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1、HOW TO WRITE STEP BY STEP?Why writing is so difficult for you?Reason 1. dont know what to write. 写什么Reason 2. dont know how to write it . 怎么写书面表达：假设你是李华，你校拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。请你给目前在本市就读的你的笔友Linda写一封电子邮件，邀请她一起参加。内容包括：1.介绍比赛的相关内容；2.说明你打算参加的原因；3.询问对方的意向。（注意：词数100左右。）Step 1 发散思散思维，扩充内容充内容 （enrich content
2、s）1.介介绍比比赛的相关内容的相关内容我校我校拟定于下周五定于下周五举行一次英行一次英语幽默故事大幽默故事大赛。我校，茂名市第我校，茂名市第17中学，中学，拟定于下周五定于下周五举行一次英行一次英语幽默故事大幽默故事大赛。我校，全市最漂亮最好的学校，我校，全市最漂亮最好的学校，拟定于下周五定于下周五举行一次英行一次英语幽默故事大幽默故事大赛。为了提高我了提高我们学学习英英语的的兴趣，我校，全市最漂亮最好的学趣，我校，全市最漂亮最好的学校，校，拟定于下周五定于下周五举行一次英行一次英语幽默故事大幽默故事大赛。很高很高兴告告诉你，你，为了提高我了提高我们学学习英英语的的兴趣，我校，全市最漂亮趣，
3、我校，全市最漂亮最好的学校，最好的学校，拟定于下周五定于下周五举行一次英行一次英语幽默故事大幽默故事大赛。2 说明你打算参加的原因明你打算参加的原因原原因因1.喜欢学习英语喜欢学习英语2. 想提高口语能力想提高口语能力3.希望结交有共同希望结交有共同兴趣爱好的朋友兴趣爱好的朋友对西方国家的文化西方国家的文化感感兴趣。趣。口口语在在语言学言学习中中扮演重要角色。扮演重要角色。共同学共同学习，共同，共同进步。步。3. 询问对方的意方的意见你是否有意愿参加？若有，我将你是否有意愿参加？若有，我将给你提供你提供更多的更多的细节信息。期待你的回复。信息。期待你的回复。我知道你很幽默，并且擅我知道你很幽默
4、，并且擅长讲故事，所故事，所以想了解你你是否有意愿参加？若有，以想了解你你是否有意愿参加？若有，我将我将给你提供更多的你提供更多的细节信息。期待你信息。期待你的回复。的回复。Step 2 翻翻译句子，有所舍弃句子，有所舍弃(translate)很高很高兴告告诉你，你，为了提高我了提高我们学学习英英语的的兴趣，我校，全市最漂亮最好的趣，我校，全市最漂亮最好的学校，学校，拟定于下周五定于下周五举行一次英行一次英语幽默故事大幽默故事大赛。表达表达1 同位同位语 I am delighted to tell you that in order to increase our interest of l
5、earning English, my school, the best and the most beautiful in the city, plans to hold an English humorous story competition next Friday.同位同位语表达表达2 定定语从句从句I am delighted to tell you that in order to increase our interest of learning English, my school, which is the best and the most beautiful in the
6、 city, plans to hold an English humorous story competition next Friday.定定语从句从句表达表达3 被被动语态I am delighted to tell you that in order to increase our interest of learning English, an English humorous story competition will be held next Friday in my school, which is the best and the most beautiful school
7、 in the city.一般将来一般将来时的被的被动语态Reason 1：我想参加我想参加这个比个比赛是因是因为我喜我喜欢英英语，对西方文化感西方文化感兴趣。趣。表达表达1：直接翻：直接翻译 I want to take part in the competition because I like English ,I am interested in western culture.表达表达2：定：定/宾语从句从句 The reason why the competition attracts my attention is that I like English and am inter
8、ested in western culture.表达表达3：升：升级词汇The reason why the competition attracts my attention is that I am fond of English and crazy about western culture.直直译定、定、宾语从句从句升升级词汇Reason 2：想提高口想提高口语能力，因能力，因为口口语在在语言学言学习中扮演重要角色。中扮演重要角色。表达表达1：直：直译The second reason is that I want to improve my oral (spoken) Englis
9、h, because it plays an important role in language learning.表达表达2：定：定语从句从句 As we all know, oral (spoken) English plays an important role in language learning, so I want to improve my oral (spoken) English .表达表达3：升：升级表达，表达，As we all know, oral (spoken) English plays an important role in language learn
10、ing, so I long to improve my oral (spoken) English by making use of this competition.直直译定定语从句从句升升级表达表达Reason 3：希望希望结交有共同交有共同兴趣趣爱好的朋友，共同学好的朋友，共同学习，共同，共同进步。步。表达表达1 直直译I wish to make friends based on common interest and want to learn together , progress together.表达表达2定定语从句从句I wish to make friends with
11、those who has common interest with me and then learn together , progress together.表达表达3升升级表达表达 I wish to make friends with those whose has common interest with me so that we can learn together and progress at the same time.升升级表达表达定定语从句从句直直译询问对方意方意见：我知道你很幽默，并且擅：我知道你很幽默，并且擅长讲故事，所以想了解故事，所以想了解你你是否有意愿参加？
12、若有，我将你你是否有意愿参加？若有，我将给你提供更多的你提供更多的细节信息。期信息。期待你的回复。待你的回复。表达表达1. I know you are humorous and good at telling stories so I want to know whether you are interested in the competition or not. If your answer is yes, I will offer you more detailed information. I am looking forward for your reply. 表达表达2. You
13、r humor sense and talent of telling stories impressed me so deeply that I strongly recommend you to take part in the competition. If your answer is positive, more detailed information will be offered. I am looking forward for your reply. 直直译升升级表达表达Step 3 连句成篇句成篇I am delighted to tell you that in ord
14、er to increase our interest of learning English, an English humorous story competition will be held next Friday in my school, which is the best and the most beautiful in the city.The reason why the competition attracts my attention is that I am fond of English and crazy about western culture.As we a
15、ll know, oral (spoken) English plays an important role in language learning, so I long to improve my oral (spoken) English by making use of this competition.I wish to make friends with those whose has common interest with me so that we can learn together and progress at the same time.Your humor sens
16、e and talent of telling stories impressed me so deeply that I strongly recommend you to take part in the competition. If your answer is positive, more detailed information will be offered. I am looking forward to your reply. Step 4 加入加入连词，使篇章，使篇章连贯Dear Linda, I am delighted to tell you that in order
17、 to increase our interest of learning English, an English humorous story competition will be held next Friday in my school, which is the best and the most beautiful in the city.The reason why the competition attracts my attention is that I am fond of English and crazy about western culture.Whats mor
18、e (in addition/on the one hand), as we all know, oral (spoken) English plays an important role in language learning, so I long to improve my oral (spoken) English by making use of this competition. Last but not least (on the other hand), I wish to make friends with those whose has common interest wi
19、th me so that we can learn together and progress at the same time.Your humor sense and talent of telling stories impressed me so deeply that I strongly recommend you to take part in the competition. If your answer is positive, more detailed information will be offered. I am looking forward to your reply. Sincerely yoursLi HuaHomework模仿写作：假设你是张磊，你校拟定于下周六举行一次志愿者活动，去敬老院（gerocomium）看望老人。请你给目前在本市就读的你的笔友Linda写一封电子邮件，邀请她一起参加。内容包括：1.介绍活动的相关内容；2.说明你打算参加的原因；3.询问对方的意向。（注意：词数100左右。）
