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1、Legend of butterfly lovers 梁祝梁祝123Sometimes love is Sometimes love is hiddenhidden behind behind actions, which may be actions, which may be unseenunseen to to our eyes our eyes without special without special attentionattention. . What have you learned from the video?What have you learned from the
2、video?Selfless love 45678第二节：读后续写（满分第二节：读后续写（满分25分）分） 阅读下面阅读下面350字短文，根据所给字短文，根据所给情节情节进进行续写，使之构成一个行续写，使之构成一个完整完整的故事。的故事。注意：注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为所续写短文的词数应为180左右；左右；2.应使用应使用5个以上个以上短文中标有短文中标有下划线的关键词下划线的关键词语语；3.续写完成后，请用续写完成后，请用下划线标出下划线标出你所使用的你所使用的关键词语。关键词语。4.续写部分分为两段，每段的续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语开头语已为你已为你写好；写好；若词数少于若词数少于
3、130，从总分中，从总分中扣去扣去2分。分。9 Brief Brief informationinformationWho: What:a couple of lovers, God, the woman doctor _ couple of lovers led an _ (envy)life in a town. _ (fortunate), the man had an accident and was severely _(injure). The woman _ (attend) himday and night. _ her lover was still sleeping, _
4、(hope), she made a deal _God: to be a butterfly for three years in exchange for the mans _ (recover), _ was a hard choice but easy to make to a willing heart.AenviableUnfortunatelyinjuredattended toButhopelesslywithrecoverywhich10SummarySummaryThe plot （情节）（情节） of the storyDevelopmentEndingBeginning
5、Climax(高潮高潮)A. The man was badly injured and showed no signs of recovery.B. The woman dealt with God to save her lover but another girl appeared between them.C. The man and the woman had an enviable love.ACB11Endings of our students 12Endings of our students 13Endings of our students 14 logic（逻辑）（逻辑
6、）15白猫掉到河里，黑猫奋尽全力救它上岸，上岸后，白猫对黑猫说了什么？Continue the story You should find the clues in the story.16 logicthe titlethe given storythe underlined wordsthe two given sentencesThey are the clues to help you create your writing logically.17 underlined wordsenjoying the sunrise the sunset consciousnessthe chu
7、rch God tearslove regret becamethe butterfly fly sweetheart-stricken underlined words（选（选5个以上）个以上）who (人物）：人物）：God the butterfly where（地点）：（地点）：the church what（事件）：（事件）：enjoying the sunrise the sunset consciousness tears lovebutterfly sweet heart-stricken clues（线索线索） “I can help youfor three years”“
8、Yes, I do! i wont regret doing that!”God also felt sad “Do you regret for what you have done?”18 logicthe titlethe given storythe underlined wordsthe two given sentences19Paragraph1: The butterfly knew that all these should have belonged to her, but now they belonged to another woman. She could do n
9、othing but rest on the mans shoulder off and on. _Single is simple,double is trouble, triangle is terrible.利用已给信息将情节推向高潮利用已给信息将情节推向高潮How to deal with the woman doctor?When to get married ?20Paragraph2: God also felt sad and sighed to the butterfly, “Do you regret for what you have done?” _利用已给信息得出一个
10、完美结局利用已给信息得出一个完美结局21 Creation CreationThe possible versions of the endingThe possible versions of the endinge.b. The man and the doctor married, and the woman remained to be a butterfly.a.The man and the doctor married, and the woman left.c. The man proposed to the doctor, but God uncovered the trut
11、h to the man and gave the separated lovers a happy reunion.d. The man proposed to the doctor, but God uncovered the truth to the man which involved him in a dilemma. Finally, the man left. positive22the two given sentencesthe underlined wordsThe two lead you,help you,and control you to go in the rig
12、ht direction.23Reading for briefReading for brief informationinformationReading for summaryReading for summaryReading for creationReading for creationReading for writing Reading for writing 24There was once a placid 平静的；温和的；沉着的and beautiful town in which there were a couple of lovers who would often
13、 stay together on the top of the mountain enjoying the sunrise and by the sea appreciating the sunset. Everyone who knew them could not help envying them and praying for their happy love.2526Group A(paragraph 1)1. 目睹；见证目睹；见证 (vt) 2. 他说过的最甜蜜的话他说过的最甜蜜的话（提示词（提示词sweetsweet）3. 蝴蝶难过得情不自禁地哭了。蝴蝶难过得情不自禁地哭了。(
14、tears)4. 变深；使加深变深；使加深(v) 5. 第三年的最后一天第三年的最后一天 6. 他们的爱已成为回忆。他们的爱已成为回忆。Group B(paragraph 2)Group B(paragraph 2)1.被打动的；受感动的被打动的；受感动的 (adj.)2. 揭露真相揭露真相 3.对于我为他所做的事我从来没有后悔过。对于我为他所做的事我从来没有后悔过。（提示词（提示词regret, regret, 用倒装句式）用倒装句式）4. 唤醒唤醒 ( (vt.)5. 遭受许多挫折遭受许多挫折 6. 男人震惊了，男人震惊了， 越发觉得后悔和内疚越发觉得后悔和内疚 （提示词（提示词the f
