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1、与短文改错相结合的与短文改错相结合的应用文之道歉信评讲应用文之道歉信评讲 假定你是李华，与留学生朋友假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：封邮件，内容包括：1.表示歉意；表示歉意；2.说明原因；说明原因；3.另约时间。另约时间。审题审题体裁体裁(writing style)(writing style)：人称人称(person)(person)：时态时态(tense)(tense)：要点要点(main points)(main points)：道歉信道歉信第一人称第一人称一般现在时一般现在时 单句改错单句改
2、错(1) I fell sorry about it.feel-单词拼写错误或用错单词单词拼写错误或用错单词单句改错单句改错 (2) I have so many homework to do. much-不可数不可数名词的运用问题名词的运用问题 (3) I must be take care of her in the hospital.单句改错单句改错 -多谓语多谓语(4) I was injured when I do exercise yesterday.did单句改错单句改错 -动词时态错误动词时态错误(5) I promise to recover from illness and
3、 going to the bookstore with you next time.go单句改错单句改错 -非谓语动词使用错误非谓语动词使用错误单句改错单句改错 (6) I advise we can choose proper time.(should)-情态动词使用错误情态动词使用错误(7) I have to join the sports meeting.单句改错单句改错 in-少介词少介词 (8) The reason is that my brother is ill and I have to take care of her. him-性别保持一致性别保持一致单句改错单句改错
4、 (9) The reason is that I will take part in a important activity. 单句改错单句改错 an-冠词用错冠词用错单句改错单句改错 (10) I feel terrible sorry about it.terribly-词性混淆词性混淆(11) I am writing this letter to apologize because cant go to the bookstore with you.单句改错单句改错 -逐字翻译问题逐字翻译问题 I单句改错单句改错 (12) The reason is that my friends
5、 is ill.friend-主谓一致问题主谓一致问题 (13) I want to know you have time next week.单句改错单句改错 whether/if-成分残缺成分残缺 单句改错单句改错 (14) The reason why I cant go to the bookstore is because I must take care of my sister. that-句型用错句型用错(15) Its my fault to keep my promise. 单句改错单句改错 -逻辑关系问题逻辑关系问题 not1. 名词的运用问题名词的运用问题(1) 名词的
6、单复数名词的单复数(2) 名词所有格名词所有格2.动词的运用问题动词的运用问题(1) 多谓语或少谓语多谓语或少谓语(2) 时态语态错误时态语态错误(3) 非谓语使用错误非谓语使用错误(4) 情态动词使用错误情态动词使用错误 3. 介词的运用问题介词的运用问题(1) 多介词多介词(2) 少介词少介词(3) 介词误用介词误用 如何修改作文如何修改作文 4. 冠词的运用问题冠词的运用问题(1) 多冠词多冠词(2) 少冠词少冠词(3) 冠词错用冠词错用5.代词的运用问题代词的运用问题(1) 单复数单复数一致一致(2) 人称人称一致一致(3) 性别一致性别一致(4) 代词的代词的各种各种 形式形式混用混
7、用(5) it的用法的用法如何修改作文如何修改作文 6.单词拼写错误单词拼写错误 或用错单词或用错单词7. 词性混淆问题词性混淆问题8. 逐字翻译问题逐字翻译问题9. 主谓一致问题主谓一致问题10. 逻辑关系问题逻辑关系问题11. 句型用错句型用错12. 成分残缺成分残缺13.大小写大小写14.标点符号标点符号15.书写书写Dear Bob, I am writing this letter to apologize for not going to the bookstore with you. The reason why I cant go with you is because my
8、sister is illness and I have to take care of him. Its my fault to keep my promise. I have realize my mistake, so I hope you can give me a opportunity to make up my fault. 短文改错短文改错 thatillher notrealizedan forI promise that I will go to the bookstore with you on next Sunday. I hope this settlement of
9、 the matter will meet your wishes. Please allow me to apologize for you again. I would appreciate if you could forgive me. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 短文改错短文改错 to it修改学生作文修改学生作文2023apologizetheseyesterday修改学生作文修改学生作文1520not going to the bookstore with you thebecausebreakWeon修改学生作文修改学生作文1020not going to
10、the bookstore with you I have something to do at school is go to the bookstore next Saturday5Dear Bob, Im sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause y
11、ou too much trouble. Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that well have more time to read and select books. If its convenient for you, lets meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.
