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1、写作宝典本书是从词汇及句法两个方面对2009年 6 月到2006年 6 月的历年四级作文范文加以详细解释，旨在向学习者充分体现词汇、词组及句法在作文中的综合运用。一、大学英语四级作文题型分析写作部分（ Writing）是考试中的第一道题，在第一张答题卡的正面。写作选用的都是考生所熟悉的题材。这部分是要测试学生用英语进行书面表达的能力，所占分值比例为15% ,考试时间是3 0 分钟。大学英语四级考试写作部分要求考生达到 教学要求中的一般要求，即 “ 能完成一般性写作任务，能描述个人经历、观感、情感和发生的事件等，能写常见的应用文，能就一般性话题或提纲在规定的时间内写出至少120词的短文，内容基本
2、完整，用词恰当，语意连贯。 ”四级作文体裁多样，包括叙述文、说明文、议论文等。从近些年的考题来看，作文考题不再是一种体裁,而是几种体裁的杂合体。下面是具体的写作要求及四级作文评分标准： 写作部分要求考生用英语进行短文写作，思想表达准确、意义连贯、无重大语法错误；写作部分考核的技能是：A 思想表达1 表达中心思想2 表达重要或特定信息3 表达观点、态度等B 篇章组织4 围绕所给的题目叙述、议论或描述，突出重点5 连贯地组句成段，组段成篇C 语言运用6 运用恰当的词汇7 运用正确的语法8 运用合适的句子结构9 使用正确的标点符号1 0 运用衔接手段表达句间关系（ 如对比、原因、结果、程度、目的等）
3、D 写作格式1 1 运用正确的符合英语表达习惯的写作格式四级作文的评分标准1 .本题满分为15分2 .阅卷标准共分五等：2 分、5 分、8 分、11分 及 14分。3 .评分标准2 分 一 条 理 不 清 ，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5 分 一 基 本 切 题 。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。8 分 一 基 本 切 题 。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。11分 一 切 题 。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但是有少量语言错误。1 4 分 一 切 题 。表达思想清楚，文字通顺、连贯，基本上无语言错误，仅有
4、个别小错。【 注：白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则 给 0分。 】4 . 字数不足应酌情扣分：（ 摘 自 大学英语四级考试大纲 ）二、历年新题型大学英语四级考试作文范文详解MjstainaW殳 deYetopment2009年 6 月大学英语四级考试作文题目：Free Admission to Museums要求：1. 越来越多的博物馆现在免费向公众开放，目的是2 . 有的人认为这样做会带来一些问题。3 . 在我看来范文：Free Admission to MuseumsNowadays, anJncreasing numhei： QLinuseums are a
5、dmission-free to visitorshome and abroad. The hidden reason behind this is not hard to analyze as there,s agrowing awareness for the authorities regarding the urgency of popularization ofculture, knowledge and history with every average person in our society. Only withfree this live some welcoming w
6、ordsA the schedule for the day a description of the place the tourists will be visiting (e.g. a scenic spotor a historical site, etc.)You should make the introduction interesting and the arrangements for the day clearto everybody.5 . 题目：A Letter in Reply to a Friend (2004.1)要求：1 .建议报考的专业及理由2 . 报考该专业
7、的基本条件3 . 应当如何备考6. 题目：An Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic Accident (2003.6)要求：假设你在某日某时某地目击一起车祸，就此写一份见证书。见证书须包括以下几点：1 . 车祸发生的时间及地点2 . 你所见到的车祸情况3 . 你对车祸原因的分析7. 题目：It Pays to Be Honest (2002.12)要求：1 .当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象2 .诚实利人利己，做人应该诚实作文附录中练习题目的参考答案大学英语四级考试作文范文及注释分析:2005年 12月Should the University Campus Be
8、Open to Tourists?One can always find visitors taking pictures and enjoying the scenery on theuniversity campus. During holidays such as May Day, National Day, summer andwinter vacations, many university campuses become popular tourist sites. W M tta：the univ殳 rsity campus should b殳 open becomes a he
9、atedly二 discussed issu攵 fQr peQpk,Different people hold different ideas. Some support it while others dont. In myopinion, university campus should be open to tourists.In fact, there are many royal gardens and parks, all of which are obviouslybetter than the scenery in the Universities. Why do people
10、 prefer visiting universitycampuses with their children to other attrations? Jhatj&b篡awseJtisagQaUfor manyChinese paints and young amhitiO!域 Students. Besides, as more tourists come tovisit universities, these universities can not only widen their influence but also makesome profits from the tourism
11、.In a word, I think the university campus should be open to the tourists.Notes:I 用词方面i 词汇使用:1. scenery2. campus3. vacation4. royal5. goal6. ambitious7. influence8. profitn .风景 sightsn .校园n .假期 holidayad j.皇家的 imperialn. 目标 targetad j.有雄心的aspiringn .影响力 effect, impactn .利益 money9. tourism n .旅游业found
12、 the correct methods and mwaged tj catch up with others.i i 词组使用：1. taking pictures2. prefer n./doing to n./doing3. not only.but also.照 像 （ 同义词组：take photos）宁 愿 （ 相当于 would rather do.than do.）不仅而且I I 句法、篇章结构方面i 过渡词in my opinion （ 表观点） ，besides （ 表递进） ，as （ 表原因） ，in a word （ 表总结）i i 句型1. Whether the
