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1、2011年年6月英月英语四四级作文作文讲解解My views on Online Shopping1. 现在网购已经成为一种时尚现在网购已经成为一种时尚2. 网上购物有很多好处，但也有不网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题少问题3. 我的建议我的建议点评：点评：点评：点评： 本次四级作文探讨的是最近的热点话题本次四级作文探讨的是最近的热点话题本次四级作文探讨的是最近的热点话题本次四级作文探讨的是最近的热点话题之一，互联网网购。目前网购的风靡程度是之一，互联网网购。目前网购的风靡程度是之一，互联网网购。目前网购的风靡程度是之一，互联网网购。目前网购的风靡程度是众所周知，因此，考生对于该话题还是比较
2、众所周知，因此，考生对于该话题还是比较众所周知，因此，考生对于该话题还是比较众所周知，因此，考生对于该话题还是比较熟悉的。但是，比较特殊的是，题干所列出熟悉的。但是，比较特殊的是，题干所列出熟悉的。但是，比较特殊的是，题干所列出熟悉的。但是，比较特殊的是，题干所列出的要求的是考生从一个客观的角度来阐述该的要求的是考生从一个客观的角度来阐述该的要求的是考生从一个客观的角度来阐述该的要求的是考生从一个客观的角度来阐述该话题，而不是简单陈述自己的意见。所以，话题，而不是简单陈述自己的意见。所以，话题，而不是简单陈述自己的意见。所以，话题，而不是简单陈述自己的意见。所以，考生应当审清楚题，在写作时不仅
3、仅要列出考生应当审清楚题，在写作时不仅仅要列出考生应当审清楚题，在写作时不仅仅要列出考生应当审清楚题，在写作时不仅仅要列出网购的优点，还必须给出相应的缺点。网购的优点，还必须给出相应的缺点。网购的优点，还必须给出相应的缺点。网购的优点，还必须给出相应的缺点。整篇作文话题比较好展开，难度不大，整篇作文话题比较好展开，难度不大，整篇作文话题比较好展开，难度不大，整篇作文话题比较好展开，难度不大，只要考生审好题，列出相应点，相信作文不只要考生审好题，列出相应点，相信作文不只要考生审好题，列出相应点，相信作文不只要考生审好题，列出相应点，相信作文不会是难题。会是难题。会是难题。会是难题。Nowaday
4、s, can we find a person who has not experienced online shopping? Definitely not. Online shopping is coming into fashion in most of cities due to the rapid development of internet technology.Online shopping is welcomed by most people due to various reasons. From the perspective of consumer, it can sa
5、ve some time for people who dont have much spare time. Just click the mouse, they can get whatever they want while staying at home. For the retailers, it can cut some costs for those who dont have much circulating funds. They dont have to rent a house and spend money on employees compared with the t
6、raditional trade mode. However, there are still some defects in online shopping. First, face to face deal makes online shopping less reliable and trustworthy. Second, people will lose the fun of bargain.It is undeniable that shopping on the internet has become an irresistible trend in modern society
7、. Its of great urgency that we need to regulate the relative laws in accordance with the rapid growth of online shopping. Only in this way can we enjoy the pleasure and convenience of online shopping without the concern of being treated.第一段第一段第一段第一段第一段：总述现象并引出话题第一段：总述现象并引出话题第一段：总述现象并引出话题第一段：总述现象并引出话
8、题第二段：从正反两方面来论述网购，分第二段：从正反两方面来论述网购，分第二段：从正反两方面来论述网购，分第二段：从正反两方面来论述网购，分别铺陈其优缺点别铺陈其优缺点别铺陈其优缺点别铺陈其优缺点第三段：给出自己的建议第三段：给出自己的建议第三段：给出自己的建议第三段：给出自己的建议第三段第三段第三段第三段第二段第二段第二段第二段第一段第一段第一段第一段第一段第一段第一段第一段第二段第二段第二段第二段第一段第一段第一段第一段第二段第二段第二段第二段第一段第一段第一段第一段第三段第三段第三段第三段第二段第二段第二段第二段第一段第一段第一段第一段第三段第三段第三段第三段第二段第二段第二段第二段第三段
9、第三段第三段第三段第二段第二段第二段第二段第三段第三段第三段第三段 Nowadays, can we find a person who has not Nowadays, can we find a person who has not experienced online shopping? Definitely not. experienced online shopping? Definitely not. Online shopping is coming into fashion in most Online shopping is coming into fashion in m
10、ost of cities due to the rapid development of of cities due to the rapid development of internet technology.internet technology.文章开头要注意文章开头要注意文章开头要注意文章开头要注意 with the development of the internetwith the development of the internetDefinitely ad.Definitely ad.毫无疑问的毫无疑问的毫无疑问的毫无疑问的 of course notof course
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12、 consumer, it can save some time for people who consumer, it can save some time for people who dont have much spare time. Just click the mouse, dont have much spare time. Just click the mouse, they can get whatever they want while staying at they can get whatever they want while staying at home. For
13、 the retailershome. For the retailers（零售商）（零售商）（零售商）（零售商）, it can cut some , it can cut some costs for those who dont have much circulating costs for those who dont have much circulating fundsfunds（流动资金）（流动资金）（流动资金）（流动资金）. . 句子主语可以变换句子主语可以变换句子主语可以变换句子主语可以变换PerspectivePerspective 看法看法看法看法, ,观点观点观点观点(
14、+on) view/think(+on) view/thinkPar.2Par.2They dont have to rent a house and spend They dont have to rent a house and spend money on employees compared with the money on employees compared with the traditional trade mode. However, there are traditional trade mode. However, there are still some defect
15、sstill some defects（缺点（缺点（缺点（缺点, ,缺陷缺陷缺陷缺陷, ,不足之处不足之处不足之处不足之处 ） in in online shopping. First, face to face deal online shopping. First, face to face deal makes online shopping less reliable and makes online shopping less reliable and trustworthytrustworthy（可信的）（可信的）（可信的）（可信的）. Second, people will .
