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1、学案八吸引眼球的高学案八吸引眼球的高级词汇与与复复杂句式及演句式及演讲/致辞致辞 写作时，如果仅局限在把内容交代清楚这一层次，只选用一些普通的词，或一律使用简单句平铺直叙，那么习作就会显得呆板、单调，没有可读性。要想写出高分作文，不仅要把要求表述清楚，而且还要尝试使用高级词汇与复杂句式。如能运用恰当，哪怕只用上一、两处，也会为习作增添色彩，给阅卷老师留下深刻的印象。写作运用探究1.标新立异恰当地使用一些蕴含感情色彩或其他考生不容易想到的高级词汇，会彰显自己的水平。高考佳句Ill thank you if you think about my suggestion.Ill appreciate
2、it if you take my suggestion into consideration. (福建高考满分作文)一、运用高级词汇三原则I received your email last week，but I am busy preparing for my final exam，which is important for me，so I didnt reply to you without delay.I received your email last week，but I am busy preparing for my final exam，which is vital for
3、 me，so I didnt reply to you without delay.(山东高考满分作文)As a result the plan was a failure.The plan turned out to be a failure.(辽宁高考标准范文)Well try our best to improve the working conditions.Well spare no effort to promote the working conditions.(山东高考标准范文) 2.短语优先写作中，要想写出“亮点”就要注意挖掘自己现存的词汇潜力，多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词
4、，会使短文内容丰富，表达更有力度，增添文采。高考佳句To achieve ones dream，one must try to equip oneself with rich knowledge and set a goal easy to reach.To achieve ones dream，one must make great efforts to equip oneself with rich knowledge and set a goal easy to reach.(北京高考满分作文)Whats more，we can pour out the troubles we face
5、，and release our pressure from different aspects.Whats more，we can pour out the troubles we are faced with，and release our pressure from different aspects.(重庆高考满分作文)To tell you the truth，I dont really like your new novel.To tell you the truth，I really show no interest in your new novel.(湖南高考满分作文)3.手
6、法多样在表达相同或相近的意思时，要尽量避免过多地使用同一个单词，用其他相应的词或短语来代替，这样能让阅卷老师感觉到你词汇量丰富。实在找不到，可以变更说法，“曲径通幽”或许会有更好的效果。高考佳句I like reading while my brother likes watching football matches.I like reading while my brother enjoys watching football matches. (江西高考满分作文)It showed me that the way of education in Canada is quite diffe
7、rent from the way of education of China.It showed me that the way of education in Canada is quite different from that of China.(湖北高考满分作文) 【即时演练】用较高级词汇代替黑体的单词或短语1.We all have the same opportunity.2.More and more visitors have been attracted to this place.3.The teacher directed the gifted students tow
8、ards the more difficult courses.4.Well try our best to develop the traditional friendship between us.5.I can no longer bear the way he speaks to us.6.Would you please help me to turn down the radio?答 案 1.possess 2.An increasing number of 3.challenging4.promote5.put up with6.do me a favor 二、运用高级句式的七大
9、策略1.运用被动语态，重点更鲜明高考佳句We will have selected about thirty volunteers to the Mars throughout the world by 2015.About thirty volunteers will have been selected to the Mars throughout the world by 2015.(广东高考书面表达)Im delighted to know that the Shanghai Museum will organize a famous art exhibition and you ar
10、e collecting opinions of the public as to selecting the location for the exhibition，which encouraged me to write to express my ideas.Im delighted to know that a famous art exhibition will be organized by the Shanghai Museum and opinions of the public are being collected as to selecting the location
11、for the exhibition，which encouraged me to write to express my ideas.(上海高考满分作文)2.运用强调句，重点更突出高考佳句His great efforts helped me out of the trouble.It was his great efforts that helped me out of the trouble.(安徽高考满分作文)Without hesitation，I decided to follow them and we had lots of fun that day.Without hesit
12、ation，I decided to follow them and we did have lots of fun that day.(2015浙江，标准范文)Our parents have devoted their unconditional love to us，which indeed deserves our appreciation and reward.Its our parents who have devoted their unconditional love to us，which indeed deserves our appreciation and reward
13、.(重庆高考满分作文) 3.运用倒装句，语言更活泼高考佳句Books are not only shared but it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.Not only are books shared but it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.(2015重庆，标准范文)I was so excited that I co