15、eeling of regrets/guiltthe feeling of regrets/guilt） 1. 2. 271. 目睹；见证目睹；见证 vt. _2. 他说过的最甜蜜的话他说过的最甜蜜的话 （提示词（提示词sweetsweet）_3. 蝴蝶难过得情不自禁地哭了。蝴蝶难过得情不自禁地哭了。 （提示词（提示词tearstears）_see/witnessThe sweetest words he has ever saidThe butterfly couldnt help bursting into tears sadly./The butterfly could no longe
16、r hold back the tears.285. 在第三年的最后一天在第三年的最后一天 _On the last day of the third year4. 变深；使加深变深；使加深 vt./vi. _deepen6. 他们的爱已成为回忆。他们的爱已成为回忆。_Their love has become memories./Their love has become a past.29Paragraphy1: The butterfly knew that all these should have belonged to her, but now they belonged to a
17、nother woman. She could do nothing but rest on the mans shoulder off and on. _ It was heartbroken to see their love deepen day by day. Time went by quickly. On the last day of the third year when the deal between God and the butterfly was almost over, the man proposed to his girlfriend. He took out
18、a beautiful ring and swore the sweetest words he has ever said. Hearing this, the butterfly couldnt breathe. Her darken eyes were full of tears. she flew away silently. At that moment, she realized that he wouldnt know her sacrifices and their love has become a past.302. 揭露真相揭露真相 _1. 被打动的；受感动的被打动的；受
19、感动的 adj. be_ bytoucheduncover the truth/expose/reveal /moved/impressed3. 对于我为他所做的事我从来没有后悔过。对于我为他所做的事我从来没有后悔过。（提示词（提示词regret, regret, 用倒装句式）用倒装句式）_Never have I regretted for what I have done for him.314. 唤醒唤醒 vt. _awaken/ arouse5. 遭受许多挫折遭受许多挫折 _go through many obstacles suffer many struggles 6. 男人震惊了
20、，男人震惊了， 越发觉得后悔和内疚越发觉得后悔和内疚 （提示词（提示词the feeling of regrets/guiltthe feeling of regrets/guilt）_The man got shocked, and the feeling of regrets and guilt grew stronger.setbacksfrustrations32Paragraphy2: God also felt sad and sighed to the butterfly, “Do you regret for what you have done?” _ The butterf
21、ly said, “No. Never have I regretted for what I have done for him.” moved by her words, God was lost in thought: she had gone through so many struggles and she shouldnt deserve that. So, the day before the man and the doctors wedding, God uncovered the whole truth to him. Obviously, the man was shoc
22、ked and the feeling of regrets and guilt grew stronger. The love deep inside was awakened. He rushed to the church to beg for the womans forgiveness. And he determined that this time he wont let her go. He will take her to enjoy the sunrise and the sunset for a lifetime. 33Reading for writing Readin
23、g for writing 34Paragraphy1: The butterfly knew that all these should have belonged to her, but now they belonged to another woman. She could do nothing but rest on the mans shoulder off and on. _ It was heartbroken to see their love deepen day by day. Time went by quickly. On the last day of the th
24、ird year when the deal between God and the butterfly was almost over, the man proposed to his girlfriend. He took out a beautiful ring and swore the sweetest words he has ever said. Hearing this, the butterfly couldnt breathe. Her darken eyes were full of tears. she flew away silently in great grief
25、 and despair. At that moment, she realized that he wouldnt know her sacrifices and their love has become a past.35How to polish your words?“小小”心思心思丰满人物内心丰满人物内心 Inner thoughts to portray the figures36Tip1：“小小”心思心思丰满人物内心丰满人物内心悲伤悲伤快乐快乐2016年年10月高考作文月高考作文 23分分37Tip1：“小小”心思心思丰满人物内心丰满人物内心震惊震惊2017年年6月高考作文月高
26、考作文 23分分38How to describe your inner thoughts?1. Feeling happy/sad/angry/guilty/depressed,2. Driven by curiosity/a sense of sympathy(同情)或者是 Deeply touched/ moved by3. .，full of regret/anger/fear/gratitude（感激）4. 具体的动作描写 stand frozen, jump with joy, tremble with anger, with tears filling ones eyes, wi
27、th ones eyes wide open 等等39Lets have a try!1. God said to the woman, “Do you regret for what you have done?” Driven by a sense of sympathy(同情), God said to the woman, “Do you regret for what you have done?” 2. She said to God, “Thank you ,God.”With tears filling her eyes, She said to God cheerfully,
28、 “Thank you ,God.”40 * inner thoughts * . * .1 * theme：negative/positive * interpretation（解意）（解意）n * key words（关键词）（关键词）two given sentences * clues （线索）（线索）Reading for writing Reading for writing 41Choose one of the following theme to write two paragraphsfor the story based on the given underlined words. a. The man and the doctor married, and the woman left.b. The man and the doctor married, and the woman remained to be a butterfly.c.The man proposed to the doctor, but God uncovered the truth to the man which involved him in a dilemma. Finally, the man left.4243
