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1、Free talk: Proud of My School1mind mapping:central thoughtproudwhylove?developingactivitiesleaders and teachersconclusioncentral thought2中考作文辅导中考作文辅导English WritingEnglish WritingSept. 27, 2017By Jessie3 中考英语 与2016年相比，2017年考试说明中考试性质、考试内容、考试形式、难度要求、试卷结构及十大附录均不变，仅调整题型示例及参考答案以及题型拓展，特别值得关注的变化变化如下： 1. 听力
2、部分 题型.听对话和问题，选择正确的选项 【题例1-4】 听力材料中的问题在题干中呈现。 2.笔试部分 题型.词语运用 【题例2】 题量：由5道题的短文填空调整为10道题的短文填空； 设题形式：新增盲填。 【题例4】 删除考点：定语从句 新增考点：可数名词单复数的规则变化 题型.基础写作 A连词成句 【题例2】 5道小题均 已给出词形变化。 4拓展部分： 拓展一 听力部分 变化点：.各小题听力材料中的问题均在题干中呈现。 拓展二 单项选择 变化一：.-.题量由15道调整为10道。 变化二：. 题量由16道调整为15道；删除考查定语从句的题目。 拓展三 新增，10道题。 拓展四 阅读理解 变化点
3、：. A篇由3道题调整为5道题；C篇由4道题调整为5道题。 5拓展五 任务型阅读 变化一：.由3道题调整为5道题，且设题形式有变化。具体如下： 1题由“找近义句” 调整为“完成句子”； 新增“简略回答问题”和“找出并写下第四条建议中的主题句”。 6变化二：.材料替换，且设题形式有变化。具体如下： 1 题由“判断正误” 调整为“完成句子”； 2 题由“在文中的横线上，填写一个恰当 的单词”调整为“简略回答问题”； 3 题由“将文中处画线句子译成汉语” 调整为“找出并写下全文的主题句”； 4 题由“写出文中句的同义句，每空限 填一词” 调整为“将文中画线句子译成 汉语”。7 拓展六 词语运用 变化
4、一：. . 4题设题形式均由“中文提示” 调整为“适当形式填空”； 5题设题形式均由“中文提示” 调整为“根据首字母提示填空”。 变化二：.3题由 “It is _ (impossible) that they got smaller during the winter”调整为“It is possible that the skirt _(get) smaller during the winter” 变化三：.题干由“根据短文内容及所给单词提示，在空白处写出正确答案。每空不多于3个单词。”调整为“根据短文内容及所给提示，补全文中单词或用所给单词的正确形式填空。”；设题形式由“盲填和所给单词
5、的正确形式填空” 调整为“根据首字母提示和所给单词的正确形式填空”。8 拓展七 连词成句 变化一：.和. 5道小题均已给出词形变化。 变化二：.1题由“read, I, book, often” 调整为 “read, I, books, often, English” 3题由“like, I, learn English, good, to” 调整为“like, I, best, learning, English”。 9 拓展八 书面表达 变化一：.由“英文提示” 调整为“中文表格提示”；由“要求” 调整为“注意”；由“文中不得出现真实的人名、校名” 调整为“文中不得出现考生真实的姓名和学校
6、名称”。 变化二：新增，具体如下： 向他人表达善意并帮助他人体现了一个人良好的品格。当你向他人表达善意并给他人提供帮助时，你希望得到回报(repay)吗？针对这一话题，九年级六班的同学们展开了辩论。 假设你是正方或反方的一员，请围绕你的观点，结合自己的亲身经历，说出23条理由来说服同学们，只需选择一方观点表达即可。 要求：1. 80个词左右。 2. 文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 3. 文中不得出现考生真实的姓名和学校名称。 When I show kindness and help others, I_ 10河北省历届中考作文题1106年写作 在一次英语班会上，老师请同学们以“Proud
7、of My School”为主题发言。请根据下面所给的提示写一篇发言稿。字数要求在80100词之间。文中不得出现真实的人名、地名 提示: What does your school look like? What fun do you have at school? Why do you like your school? Proud of My School1207年写作 由于父亲常年在外工作，李华一边上学一边照顾多病的母亲。昨天李华不慎摔伤了脚，医生建议他在家休息两周。请你根据以下提示，写一篇短文，谈谈如何帮助李华。（开头已给出） 提示： 1. Why will you help Li H
8、ua? 2. How can you help him with his lessons? 3. What are you going to do to help him with the housework? 要求： 1. 短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、地名和校名。 3. 词数6080。 Li Huas father works in another city, so Li Hua has to take care of his sick mother after school. 1308年写作 假如你要接受一家英文报社的采访，记者提出的问题是“How
9、can you be a good child?”请你根据下面所给提示及要求，准备一段应答稿。（文稿的开头已给出，不计入总词数） 提示：(1) What should you do at school? (2) What can you do to give help at home? (3) How do you show your love to your parents (or grandparents)? 要求：（1） 文稿包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。 （2） 文稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 （3） 词数：6080个。 Well, to be a good child, I
10、1409年写作外籍教师Richard想了解一下你所在班级学生的到校方式。假如你 是李华，请以 “The way I go to school” 为题，写一篇英语短文，向Richard介绍自己到校的方式。 提示：(1) How do you go to school? (2) Why do you prefer to go in that way？ 要求：短文须包括所有提示内容，并围绕你所选择的某种交通方式，写出二至三个理由，可适当发挥。1510年写作 回想三年的英语学习历程，丰富多彩的英语课堂活动一定给你留下 了许多难忘的印象。请你以“What should we do in English
