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1、出生日、出生地出生日、出生地出生日、出生地出生日、出生地家庭背景家庭背景家庭背景家庭背景教育教育教育教育个人事迹个人事迹个人事迹个人事迹评价评价评价评价ShewasborninPolandonNov.7,1867.出生地出生地出生年月日出生年月日2.Familybackground描述家庭情况：描述家庭情况：wasbornin/intoapoor/richfamilyhis/herfamilywassopoorthatwasthesonofapoorfamily描述小时候成长历程：描述小时候成长历程：whenhewasasmallboy/young，asachild/asaboyof15，du
2、ringhis/herchildhood，spendhischildhoodin描述生活：描述生活：liveahappy/hardlifewiththehelpofhisfatherwasstrictwithhim亚伯翰亚伯翰林肯林肯于于1809年年2月月12日出生在一个日出生在一个贫穷家庭。贫穷家庭。简单句：简单句：AbrahamLincolnwasborninapoorfamilyonFebruary12,1809.并列句：并列句：AbrahamLincolnwasborninapoorfamilyandbornonFebruary12,1809.主从句（定语从句）：主从句（定语从句）：A
3、brahamLincoln,whowasbornonFebruary12,1809,wasthesonofapoorfamily.AbrahamLincoln,whowasthesonofapoorfamily,wasbornonFebruary12,1809.主从句（同位语从句）：主从句（同位语从句）：AbrahamLincoln,thesonofapoorfamily,wasbornonFebruary12,1809.3. Education backgroundbeadmittedtocollege被被大学所录取大学所录取graduatefromdepartment（院系）（院系）ofu
4、niversity毕业毕业whenatcollege,hemajoredin大学主修大学主修receiveadoctorsdegree/aPhDdegree获得博士学位获得博士学位beawarded(奖项奖项)被嘉奖被嘉奖goabroadforfurtherstudies出国深造出国深造havelittleschooling(education)受过很少教育受过很少教育出生在贫苦家庭的狄更斯只受到很少教育主从句：主从句：定语从句：定语从句：CharlesDickens,whowasborninapoorfamily,hadlittleschooling.非谓语：非谓语：1）过去分词充当定语，修
5、饰前面名词）过去分词充当定语，修饰前面名词CharlesDickens,borninapoorfamily,hadlittleschooling.2）过去分词充当状语，表原因）过去分词充当状语，表原因Borninapoorfamily,CharlesDickenshadlittleschooling.4.Bigeventsinoneslife 1）beinterestedin/befondof在在感兴趣感兴趣/喜爱喜爱2）workhardat在在工作努力工作努力3）serveas作为作为4）devotehislifetime/oneselfto将一生投入到将一生投入到5）concentrate
6、oneselfon集中某人注意力做集中某人注意力做6）doresearchabout/into做关于做关于的研究的研究7）makeuponesmindtodosth.下定决定做某事下定决定做某事8）dosthwithgreatdeterminationandperseverance凭着巨大的决心和毅力去做凭着巨大的决心和毅力去做10）haveawayofdoingsth在做某事方面有着在做某事方面有着的方式的方式11）tryonesbesttodosth.尽全力去做某事尽全力去做某事12）encouragesbtodo鼓励某人做某事鼓励某人做某事13）fightfor/giveuponesli
7、feforsb/sth为为而奋斗而奋斗/为某人为某人/某事放弃自己的生命某事放弃自己的生命14）winaprize/thefirstprizeincompetition在比赛中获得奖励在比赛中获得奖励/获得第一名获得第一名15)receive/obtain/wintheNobelPrizefor因因而获得了诺贝尔奖而获得了诺贝尔奖16)begoodat.dowellin在在做得好做得好9）bestrictinsth.在在严格要求严格要求17)becrazyabout/enjoy对对着迷着迷/享受享受18)makerapidprogressin在在做出进步做出进步19)setanewworldr
8、ecordof创造一项新的世界纪录创造一项新的世界纪录20)equal/breaktheworldrecord平平/打破世界纪录打破世界纪录21)win(won)agold/silver/bronzemedal获得金牌获得金牌/银牌银牌/铜牌铜牌22）winthexxthplace获得第几名获得第几名23)beselectedto/becomeamemberof被选为被选为/成为成为的一员的一员24)studyhard/trainhard学习努力学习努力/训练努力训练努力25)gothroughhardship经历困难经历困难/挫折挫折26)haveagift/talentfor(langua
9、ge)对对(语言语言)有天份有天份27)realizeonesdream实现梦想实现梦想28)overcomemanydifficulties克服很多困难克服很多困难5高锟，1933年11月4日出生于上海一个富裕家庭，从小对做不同的试验产生浓厚兴趣。定语从句：Gaokun, who was born in a rich family on Nov.4th,1933, showgreatinterest(wasinterested)in doing different experiment during his childhood.非谓语（定语）Gaokun, born in a rich fa
10、mily on Nov.4th,1933, show great interest (was interested) in doing different experiment during his childhood.非谓语（状语）Born in a rich family on Nov.4th,1933, Gaokun show great interest (was interested) in doing different experiment during his childhood.6他于1957年在伦敦念大学，并于1963年获得博士学位。并列句：He studied in a
11、university in London in 1957, and receivedadoctorsdegree in 1963.After he studied in a a university in London in 1957, received a doctors degree in 1963主从句：In 1957, He studied in a university in London, where hegained a doctors degree in 1963.非谓语：Having studied in a university in London in 1957, he
12、gained a doctors degree in 1963.8中山大学英语系毕业后，她出国深造。并列句：连词After graduatingfrom the EnglishDepartmentofZhongshanUniversity, she wentabroadforfurtherstudies.非谓语：Having graduated from the English Department of Zhongshan University, she went abroad for further studies.14 1983年他毕业于哥伦比亚大学，1988年考入哈佛法学院，1991年
13、获得博士学位。并列句：连词In 1983, he graduatedfrom Columbia University and in 1988, he wasadmittedto Harvard Law School, where he gainedhisdoctorsdegree in 1991.定语从句After graduating from Columbia University In 1983,he was admitted to Harvard Law School, where he gainedhis doctors degree in 1991.17米高菲尔普斯是美国一个非凡的
14、游泳运动员，1985年6月出生于美国马利兰州巴尔的摩市。Michael Phelps is a great American swimmer who was born in Baltimore, Maryland on June 30,1985.Michael Phelps, born in Baltimore, Maryland on June 30,1985, is a great American swimmer.Born in Baltimore, Maryland on June 30,1985, Michael Phelps is a great American swimmer.
