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1、写作（演讲稿）写作（演讲稿）高三英语组：张莉课程安排：1.讲评考试作文题目及写作技巧；2.当堂评改学生考试过程中所写作文；3.范文示例；4.类似题材分析；5.尝试写作；6.点评范文。题目要求题目要求 (2011江西高考江西高考) 假设你是成都七中（星光中学）假设你是成都七中（星光中学）的李华，将参加主题为的李华，将参加主题为“Lets Ride Bicycles”的英语的英语演讲比赛。演讲比赛。 请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括：请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括：1目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；2骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、骑自行车的益处，如节能环
2、保、 有利健康等。有利健康等。 参考词汇：低碳生活参考词汇：低碳生活 lowcarbon life节能节能 energy saving注意：注意：1. 词数：词数： 120词左右；词左右； 2演讲稿开头和结尾已给出，演讲稿开头和结尾已给出， 且该部分不计入总词数。且该部分不计入总词数。 Good morning, everyone, I am Li Hua from Chengdu No. 7 High School. The topic of my speech is “Lets Ride Bicycles”_ Thank you ! 技法指导技法指导 演讲稿是人们在工作和社会生活中经常使用
3、的一种演讲稿是人们在工作和社会生活中经常使用的一种文体，它是在较为隆重的仪式上和某些公众场所发表的文体，它是在较为隆重的仪式上和某些公众场所发表的讲话文稿。写好演讲稿，应注意以下三点：讲话文稿。写好演讲稿，应注意以下三点：1格式格式 演讲稿一般由三部分组成，即：称呼语演讲稿一般由三部分组成，即：称呼语(Greetings)、正文正文(Body)和结束语和结束语(Closing)。常见的称呼语有。常见的称呼语有Ladies and gentlemen, Friends, Boys and girls等，一般称呼语前等，一般称呼语前不使用不使用Dear。2内容内容 演讲稿的主题部分应该阐述清楚事情
4、的缘由、结演讲稿的主题部分应该阐述清楚事情的缘由、结果和要求。第一部分的内容应该以详细完整地介绍事果和要求。第一部分的内容应该以详细完整地介绍事情为主，具体地讲，包括事情的发生、发展及结局。情为主，具体地讲，包括事情的发生、发展及结局。第二部分的内容应该提出发言稿的主题，如欢迎、欢第二部分的内容应该提出发言稿的主题，如欢迎、欢送、号召、建议、个人看法等。送、号召、建议、个人看法等。3语言语言 演讲稿以简单句为主要的表达形式。同时，演讲稿演讲稿以简单句为主要的表达形式。同时，演讲稿的语言必须有感染力，所以演讲稿可以使用祈使句、感的语言必须有感染力，所以演讲稿可以使用祈使句、感叹句、强调句等句式来
5、达到这种目的。写作时要注意适叹句、强调句等句式来达到这种目的。写作时要注意适当地使用关联词承前启后，用词要得体，符合语言环境。当地使用关联词承前启后，用词要得体，符合语言环境。第一步构建框架，清晰行文第一步构建框架，清晰行文 谋篇布局谋篇布局第二步打造亮句，增色文章第二步打造亮句，增色文章第三步串句成文，保证流畅第三步串句成文，保证流畅第一步构建框架，清晰行文第一步构建框架，清晰行文 谋篇布局谋篇布局黄金模板黄金模板Boys and girls/Ladies and gentlemen, Its a great honor for me to stand here and give my sp
6、eech. My name is _(自我介绍自我介绍). The topic of my speech is _(发言主题发言主题) To begin with, many people suggest that . Secondly, . Thirdly .(话题或现象列举话题或现象列举) What I want to stress is that _(重申主题重申主题). For one thing, . For another, . Besides, .(原因或重要性列举原因或重要性列举). In a word, _(总结总结) Thank you for your listening
7、./Thank you.第二步打造亮句，增色文章第二步打造亮句，增色文章1我认为，骑自行车是一个好的解决办法。我认为，骑自行车是一个好的解决办法。 In my opinion, it is a good solution to ride bicycles. As far as Im concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. 2众所周知，随着人们生活水平的提高，汽车已经成为众所周知，随着人们生活水平的提高，汽车已经成为一种很受欢迎的交通方式。一种很受欢迎的交通方式。Its known to all /that with the improvem
8、ent of peoples living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport. As is known to all, with the improvement of peoples living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport. 第三步串句成文，保证流畅第三步串句成文，保证流畅 Lets ride bicycles Hello everyone,Im lihua from chengdu middle school , Im gla
9、d to stand here, and the topic of speech is lets ride bicycles. As we all know, with the steady growth of peoples living standards, people have enough money to pay for cars. That bring more convenience for us. But cars also bring some bad problems to us. For example, the more cars in life the more c
10、rowded in life, which is easy to cause traffic jams. Whats more, cars not only cause air pillution but also ruin our health. What a serious problem is, and how to solve it. As far as Im concerned, riding bicycles is a good way. With the globle warming so that we should learn to energy saving and low
11、carbon life. Riding bicycles can do it. In addition, riding bicycles can keep our fit and reduce traffic jams. Its also help us do more exersise to keep health. So lets ride bicycles to protect our homes. Im looking forward to you joining us.范文示例：范文示例：Good morning, everyone, I am Li Hua from Chengdu