13、university campus should be open becomes a heatedly-discussed issuefor people.纯连接词whether引导的从句作主语，谓语动词要用单数。2. It is because it is a goal for many Chinese parents and young ambitious students.本句子中because引导表语从句，表示原因。2005年6月Teachers? Day舐BJtembaJlQtfL达JLS腾磁Lcwxa感皿jQikwhidL黑息袅底囹01肛殳剑磔“ our而. 维egi坦 titii
14、d殳 tQ Qur I线p题1曲坦黛Mehers,In my memory, Miss Yu, my English teacher in high school, impressed me mostin my past school years. At that tiinJLdidLratheiBewdyJinJEnglish望hkiLmadcjm殳very upset. Miss Yua congiderMtejnd patient teacher, did not apiybias againstmeQYhQ laggedJadtehtodthaQlher丛 Instead, she e
15、ncouraged me and worked out anindividualized plan for me. Highly motiYated by this, I 麻t interested iij this subject.I will never forget those who have dedicated all their efforts to help me growintellectually. Wackinge/iLhaEdte以a JLthink.iUbe my teachers,Notes:I 用词方面i 词汇使用：1. occasion2. sincere3. g
16、ratitude4. respectable5. considerate6. patient7. individualize8. motivate9. dedicate10. intellectually11. rewardingi i 词组使用：1. have any bias against2. lag behind3. work out4. get interested in5. manage to do6. catch up withn时刻 momentad j.诚挚的 honest, faithfuln .感 激 , 感 谢 （ + to sb.） appreciation, tha
17、nkfulnessad j.可敬的ad j.体贴的，考虑周到的thoughtfulad j.有耐心的tolerantv .给赋予个性；个性化v .激励 encourageadv.adj.7. make ones due contributionsI I 句法、篇章结构方面i 过渡词v .致 力 于 （ + to） make, devote, commit在智力上有收获的return对有 偏 见 （ 相当于prejudice）落 后 （ 同义词组：fall behind）想 出 （ 相当于make）对感兴趣成功做成赶 上 （ 同义词组：keep up with）做出自己的贡献at that ti
18、me （ 表时间） ，instead （ 表转折）i i 句型1. September 10th is a special occasion, on which we students can express our sinceregratitude to our respectable teachers.介词+ 关系代词结构：“on which” 引导非限定性定语从句，先行词是表示时间的occasion o2. At that time, I did rather poorly in English, which made me very upset.which引导非限定性定语从句，代替逗号
19、前整个句子在定语从句中作主语。3. Miss Yu, a considerate and patient teacher, did not have any bias against me, wholagged far behind the others.名词短语“a considerate and patient teacher” 在句子中作Miss Yu的同位语，由两个逗号将主语和谓语隔开；who引导非限定性定语从句，先行词是me。4. Highly motivated by this, I got interested in this subject, found the correct
20、methods and managed to catch up with others.分词短语“Highly motivated by this”在句子中作原因状语； 主句中三个谓语动词gotinterested in, found和 managed to并列连用。注意书写格式。5. Working even harder and making my due contributions, I think, will be mostrewarding to my teachers.句子中的working和 making都是动名词。注意非谓语动词作主语的用法。2005年1月A Campaign
21、SpeechToday I am very glad to run for the president of the students9 union. I am juniorin Chemical Department. Since I came into the university, I have always been themonitor of my class. I have done a very good job for my classmates, and myclassmates and teachers all give me a good praise. I am goo
22、d at communicating andorganizing. And I like to help others.Moreover, I am athletic. I like playing a variety of balls, such as basketball,football, ping pong and so on. I am sure that I am qualified for this position. If Ib毁聂FOSidenUJLMlLfcry rny besLfctdcL蜕elL I will organize some interestingactiv
23、ities for you and try to meet your demands not only in study but also in campuslife.I sincerely hope you can give me a chance, and please believe me that I will be agood president. Thank you!Notes:I 用词方面i 词汇使用：1. campaign2. president3. juniorn .战役；运 动 battlen .主 席 headn .大三学生（ 大一学生freshman大二学生sophom
24、ore大四学生 senior）4. department5. communicate6. athletic7. qualify8. sincerelyn .系v .交流；沟通 exchange, talkad j.活跃的 activev .胜任 be competentadv.真诚地 faithfully词组使用:l.run for2. students,union竞选学生会3. give sb. a good praise 赞扬，夸 奖 （ 同义词组：think highly of / sing highpraise for）4. be good at5. a variety ofof）6.
