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1、必修二必修二unit3-WritingLearning aims: 1. Learn to be interested in something about robots. 2. Learn to write some phrases and sentences to describe your android 3. Learn to write a composition about androids. 2021/5/222Read the passage carefully and fill inthe AndyName:_ Appearance:_Size:_ Character: _A
2、bility:_ Job: _ _Andylooks like a humanas big as a humancompetitive ,co-operativecan move and think like a humana strikerPre-writing2021/5/223Create your own androidName:_Appearance:_Size:_ Character:_Ability:_(what can he/she do?)some useful phases: looks like a /be like as tall/big as a humorous,
3、friendly, good-tempered clean the house, mop the floor, cook the dinner,deal with telephone calls, watch over and look after the children 2021/5/224 You need to imagine what your android might have to do. play guitarcan singlike a real birdhas 5 arms to hold all the toolscan do all the work around t
4、he house2021/5/225A composition: My android2021/5/2262021/5/227写作分析写作分析 本文是一篇说明文。题目要求同学们本文是一篇说明文。题目要求同学们描述理想中的机器人，属于开放性作文。描述理想中的机器人，属于开放性作文。你需要发挥想象描述自己心目中的机器你需要发挥想象描述自己心目中的机器人的名字、外表、大小、性格、功能等。人的名字、外表、大小、性格、功能等。这是同学们发挥自己想象力的好机会。这是同学们发挥自己想象力的好机会。2021/5/228 1. 确定文体：这是一篇说明文。确定文体：这是一篇说明文。 2. 主体时态：一般现在时。主
5、体时态：一般现在时。 3. 主体人称：第一人称为主。主体人称：第一人称为主。 4. 内容要点：填写上面的表格，并说明自己的内容要点：填写上面的表格，并说明自己的 机器人有什么特征和作用。（可以适当发挥）机器人有什么特征和作用。（可以适当发挥） 5. 注意恰当使用连接词，使各个要点之间逻辑注意恰当使用连接词，使各个要点之间逻辑 连贯、行文通顺。连贯、行文通顺。 写作时应注意以写作时应注意以下几点：下几点：2021/5/229 首先，根据表格用简单句描述机器首先，根据表格用简单句描述机器人的基本特征。人的基本特征。 其次，把简单句中的逻辑关系理顺，其次，把简单句中的逻辑关系理顺，然后试着变换成高级
6、句式。然后试着变换成高级句式。 最后，用适当的连接词把句子组合，最后，用适当的连接词把句子组合，形成一篇短文，并检查、改正文中的语形成一篇短文，并检查、改正文中的语法和拼写错误。法和拼写错误。2021/5/22101.My robot is called . 2.It is the same size as . / It is as large as .3.It looks like a .4.Its job is to do . / It can do ., and5. It is designed for / to do .6. It does all the work around th
7、e house.7. It is very patient and never complains.8. It is humorous and good-tempered.Writing2021/5/2211 9. It can be with me whenever I feel lonely. 10. or perhaps it will help me . 11. Robots are supposed to do boring and difficult jobs that humans can not do or dont want to do. 12.We can imagine
8、robots will care for our children and develop friendship with us in the future. 2021/5/2212Post-writing: Evaluate the passage 评价内容标准得分书写整洁，美观4分词汇拼写正确选词得当，语句通顺流畅6分2021/5/2213My Android My android is called Jack. It is as tall as a real man. It can do all my jobs around the house. This means that it s
9、hould clean the house, mop the floors, cook the dinner and deal with telephone calls. It should also watch over my naught2021/5/2214 niece, who comes to my house very often. Whenever she comes, I have to look after her, and sometimes help her with her homework . I hope my android will be programmed
10、to do homework and not make mistakes. In that way, my niece will not spoil my free time and I can go out with my 2021/5/2215 friends. I dont mind what my android looks like, but it must be able to talk and tell funny stories to my niece.2021/5/2216 Summing up I have learned how to write a compositio
11、n about androids in this class. I can write something about androids: Phrases: look/be like _ Sentences: It is named(My androids name is.)_2021/5/2217Have you learned to write a passage about your android in this writing ? Please write a passage about your ideal android.2021/5/22182021/5/2219谢谢观赏谢谢观赏
