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1、文体概述文体概述 英语日记一般记录一天发生的事件或是自己感受最深英语日记一般记录一天发生的事件或是自己感受最深的事，可分为记事、议论、描写、抒情等。写英语日记要的事，可分为记事、议论、描写、抒情等。写英语日记要注意下面几点：注意下面几点：一、格式一、格式 英语日记由书端和正文组成。书端指写日记的星期、英语日记由书端和正文组成。书端指写日记的星期、日期和天气，顶格写在左上角，先写星期，再写日期，最日期和天气，顶格写在左上角，先写星期，再写日期，最后写天气。后写天气。(例如：例如：Friday February 26th, 2016 Sunny)二、时态二、时态谓语动词多用一般过去时态，但是要根据
2、具体情况使谓语动词多用一般过去时态，但是要根据具体情况使用其他时态。用其他时态。三、写正文时应注意的问题三、写正文时应注意的问题1. 围绕一个主题来展开。围绕一个主题来展开。2. 若无法用已学语言知识来表达某种意思，若无法用已学语言知识来表达某种意思，可采用可采用“同义转换法同义转换法”。3. 结尾最好用一句话来总结自己的感想或体结尾最好用一句话来总结自己的感想或体会。会。常用语块常用语块1.因为因为 _2.2. 对对感到惊讶感到惊讶 _3. 对对严格要求严格要求 _4. 为为做好准备做好准备 _5. 到达到达 _ get to/reach/arrive at (in)because of (
3、doing) sth. / because+句子句子be surprised atbe strict in/withget/be ready for6. 给给一些忠告一些忠告/建议建议 _7. 帮助某人做某事帮助某人做某事_8. 出发；动身出发；动身 _9. 发生发生 _10. 积极参加积极参加 _take an active part ingivesome advice onhelp sb. with sth.set offtake place11. 散步散步/休息休息 _12. 采取有效措施做某事采取有效措施做某事 _13. 乘坐公交车乘坐公交车/火车火车/自行车自行车 _14. 拍照拍照
4、 _ 15. 在家在家/在上班在上班 _be at home/ be at worktake a walk / take a rest/breaktake effective measures to do sth.by bus/ train/ bike (take a bus/ train/ bike to)take photos/ pictures套用句式套用句式1.今天我在广州经历了一件难忘的事。今天我在广州经历了一件难忘的事。2. 昨晚我和一些好朋友去昨晚我和一些好朋友去KTV唱歌。唱歌。3. 这是我第一次做这是我第一次做2. Last night I went to the KTV w
5、ith some of my good friends.1. I had an unforgettable experience in Guangzhou today.3. This was the first time that I had done sth.4. 在公园散步的时候，我遇到一个外国人正在欣在公园散步的时候，我遇到一个外国人正在欣赏城市的美景。赏城市的美景。5. 首先，首先，其次，其次，此外，此外，最后，最后，4. When I was taking a walk in the park, I saw a foreigner enjoying the beauty of the
6、 city.5. First, Besides, Whats more, Finally, 习作修改习作修改(做短文改错，背经典范文做短文改错，背经典范文)Wednesday July 20, 2015 Fine Yesterday I went to Qingdao with my family by the train. The sunshine and fresh air there made us comfortably. We went to the seaside, where the sea was as blue as the sky. Bathing in the sunsh
7、ine on the beach were really an enjoyable thing. I picked up a lot of colorful shells with my little fortable was There we buy many interesting souvenirs. I was planning to send them my friends. We ate many thing there, such as fish, prawn(大虾大虾), beef and so on. They were very delicious. At night th
8、ey lived in a hotel nearby where was clean and tidy but the price was reasonable. Qingdao is such a beautiful and interesting place that it is well worth see a second time.bought tothings we which/that and seeing 1. 去掉去掉train前的前的the因为乘坐交通工具不用因为乘坐交通工具不用定冠词定冠词the。2. comfortably comfortable作宾补用形容作宾补用形容
9、词。词。3. were was动名词作主语谓语动词用单数。动名词作主语谓语动词用单数。4. buy bought这是一篇日记，讲述过去发这是一篇日记，讲述过去发生的事情用一般过去时。生的事情用一般过去时。5. 在在my friends前加前加to表示表示“把某物送给某把某物送给某人人”用用send sth. to sb.。6. thing things根据前面的根据前面的many可知要用可知要用thing的复数形式。的复数形式。7. they we根据上下逻辑关系，应是根据上下逻辑关系，应是“我们我们”晚上住在宾馆。晚上住在宾馆。8. where which/that先行词是先行词是hotel
10、，指物，指物，故用故用which/that引导定语从句。引导定语从句。9. but and表示表示“顺承顺承”关系用并列连词关系用并列连词and，译为，译为“而且而且”。此处并无。此处并无“转折转折”关系。关系。10. see seeing固定结构固定结构be well worth doing意为意为“某事很值得做某事很值得做”，是主动表被动。，是主动表被动。课堂练习课堂练习 假设你是李华，今天假设你是李华，今天(星期日，星期日，3月月20日，晴日，晴)在公园爬山时遇到一个外国人来旅游。你和他进在公园爬山时遇到一个外国人来旅游。你和他进行了交流。请围绕这个事情写一篇日记。要点如行了交流。请围绕
11、这个事情写一篇日记。要点如下：下：1. 想跟他谈话却不知所措。想跟他谈话却不知所措。2. 你向他介绍你的城市。你向他介绍你的城市。3. 他给你一些学习的建议。他给你一些学习的建议。注意：注意：1. 词数词数100左右。左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。使行文连贯。3. 开头语已为你写好。开头语已为你写好。Sunday March 20, 2016 Fine This morning when I was taking a walk in the park, I saw a foreigner enjoying the beauty of the city. Thi
12、s was the first time that I had seen a foreigner. I wanted to talk with him, but I was so excited and nervous that I didnt know what to do and how to start a conversation, though I did well in English classes. Eager to practise my spoken English, I encouraged myself and went to say hello and welcome
13、 to him. He was very friendly and we talked for about 15 minutes. As a native, I introduced some tourist attractions and tasty food to him. Finally, he gave me some advice on how to further improve my English. It was more than an experience!课外作业课外作业假设你是李华，今天假设你是李华，今天(星期六，星期六，4月月2日，多云日，多云)学学校组织去科学馆参加
14、题为校组织去科学馆参加题为“Human Activities and Wildlife Protection”的活动。请围绕这次活动写一的活动。请围绕这次活动写一篇日记。要点如下：篇日记。要点如下：1. 野生动植物的现状。野生动植物的现状。2. 保护野生动植物的意义。保护野生动植物的意义。3. 保护野生动植物的措施。保护野生动植物的措施。注意：注意：1. 词数词数100左右。左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。使行文连贯。3. 开头语已为你写好。开头语已为你写好。Saturday April 2, 2016 Cloudy This afternoon I took
15、part in an organized activity with the theme of “Human Activities and Wildlife Protection” in the science museum. From the activity, I learn that at present the environment is being destroyed because of peoples harmful activities, which causes a decrease of wildlife. Besides, many people hunt wild a
16、nimals for their meat and money. To make matters worse, in response, the decrease is doing harm to peoples life. So it is necessary to take effective measures to protect our environment, such as creating wildlife reserves and passing laws to raise the awareness of wildlife protection. Wild animals are friends of our human beings. To protect them is to protect ourselves. All in all, I benefited a lot from todays activity.
