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1、中考作文评分标准中考作文评分标准第一档(第一档(13-1513-15分)分) 很好地完成了试题规定的任务。很好地完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容覆盖所有内容要点要点;应用了较丰富的;应用了较丰富的语法语法结构和结构和词词汇汇;用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚,没;用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚,没有或基本没有语言错误;有或基本没有语言错误;书写书写工整;工整;字数字数符合要求。符合要求。完全达到了预期的完全达到了预期的写作目的写作目的。第二第二档档(10-1210-12分)分) 较好地完成了试题规定的任务。较好地完成了试题规定的任务。虽漏掉虽漏掉1 1、2 2个次重点,但覆盖所
2、有主要内容;应个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容;应用的语言结构和词汇虽不太丰富,但能满足任务的要用的语言结构和词汇虽不太丰富,但能满足任务的要求;句子较通顺、表达较清楚;有少量语言错误;书求;句子较通顺、表达较清楚;有少量语言错误;书写工整;字数基本符合要求。达到了预期的写作目的。写工整;字数基本符合要求。达到了预期的写作目的。中考作文评分标准中考作文评分标准第三档(第三档(7-97-9分)分)基本完成了试题规定的任务。基本完成了试题规定的任务。虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容;应用的虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容;应用的语言结构单一;句子不够通顺,行文不够连贯;语语言结构单一;句子不够通顺
3、,行文不够连贯;语言错误较多;书写不够工整,字数较少。整体而言,言错误较多;书写不够工整,字数较少。整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的。基本达到了预期的写作目的。第四档(第四档(0-60-6分)分)未恰当完成试题规定的任务。未恰当完成试题规定的任务。漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,写了一些无关漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,写了一些无关内容;应用的语言结构单一且不规范;句子不通顺,内容;应用的语言结构单一且不规范;句子不通顺,行文不连贯;语言错误多;书写潦草,字数不足行文不连贯;语言错误多;书写潦草,字数不足5050。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。五、书面表达五、书面表达(共
4、共15分分)还记得发生在你身上最难忘的一次经历吗还记得发生在你身上最难忘的一次经历吗?某某英文报纸正在以英文报纸正在以“Anunforgettableexperience”为题进行征文活动。为题进行征文活动。请你写一篇短文,请你写一篇短文,描述一次难忘的经历,并谈谈描述一次难忘的经历,并谈谈你的感想。你的感想。参考词语:参考词语:remember,help,wonderful,feel,thinkAnUnforgettableExperienceEveryonehassomeunforgettableexperiences._Possibleversion1:AnUnforgettableEx
5、perienceEveryonehassomeunforgettableexperiences.Lasttermmylegwasbadlyhurtinafootballmatch,andIhadtostayinbedfortwoweeks.WhileIwasworryingaboutschoolworkathome,myclassmateTomcametohelpme.Hetoldmewhattheteachertaughtinclass,andhelpedmealotwithmymathproblems.IwasdeeplymovedbecausehekeptteachingmeuntilI
6、returnedtoschool.IwasgladthatIcaughtupwithmyclassmates.Fromthenon,webecamebestfriends.Itrulyunderstoodthatafriendinneedisafriendindeed.Lasttermmylegwasbadlyhurtinafootballmatch,andIhadtostayinbedfortwoweeks.一般过去时;被动;一般过去时;被动;副词;情态动词副词;情态动词WhileIwasworryingaboutschoolworkathome,myclassmateTomcametohe
7、lpme.过去进行时;一般过去时态;过去进行时;一般过去时态;非谓语动词非谓语动词Hetoldmewhattheteachertaughtinclass,andhelpedmealotwithmymathproblems.一般过去时;宾语从句一般过去时;宾语从句(PV2)AnUnforgettableExperienceEveryonehassomeunforgettableexperiences. I will never forget my first volunteer work. Last summer, our class went to a country primary scho
8、ol to help the students there. First, we gave away some books and stationery to them. Then we talked about school life. I was quite shy before, but to my surprise, I talked with some students for almost an hour without intermission. I shared my effective study methods with them excitedly. Finally, w
9、e played games together. All of us felt so happy. By doing the volunteer work, I not only gained happiness, but also became more confident. It made me experience that giving is receiving.Lastsummer,ourclasswenttoacountryprimaryschooltohelpthestudentsthere.总起总起First,wegaveawaysomebooksandstationeryto
10、them.Thenwetalkedaboutschoollife.Iwasquiteshybefore,buttomysurprise,Italkedwithsomestudentsforalmostanhourwithoutintermission.Isharedmyeffectivestudymethodswiththemexcitedly.Finally,weplayedgamestogether.Allofusfeltsohappy.Bydoingthevolunteerwork,Inotonlygainedhappiness,butalsobecamemoreconfident.Itmademeexperiencethatgivingisreceiving.跑题篇跑题篇AnunforgettablepersonAnunforgettablepresentAnunforgettabletripwatchingmoviesismybesthobbyIlikewatchingmovies.n.1.经验经验,体验体验2.经历经历;阅历阅历;感受感受,体会体会3.传统传统4.亲身经历或参加的活动亲身经历或参加的活动5.以亲身经历中得到的知识以亲身经历中得到的知识(或技能、经验或技能、经验)