11、class?”为题 写一篇英语短文，谈谈在英语课堂上学生应该怎样做，才能使英语学习 更有效。 提示：(1) Listen to the teacher. (2) Take part in activities. (3) Be confident in ourselves. 要求：(1) 文稿须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。 (2) 文稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 (3) 词数：6080 个。 参考词汇：take notes, work in groups with, not be afraid of What should we do in English class? In Engl
12、ish class，we should_1611年写作 假如你看到或听到下面这则消息，请以李华的名义，给你的英国笔友Davy发一封电子邮件，告诉他这个感人的故事及你的感受。 河北农业大学93级学生李宝元因病于1996年去世。他所在班级的26名同学决定共同帮助李宝元的父母。十五年来，他们寄出15张汇款单和56封信。 提示：(1) Tell him the true story. (2) Talk about how you feel about it. (3) Say something about what you can learn from it. 要求： （1）文稿须包括所有提示内容，可
13、适当发挥。 （2）电子邮件的开头和结尾己给出，不计入总词数。 （3）词数：6080个。 参考词汇：money order (汇款单), go on, be moved (感动), be full of love Hi Davy, Id like to tell you a true story. Li Baoyuan. a student of Hebei Agricultural University came from a poor family. Unluckily, 1712年写作 假如你叫李华，请你就“英语老师用英语还是用英汉双语教学”这一问题，根据下面的提示和要求，给你的老师Mis
14、s Li写一封信，谈一谈人的看法。 提示：(1)Whats your idea? (2) Why do you think so? (3) What is your advice? 要求：(1)信须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。 (2) 信中不要涉及真实的人名和校名。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 (3) 词数：6080。 Dear Miss Li, I think youd better use 1813年写作假如在英语课上，老师请你们就“Lucky Money(压岁钱)”这个话题分组进行讨论，但你认为同学们对“Hobbies（爱好）”更感兴趣，建议老师更换话题。请你根据下面的提示和要求，
15、写一份发言稿，谈一谈你的理由。 提示：(1) Why do you like talking about hobbies? (2) Whats your reason for not talking about lucky money? 要求：（1）发言稿必须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。 （2）发言稿中不得涉及真实的人名、校名和地名。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）词数：6080。 参考词汇: ones own hobby, a proper topic(合适的话题), personal, unhappy1914年书面表达 请阅读Tony从美国发来的电子邮件，并根据所给提示和要求，以李华的
16、名义回复。 Hey Li Hua! How are you doing? Ive been busy since I came back from China. Guess what! Im learning Chinese cooking, and I really enjoy it 提示：（1）Ask Tony something about his Chinese cooking. （2）Answer his question about Mid-Autumn Festival. 要求：（1）邮件旭包括所有提示内容，课适当发挥。 （2）邮件中不得涉及真实的人名、校名和地名。开头结尾已给出
17、，不计入总词数。（3）词数：6080 参考词汇：the lunar calendar(阴历), moon cake, watch the moon. The symbol of reunion(团圆的象征) Hi, Tony, Good to hear from you! Its amazing that youre learning 2015年写作英语课上，老师要求同学们介绍个人周末计划。假设下面表格内容是你的计划提纲， 请根据表格提示的活动内容，写一篇发言稿，介绍你的周末计划，并在班上与同学交流。 Saturday Watch TV Go to a bookstore Sunday Vis
18、it grandparents 2116年写作年写作2217年写作英语课上，同学们正在准备举行以“真实的自我”为主题的演讲活动。请你以李华的名义写一篇演讲词，向同学们介绍一下自己。提示：(1) What are your strong points? (2) How do you improve yourself? (3) What is your dream for the future? 注意：1. 短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名； 3. 词数：80个左右。(开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数) Hello, everyone! Im Li H
19、ua and Im very happy to stand here to talk about myself. 232017中考常见十类错误英语写作中，这10类错误千万不能再犯了！英语写作是对同学们词汇、短语、句型、语法甚至是阅读能力的综合考查，最能反映大家的英语水平。所以，无论从考试还是个人今后发展的角度来考虑，都应加倍重视英语写作。下面是同学们在英语写作中常犯的十项错误，看看你有几项呢，有则改之，无则加勉！1 审题不清如某一年的中考作文要求写一项最喜欢的课外活动，有些考生将作文的主题定位为“我最喜欢的活动”，偏离了“一项、课外活动”这一主题。依据作文的评分原则，若文章内容不切题，则不管语
20、言如何规范、用词如何准确，都会被判为零分。 2 拼写错误拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功，但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差，同时也直接影响内容的表达，通常会降低作文的档次。243 名词单复数问题 误：My father and my mother is all teacher.正：My father and my mother are both teachers.4 缺少动词在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有动词来构成，如：“我累了。”这个句子没有动词作谓语，而用形容词，
