书达 “ 先 酬tr近几年在考试中经常出现有关“ 生活环境” 话题的书面表达，如：1 .介绍学校的布局结构2介绍家庭的居住环境、家庭成员及家庭状况3介绍自己的新房间; 4 . 学校里我最喜欢的地方等一、典型例题剖析请以"My favorite place in school"为题，根据以下提示，用英语写一篇不少于60词的短文，短文须包含下列要点：1. Whats your favorite place in school?2. How long has it been there?3. Why do you like it best?4. Tell something more about it.注意：短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分 教你审题】1 . 要点提炼：本篇书面表达主要描述在学校你最喜欢的地方、它存在的时间、喜欢这个地方的理由以及有关它的更多情况2 . 确定时态：一般现在时为主3 . 确定人称：人称以第一、三人称为主 素材积累】1 .短语①描述位置next to 紧靠; in front of 在 前面; between... and...在 和 之间; across from在. . .对过; go/walk along 沿着走; turn left/right 向左 / 右转; on the left/right 在左边 /右边②喜欢的原因spend time there on weekends 周末在那里度过时光; enjoy / like reading there 喜欢在那里读书; exercise there在那里锻炼; clean air and sunshine干净的空气和阳光; the closest to home 离家最近; have the most comfortable seats 有最舒适的座位; have thebest service有最好的服务2 .句型开头句：This is a map of my school.这是我学校的地图。
The school lies in the south of our town / city.学校位于我们镇/ 城市的南部I have a new room .我有一个新房间These years, our school has changed a lo t.这些年，我们学校变化很大My home is small but beautiful and clean.我家非常小，但漂亮干净中间句：My school is behind the post office.我的学校在邮局的后面The teaching buildings are between the lab and the library.教学楼在实验室和图书馆之间The music room is on the fifth floor.音乐教室在五楼Go along New Street. Turn right at the first crossing. My home is on your le ft.沿着新街走，在第一个十字路口向右转我家就在你的左边Next to the library is a small house, with an interesting garden.紧靠图书馆的是一个带着有趣花园的小房子。
结尾句：I am really happy for having such a beautiful and comfortable classroom.有这么漂亮和舒适的教室，我真地很高兴 写作模板】 开头 Of all these places, my引出话题 favorite is...♦正文介绍喜欢的地方How long has it been there?Why do you like it?Tell something about it.结尾总结归纳What an amazing place it is!【 佳作赏析】My favorite place in schoolThese years, our school has changed a lot. There are more new and interestingplaces, such as a nice music room, a modern library and a new playground. Of allthese places, the music room is my favorite.The music room is on the fifth floor. It has been there for two years. There is a pianoin the corner and there are forty colorful boxes in the room. We can sit there and they canalso be put together to make a stage. I am glad to have music lessons there. Although Iam not good at singing, I am becoming interested in it. Whats more, listening to musiccan make me relaxed when I am under too much pressure. What an amazing place it is!评析：1 . 本文结构完整，过渡自然。
2 . 文章内容涵盖了所有的要点提示，对音乐室的描述详尽，有特色，感受真实3 . 文中用了 such as, be interested in, although, be under... pressure 等词（ 组）及 there be句型和感叹句型，使文章增色不少二、热点题目训练 每个人都生活在一个特定的环境，请以“What I like about where I live”为题，并根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文，描述你的生活环境1 . 要点：（1） 你生活在什么样的环境；（2） 你喜欢这个环境的什么；（3） 你对这个环境有何期望2 . 要求：（1） 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；（2） 词数80左右One possible vision：What I like about where I liveI live in a small and quiet city in Henan Province. Different from other cities, it has noskyscrapers or endless cars on the streets. People there are seldom late for their workand enjoy a slow and peaceful life. And that is what I like most about my city.However, my city has her problems. She has no high speed trains. I hope she willsoon have high speed trains so that I can travel to other cities more easily! 。