14、uldnt wait to try my hand at riding it.So excited was I that I couldnt wait to try my hand at riding it.(2014福建，满分作文)The children can grow up mentally and physically healthy only in this way.Only in this way can the children grow up mentally and physically healthy.(福建高考满分作文)4.运用省略句，行文更简洁高考佳句Maybe it
15、 is a better idea to take outdoor activities when you feel bad.Maybe it is a better idea to take outdoor activities when feeling bad.(2014安徽，满分作文)Are you looking forward to the prize-giving ceremony? Sure! Itll be held from 15：00 to 17：00.Looking forward to the prize-giving ceremony? Sure! Itll be h
16、eld from 15：00 to 17：00.(2014辽宁，满分作文)As it is scheduled，English Talent Show will be held today.As scheduled，English Talent Show will be held today.(2014陕西，满分作文)Although they were faced with many problems，they didnt lose heart.Although faced with many problems，they didnt lose heart.(山东高考满分作文)5.运用感叹句，
17、感情更强烈高考佳句From the expression on the face，I knew my math teacher was surprised.What a surprised expression was on my math teachers face！(2015湖南，满分作文)It is a very splendid moment.How splendid a moment it is！(辽宁高考满分作文)6.运用with复合结构、分词(短语)等，结构更简明高考佳句Our school lies at the foot of a mountain，there is a ri
18、ver flowing in front of it.At the foot of a mountain lies our school，with a river flowing in front of it.(北京高考满分作文)The teacher came into the lecture hall，many students followed him.The teacher came into the lecture hall，followed by many students.(广东高考满分作文)I picked up the case.I shouted at the man lo
19、udly.But he didnt hear me and rode away.After picking up the case，I shouted at the man loudly，but he rode too fast to hear me.(湖南高考满分作文) 7.运用虚拟语气，表达更传神高考佳句I missed being hit by the car with your help.Without your help，I would have been hit by the car.(安徽高考满分作文)It is high time for both local governme
20、nt and residents to take effective measures.It is high time that both local government and residents took effective measures.(福建高考满分作文)8.运用复合句，句式更多变高考佳句To our surprise，the little girl knows so many things.What surprised us most is that the little girl knows so many things.(重庆高考满分作文)It was quite an e
21、xperience for both of us，and I will never forget it for the rest of my life.It was quite an experience for both of us，which Ill never forget for the rest of my life.(陕西高考满分作文)9.运用it句式，表达更丰富高考佳句Personally， drinking plenty of boiled water every day is necessary.I think it necessary that we should drin
22、k plenty of boiled water every day.(陕西高考满分作文)我认为我们每天喝大量的开水是必要的。Whats worse，some drivers，cyclists and pedestrians do not think obeying traffic rules is vital.Whats worse，some drivers，cyclists and pedestrians do not think it vital to obey traffic rules.(2015江苏，满分作文)更糟糕的是，一些司机，骑自行车者和行人没有认识到交通规则的重要性。You
23、 should provide some money to fund our program，as well as offer us some practical suggestions.Thats our desire.Its our desire that you should provide some money to fund our program，as well as offer us some practical suggestions.(重庆高考满分作文)我们渴望你能为我们的项目提供一些资金，还能提供一些实用的建议。【即时演练】按要求转换下列句子7.Above all，we m
24、ust do something to stop pollution.(用被动语态)_8.I realized the importance of English when I entered senior high school.(用强调句)_9.We dont know its value until we lose health.(用倒装句)_10.If it isnt well organized，the meeting will be a failure.(用省略句)_11.We had a very good time with the peasants that day.(用感叹
25、句)_12.Because there was too much noise，I couldnt go on studying.(用with复合结构)_答案7.Above all，something must be done to stop pollution.8.It was when I entered senior high school that I realized the importance of English.9.Not until we lose health do we know its value.10.If not well organized，the meeting
26、 will be a failure.11.What a good time we had with the peasants that day!12.With the noise going on，I couldnt go on studying.请用高级词汇替换下列句子中的画线部分1.He has decided to be a teacher when he grows up.2.Developing very quickly，the Internet causes the breakdown of face-to-face communication.3.When you are bo
27、red with the people sometimes，youd better find a quiet place，listening to some classical music.4.He didnt listen to what I said in the class.单句跟踪演练5.Suddenly I thought of an idea that someone had broken into my house.6.As soon as he arrived，he began his research.答案1.determined/made up his mind2.give