25、 such as7. and so on善 长 于 （ 相当于do well in ）许 多 （ 相当于 variouis, diverse, all kinds of, a diversity例如等 等 （ 可换成：and so forth and so on）8. try ones best9. be qualified for10. as well尽 力 （ 同义短语为spare no efforts）胜 任 （ 同义词组：be competent to do, be capable of）也 （ 相当于too）I I 句法、篇章结构方面i 过渡词today, since （ 表时间）
26、， and（ 表并列） ， morever（ 表递进） ， if（ 表条件） ， not only.butalso.（ 表并列）2004年 6 月A Brief Introduction to a Tourist AttractionGood morning, ladies and gentleman, welcome to Beijing. To begin with, I wouldlike to introduce myself. I am the tourist guide from China Travel Service and ifs mygreat honor to stay
27、here with all of you for a whole day. Just as the、QWLsaxing gft,uIt is always a plegisure tQ_greet a friend from afar I wish all of you enjoyyourselves during this trip.The following is the schedule of the day. The first spot we are going to visit is the/ ；-Great Wall, the grandest fortification in
28、ancient China. The second sight to lookaround is the Ming Tombs, which is one of the best-preserved tombs for 13 emperorsin Ming Dynasty more than one thousand years ago. In the afternoon, we will go tothe Summer Palace, the royal park for Chinese ancient emperors.Currently we are on the way to the
29、Great Wall. Dating back to the seventhcentury B.C., the Great Wall is constructed by respective states for fortifying againstinvasion of neighboring states. By the reasons of the long history and its length, itbecomes one of the eight wonders in the world and represents the highest wisdomand crafts.
30、 From the top of the Great Wall, we can enjoy a magnificent view ofcontinuous mountains, green trees and blooming wild flowers. It is no doubt that onesaj显f H殳更hahasji 凰 : 用 蒯LtQJth&Gr袋 t not a tniemanIThe above is my introduction of the Great Wall. If any of you have questions,please feel free to a
31、sk me at any time.Notes:I 用词方面i 词汇使用：1. honor2. schedule3. spot4. fortificationn5. royal6. ancient7. currently8. respective9. fortify10. invasion11. representn .荣誉 gloryn .时间表 timetablen .地点 placen .防御工事；筑堡；要 塞 wall （ 超纲词汇）ad j.皇家的 imperiala d j.古老的 very old, ageda d v .目前 nowadays, at presentad j.各
32、自的 separatev .筑防御工事于， 设 要 塞 strengthen, reinforce （ 超纲词汇）n侵略 aggressionv .代表 stand fori i 词组使用：1. would like to2. tourist guide3. enjoy oneself4. look around想 要 （ 相当于would love to）导游玩 得 高 兴 （ 相当于have a good time）观光I I 句法、篇章结构方面i 过渡词to begin with （ 表列举） ，and （ 表并列） ,just as （ 表对比） ，the first， the sec
33、ond（ 表列举） ，in the afternoon （ 表时间） ，currently （ 表时间） ，if （ 表条件）i i 句型Just as the old saying goes, “It is always a pleasure to greet a friend from afar.”正如谚语所言：“ 有朋自远方来，不亦乐乎J 在引用诗词名句、谚语格言时可以使用此类表达法。 又如：It is no doubt that one says, uHe who has never been to theGreat Wall is not a true man/9 不 到 长 城 非
34、 好 汉 此 外 ，本句子采用了形式主语it 引导的主语从句：It is no doubt that。2004年 1 月A Letter in Reply to a FriendDecember27, 2003Dear Linda,When it com然 tQ which major you shQuld chQQS断 I prQPQse that you Apply forthe : 城 jQLQfJEnglish, To begin with, English is the most popular language in theworld, which is widely used i
35、n all fields such as education, foreign trade and so on.Whafs more, it go欠 呈 双 ithmiLsaying that English majoi graduates jilT more likely toqodJLgftodJoltiiLthuLtighteEMndJtighteiJjabjnMteLIn order to study in English Department, you have to meet the followingrequirements. In the first place, you ha
