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1、Writing in EnglishWriting in English（以改促写以改促写） Topic 节假日活动(Festivals, holidays and celebrations)1. New Years Day 元旦元旦 2. the Spring Festival 春节春节 3. Latern Festival 元宵节元宵节 4. Womens Day 妇女节妇女节5. April Fools Day 愚人节愚人节 6. Easter Day 复活节复活节 7. May Day劳动节劳动节 8. Mothers Day 母亲节母亲节 素材百宝箱9. Childrens Day儿
2、童节儿童节 10. Dragon Boat Festival 端午节端午节 11. Fathers Day 父亲节父亲节 12. Teachers Day教师节教师节 13. the Mid-Autumn Festival中秋节中秋节 14. National Day国庆节国庆节 15. Thanksgiving Day感恩节感恩节 16. Christmas Day圣诞节圣诞节Work SheetWork SheetTask one: translation带来好运 品尝各种美食 共度好时光 感谢某人 用装饰 给买些鲜花Task two:1.我想向你介绍一些关于圣诞节的事情.2.中秋节是中国
3、最重要的传统节日之一。3.我总是在母亲节帮助妈妈擦洗窗户好洗衣服。4.感恩节在亚洲变得越来越受欢迎了。审审列列连连（词（词 句）句）美美查查 今天是父亲节，假定你是李华，请你给你的美国笔友今天是父亲节，假定你是李华，请你给你的美国笔友John写一封电子邮件，写一封电子邮件，谈谈你如何与父亲一起度过这个特别的日子。要点如下：谈谈你如何与父亲一起度过这个特别的日子。要点如下：u 表达你与父亲间的感情；表达你与父亲间的感情；u为父亲制作一张卡片；为父亲制作一张卡片；u帮助父亲做点事；帮助父亲做点事；u随父亲散步等。随父亲散步等。注意：注意： 1 词数词数 80-100 2 请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥
4、请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥 3 邮件的开头和结尾已为你写出，不计入总词数。邮件的开头和结尾已为你写出，不计入总词数。 Dear John, Its Fathers Day today.Its a special day,isnt it?_ Whats your plan for Fathers Day? Im looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua（2013安徽卷）安徽卷） 今天是父今天是父亲节，假定你是李，假定你是李华，请你你给你的美国笔友你的美国笔友JohnJohn写一封写一封电子子邮件，件，谈谈你如何与父你如何与父亲一起度一起
5、度过这个特个特别的日子。要点如的日子。要点如下：下：u表达你与父表达你与父亲间的感情；的感情；u为父父亲制作一制作一张卡片；卡片；u帮助父帮助父亲做点事；做点事；u随父随父亲散步等。散步等。 注意：注意： 1 1 词数数 80-100 80-100 2 2 请不要逐句翻不要逐句翻译，可适当，可适当发挥 3 3 邮件的开件的开头和和结尾已尾已为你写出，不你写出，不计入入总词数。数。 Dear John, Dear John, Its Fathers Day today.Its a special day,isnt Its Fathers Day today.Its a special day,i
6、snt it?_it?_ Whats your plan for Fathers Day? Im looking forward to hearing from you. Whats your plan for Fathers Day? Im looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Yours, Li HuaLi Hua 1 1 审审(Analyze) (Analyze) 仔细审题，圈出要点（审体裁，时态，要求）文体文体：说明文时态时态：表达与父亲的感情用一般现在时，陈述自己要为父亲做的事应用一般将来时Outline (提纲提纲)TopicFat
7、her s Day Beginning Body正文正文What thingsEndingPurpose make a card to show my thanksshow our love to our fathers 2 列 (List) 列出提纲，定好框架ready to help mehelp him wash the carcook his favorite foodplay chess with himtake a walk with himto make my father happyBeginning Body正文正文What thingsEndingPurpose show
8、our love to our fathersready to help meplay chess with himtake a walk with himmake a card to show my thankshelp him wash the carcook his favorite foodto make my father happyI think we should show our love to our fathersHe is already there, ready to help me.I will make a beautiful card for him I will
9、 help him wash the car and cook his favorite food in the evening.I will take a walk with him and then play chess with himWhat I wish is to make him happy 3 .连(Connect) 找出关键，连词成句。三、高级句型二、 丰富的词汇和语言被动语态从句4.美固定结构一、合理的过渡词/句子A good paragraph is one that contains proper lingking words1. 列举列举firstly, second
10、ly, -finally；此外；此外besides, in addition; 并且并且 also ; 一方面，另一方面一方面，另一方面 on one hand , on the other hand； for one thing , for the other 2. 转折或让步转折或让步although , though , but, yet ; however; otherwise ; instead 3. 结果结果as a result; so; in a word, anyway; after all; therefore; 4. 强调强调最重要的是最重要的是 above all ;
11、most importantly; 首先首先 first of all; 最后一点也是很重要的一点最后一点也是很重要的一点 last but not the least5. 表达个人观点表达个人观点以我看来以我看来 in my opinion ; 对于我来说对于我来说 As for me ; 一般说来一般说来 generally speaking6. 解释解释事实上事实上 in fact , as a matter of fact, actually;换句话说换句话说 in other words大家都知道的大家都知道的 as we all know; Use proper conjuncti
12、ons 简单句句为主，根据自身水平适当运用主，根据自身水平适当运用结构复构复杂的句子。的句子。 Helen is a kind girl.Helen is the kindest girl that I have ever seen.There is no doubt that Helen is the kindest girl. The reason why I like her is that she is kind. She is a kind girl who always helps others. She is so kind that everyone likes her. Sh
13、e is not only kind but also clever. 要点是否要点是否齐全全 ，字数控制在，字数控制在80-10080-100之之间 检查人称人称是否一致、是否一致、时态是否准确是否准确 检查句与句之间、段与段之间是否使用恰当的检查句与句之间、段与段之间是否使用恰当的连接词连接词 没有把握的没有把握的词或句子不要冒或句子不要冒险, ,句式要丰富句式要丰富， 尽量用上一些尽量用上一些高高级词汇 工整工整誊写到答写到答题卷上，尽量不要涂改，注意卷上，尽量不要涂改，注意大小写、大小写、标点点 5. 检(Check) 仔细检查ExcellentPoorShow TimeAfter w
14、riting: self-check(自查自查)Grammar&Tense语法和时态语法和时态Structure结构结构(是否分段，是否有主题句是否分段，是否有主题句)Right linking words合适的连接词合适的连接词Useful patterns and expressions 有用的句型和短语有用的句型和短语Punctuation&Capital letter大小写及标点大小写及标点Neat writing整洁的书写整洁的书写What should you pay attention to?Peer-check(同伴互查同伴互查)Any grammar mistakes?Any
15、 Chinglish(中式英语中式英语)?Any great sentences?Any linking words?Dear John, Its Fathers Day today.Its a special day,isnt it? I think we should do something to show our love for our fathers on this special day.My father and I are good friends,whenever I meet with difficulties ,he is always ready to help me
16、. Today I will make a beautiful card for him,with my thanks and best wishes on it .Then I will help him wash the car this afternoon,and I will cook his favorite food in the evening .Besides ,Ill take a walk with him after dinner and play chess with him,for he likes playing chess very much .I m sure
17、hell be very happy. Whats your plan for Fathers Day? Im looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua2).Recite some good phrases , sentences and articles.Eg:Proverbs(sayings) 3).Dont write long sentences if you are not sure about it,Remember-short but good sentences are ok. 1).Write neatly.Homework1. Rewrite your paper and hand it in.2. Recite all the good patterns and sentences.Help our students write clearly,naturally beautifullyThanks for listening! Bye-bye
