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1、透视五年上海高考英语透视五年上海高考英语作文试题作文试题（）（）高考作文的评分标准高考作文的评分标准（内容分，语言分，组织结构分，（内容分，语言分，组织结构分，共计分）共计分）1.内容要求：内容要求：A档分重点明确，内容充实档分重点明确，内容充实B档档 分分重点明确，内容较充实重点明确，内容较充实C档档 分分重点明确，但内容单薄重点明确，但内容单薄D档档 分分重点不明确，内容松散重点不明确，内容松散E 档档 分分严重离题严重离题高考作文的评分标准高考作文的评分标准语言要求：语言要求：）语言表达正确，文字流畅（分）语言表达正确，文字流畅（分）语法，措词等错误，每处扣分，同一）语法，措词等错误，每
2、处扣分，同一错误不重复扣分错误不重复扣分）单词拼写，标点，大小写等错误，每处）单词拼写，标点，大小写等错误，每处扣分，同一错误不重复扣分扣分，同一错误不重复扣分）每句扣分不超过分）每句扣分不超过分）语言分最多扣分）语言分最多扣分高考作文的评分标准高考作文的评分标准组织结构要求：组织结构要求：凡内容和语言两部分得分超过分，词数超凡内容和语言两部分得分超过分，词数超过个，并符合下列条件者可加分过个，并符合下列条件者可加分）凡全文的措词，句子结构，上下文连贯性）凡全文的措词，句子结构，上下文连贯性等方面比较出色者，可酌情加分等方面比较出色者，可酌情加分）凡内容充实，语言正确，用词贴切的优秀）凡内容充
3、实，语言正确，用词贴切的优秀作文，可加分作文，可加分词数要求：不足个酌情扣分，少词数要求：不足个酌情扣分，少于个，总分得分最多不超过分于个，总分得分最多不超过分记叙文的写作记叙文的写作Write an English composition about 100 to 120 words, according to the situation given in Chinese.1.我最难忘的一课2.具体说明为何难忘3.感想（年上海高考题）In my school life, I have attended many classes. But the most unforgettable less
4、on I have ever had is an English lesson when I was at Grade Two. It is the teachers way of teaching that I always remember. On the day, we took out our English books and waited for our English as usual. But to our surprise, she entered the classroom without the English book, but a radio and some pap
5、er instead. She gave out the paper and told us that we would learn an English song and she asked us fill in the blanks in the paper while we listened to the song. How wonderful! It was the first time that we had had such a text. We were very excited and listened to the song very carefully. What surp
6、rised us most was that we could memorize the words more quickly than ever before. I like the lesson. This new method of teaching makes it easy for us to learn English words. It can also develop our interest in English. I will never forget my lesson. SIMILAR TOPICS1.An unforgettable test2.An unforget
7、table person3.A happy journey4.Great changes on the campus/ in Shanghai/ in my neighbourhood5.A class meeting before graduation6.My favourite TV programs7.Growing pains 提示作文的写作提示作文的写作根据提示用英语写出一段词的短文1.一些学生认为学英语很重要2.一些学生认为不必学英语3.我认为（观点，理由）（年上海高考题）Peoples views on learning English vary from person to p
8、erson. Some think in todays world we need to make frequent contacts with different people in different parts of the world, so it is absolutely necessary to learn English. Others consider English useless. They feel learning English is nothing but a burden. But I regard English as one of the most impo
9、rtant subjects. Of all the subjects I like English best. There are several reasons why I like English best. Firstly, English is one of the most widely used languages in the world. Nearly all information on the Internet and over half of the worlds technical materials are in English. Therefore, a good
10、 command of English will greatly benefit me in my work. Secondly, as the world becomes more and more globalized, we need to learn modern technology in order to catch up with developed countries. A solid foundation of English means chances and opportunities. In the competition for a well-paid job, th
11、e one who can speak fluent English has an advantage over those who cannot. For all these reasons we should not only learn English but master it in the shortest time possible. SIMILAR TOPICS1.Studying abroad2.Necessity for examinations3.My view on mixed-ability teaching4.Should a student own a mobile
12、 phone? 5.Students doing part-time jobs? 6.The advantages and disadvantages of private tutoring7.My view on school uniforms8.Students doing cosmetic surgery?9.My view on raising pets10.How to spend a weekend?11.The Teacher-student relationship12.Should private cars be encouraged in China? 看图作文的写作看图作
13、文的写作Write an English composition in over 120 words on the picture and instructions given (2002上海高考题）Due to the one-child policy in China, most families have only one child and therefore this child is regarded as the treasure of the whole family. Both the parents and grandparents usually over-indulge