16、Second, people will lose the fun of bargain.lose the fun of bargain.观点陈述清晰Par.2Par.2It is undeniable that shopping on the internet It is undeniable that shopping on the internet has become an irresistiblehas become an irresistible（不可抵抗的）（不可抵抗的）（不可抵抗的）（不可抵抗的） trend in trend in modern society. Its of
17、great urgency that we need modern society. Its of great urgency that we need to regulate the relative laws in accordance with to regulate the relative laws in accordance with the rapid growth of online shopping. Only in this the rapid growth of online shopping. Only in this way can we enjoy the plea
18、sure and convenience of way can we enjoy the pleasure and convenience of online shopping without the concern of being online shopping without the concern of being treated.treated.accordance withaccordance with与与一致一致, ,和谐和谐; ;符合符合 Par.3Par.31 1先想好中文意思，再把它翻译成英文，这样的思路对吗？先想好中文意思，再把它翻译成英文，这样的思路对吗？先想好中文意思
19、，再把它翻译成英文，这样的思路对吗？先想好中文意思，再把它翻译成英文，这样的思路对吗？要想少些一点中式英文，就要多积累习惯句型和固定搭配，在要想少些一点中式英文，就要多积累习惯句型和固定搭配，在“ “翻译翻译” ”时尽可能多用些固定的句型，少一些逐字对译。时尽可能多用些固定的句型，少一些逐字对译。2 2常常想不起想用的一个词的英语说法，如何解决？常常想不起想用的一个词的英语说法，如何解决？常常想不起想用的一个词的英语说法，如何解决？常常想不起想用的一个词的英语说法，如何解决？第一，模糊化即用上义词表达。第一，模糊化即用上义词表达。第二，可以解释说明。第二，可以解释说明。第三，可以把一些解释不清
20、的东西略去不写。第三，可以把一些解释不清的东西略去不写。3 3文章中长句越多越好，复合句越多越好吗？文章中长句越多越好，复合句越多越好吗？文章中长句越多越好，复合句越多越好吗？文章中长句越多越好，复合句越多越好吗？在所有写作考试中都有一条不成文的规定：没有复杂句不能得在所有写作考试中都有一条不成文的规定：没有复杂句不能得高分。但是全是复杂句，文章读起来会很累很烦很不自高分。但是全是复杂句，文章读起来会很累很烦很不自然。因此考试作文的句子要长短结合，简短句复杂句适宜。然。因此考试作文的句子要长短结合，简短句复杂句适宜。Writing Q&AWriting Q&A变句型句型 替替换词 在清晰表达的
21、基在清晰表达的基础上上 增加增加语言亮点言亮点4 4不知从何处着手复习写作，怎么办？不知从何处着手复习写作，怎么办？不知从何处着手复习写作，怎么办？不知从何处着手复习写作，怎么办？作文的思维：作文的思维：1 1、审题；、审题；2 2、思考简单的分支观点；、思考简单的分支观点；考虑可以采用的成熟的句型或考虑可以采用的成熟的句型或“ “万能句万能句” ”。 只有多写才能活化思想，固定句型和找到适合自己的只有多写才能活化思想，固定句型和找到适合自己的“ “万能句万能句” ”。5 5背历年范文有用吗？背历年范文有用吗？背历年范文有用吗？背历年范文有用吗？建议是考生自己把近三年的范文看看，主要看结构，然
22、后自己建议是考生自己把近三年的范文看看，主要看结构，然后自己写写，让同学或老师修改，再写一遍。写写，让同学或老师修改，再写一遍。6 6想练习写作，怎么进行自我检查呢？想练习写作，怎么进行自我检查呢？想练习写作，怎么进行自我检查呢？想练习写作，怎么进行自我检查呢？英文应试的错误分为：英文应试的错误分为：1 1、结构错误；、结构错误；2 2、语言错误。简单无误、语言错误。简单无误是第一原则。是第一原则。英英语四四级考考试作文作文实用替用替换词for my part ,from for my part ,from for my part ,from for my part ,from my own
23、perspectivemy own perspectivemy own perspectivemy own perspective替替换换in my opinionin my opinionin my opinionin my opinionExceedingly , Exceedingly , Exceedingly , Exceedingly , extremely, intenselyextremely, intenselyextremely, intenselyextremely, intenselyveryveryveryverygive rise to, lead to, give
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