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1、,读后续写,阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,，使之构成一篇完整的,短文。,A MOTHERS DAY,SURPRISE,The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of,the,surprise they were,planning,for,Mothers,Day.How,pleased,and,proud,Mother,would,be,when,they,brought,her,breakfast,in,bed.They,planned,to,make,French,toast,and,chicken,por
2、ridge.They,had,watched,their,mother,in,the,kitchen.T,here,was,nothing,to,it.,Jenna and Jeff,knew exactly what to,do.,The,big,day,came,at,last.The,alarm,rang,at,6,a.m.The,pair,went,down,the,stairs quietly to the kitchen.They decided to boil,the,porridge,first.Th,ey,put,some,rice,into,a,pot,of water,a
3、nd,left,it,to,boil,while,they,made,the,Fre,nch,toast.Jeff,broke two cggs into a plate,and added in,some milk.Jenna,found,the bread,and put,two,slices,into,the,egg,mixture.Next,Jeff,tu,rned,on,the,second,stove,burner,to,heat up the frying pan.Everything was going smoothly until Jeff,started frying th
4、e bread.The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds.Je,nna threw,the,burnt,piece,into,the,sink,and,put,in,the,othe,r,slice,of,bread.This,time,she,turned down the fire,so it,cooked nicely,.,Then,Jeff noticed,steam,shooting,out,of t,he pot,and,the,lid,starting,to,shake.,The,next,minu
5、te,the,porridge,boiled,over,and,put,out,the,fire.Jenna,panicked.,Thankfully,Jeff,stayed,calm,and,turned,off the,gas,qu,ickly.But,the,stove,was,a,mess now.Jenna told Jeff,to clean it up,so they,could,continue,to,cook,the,rest,of the,porridge.But,Jeffs,hand,touched,the,hot,burner,and,he,ga,ve,a,cry,of
6、 pain.,Jenna made him put his hand in cold water.Then she caught the,smell of,burni,ng.,Oh dear!The piece of,bread in the pan had turned,black as well.,注意：,1.续写词数应为1,50左右：,2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。,As,the,twins,looked,around,them,in,disappointment,their,father,appeared.,The twins carried the breakfast up
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8、型,ACT I,Approx.30 screenplay,pages,危,机,高,潮,好故事来源于好结构,自身努力或借助环境/工具,危机暂缓或尝试失败,冲,突,尝试,解决!,反应,万能的情感线,变换的动作线,转折,灵机一动,关键人/物,年份,主题,体裁,出处,2016.10,吵架出走迷路,记叙文,浙江高考,2017.6,旅行途中遇狼,2017.11,健忘妈妈趣事,2018.6,度假骑马迷路,2020.1,抚平狗狗心伤,2020.7,拍照意外遇险,2020.7,爱心帮助他人,山东高考,2021.1,少女南瓜卡头,浙江高考,2021.6,母亲,节给妈妈准备早,餐,新高考卷,【2016浙江,吵架出走
9、迷路】,One weekend,in July,Jane and,her husband,Tom,had driven three,hours to,camp overnight,by,a,lake,i,n,the,forest.,Unfortunately,on the way,an unpleasant subject came up,and they,started,to,quarrel.By,the,time,they,reached,the,lake,Jane,was so angry that she said to Tom,Im going,tofind,a,better,spo
10、t for,us,to,campand,walked,away.,With,no,path to follow,Jane just wal,ked on for quite a long time.After she,had,climbed to,a,high,place,she,turned,around,hoping to see the lake.To her surprise,she saw,n,othing,but,forest,and,far,beyond,a,snow-capped,mountaintop.She,suddenly,realized that she was,lo
11、st.,“Tom!she,cried.Help!”,No,reply.If only she,had,not,left,her mob,ile,phone,in that,bag with Tom.Jane,kept,moving,but the farther she walked,the,more conf,used she,became,As,night was,beginning to fall,Jane was so tired that she,had,to,stop for,the,night.Lying,awake,in,the dark,Jane wanted very,mu
12、ch to,be with Tom and,her family.She wanted to,hold,him and,tell,him,how,much,she,loved,him.,Jane,rose at the,break of day,hungry and thirsty.S,he could,hear water trickling somewhere,at,a,distance.Quickly,she,followed the sound to a stream.To,her great joy,she also saw some,berry,bushes.She,drank,a
13、nd,ate,a few,berries.,Never in,her life,had she tasted anything,better.Feeling stronger,now,Jane,began,to walk,a,long,the,stream,and,hope,it,would,lead,her to the,lake.,As she,picked,her way carefull,y along the stream,Jane heard,a,helicopter,Is that forme?Unfortunately,the,trees,made,it,impossible
14、for people to see,her from above.A few,minutes later,another,heli,copter flew,overhead.Jane took,off,her,yellow,blouse,thinkingthat she should goto an open area and,flag,them,if they,came,back,agai,n.,But,no,heli,copters,came,and,it,was,getting,dark,again.,It was daybreak when Jane woke up.,反应：情感线,t
15、old,her that,尝试：自我鼓励,way.,尝试：危机暂缓,omorrow,is,反应：情感线,per,company,.,衔接,But,no,helicopters,came,andi,A wave of terror swept o,ver,he,Her,heart pounding,fi,erce,ly and,she,had to find a sate,place.,Tired,and,terrified,as,she,was,Luckily,it didnt ta,ke,long,befo,Sighing with relief,she,felt ag,another,da
16、y,.”,With,that,she,wen,t,to sleep,inm,反应尝试转折解决,It was daybreak when Jane,woke,up.,Hungry,and,d,isappointed,she,at,a,loss,what to,do.,It suddenly dawned on,her th,first.,Having gobbling down someb,f.,After,what,seemed,a,century,Her face brightened,up,.,Meanwhile,a,helicopter,was,Upon,its,l,anding,out,dashed,tly,tears,v.,冲,welling,up,in,their,heart.,口反应：情感线,口转折：灵机一动,口转折：关键事物,口反应：情感线,口转折：关键事物,口解决!,It was,at the m,oment that t,hey d,ecided not to,q,uarrel,any,more,but,learned,口,点睛收,尾,反应尝,试转折解,决,to,c