21、但英语形容词不能作谓语，一定要写成：Im tired. 误：I happy I can come to Beijing Zoo.正：I am happy I can come to Beijing Zoo.误：The apples cheap. Ill take some.正：The apples are cheap. Ill take some.255 缺少介词、冠词等还有一些考生因为没有熟练掌握介词或者冠词的用法，不了解中英文语言习惯的不同，也会出现明显的错误，造成丢分现象。 误：Because heavy rain we cant hold the sports meeting.正：Be
22、cause of the heavy rain we cant hold the sports meeting.6 代词的误用英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名词性物主代词之分。此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词，而英语中物主代词是不可省略的，代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误之一。 误：I mother and I went to the shop to buy a present for I father. 正：My mother and I went to the shop to buy a present for my f
23、ather.267 句子不完整有的考生因为对句子结构认识模糊，所以出现只写半句的现象，这也是造成失分的原因之一。误：Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. For example， my friend in high school.(这段文章的第二句话没有动词，不能独立构成一个句子。这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。)正：Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college，
24、 for example， my friend in high school.8 前后不一致所谓不一致，包括数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致、主谓不一致等。 误：When one have knowledge， he can do what he want to do.(one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has ；同理，want应改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致。正：When one has knowledge ， he can do what he wants to do.279 时态、人称和数的搭配错误汉语动词无时态、人称和数的变化，而对英语来说，这些都至关重要。误：W
25、hen I get to the station the train leave.正：When I got to the station the train had left.10 综合性错误综合性错误是指单词的大小写和标点符号的错误等，以及形容词和副词的混淆、连词的误用等等。这些都是靠考生平时知识的积累，所以考生应该从平时练习出发，每天坚持写英语日记，多读适合自己英语水平的原版著作，提高自己的英语素养。28Writing 书面表达书面表达中考考点基本要求：中考考点基本要求：1.1.根据中文提示，写一篇根据中文提示，写一篇8080词词左右左右的英文表达。的英文表达。( (尽量不要超过尽量不要超
26、过100100个单词个单词) )2.2.内容完整，用词准确，句子通顺、内容完整，用词准确，句子通顺、连贯、单词拼写和连贯、单词拼写和标点符号标点符号正确，正确，书写工整。书写工整。29中考书面表达主要类型中考书面表达主要类型一一 记叙文记叙文(Narration):1.写人 2. 叙事 3.写景 4.状物二二 议论文议论文(Argumentation):1.学习 2. 社会 3. 音乐 4.体育 5.环保 6.时事三说明文三说明文(Exposition)：1.地点说明 2.方式方法说明 3.事物说明四四 应用文应用文(Practical Writing)：1.书信 2.日记 3.通知 4.便条
27、 5.贺卡五五 材料作文：材料作文：1.情景提示作文 2.看图写话 3.表格提示类作文30注意时态和人称注意时态和人称写人写人叙事叙事议论议论一般现在时一般现在时一般过去时一般过去时一般现在时一般现在时31 Writing: How to write excellent articles? 写短文时要做到以下七个方面：写短文时要做到以下七个方面：一一.从整体着眼从整体着眼,提纲挈领扣题意提纲挈领扣题意1.审清文体审清文体 2. 选准人称选准人称 3. 用好时态用好时态 4. 突出要点突出要点二二. .避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可
28、交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。三三. .多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句的句型。多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句, ,感感叹句叹句. .适当使用复合句和强调句。另外适当使用复合句和强调句。另外, ,要根据文要根据文章内容需要少量套用一些英语格言警句章内容需要少量套用一些英语格言警句, ,谚语等以谚语等以加强文章的感染力加强文章的感染力. .32四.注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。1）语态、时态要准确无误。2）主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数 要和谓语一致。3）注意人称代词的
29、用法。4）注意冠词用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能写成a。5）注意拼写、标点符号和大小写，e.g： receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant, etc.33五五. 适当运用连接词语或过渡词语：适当运用连接词语或过渡词语： 不少学生在写作文时只重视意思表不少学生在写作文时只重视意思表达清楚，而不重视语句间的连接，忽达清楚，而不重视语句间的连接，忽视使用过渡性词汇视使用过渡性词汇,结果写得文章结构结果写得文章结构不紧凑，上下文不连贯，可读性不强。不紧凑，上下文不连贯，可读性不强。要使整篇文章衔
30、接自然、浑然一体、要使整篇文章衔接自然、浑然一体、文句流畅，使用恰当的的过渡性词汇文句流畅，使用恰当的的过渡性词汇是很有必要的。下面是一些常见的过是很有必要的。下面是一些常见的过渡性词汇渡性词汇：34Transitional words (过渡词语过渡词语):1.时间关系时间关系：first, then, after that, finally, at last, soon, suddenly, immediately, meanwhile, the moment, while, as, as soon as, after, before, etc.2.空间关系空间关系：here, there