14、 the child. We can see in the picture, when a child is learning to ride bicycle, the parents and grandparents are sweating from running alongside the bike and are trying their best to protest the child; for fear that she should fall and hurt herself. We all know the greatest glory consists not in ne
15、ver falling, but in rising every time we fall. So I think, for the parents, they should be aware of the negative effect too much pampering has on their child. Under the parents protection, the children know only comfort and ease. If they dont learn how to live independently, how can they cope with t
16、he adversities which they will meet with in the future? For the children, they should let their parents know that they have confidence in themselves and are able to exist in the competitive community without the constant watchful eye of an eager parent. The path to success is filled with various kin
17、ds of difficulties and obstacles. Only when we have learned to stand on our own two feet, can we survive in the 21st century. SIMILAR TOPICS1.A video game trap2.How to spend holidays3.Traffic rules are the friends of our lives材料的来源：报纸，杂志材料的来源：报纸，杂志,漫画书上的漫画书上的comics图表作文的写作根据所给图表，简要描述某城市试题近年每百人受机用户的增长
18、情况，并试分析其增长的原因（年上海春考）The chart above indicates that the number of mobile phones has increased in the city in recent years. Between 1995 and 1999 the number of mobile phone users increased by 10 percent each year. In 2001, the number almost doubled. It is predicated that the number will skyrocket in t
19、he years to come. The reason for the increase can be various. First a mobile phone is convenient for people especially business people. Because of its small size, light weight and portability, you neednt go to a phone booth to make a telephone call. One user says, “With a mobile phone, I can make a
20、phone call to do business without worrying about time and space. This saves me time and trouble. Besides, mobile phones are finding their way into ordinary families. Mobile phone lovers talk with their friends, family members whenever they like. Of course, there are some other people buying mobile p
21、hones merely to follow the fashion or show their position in society. Whatever reason it may be, I think the increase will continue into the future because they can make our life convenient and the world smaller. SIMILAR TOPICS1.请你谈谈轿车大量进入家庭后，对家庭，环请你谈谈轿车大量进入家庭后，对家庭，环境，经济可能产生的影响（年高境，经济可能产生的影响（年高考试题）考
22、试题）大学入学人数三年递增说明的问题及你的大学入学人数三年递增说明的问题及你的感想感想长假期间人们不同的休闲方式及你的分析长假期间人们不同的休闲方式及你的分析或建议或建议 书信类作文的写作书信类作文的写作你的好友因为家境一般买不起名牌而闷闷不乐.给他写份信,谈谈你的看法和建议.收信人:徐海青寄信人:黄平写信日期: 2003年6月8日（年高考试题）June 8,2003Dear Xu Haiqing,You said in your letter that many of your classmates were wearing fashionable clothes, but you coul
23、dnt afford to buy the best brands. So you felt very depressed. There are different views on peoples wear. The following are my ideas about it. firstly, you shouldnt put too much emphasis on physical appearance. You must always remember the most important task for you today is to concentrate your att
24、ention on your studies. No matter what you wear, you will really look your best when you come out first in your examinations. A famous saying goes, “Frugality is the mother of virtue.” So, secondly, you must understand that it is a fine virtue to learn to live in frugality. Since your family is not
25、able to provide you wit enough money to buy clothes of the best brands, it is all the more necessary for you to try every means to lighten the financial burden of your family. You will find the virtue of frugality will benefit you a lot in your later life. I hope you understand what I mean. I am sur
26、e you will take positive attitudes towards life and will be happy again when you read my letter. Best regards. YoursHuang Ping SIMILAR TOPICS1.A letter of application2.A letter of suggestion3.A letter of complaint4.A letter of congratulation5.A letter of invitationBOOKS FOR REFERENCEw1. 上海社科院出版社：上海社科院出版社：高考英语作文高考英语作文直通车直通车w上海交通大学出版社：上海交通大学出版社：高考英高考英语写作篇语写作篇
