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1、 Taizhou Foreign Language School He Guihuan高三英语书面表达高三英语书面表达How to compose a good composition ?Dear Miss He, How is it going? I havent seen you since graduation. As you know, the idea of becoming a star always _me. C_, I made every _to improve myself, hoping to become a star. However, luck seemed to
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4、一话题，很多人觉得他们的成功很偶然题，很多人觉得他们的成功很偶然, , 是因为运气好是因为运气好假如你是高中生李明，有感于这一社会假如你是高中生李明，有感于这一社会, ,写一篇短文写一篇短文. . 内内容包括容包括: :1 1反映情况；反映情况； 2 2讲述他们成功的原因讲述他们成功的原因( (至少两点）；至少两点）； 3 3谈谈对自己的启示。谈谈对自己的启示。 The structure of the passagePart 1Part 2Part 3体裁：体裁： 时态：时态： 内容内容: 人称人称: Before-writingargumentative composition (议论文）
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21、的单词; 用短语和惯用语代替单词;避免重复)积累并背诵课内外的一些经典固定句型多运用语法现象:强调,定语从句,名词性从句,倒装,虚拟, 非谓语动词, it句型，with结构 Reading makes a full man, conference a ready man, and writing an exact man. 读书读书使人渊博，交使人渊博，交谈谈使人机敏，使人机敏，写作使人写作使人严谨严谨 -培根培根 1. polish your passage.polish your passage. 2. copy your passage on the copy your passage on the blank sheet.blank sheet.See you!