31、, over there, on one side, on the other side, in front of, at the back of, next to, etc. 353.并列关系并列关系:and, as well as, or4.表示目的：表示目的：in order that, so that; in order to, so as to5.对称关系对称关系：for one thing, for the other thing, on the one hand, on the other hand366. 转折关系：转折关系：but, yet, however, while,
32、though, although, otherwise, on the contrary(相反）相反），in spite of“尽管尽管”不能跟句子）不能跟句子）no matter what7.因果关系因果关系：because, since, as, now that, due to thanks to(多亏多亏）owing to as a result oftherefore, thus, etc.37 8.条件关系条件关系：if, unless, as long as(只要只要), so long as (只只要要), in case, on condition that9.递进关系递进关
33、系：whats more, moreover, besides, furthermore, in addition, to make matters worse, whats worse, worse still10. 举例举例：for example, for instance, such as, like, that is, namely; take sth. for example, and so on3811.解释解释: in other words ; or; That is to say(也也就是说就是说.)12. 转换话题：转换话题：1/ In my opinion.2/ In
34、fact.3/ As a matter of fact 4/ By the way. 5/ I am afraid.13. 肯定肯定:of course, certainly14. 对照：对照：1/ instead 2/ instead of 3/ On the contrary.3915.总结：总结：in short, in general, in brief, to sum up, generally speaking, in a wordTo tell you the truth.;Believe it or not. ; All in all. ;On the whole.;For t
35、hese reasons.;That is why.; As we all know.=As is known to us40六六. .检查修改文章检查修改文章: : 认真检查，改正错误。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的 连贯性来给分，根据错误多少来扣分。因此，中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手：1）格式是否有错。2）拼写有无错误。3）语言是否用错。4）是否遗漏要点5)时态、语态错误。6)标点和大小写错误。7）人称是否用错。41七.注意事项:写好草稿（如果时间允许的话）,然后再抄到卷面上）书面表达要特别注意书写工整，卷面整洁。书写是否工整，卷面
36、是否整洁与得分高低直接有关。 42How can we write argumentation well?(如何才能写好议论文如何才能写好议论文?)议论文议论文亦称亦称说理文说理文,议论文就是讲道理、论议论文就是讲道理、论是非。作者通过事实材料和逻辑推理来阐是非。作者通过事实材料和逻辑推理来阐明自己的观点、表明赞成什么或反对什么。明自己的观点、表明赞成什么或反对什么。 一篇完整的议论文必须含有一篇完整的议论文必须含有论点论点、论据论据和和论证论证三个要素。论点是作者对议论的问题三个要素。论点是作者对议论的问题所持的看法或主张。有的议论只有一个论所持的看法或主张。有的议论只有一个论点点,叫中心论
37、点叫中心论点;有的议论除中心论点外有的议论除中心论点外,还还有几个从属的分论点。论据是作者用来证有几个从属的分论点。论据是作者用来证明论点的理由和根据。它可以是事例明论点的理由和根据。它可以是事例,43也可以是理论也可以是理论,也可以是数据。论证是也可以是数据。论证是用论据证明论点的推理过程和方法。用论据证明论点的推理过程和方法。论点论点必须正确、鲜明必须正确、鲜明;论据确凿、典型、论据确凿、典型、恰当、有说服力恰当、有说服力,必须与论点之间有本必须与论点之间有本质的、必然的联系。质的、必然的联系。44一、英语议论文的语言特点一、英语议论文的语言特点:1.时态较为统一时态较为统一,多用现在时多
38、用现在时,强调语言表达的强调语言表达的客观性客观性,尽可能指明信息来源。尽可能指明信息来源。2. 较多使用表达委婉语气的词语和句子。常较多使用表达委婉语气的词语和句子。常用虚拟语气用虚拟语气,让步状语从句和情态动词让步状语从句和情态动词.3. 使用有辩论使用有辩论,推理等含义的连接词和过渡词推理等含义的连接词和过渡词.常用的有常用的有:since, now that, therefore, accordingly, in that case(在那种情况下在那种情况下).45二、英语议论文的写作方法：二、英语议论文的写作方法：1、提出议题：议题的提出要、提出议题：议题的提出要开门见开门见 山，不
39、要拖泥带水。山，不要拖泥带水。2、提出正反两方面的观点。、提出正反两方面的观点。3、表明作者的态度，作者的观点必须、表明作者的态度，作者的观点必须 鲜明。鲜明。4、论证自己观点的正确性从而使读者、论证自己观点的正确性从而使读者 接受自己的观点。接受自己的观点。46Write at least 60 words on the following topic: “Time Is Money”Writing practice in Class: （课堂实战演练（课堂实战演练)47Learn some proverbs about time:1.Time and tide wait for no ma
40、n. 岁月不待人岁月不待人.2.Time lost cannot be recalled. 光阴一去不复返光阴一去不复返.3.Time is money, but money can never buy time. 一寸光阴一寸金一寸光阴一寸金,寸金寸金 难买寸光阴难买寸光阴.484. Life is short and time is swift. 人生短暂人生短暂,光阴似箭光阴似箭.5.The whole years work depends on a good start in spring. 一年之计在于春一年之计在于春.496. An hour in the morning is w
41、orth two in the evening. 一日之计在于晨一日之计在于晨.7. Tomorrow never comes. 切莫依赖明天切莫依赖明天. 50Good paragraphs 好段欣赏好段欣赏1. Someone says, “Time is money.” But I think time is much more important than money. Because when money is spent, we can get it back. However, when time is gone, itll never come back again. That