12、欣赏范文欣赏范文 Yours sincerely, Li Hua 1. 我很抱歉星期六晚上我不能去你我很抱歉星期六晚上我不能去你家吃晚饭。家吃晚饭。 汉译英汉译英 可供参考的句型可供参考的句型Im sorry to say that I am sorry to say that I cannot go to your home for a dinner on Saturday evening. 可供参考的句型可供参考的句型I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.汉译英汉译英 2. 我希望我所犯的错误不会给你造我希望我所犯的错误
13、不会给你造成太大的麻烦。成太大的麻烦。 I hope that the mistake I made will not cause you too much trouble.3. 我们可以在星期天下午去购物吗我们可以在星期天下午去购物吗？ 汉翻英汉翻英 可参考的句型可参考的句型Shall we go on Saturday morning?Shall we go shopping on Sunday afternoon?可供参考的句型可供参考的句型If its convenient for you, lets meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. 汉翻英汉
14、翻英 4. 如果你方便的话，我们就在如果你方便的话，我们就在8月月1号早上号早上9点钟在校门口相聚。点钟在校门口相聚。 If its convenient for you, lets get together at 9:00 am on August 1st at the school gate. 1.抄写道歉信模版和常用句型，并背抄写道歉信模版和常用句型，并背诵。诵。表示歉意，说明出现差错的原表示歉意，说明出现差错的原因，提出弥补措施，请求原谅，这因，提出弥补措施，请求原谅，这四部分只需要每一部分抄写一两个四部分只需要每一部分抄写一两个同学们喜欢的句子。同学们喜欢的句子。第二天上课在第二天上
15、课在老师提示下默写。老师提示下默写。2.同桌之间互相修改作文，特别注意同桌之间互相修改作文，特别注意修改老师划了红线的部分。修改老师划了红线的部分。第二天第二天再交上来老师检查。再交上来老师检查。Homework道歉信必备模版道歉信必备模版 Dear , I am sorry to say that (道歉的原因道歉的原因) . The reason why was that(事件起因事件起因). Its my fault to do sth.(错误原因错误原因) I have realized my mistake, so I hope you can forgive me. I promi
16、se to and (改正方法及补救措施改正方法及补救措施). I do apologize for any inconvenience this may cause you. Yours sincerely, Li Hua一、表示歉意一、表示歉意1.I am writing this letter to apologize (to you) for (not) doing sth.2.I am writing to say sorry for (not) doing sth.3.I would like to give you my apology for (not) doing sth.4
17、.I am writing this letter to express my apology to you, because.道歉信必备句型道歉信必备句型5.Much to my regret, I am unable to do sth.6.I want to express my regret at being unable to do sth. 7.Im very sorry that.8.Im excessively sorry to tell that.一、表示歉意一、表示歉意1.The reasons why I apologize are as follows.2.The re
18、asons for my apology are as follows.3.The reason why. is that.二、说明出现差错的原因二、说明出现差错的原因 1.I hope you can forgive me and give me a chance to make up for my mistake.2.To make compensation, Id like to.3.I promise to do sth.4.I promise that .5.I decide to do sth. 三、提出弥补措施三、提出弥补措施 1.I do apologize for any i
19、nconvenience this may cause you.2.Please allow me to say sorry again.3.Please allow me to apologize to you again.四、请求原谅四、请求原谅 4.I sincerely hope you can understand my situation and accept my apology.5.Please accept my sincere apologies for (not) doing sth.6.Will you please accept my sincere apologies for (not) doing sth. ?四、请求原谅四、请求原谅
