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1、本节课的学习任务本节课的学习任务:写一篇描述人的外貌写一篇描述人的外貌 (look)、性格性格（characters）、）、爱好爱好 （hobbies）的文章的文章short1. What does he look like?tallthin heavy/ fatWhat does she look like?short hairlong hairWhat does she look like?2. Pair-work:A: What does xxx look like?B: He/ She is A: What is his / her character?B: He / She isA:
2、 What does he/ she like?B: He/ She likes 描述外貌的单词：描述外貌的单词： short , tall, thin ，of medium height ，strong, good-looking, nice, slim 苗条苗条 描述穿着的短语：描述穿着的短语：wear a T-shirt, wear a pair of glasses描述性格的单词：描述性格的单词：lazy, quiet, serious, wild,friendly, shy, calm, polite 有礼貌的，有礼貌的，strict 严厉的严厉的, out-going 外向的外向的
3、 , 描述爱好的短语：描述爱好的短语：like reading, like to help others, like eating, like playing basketball3. Word collection: 4. Write something about this boy. (3-5句话句话) 提示词：提示词：tall，thin，black hair;wear shorts and a T-shirt;polite(有礼貌的有礼貌的)，happyName Ma XiaotiaoAge15Looktall，thin，black hair, wear shorts and a T-s
4、hirtFavorite food hamburgers，ice cream Favorite classesEnglish, art, PE Things he likeslittle animals Things he likes to doplay with his good friends, help others Character (性格性格)friendly, polite (有礼貌的有礼貌的)5. Writing task: 根据表格所提供的信息写一篇短文，描根据表格所提供的信息写一篇短文，描述你的笔友马小跳，述你的笔友马小跳，80个左右的单词个左右的单词, 开头已经给出。开头
5、已经给出。开头：开头：Ma Xiaotiao is my pen pal. He 6. 写作步骤写作步骤1)审题审题2)列纲列纲3)连句连句4)修饰句子修饰句子 组织文章组织文章5)检查纠错检查纠错（定体裁、人称、格式、时态）（定体裁、人称、格式、时态）（用单词、短语列出内容要点）（用单词、短语列出内容要点）（用单词、短语列出内容要点）（用单词、短语列出内容要点）（加上主谓宾，把短语连成完整的句子）（加上主谓宾，把短语连成完整的句子）（加上主谓宾，把短语连成完整的句子）（加上主谓宾，把短语连成完整的句子）（适当运用承上启下的过渡（适当运用承上启下的过渡词词,使文章更完整更精炼）使文章更完整更精
6、炼）（字数、内容要点、主谓一（字数、内容要点、主谓一致、习惯用法、单词拼写、致、习惯用法、单词拼写、大小写及标点符号）大小写及标点符号）Name Ma XiaotiaoAge15Looktall，thin，short hair, wear shorts and a T-shirtFavorite food hamburgers，ice cream Favorite classesEnglish, math, PE Things he likescollect stamps Things he likes to doplay with his good friends, do housework
7、 Character (性格性格)friendly, polite (有礼貌的有礼貌的)7. Writing task: 根据表格所提供的信息写一篇短文，描根据表格所提供的信息写一篇短文，描述你的笔友马小跳，述你的笔友马小跳，80个左右的单词个左右的单词, 开头已经给出。开头已经给出。开头：开头：Ma Xiaotiao is my pen pal. He8. Lets share some compositions.9.Pair-correction:Exchange your composition with your partner and correct the mistakes wit
8、h your red pen.Name Ma XiaotiaoAge15Looktall,thin，short hair, wear shorts and a T-shirtFavorite food hamburgers，ice cream Favorite classesEnglish, math, PE Things he likescollect stamps Things he likes to doplay with his good friends, do housework Character (性格性格)friendly, polite (有礼貌的有礼貌的)Writing t
9、ask: 根据表格所提供的信息写一篇短文，描述根据表格所提供的信息写一篇短文，描述你的笔友马小跳，你的笔友马小跳，80个左右的单词个左右的单词, 开头已经给出。开头已经给出。开头：开头：Ma Xiaotiao is my pen pal. He 10. 例文例文: Ma Xiaotiao is my pen pal. He is 15 years old. He is tall and thin. He has short hair and he likes wearing shorts and T-shirts. He looks very cute. He likes hamburgers
10、 and ice cream best. His favorite classes are English, math and P.E. He likes collecting stamps. He often plays with his good friends at school and helps others. He also likes doing housework at house. He is very polite and friendly. He is a good boy. I like him very much. 11. Write your compositions again after the corrections. Later, hand in your compositions to me.
