然流畅;最后要细心复核检查,确保正确无误42. 假 如 你 是 D avid,你的笔友Mark来邮件谈到自己的烦恼:性格比较内向,不善于与人交往,与同学的关系也不太融洽,所以在学习和生活中的压力很大请你给他回一封邮件,提一些建议词数:70词左右邮件开头和结尾已经给出,不计人总词数 Dear Mark,Thanks for your email.I am sorry to know that you are having problems at school.【 答案】Dear Mark,Thanks for your email. I am sorry to know that you are having problems at school. But I thinkthere is no need to worry about it. You are very clever. I hope my advice can help. I think youshould talk more with your friends about your problems. Try to be more outgoing andfriendly to everyone. You can also tell your parents or your teachers that you need some help.Finally you should take part in some interesting activities after class to communicate oftenwith your classmates.Hope you'll get along well with your classmates and make great progress in your study.Yours,David【 详解】这是一篇给材料作文,给你的笔友Mark回信,给他提一些建议。
结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时,人称为单数第一,二人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:lam sorry to......., Youare......., But I think there is no need to........, You can........, Finally you should........, Hopeyou'll……等句式的应用写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系.点睛:本文结构紧凑,语言简练开头对Mark遇到的麻烦感到难过,接下来给他提了一些建议,最后希望他能和同学相处得好,并且学习进步此处thanks for, worryabout, talk with sb about sth, be friendly to, take part in, get along with, make progress 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少五、看图写短语或句子根据所提供的图片,用一个完整的句子提问或应答B:.A: Where was she at the time of the rainstorm?B: The Nile is the longest river in the world.47.A:?B: He has had it for 9 years.【 答案)43. I had a fight with Tom yesterday44. They played football45. She was waiting for the bus at the bus stop46. Which is the longest river in the world47. How long have you had this scarf【 解析】4 3 .根据图片及下文What should I do?可知,上文是我和汤姆打架了,短语have a fight with...“ 和 打架” ,根据语境用•般过去时态,I 作主语; 故填I had afight with Tom yesterday ( >44 . 根据图片及问题可知,上文是问昨天做什么了,下文应该是踢足球了。
they作主语;playe fbotball“ 踢足球” ,此处用一般过去时态,故填They played football45 . 根据图片及上文问题可知,暴风雨来的时候她在做什么,下文应该回答在等公共汽车,she作主语,过去进行时,其结构是was/weredoing的形式,主语是she, be动词用w a s ,短语wait for the bus ” 等公共汽车“ ;at the bus stop” 在公共汽车站” ;故填She was waiting for the bus at the bus stopo46 . 根据图片及下文的回答“ 尼罗河是世界上最长的河流” 可知,上文应该是问世界上最长的河流是什么,故填 Which is the longest river in the worlda47 . 根据图片及下文回答“ 他已经买这个围巾9 年的时间了: 上文应该在问“ 你买这条围巾多久了” ,提问一段时间用how lo n g ,现在完成时have done的形式,主语是y o u ,特殊疑问句把have提前,此处用延续性动词have, this scar俨这块围巾” ,故填How long have you had this scarf。
根据所提供的图片,用完整的句子提问或应答A: Whafs the matter with David?A: What were you doing at 8:00 yesterday?A: Tony, you look sad. What's wrong?A: What did you do for the poor boy?B: .【 答案】48 . He has a sore throat49. I was taking a shower50. Can you take out the rubbish51. I had a fight with Jim52. I donated him a bicycle【 解析】4 8 .根据提示单词和图片内容可知,需要表达的句子是“ 他 喉 咙 痛 时 态 为一般现在时,have a sore throat喉咙痛,he接动词第三人称单数形式故答案为He hasa sore throat < >49 . 根据提示单词和图片内容可知,需要表达的句子是“ 我正在洗澡“ ;时态为过去进行时,I 接 was+doing, take a shower 洗澡。
故答案为 I was taking a shower50 . 根据提示单词和图片内容可知,需要表达的句子是“ 你能把垃圾倒了吗” :时态为一般现在时,Can you do sth?你能做某事吗? ,take out the rubbish倒垃圾故答案为Can you take out the rubbish,51 . 根据提示单词和图片内容可知,需要表达的句子是“ 我和吉姆打架了“ ;时态为一般过去时,have a fight with sb和某人打架故答案为I had a fight with Jim52 . 根据提示单词和图片内容可知,需要表达的句子是“ 我给他捐赠了一辆自行车” ;时态为一般过去时,donate sb sth给某人捐赠某物故答案为I donated him a bicycle六、日记5 3 .不论是细雨滴梧桐,还是骤雨打荷叶,都是大自然的馈赠走近大自然,领略不一样的风景,就有不一样的内心体验假如你是李华,上周六跟随父母去乡下的爷爷奶奶家请你写一篇日记,记录你在爷爷奶奶家早中晚的活动( 比如摘草莓、划船、看星星……)以及内心感受要求:(1 )字数80词左右; ( 开头已给出,不算入总词数。
)(2 )根据要求分段,可适当增加细节使行文连贯;(3 )不得出现真实的人名,校名和地名;(4 )书写工整,不得使用修正带Today my parents took me to visit my grandparents in the countryside.【 答案】例文Today my parents took me to visit my grandparents in the countryside. In the morning,we picked strawberries in the field. How fresh they were! And then we fed the chicken andmilked cows. We had vegetables and fish for lunch! They were very delicious. In theafternoon, we rowed a boat in the lake, and the scene was very beautiful. I was very relaxed.In the evening, the sky was very clean. We could see thousands of stars in the sky. We had agood time!【 详解】1. 题干解读:本文是一篇日记。
记录周六跟随父母去乡下的爷爷奶奶家的生活2. 写作指导:本文采用一般过去时,人称以第一人称和第三人称为主按照时间顺序介绍早中晚在爷爷奶奶家的生活,最后表达自己玩得很开心写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误.5 4 .期末考试前的最后一个周末, ( 7 月 2 日,星期六) 你约上你的好朋友们去了西山公园( West Hill P ark)游玩放松请根据下图提示,写一篇日记描述当天的情形,作为周末的一项英语作业1 . 文中必须包含图中所有的信息,可以适当发挥;2 . 注意文章的时态;3 . 注意结构完整,过渡自然;4 . 字数:80词左右;5 . 文章格式和开头已给出,不计入词数;6 . 文中不能出现真实的姓名和学校Saturday July 2ndToday, my friends and I went to West Hill Park and we had a great time there.【 答案】例文Saturday July, 2ndToday, my friends and I went to West Hill Park and we had a really great time there.It was a sunny and warm day.First, I walked to the bus station. It took me six minutes. Then, it took me ten minutes totake the bus to the park.There were many trees around the lake and there was a bridge over the water. It was anice park. Some of my friends went boating. One of my friends went fishing near the lake. Itwas so interesting. I took some photos of the beautiful flowers.It was an excellent trip and we all had fun!【 详解】1. 题干解读:本文要求写一篇日记。
描述期末考试前的最后一个周末去西山公园游玩放松的情形2. 写作指导:本文时态采用一般过去时为主;人称以第一人称和第三人称为主写作时须包含图中所有的信息,可以适当发挥使行文连贯注意使用日记的格式,最后确保语句通顺,无单词语法错误。