42、s why we mustnt waste time. 512. But there are still a lot of people who dont know the importance of time. They waste their time playing games, getting on line and something else. They dont know that wasting time means wasting part of their own lives.523. We often say, “How time flies!” So even a se
43、cond is very important sometimes. We must make full use of our time to do anything useful. And in a word, we must save time, and we shouldnt leave todays work till tomorrow. 534. The first and most important thing is that we must put our hearts and minds in our study. We should listen to the teacher
44、 carefully in class and try our best to catch what the teacher says. After class we must go over what we have learned and finish our homework in time. If we have any difficulties, we should ask our teachers or classmates until we understand them completely. We must do lots of exercises. 54Write at l
45、east 60 words on the following topic: “Time Is Money”Writing practice in Class: （课堂实战演练（课堂实战演练)55Good compositions学生好作文欣赏学生好作文欣赏56 Time is Money When I was young I used to hear the old people always said Time is money, but I didnt know what it meant. Now my father tells me that people in big cities
46、always walk very fast because they have no time to waste. They are busy with their work and they need to earn money to take care of their home.But I dont think so. It seems that everyone has much time. They like to do such things as playing games, listening to music and sleeping for a long time. But
47、 they dont know they57sometimes waste their time. In fact, time flies very fast and everyone has no time to waste. As a Grade Nine student, I have to meet the entrance exam soon so I must try my best to get ready for it. To sum up, time is money for me and for everyone, as well. We must all treasure
48、 time.58Time is MoneyI know a famous saying Time is money. I agree on it, and I even think that time is more valuable than money. If we lose our money, we can earn it back. But if we waste our time, we will find no way to get it again. Because of this, we should save as much time as possible. We sho
49、uld use time to do things that are meaningful. Try to be efficient, try to save time, and you will live a more substantial life.59 Time Is Money Time is not only invisible but also untouchable. However, we can feel that it is passing every day. Nowadays, almost every family has one or more clocks. E
50、ach sound of them means one second has passed. One second is so short that we can only blink our eyes one time. But how about hundreds of seconds, thousands of seconds and millions of seconds? Time never stops. So we must not waste it. People spend time in different ways. As a middle school student,
51、 I should spend most of my time in studying now. To sum up, time is precious as money, we should all treasure it. ( 117 words)60 Time Is Money Para.1：Time is precious. It runs away in the blink of an eye by accident.We are going to face the graduation examination, and time seems to be limited to us.
52、 We ought to do homework; we need to do plenty of exercises so that we can do better in exams. And like other teenagers, we want to play. How to save time? Its a question in everyones heart. 61Para.2: To my mind, in order to make the best use of time, we should work as fast as we can. Youll miss eve
