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1、Unit 4Communication workshop (Writing)Introduce a placeBy the end of this lesson , you will be able to know some necessary information about Hefei;master some sentence patterns; write an article to describe Hefei.Do you like Hefei? Do you know the origin of the name Hefei?北魏郦道元水经注云：夏水暴涨，北魏郦道元水经注云：夏水
2、暴涨，施施(今南淝河今南淝河)合于肥合于肥(今东淝河今东淝河)，故曰合，故曰合肥。肥。尔雅上指出尔雅上指出“归异出同曰肥归异出同曰肥”。二水。二水皆曰肥，合于一源，分而为二，故曰合肥。皆曰肥，合于一源，分而为二，故曰合肥。DiscussionDiscussion【范文展示】【范文展示】巴黎是法国的首都，也是一个梦幻般的城市，每年吸引巴黎是法国的首都，也是一个梦幻般的城市，每年吸引世界各地大批游客来观光游玩。请根据以下要点用英语世界各地大批游客来观光游玩。请根据以下要点用英语写一篇介绍巴黎的短文。写一篇介绍巴黎的短文。1. 地理位置：法国北部；地理位置：法国北部；2. 人口：大约一千一百万；人口
3、：大约一千一百万；3. 气候：不太热也不太冷，春秋天最好；气候：不太热也不太冷，春秋天最好；4. 基本情况：欧洲第二大城布。法国文化、教育、商基本情况：欧洲第二大城布。法国文化、教育、商业中心。时尚与浪漫之都，很多重大活动在此举行。有业中心。时尚与浪漫之都，很多重大活动在此举行。有悠久的历史和丰富的旅游资源。最著名的有艾菲尔铁塔悠久的历史和丰富的旅游资源。最著名的有艾菲尔铁塔(the Eiffel Tower)、凯旋门、凯旋门(the Triumphal Arch)和圣和圣母院母院 (Old Notre Dame)等。等。注意：注意：1) 不要逐条翻译，但是可增加细节，以使文章不要逐条翻译，但
4、是可增加细节，以使文章连贯、通顺；连贯、通顺； 2) 词数：词数：120左右左右 Paris, a very beautiful city in the world , the capital of France, is located in the north of France. It has a population of about eleven million. It is the second largest city in Europe. As for the weather, it never gets too hot or too cold. And it is at its
5、 best during the spring and autumn months. Paris is the culture, education, business center of France. It is a city of fashion and romance. So many important events have been held here. It is well known that Paris is a modern city with a long history and rich tour resources.There are so many places
6、for people to visit. The most famous are the Eiffel Tower, the Triumphal Arch and Old Notre Dame. In a word, Paris is really a great and attractive city.Task 1Question:Whats the tense of this article？Present Simple(一般现在时一般现在时)introduce a placelocationareaclimatehistory peoplefamous sightsthings to d
7、ocharacteristicTask 3Para 1. location climate/ population.Para 2. general Sightseeing (things to see/do): .Para 3. Conclusion OutlineTask 3WritingWritingDa Shushan MountainXiao Yaojin ParkLi Hongzhangs residencebotanic gardenswan lakeMing Jiao TempleSanhe TownChao LakeLuzhou OperacrayfishSouthern Ma
8、gnolia(广玉兰广玉兰)Location: lies in is located/ situated inPopulation: has a population ofwith a population of Sentence patterns and expressionsHistory It has a history of . With a history of . .goes back.Area: cover an area of .(square kilometers / square meters) Sentence patterns and expressionsGenera
9、l: is the largest city is one of the largest cities is famous for/as is a center of is a political and cultural centerSentence patterns and expressionsClimate: has a warm/cold climate Sightseeing: Famous sights include as well asLeisure: There are many things to do in such as.Sentence patterns and e
10、xpressionsAdvanced sentences: As far as I know , It is well-known to us all that It iswas adj.n. for of sb. to do sth. so that How adj.adv.主语主语be! What(a/an) +adj.n.主语主语be!你参加了学校的旅游兴趣小组，在汇报课上，各小组成员要介你参加了学校的旅游兴趣小组，在汇报课上，各小组成员要介绍一个独具魅力的城市，以下是你搜集到的关于合肥的信息。绍一个独具魅力的城市，以下是你搜集到的关于合肥的信息。位置位置安徽中部安徽中部人口人口769.
11、5769.5万万历史历史2,2002,200多年；多年； 面积面积7029.487029.48平方公里平方公里气候气候冬季寒冷，夏季炎热，春秋短暂而凉爽冬季寒冷，夏季炎热，春秋短暂而凉爽 特特色色 1.1.有许多著名景点：逍遥津，明教寺；有许多著名景点：逍遥津，明教寺；植物园；大蜀山；李鸿章故居等。植物园；大蜀山；李鸿章故居等。2. 2. 历史古城，名人众多；历史古城，名历史古城，名人众多；历史古城，名人众多；人众多；3. 3. 是安徽省的政治文化教育中心，四大是安徽省的政治文化教育中心，四大科技城市之一。科技城市之一。AssessmentAssessmentItems评价价项目目Basic
12、Requirements评价基本要求价基本要求Assessment评价价Words &Sentences词句句Use nice words and advanced sentences (such as linking words, etc)wisely能巧用高能巧用高级词及及连接接词等等 Grammar语法法Use grammar properly能正确使用能正确使用语法（法（时态语态；主；主谓一致；非一致；非谓语动词；冠、代、名、；冠、代、名、连错误；词性混淆性混淆等。）等。） Content内容内容Have a topic，a complete main part and good en
13、ding，a complete main part and good ending有主有主题句句,完整的完整的内容和精彩的内容和精彩的结束束语,完整的内容和精彩的完整的内容和精彩的结束束语 Spellingand Punctuation拼写和拼写和标点点Spell words and use case letters correctly能正确拼写能正确拼写单词和使用字母的大小和使用字母的大小Use punctuation correctly能正确使用能正确使用标点点 Handwriting书写写Write beautifully and neatly书写整洁美观书写整洁美观 Total整体整体评价价Polish your writing and rewrite it on your exercise book.
