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1、HowtoWriteaDo You Know?ParagraphMainideaDetailwhatthestoryorparagraphismostlyaboutsentencesthatsupportthemainideaagroupofsentencesthatincludesamainideaanddetailsIntroductionSentenceMainIdeaDetailsClosingSentenceTopBunIntroductorySentenceThe introductory sentence introduces the reader to the topic of
2、 your paragraph. Try to make it exciting!Onwarmsummerdays,Ilovetryingtocatchbutterflies.Ihavesomuchfunrunningaroundinmybackyardchasingaftertheprettybutterfliesthatgozoomingby!IfIamluckyenoughtocatchone,Ineverkeepitforverylong.Afterall,butterfliesbelongintheirnaturalhabitat.Isurelycantwaituntilnextsu
3、mmersothatIcangrabmynetandcatchsomebutterflies! Be sure to add at least three reasons, examples, or main points that support the introductory/topic sentence.These reasons, examples, or points are the lettuce, tomato, cheese, and meat of the paragraph.MAIN POINTS, REASONS, OR EXAMPLESBesuretoA good p
4、aragraph includes details that DESCRIBE or TELL ABOUT the main points or reasons.Detailsshouldbe“delicious”orinteresting.Whenyouwriteahamburgerparagraph,compareyourdetailstoalloftheyummypartsofahamburgersuchas:*Lettuce*Tomato*Cheese*Meat(Elaboration)Again, your elaboration should describe or tell ab
5、out your main points. They should stick to the topic.Whichdetaildoesntquitebelong?Ireallylovemybrother!HisnameisJeffandheissuperfunny.Oneofmyfavoritethingstodowithmybrotherisplayvideogames.Healwaysbeatsme!Sometimesmysistercriesatnight.Maybemybrotherwillplayavideogamewithmetonight! How would a hambur
6、ger taste if it had ketchup, mustard, mayonnaise, pickles, lettuce, tomatoes, barbecue sauce, Swiss cheese, spicy cheese, and olives on top? Too much, right?Awritercanaddtoomuchdetailtoaparagraphaswell.Paragraphsshouldbeabout5-8sentenceslong.Ifyourparagraphispagesandpageslong,youwilleventuallyloseth
7、einterestofyourreader.Myfavoriteschoollunchischickennuggetswithmashedpotatoes.OnereasonwhyIlovethislunchsomuchisthatittastessogreat!Ialsolovebeingabletosmelltheyummynuggetshoursbeforeitsevenlunchtime.Thecreamymashedpotatoesandgravyjustslidedownmythroat.IcantWAITuntilthenextchickennuggetday!Sofarweha
8、velearnedthatahamburgerparagraphneedsatopbunorINTRODUCTORYsentence.Theintroductionshouldintroducethereadertoyourtopic.Wealsolearnedthatgoodparagraphscontainthreetosixsupportingsentencesthattellmoreabouttheintroductorysentence.Thesemainpoints,examples,ordetailscanbecomparedtotheingredientsofahamburge
9、r,suchasthelettuce,tomato,cheese,andhamburgerpatty.Butwhatsmissing?Hmm BottomBunConcludingSentenceThebottombunofahamburgerhelpsholdalloftheingredientstogether.Itworkswiththetopbuntokeepthemeat,cheese,tomato,andlettucefromfallingonthefloor!Theconcludingsentenceofaparagraphhelpsholdallofthesentencesto
10、gether!Itworkswiththeintroductorysentencetokeepthedetailsfromfallingapart.Theconcludingsentenceshouldbeinterestingandletyourreaderknowthatyouarefinishedwriting.Itwrapseverythingup! Myhometownisfamousforseveralamazingnaturalfeatures.First,itisnotedfortheWheatonRiver,whichisverywideandbeautiful.Also,o
11、ntheothersideofthetownisWheatonHill,whichisunusualbecauseitisverysteep.ThethirdamazingfeatureistheBigOldTree.Thistreestandstwohundredfeettallandisprobablyaboutsixhundredyearsold.Thesethreelandmarksaretrulyamazingandmakemyhometownafamousplace.Myhometownisfamousforseveralamazingnaturalfeatures.First,i
12、tisnotedfortheWheatonRiver,whichisverywideandbeautiful.Oneithersideofthisriver,Oneithersideofthisriver,whichis175feetwide,aremanywillowtreeswhichwhichis175feetwide,aremanywillowtreeswhichhavelongbranchesthatcanmovegracefullyinthehavelongbranchesthatcanmovegracefullyinthewind.Inautumntheleavesofthese
13、treesfallandcoverwind.Inautumntheleavesofthesetreesfallandcovertheriverbankslikegoldensnow.theriverbankslikegoldensnow.Also,ontheothersideofthetownisWheatonHill,whichisunusualbecauseitisverysteep.Eventhoughitissteep,climbingthishillisEventhoughitissteep,climbingthishillisnotdangerous,becausethereare
14、somefirmrocksalongnotdangerous,becausetherearesomefirmrocksalongthesidesthatcanbeusedasstairs.Therearenotreesthesidesthatcanbeusedasstairs.Therearenotreesaroundthishill,soitstandsclearlyagainsttheskyandaroundthishill,soitstandsclearlyagainsttheskyandcanbeseenfrommanymilesaway.canbeseenfrommanymilesa
15、way.ThethirdamazingfeatureistheBigOldTree.Thistreestandstwohundredfeettallandisprobablyaboutsixhundredyearsold.Thesethreelandmarksaretrulyamazingandmakemyhometownafamousplace.1.Peoplecanavoidburglariesbytakingcertain1.Peoplecanavoidburglariesbytakingcertainprecautions.precautions. 2.Thereareseveral2
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17、fyoufollowthesestepssteps. .5.Thereareseveralenjoyable5.ThereareseveralenjoyablewayswaystotravelbetweentheUSandtotravelbetweentheUSandQueretaro.Queretaro.6.Effectiveleadershiprequiresspecific6.Effectiveleadershiprequiresspecificqualitiesqualitiesthatanyonecanthatanyonecandevelop.develop.7.Industrial
18、wastepouredintoPearlRiverhasledtodramatic7.IndustrialwastepouredintoPearlRiverhasledtodramaticchangeschangesinitsabilitytosupportmarinelife.initsabilitytosupportmarinelife.8.InordertofullyexplorethewreckoftheTitanic,scientists8.InordertofullyexplorethewreckoftheTitanic,scientistsmustaddressseveralmustaddressseveralproblemsproblems. .15 以上有不当之处，请大家给与批评指正，以上有不当之处，请大家给与批评指正，谢谢大家！谢谢大家！