53、rything if you waste time. However, on the contrary, if you work hard from beginning to end, youll get everything you want. In short, time is generous, but it is also cruel.Para.3: We all think we are just fifteen years old, and we still have a great deal of time to waste. In reality, time is a naug
54、hty boy, and it will play tricks on you if you dont take care of him. Time flies so fast that we cant realize that we are growing up. Maybe one day, when62we become too old to walk, we may only look at the azure sky and think of the glory days we used to have, such as this English lesson, and say “O
55、h, I was having an English lesson given by Mr. Zhu this time yesterday, I didnt listen to him carefully and I cant remember what he saidThat is awful, in fact. Para.4: In a word, time is money and nothing is more precious than it. 63Thank you64 My Free Time As a Grade Nine student, I dont have as mu
56、ch free time as before. I have to attend classes at weekends. Although my life is full of work, I still feel happy. I usually play basketball and tennis when I am free. They are my favorite sports. In my opinion, playing ball games is thought of as a good form of exercise. These activities enable me
57、 to calm myself down, so that I can do better in studying and working. Reading is also my hobby. I often read books which are written in English such as “The Adventures of Tom Sawyer”、“Mysteries of Sherlock Holmes” and so on. They are worth reading because the plots are wonderful and unforgettable.
58、It is also an opportunity for me to improve my English. Dont take for granted that all we can do in free time is to play. Believe it or not, we can also benefit from that. -65 The Life as A Grade 9 Student How time flies! Now Im a grade nine student. Actually I feel the life is quite different from
59、it used to be. Now Im as busy as a bee. Theres a lot of homework, exams and quizzes. The only feeling I have now is : The life as a Grade Nine student is very busy and challenging ! ! Theres an old saying: He who fails to plan plans to fail. I dont want to fail, so I create a plan for the whole year
60、 : Since nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it, I will change my attitude towards maths and physics which I am poor at now. Ill spend the following six months efficiently. Ill try my best to benefit from what teachers will teach us in class. As theres no elevator to success, Ill do ever
61、ything step by step! ! I believe that Ican do66 The life as a Grade Nine student My life in Grade Nine is busy but colourful. During the last five months I have been through so many things such basketball games and different contests that I hardly have the chance to take a day off, but it is still g
62、reat to have this kind of experience.67 I have worked hard for eight years and Ill keep working hard in order to have a bright future. The plan I have for the whole year is to work harder than before and study more efficiently. Time goes by quickly and the following six months is very important to me in my whole life. No pains, no gains. I will not waste a single minute and do the best I can to make great progress.68Writing practice: （课堂实战演练（课堂实战演练)69个人观点供参考，欢迎讨论
