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1、走向高考走向高考 英语英语第一部分第一部分微专题强化练微专题强化练七书面表达七书面表达第一部分第一部分1提纲式作文提纲式作文考考 向向 分分 析析考考 题题 引引 路路强强 化化 训训 练练231易易 错错 防防 范范4考考 向向 分分 析析年份试题话题命题形式命题趋势2015卷书信约稿提纲式话题:与考生学习、生活密切相连,包括学校生活、生态健康、人物介绍、申请求职、社会热点、人生感悟等等,重在考查考生在实际生活中的英语书面表达能力。体裁:应用文(其中以书信为主)是最典型的考查方式之一。卷电子邮件邀请外教过重阳节提纲式2014卷记叙文十年后的我提纲式2013卷书信请朋友帮忙接机提纲式卷书信请朋
2、友代卖自己做的中国结提纲式考考 题题 引引 路路Writing 1(2015课标全国)假定你是李华,你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿,要点如下:1栏目介绍;2稿件内容;3稿件长度:约400词;4交稿日期:6月28日前。注意:1.词数100左右;2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3开头语已为你写好。Dear,Peter,Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper._Yours,Li Hua立意与点拨:项目内容确定体裁应用文:约稿信确定结
3、构写信目的栏目介绍稿件要求表达期望确定要点写作要点包括:“外国文化”栏目内容介绍;有关稿件事宜:稿件内容、稿件长度、交稿日期。在布局谋篇中,首先要点明写信的目的,然后提出需求,最后表达期望。可以采用下列结构:Id like to ask you to. The “Foreign Cultures” section is.; It carries articles.; To begin with. Besides. In addition. I am looking forward to.确定时态一般现在时为主,兼有将来时确定人称以第一人称和第二人称为主答案:Dear Peter,Id like
4、 to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper.The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.Would you please write something about the culture in your pa
5、rt of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals,and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as its interesting and informative. Around 400 words would be fine. Could we have your artic
6、le before June 28? Im looking forward to hearing from you.Yours,Li HuaWriting 2(2014天津)假设你是晨光中学高二(1)班的班长李津,得知美国学生Chris 作为交换生,下学期将到你班学习。请你根据以下提示,给他写封邮件:(1)表示欢迎;(2)介绍与本地生活相关的信息(如气候、饮食等);(3)介绍本班情况;(4)希望Chris做哪些事情,以增进中美学生间的了解和友谊。注意:(1)请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息;(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;(3)词数不少于100; 开头已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:交
7、换生exchange studentDear Chris,Im Li Jin,monitor of Class One,Grade Eleven._Yours,Li Jin立意与点拨:项目内容“三定”体裁:应用文(电子邮件)时态:一般现在时人称:第一人称确定结构三段成文:表示欢迎介绍本地的生活,介绍本班情况,以及希望Chris做的事情表达自己的期待。第二段是作文的重点内容,需要多用一些笔墨。确定要点自我介绍、表示欢迎(I am.;I am very glad to.;Welcome to.);介绍本地生活情况(Its a great honor for me to tell you., Fir
8、st. Inaddition,.);介绍本班情况(Now Ill introduce our class to you.);希望Chris做一些事情增进友谊(I hope you can do something to.)。答案:Dear Chris,Im Li Jin,monitor of Class One,Grade Eleven.I am glad to hear that you, as an exchange student, will come to our class to study next term. I would like to share some informat
9、ion with you.What I want to tell you first is the climate here. It is pleasant,cool in summer and warm in winter. Whats more, there are a variety of special snacks, which I think will impress you deeply.In addition, the scenery here will also appeal to you.Our class is like a big family, where we he
10、lp each other in study and life. All the classmates are friendly and kind, so you dont need to worry about the difficulty you will have getting along with them. In a word,you are welcome to our school. And I hope you can adapt to the new surroundings soon. You are also expected to tell us the cultur
11、e about your country and help us improve our English.Looking forward to your coming.Yours, Li Jin强强 化化 训训 练练易易 错错 防防 范范未能有效整合信息,忽视上下文连接假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李华。你校将于6月26日接待来自美国某中学的学生访问团。你受学校委托,负责安排其在津的一日活动。请根据以下提示,用英语给该团的领队Smith先生写一封电子邮件,介绍活动计划并简要说明理由,最后征求对方意见。上午与我校学生座谈(话题如校园生活、文化差异等);中午与我校学生共同进餐(午餐包括饺子、面条等);
12、下午与我校学生游览海河。注意:1词数不少于100;2可适当加入细节,以使内容充实、行文连贯;3信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:海河the Haihe RiverDear Mr. Smith,I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union, from Chenguang HighSchool._Yours sincerely,Li Hua错因分析:该写作要求中列举的内容要点多而且散。考生若不能有效整合信息,划分文章结构,并合理地进行发挥和想象,写出的文章就缺乏逻辑性,平铺直叙。因此考生在构思过程中应进行适当发挥。此外,需要用适当的过渡性词语进行
13、衔接。这样才会使文章结构紧凑,语言连贯,富于逻辑性。答案:Dear Mr. Smith,I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union, from Chenguang High School.I am very pleased to learn that you are coming to visit our school on June 26.I am writing to tell you what we have arranged for you.In the morning, there will be a forum in the school
14、auditorium, where visitors and students from our school communicate with each other, talking about school life and cultural differences. At noon, you are invited to have lunch in our school cafeteria with students from our school. You can taste dumplings, noodles and other Chinese foods. In the afte
15、rnoon, the students in our school will show you around the Haihe River.How do you like the arrangements? I hope youll have a nice time in Tianjin.Yours sincerely,Li Hua解析:在审题过程中,除了考虑人称和时态外,还要确定好内容要点,要注意写作要求中的细节内容,这往往是评分标准中规定的内容要点。假如缺少要点,所得分数就会随之降低。建议考生在审题过程中先在草稿纸上列出需要表达的内容要点,然后仔细对照写作要求,看是否包括了所有的内容要点,最后再考虑下一步的构思。同时,要巧妙运用过渡性词语,使文章富有连贯性、逻辑性,从而也为文章增添亮点。