28、s rise to 3.fed up with4.turned a deaf ear to5.I came up with an idea/an idea occurred to me6.On/Upon his arrival .按要求转换下列句子1.I didnt take his advice，so I failed in the exam.(用虚拟语气)_2.If it is so，I hope you will have a wonderful time.(用省略句)_3.We can achieve our goal in this way.(用倒装句)_4.Much to our
29、surprise，Mary failed in the final exam.(用名词性从句)_5.Because the weather was good，our journey was comfortable.(用短语代替从句)_6.If you go through the gate，youll find the entrance to Bear Country.(用并列句)_答案1.If I had taken his advice，I wouldnt have failed in the exam.2.If so，I hope you will have a wonderful ti
30、me.3.Only in this way can we achieve our goal.4.What surprised us most is that Mary failed in the final exam.5.Thanks to the good weather，our journey was comfortable.6.Go through the gate，and youll find the entrance to Bear Country. .根据汉语提示完成句子1._ if you could teach me how to use the computer.(陕西高考满
31、分作文)如果你能教我如何用电脑，我将不胜感激。2._ I wont believe him. (安徽高考满分作文)无论他说什么，我都不会相信他了。3._，we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruits，sharing our stories.(辽宁高考满分作文)美丽的月亮高挂在天空，我们坐在一起吃着月饼和水果，一块分享我们的故事。4._ about his condition. (湖北高考满分作文) 我是多么担心他的境况呀！ 5._，they didnt lose heart.(江苏高考满分作文)虽然面对那么多的问题，他们并没有灰心丧气。6._ wo
32、rds could be powerful in both positive and negative ways.(湖北高考标准范文)直到那时我才意识到话语在积极和消极这两种方式上是很有力量的。7.From this experience，I realized that _.(2014新课标全国，满分作文)从这次经历，我意识到是热情导致了我的成功。8._ to solve the problem as soon as possible.应当尽快采取措施来解决这个问题。(广东高考标准范文) 答案 1.Id appreciate it 2.Whatever/No matter what he sa
33、ys3.With the beautiful moon up in the sky 4.How worried I am5.Although/Though faced with so many problems6.Not until then did I realize 7.it was enthusiasm that led to my success 8.Effective measures should be taken 演讲/致辞常用词汇1._ n.机会2._ v.呼吁3._ v.促进4._ n.荣幸5._ together聚会6.keep sb _陪伴某人7._ behalf of
34、代表8._ up 欢呼答案1.opportunity/chance2.appeal3.promote pany7.on8.cheer 1.欢迎辞常用语：(1)We are glad to have a chance to get together with.(2)We feel greatly honoured to have a chance to be with.(3)Lets give our warm welcome to.(4)Thank you for your accepting our invitation to come to.(5)First of all，allow me
35、 on behalf of sb to do sth(6)Now let us ask sb to speak to us.演讲/致辞常用句式2.欢送辞常用语：(1)In bidding farewell to sb.(2)To convey our profound friendship to sb.(3)To convey our best regards and respects to sb.(4)To wish sb a pleasant journey home and good health.(5)May the friendship between.be further deve
36、loped!演讲稿是演讲者在一定的场合，面对特定的对象，为了达到某种目的而采取的表达自己观点的文字，是高考中较为常见的应用文。演讲/致辞常用写作方法技巧与注意事项 主要内容一般说来，演讲稿包括欢迎(送)性和宣读性两种类型。前者属于在正式场合接待或欢送客人时，主人为了表达欢迎、感谢或祝愿而进行的热情友好的发言。此类发言稿通常包含礼节性语言和有关的人物或事情(如旅游路线、学校概况等)的情况介绍两部分内容。后者属于向听众讲述一些道理，其目的在于希望对方接受自己的见解。此类发言稿通常综合了说明、议论、叙述等写作手法。演讲稿是介绍性说明文，在语言使用上一定要准确简明、通俗易懂、层次清楚、条理分明。在写作
37、时，应注意用词得体，符合场合和语境。写作技巧1.文章结构：演讲稿第一段侧重介绍事情的发生、发展和结局。第二段应紧扣主题表示欢迎、欢送、号召、建议、个人看法等。2.语言直白简洁。演讲稿是直接面向听众的，所以我们在语言的选择上要简短，尽可能多使用简单句，听众一听就能听懂，当然，一些经典的长句我们也可以用在文中。3.观点鲜明，感情真挚。演讲稿观点鲜明，显示着说话者对一种理性认识的肯定，也显示着说话者对客观事物见解的透彻程度，能给人以可信性和可靠感，感情真挚才能打动人，引起听众的共鸣。假设你正在参加全省中学生英语演讲比赛，请你针对有些父母经常翻看孩子日记或书包这一现象，写一篇演讲稿，陈述你的观点。认为
38、同学们不必为此苦恼；希望能够体谅父母的苦衷；建议与父母进行交流和沟通。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。【模拟训练】Good morning，ladies and gentlemen，_Thank you!【参考范文】Good morning，ladies and gentlemen，Some of us are having problems with our parents，as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries.I fully underst
39、and why we are not comfortable about it，but theres no need to feel too sad.Our parents are checking our bags or diaries to make sure were not getting into any trouble.They have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought we might do the same.Or perhaps they just want to connect with us but are doing it all wrong. My suggestion is：Tell them we want them to trust us as much as wed like to trust them.If you dont think you can talk to them，write them a letter and leave it lying aroundthey are bound to read it.Thank you！