36、ve to spend a lot of time on it in order to keepthe flow of the course. In the second place,the basic skills of reading, writing, listening and speaking are necessary, because theyare the foundations for your future study. Last but not the least, you need to have anintense interest in learning Engli
37、sh since “interest is the best teacher.”As far as the preparation work is concerned, you should first of all review all therequired vocabulary. In addition, youd better spend some time on reading andwriting. Only JiLthk黑 ayjcanyQ口Yours,Li MingNotes:I 用词方面i 词汇使用:1. majorn .专业2. proposev .建议 suggest,
38、advise3. foundationn .基础 basis4. intensead j.强烈的；剧 烈 的 strong, keen5. reviewv .复 习 go over6. measuren .措施；方法 way, method7. enrollv .注册 registeri i 词组使用：1. foreign trade对外贸易2. apply for申请3. in order to为 了 （ 相当于so as to）4. meet the following requirements5. keep the flow of.6. as far as sth. be concern
39、ed7. first of all满足以下条件跟上的进度就而言首先I I 句法、篇章结构方面i 过渡词to begin with（ 表列举） ， whafs more（ 表递进） ， in the first place., in the second place（ 表列举） ，because （ 表原因） ，last but not the least （ 表强调） ，in addition （ 表递进）i i 句型1. When it comes to which major you should choose, I propose that you apply for themajor
40、of English.When it comes to .是引导时间状语的常用句型， 意思是： 当提到的时候。 whichmajor you should choose,连接代词which引导的从句放在介词to后作宾语从句。2 .1 propose that you apply for the major of English.th at引导的是宾语从句。因为主句中的谓语动词是propose,表示建议，所 以 that引导的宾语从句中谓语动词要用虚拟语气的形式：（ should） do。类似的动词还有：desire, demand, advise, insist, require, sugge
41、st, order, recommend, etc.o3. It goes without saying that English major graduates are more likely to find a goodjob in the tighter and tighter job market.常用句型It goes without saying + that从句” ，表示不用说，当然4. As it is known, Practice makes perfect.”常用表达句型：As it is known,正如大家所知晓的那样，。本句中关系代词as引导了非限定定语从句。而 P
42、ractice makes perfect.是谚语，意思是熟能生巧5. Only in this way can you are hopeful to enroll in our university.0nly引导的状语位于句首，主句要部分倒装。2003年 6 月An Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic AccidentMy name is Liming. I am studying at college. Aa g f t LsaYtJLtraffic accident,敦 hich击 stilLyhdd iB L 期 MmijideI t 队倒1灿 。 0 1
43、 2 。 。 31-8鼠震出山310而纵10曲15由务岫弧1黑 殳 0 1 3 1 或J 加unixe罢Lwasjaikingisurdy onth$idfeaIkMjnJLheamalQudcra&handlfQumLth&ttMLYehiaesjusthithead（ ） nat the T-junction about 10 meters away. I went up and found that the two taxis werebadly damaged. One door of a car was knocked off, lying on the road. One driv
44、erwas bleeding and the other was shut in the taxi. Some people were trying to help thedriver get out of the damaged car. One man was calling the traffic policeman station.As a result, a lot of cars were jammed on the road.From the stopping track on the road,tfto JastvBut it is just one of the reason
45、s. In my opinion, the taxi drivers were eager totake more passengers and make a little more money. On the other hand, both driversdidnt show concern for one another. Both of them wanted to run in front of the other.Therefore, the accident was inevitable. From this matter, we should let the driverske
46、ep it in their mind that speeding does harm not only to themselves but also toothers. Taking care meansBking cairtQfllieii: Q望 nJife，Notes:I 用词方面i 词汇使用：1. account2. vivid3. leisurely词用）4. sidewalk5. crash6. T-junction7. bleed8. jam9. concern10. inevitablen .描述 descriptionad j.形象的；生动的 clear, distinct
47、adj./ adv.悠闲的/ 地 relaxed / without haste （ 在文章中作副n .人行道 pavementn./ v .撞击 hit, strike, smashn. 丁字路口v i.出血，流血v t.堵住，塞住blockn .考虑，关 心 caread j.不可避免的unavoidable词组使用:l.at college2. a traffic accident3. hit head-on4. knock off5. be eager to6. so far7. keep.in mind8. take care of在大学交通事故迎头相撞击倒渴望，盼 望 （ 相当于d
