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1、 教学反思(同名 1297) 在第三节课（上面的第一，第二部分都已经向学生解说完） ，我要求学生写一篇文章，测试一下这样做法究竟有没有效果。 而结果是令人满意的。至少学生已经不害怕写作文了。 一 适当的奖励和鼓励，让事情事半功倍 我记得第一次那些学生用了几乎一个小时的时间写作文，过程肯定有点艰巨。但他们写完后，我都把他们每个同学的好句子摘录下来，被称为 2010 年杏中体音美英语作文集，以下是第一次的摘录记录： 2010 年杏中体音美英语作文集一 主题：笑是否是良药？请举例说明。 1. On one hand, it can reduce your sadness; on the other
2、hand, it can make you keep away from illness. （谢嘉） 2. Laughter can relieve pressure. （楚瑶） 3. I believe laughter can make us happy and reduce lots of stress. Not only does laughter kill illness, but also it makes the life simple. All in all, laughter is the best medicine, and laughter makes you happy
3、 every time. （洁颖） 4. As far as Im concerned, on one hand, laughter can bring me happiness; on the other hand, laughter can make me forget the bad things. （建发） 5. In addition, laughter makes me communicate with people more easily, so I can make many friends in my life. Nowadays, my life becomes wonde
4、rful as I often laugh. Its laughter that is the best medicine. （礼超） 6. Theres no doubt that with the rapid development of our economy, more and more people have more and more pressure. At that time, if we laugh aloud, the pressure will be reduced. To make a long story short, laughter is the best med
5、icine. （超膨） 7. On one hand, laughter can let our body healthy, on the other hand, laughter can let us happy every day. Whats more , laughter can let us relax. So as for me, we should laugh all the time. （惠利） 8. Laughter can keep our mood happy. Laughter not only is good for our health, but also let
6、our life more beautiful. Last but not lease, laughter is the most beautiful color of the life. in short, laughter is the best medicine, and it is the best way to solve the trouble. （关公） 9. On one hand, laughter can make me happy, on the other hand, laughter can help my study and keep me healthy. （达忠
7、） 10. I cant agree more with what the writer said. Laughter is really the best medicine. （家伦） 11. Because laughing is a way of making us happy. Whats more, we can fight the disease through laughing. Therefore, we should often laugh. （健进） 12. I fully support the statement above because I can be very
8、sure laughter can make us forget the bad things. （正杰） 13. Theres no denying the fact that laughter is the best medicine. On one hand, laughter can actually do a number of positive physical things to improve health and help fight diseases. On the other hand, laughter may lead to happiness. （利珍） 14. T
9、heres no denying the fact that I agree laughter is a great medicine. For example, when you laugh, you will forget the bad things, and youll feel relaxed. （秀敏） 15. As far as Im concerned, laughter can make our life become more and more beautiful. On one hand, laughter can make me forget the bad thing
10、. On the other hand, laughter changes many things in our life. （毅文） 16. In my opinion, I agree to this point laughter is a great thing. On one hand, always laughing can improve our health. On the other hand, it can help us forget the bad things. （咏欣） 17. Theres no denying the fact that I agree laugh
11、ter is the best medicine. On one hand, laughter can make me happy. On the other hand, laughter can make people healthy. （Edison） 18. I agree with the statement that laughter is the best medicine, because the more we laugh, the more relaxed well be. （嘉和） 19. Theres no denying the fact that laughter i
12、s the best medicine. For example, laughter will improve health and help fight diseases. （志贤） 20. Theres no denying the fact that laughter is the best medicine. I do agree to this point. As far as Im concerned, laughter can make us happy. On one hand, it can let us relaxed and make our life colorful
13、and comfortable. On the other hand, laughter can treat illness. （培意） 21. Theres no denying the fact that laughter is the best medicine. Laughter improves our health and help fight diseases. （志豪） 22. As far as Im concerned, laughter is my study motive. （嘉明） 23. As far as Im concerned, laughter is the
14、 best medicine. Laughter can encourage me to face the difficulty.（锡建） 24. Theres strong evidence that laughter can actually do a number of positive physical things to improve health and help fight diseases. （杨洋） 25. Theres no denying the fact that laughter is the best medicine. For example, I was no
15、t happy because I failed in the exam. Its the laughter that makes me happy. （伟宏） 26. As far as Im concerned, laughter is very good. Once I was unhappy. Mr lv let me go to the playground and let me laugh three times. Since then, I was very happy. So I love laughter very much. （文立） 27. Theres no doubt
16、 that we can improve our health when our life is filled with laughter. What impresses me most is that one of my mums good friends who lost a son in a traffic accident. After that she was sad all day and even got ill. At that time, someone suggested her reading more happy stories and talk about happy
17、 things with others so she could laugh more and at last she forgot the sad thing. （星） 28. For example, once I failed in my exam, I was very unhappy. My teacher told me:” you can try to laugh, then you will feel well”. After class, I went to the playground to laugh, I felt very well. （杨） 29. For exam
18、ple, I failed in my exam. I felt very sad. Then my teacher told me that laughter could make me happier and happier. So I have tried to laugh more than before, I found that it is really a good way to make us happy. （嘉琪） 30. Long long ago, I had a friend. He was bad in his study, so he was sad all the
19、 day and his study became poorer. One day , a teacher found him told him sth and let him laugh aloud, then he did it. And his pressure was dropped off. Of course, at the same time, his study became better and better. （超彭） 31. For example, my aunt had cancer. I thought she would be unhappy, because t
20、he doctor said that my aunt could only live for six months. However, my aunt was never unhappy. Besides, I often heard the laughter of my aunt, so we were so happy. Nowadays, my aunt is still living a happy life. （健进） 2010 年杏中体音美英语作文集二 主题：a harmonious society 首先要表扬的同学有：大老杨，谢嘉宏，黎楚瑶，陈洁颖，麦家伦，林利珍，麦秀敏，咏欣
21、，培意，嘉琪，智维，志贤，周芷，关杰豪，梁智杰，梁伟宏 其中模板用得很规范的有麦秀敏，陈洁颖，关杰豪，麦家伦，志贤，智维，咏欣，嘉琪，大老杨。咏欣，大老杨得分最高，分别为 17 和 19分。 运用的例子有： 1 上学路上车坏了，遇到好心人帮忙。 2 四川地震的捐款情况 3 一次生病了， 在等 bus 时遇到好心人， 并被送到医院。 4 一次乘 taxi 的过程中，手机遗忘在车上，司机好心相告。 5 乘坐 bus 时看见年轻人让坐。 不足之处：审题不当。 当学生受到了表扬， 第二次的写作热情与第一次有了明显的进步。 因为当时的辅导时间距离高考只有一个多月的时间， 所以为了促进学生在短期内写好作文，我还进行了一次作文竞赛。 并分三等奖。 凡是能写完作文的同学都有一个雪糕作奖励。自从作文竞赛后，学生的作文水平得到了很大的提高。从广二模的结果可以看出。 四总结 体音美学生在堂上训练作文的次数只有 5次。 但从高考的成绩来看， 收效是可观的。 而且，写作文也可以变成一种乐趣。 只要找到了适合学生的方法，难事也是迎刃而解的。