12、 No. 7 High School. The topic of my speech is “Lets Ride Bicycles”. As is known to all, with the improvement of peoples living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traf
13、fic jams. How can we solve these problems then? As far as Im concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles dont need any petrol and they are energysaving. For another, bicycles are environmentally friendly because they wont give off waste gas. Whats more, riding bicycles is
14、a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health. Therefore, lets take the responsibility to build up a low carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join us! Thank you! 典题示例典题示例 (2010四川四川) 假定你校将假定你校将举行一个成人行一个成人仪式，你将作式，你将作为代表在代表在仪式上式上发言。言。请你按以下内容要点准你按以下内容要点准备一篇英文一篇英文发言稿。言稿。1过去去对成年的
15、向往；成年的向往；2现在的感受和在的感受和认识；3将来的目将来的目标及措施。及措施。 参考参考词汇：责任任responsibility注意：注意：1.词数词数100左右；左右；2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；3.发言稿的开头与结束语已为你写好发言稿的开头与结束语已为你写好(不计入总词数不计入总词数)。Good morning, everyone! The topic of my speech today is “Thoughts on becoming a grownup”_Thank you for listening.写作点拨写作点拨： 这是一篇演是一篇演讲
16、稿体裁的半开放式作文。稿体裁的半开放式作文。命命题者从者从“过去去现在在将来将来”三个三个时间阶段段出出发，给考生一个自由考生一个自由发挥的空的空间，并考，并考查学生灵活学生灵活转换时态的能力。写作的能力。写作时要避免逐要避免逐词逐句翻逐句翻译，除了，除了语言基本功外言基本功外还要注意好要注意好句子的运用，出一些句子的运用，出一些闪光点。光点。写作要点写作要点1.梦想着做某事：梦想着做某事：dream of doing2.表达目表达目标：aim to/my purpose is to.3.有有的的责任：任：have responsibility for.写作范文写作范文:Good mornin
17、g, everyone! The topic of my speech today is “Thoughts on becoming a grownup” As a child, I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could have whatever I wanted and do whatever I liked. Now Im a grownup, but I find things do not go as I expected. Although I can enjoy more fre
18、edom, at the same time I realize that being a grownup not only means this, but also more responsibilities. I hope to do more for my parents and society in the future to make my life more meaningful. To reach the goal, I must first try my best to pass the college entrance examination and enter a good
19、 university. Thank you for listening. (2012日照模拟日照模拟) 假定你是某学校学生会主席，你假定你是某学校学生会主席，你校将选拔学生参加模特大赛。请你按以下内容要点校将选拔学生参加模特大赛。请你按以下内容要点准备一篇英文发言稿，谈谈你的看法，并鼓励大家准备一篇英文发言稿，谈谈你的看法，并鼓励大家积极参与。积极参与。1实现梦想；实现梦想；2学会生活；学会生活；3促进学习。促进学习。注意：注意：1.词数词数120150；2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；3.发言稿的开头与结束语已为你写好发言稿的开头与结束语已为你写好(不计入总
20、词数不计入总词数)。 Good morning, everyone! Its known that our school will choose some students to attend the model contest. In my opinion， Thank you for listening. 参参 考考 范范 文：文： Good morning, everyone! Its known that our school will choose some students to attend the model contest. In my opinion, its a good
21、 idea for us students to enter for the model contest. Some of us are fond of fashion and modeling. We want to be fashion designers or professional models. We may well seize the opportunity to make our dreams come true. Besides, not only do we show our figures and intelligence on the stage, but we al
22、so learn how to be independent, how to behave in society and what to do for others while preparing for the competition. However, some of our parents think it possible for us to miss lessons and fall behind in study. No! On the contrary, being student contestants or prize winners, we are encouraged to study even harder and make rapid progress. Thank you for listening. ThankYou!