48、isire for/to do）到目前为止（ 相当于until now, up to now）记 住 （ 相当于remember）照顾；关 爱 （ 相当于value）I I 句法、篇章结构方面i 过渡词when （ 表时间） ,as a result, therefore （ 表结果） ,but （ 表转折） ，in my opinion （ 表观点） ，on the other hand （ 表列举） ，not only.but a lso .（ 表并列）i i 句型1. A week ago I saw a traffic accident, which is still vivid in
49、 my mind.which引导的非限制性定语从句。先行词是accident。2. It was at about 9:00 on Saturday morning, June 15th, when I went out of theuniversity to visit a friend of mine in another university.June 15th是作Saturday morning的同位语；when引导非限定性定语从句，先行词是 Saturday morning。3 .1 was walking leisurely on the sidewalk when I heard
50、 a loud crash and I found thattwo vehicles just hit head-on at the T-junction about 10 meters away.when引导时间状语从句。4. it is clear that the two taxis were driving too fast.常用句型：主语从句。it是形式主语。5. Taking care of others5 lives means taking care of their own life.taking是动名词，在本句子中引导两个名词短语，分别作主语和宾语。当动名词短语作主语时，谓
51、语动词必须用单数。注意非谓语动词的使用。2002年 12月It Pays to Be HonestAlthough honesty is believed to be a virtue, there are still dishonest people in oursociety. For example, some businessmen sell fake products to their consumers; somestudents cheat in the exams.Dishonest people are short-sighted. Thj腔 皿 I1Q 旌 ILfak题pr
52、odMCfeuwJB翩monoy at first, hut cons口 meish叱 QjjSLbuYJtheir products 】 】 ） more. As a result, theywill lose their fortune or even be sent to prison. By contrast, honest people gain a lot.ThosejyhiLahyaY&tdLtheJxuthLQr 髓 ep their promises not。 山乂砥them hwtsatajrespect fcom Qther peQpleiaSJSKSll Such pe
53、rsons are sure to have a lotof good friends. Because they are trustable and respectable, everyone is eager tomake friends with them. Besides, it is easier for a person with a good record to get agood job. Generally speaking, every employer wants his employees to be honest. SQIn a word, honesty wins
54、trust, respect and honor. So iL运sMuhLb殳 hon 照t.Notes:I 用词方面i 词汇使用：1. virtue2. fake3. consumer4. short-sighted5. cheat6. fortune7. contrast8. eagern ,美德ad j.假的 artificial, falsen .消 费 者 （ consume v .消 费 consumption n .消费）a d j.目光短浅的v .欺骗；（ 考试） 作 弊 deceiven .财富；运气 prosperity, luck, destiny, faten. / v
55、. 对比 comparison n. / compare v.ad j.热切的；渴 望 的 anxious词组使用:l.make money2. at first3. not.any more4. keep the promises赚 钱 （ 相当于 earn money, make a fortune）首先；起 初 （ 同义词组：at the beginning）不 再 （ 相当于 not.any longer, no more, no longer）守信，一诺千金（ 相当于be true to ones words）5. not only. , but. as well 不但而且 （ 可换
56、成：not only. .but also）6. make friends交朋友7. gernerally speaking 总体来说（ 同义词组：in general, on the whole）8. pay back9. in a wordshort, etc.）报答；偿还总之 （ 同义词组：all in all, to sum up, in brief, inI I 句法、篇章结构方面i 过渡词although （ 表让步） ,for example （ 表列举） ,but （ 表转折） ，as a result, so （ 表结果） ，because （ 表原因） ，besides （
57、 表递进）i i 句型1. Those who sell fake products may make money at first, but consumers wont buytheir products any more.w h o引导的定语从句， 先行词是those。 those在句中做主语。 相似的句型还有: Thosewho always tell the truth or keep their promises not only let others trust them butgain respect from other people as well.2. So we can
58、 say that anyone who is honest will be paid back later.who引导定语从句，先行词是anyone。3. It is important that we should be honest.常用句型：it引导的主语从句。I t 做形式主语，真正的主语是that从句，从句中的谓语动词采用虚拟语气的形式。注意当主句中出现necessary, important, essential,imperative, urgent, preferable, vital, advisable等这类词的时候，从句中的谓语动词要用虚拟语气的形式：（ shoukl） + 动词原形。