15、18 他7岁开始游泳，经历了很多艰苦的训练。When he was 7 years old, he started swimming and experiencedmuchtoughprofessionaltraining.(gothroughmuchhardtraining.)19 15岁的时候，他参加了2000年奥运会，并在200米蝶泳比赛中获得第五。At the age of 15, he attended the 2000 Olympic Games and wonthefifthplace in the 200-meter butterfly.20 在北京奥运会上，他实现了他的8枚金
16、牌梦，打破了7个世界纪录，创造了历史。At the Beijing Olympic Games, Phelps realizedhisdreamof wining8goldmedal and broke7worldrecords, which created the history.非限制性定语从句，指代前句1)oneofthebest/mostimportant是最重要的是最重要的/最佳之一最佳之一2)setagoodexamplefor为为作了好榜样作了好榜样3)amodelteacher/worker一个模范教师一个模范教师/员工员工4)berespectedbyeveryone被所有人
17、尊敬被所有人尊敬5)speak/thinkhighlyof高度评价高度评价6)behonoredas(anexcellentathlete)被誉为（优秀运动员）被誉为（优秀运动员）7)hishardworkbroughthimgreatsuccess他的努力工作为他带来了巨大的成功他的努力工作为他带来了巨大的成功5.Evaluation8)heistheprideofChina.他是中国的骄傲他是中国的骄傲9)Hisheroicstoryspreadalloverthecity他的英雄事迹传遍整个城市他的英雄事迹传遍整个城市10)makegreatcontributionsto为为作出巨大贡献
18、作出巨大贡献11)Consistency/Perseveranceisthekeytosuccess.坚持是成功的秘诀坚持是成功的秘诀12)befamous/knownasberegardedas因因著名著名/被称为被称为13)becomeaworldchampionatChampionships成为世界冠军成为世界冠军14)remembersbforever永垂不朽永垂不朽15)anewchapterofhistoryhasbeenturned将翻开历史新的一页将翻开历史新的一页16)LeiFenghasbeenpraisedforhiscommunistspirit.雷锋以他的共产主义精神
19、被赞扬雷锋以他的共产主义精神被赞扬1.A. 概况概况 :译：钟南山年出生在广州，他是中国最伟大的医生之一译：钟南山年出生在广州，他是中国最伟大的医生之一B.外貌外貌,性格性格:译：译：我的历史老师是个漂亮女人，她长着两只大眼睛，留着长发我的历史老师是个漂亮女人，她长着两只大眼睛，留着长发.C. 教育经历：教育经历：译：译： 毕业于中山大学外语系，她继续出国深造并获得了博士学位毕业于中山大学外语系，她继续出国深造并获得了博士学位D生平：生平：译：译： 他不仅对科学兴趣，而且对音乐也有天份。他不仅对科学兴趣，而且对音乐也有天份。译：他创造了一个新的世界游泳纪录，为中国队获得一面金牌。译：他创造了一
20、个新的世界游泳纪录，为中国队获得一面金牌。E：评价：评价译：他是中国最伟大的小说家之一，永远被人们所怀念。译：他是中国最伟大的小说家之一，永远被人们所怀念。1.A. 概况概况 :译：钟南山年出生在广州，他是中国最伟大的医生之一译：钟南山年出生在广州，他是中国最伟大的医生之一1)BorninGuangzhouin1941,ZhongNanshanisoneofthegreatestdoctorsinChina.2)ZhongNanshan,oneofthegreatestdoctorsinChina,wasborninGuangzhouin1941.B.外貌外貌,性格性格:译：译：我的历史老师是
21、个漂亮女人，她长着两只大眼睛，留着长发我的历史老师是个漂亮女人，她长着两只大眼睛，留着长发*语法，句法高分语法，句法高分tips尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺Myhistoryteacherisabeautifulwomanwithtwobigeyesandlonghair.巧用巧用with做定语做定语C. 教育经历：教育经历：1）Graduated from the department of English of Zhongshan University, she went on further education and rece
22、ived a doctors degree.D生平：生平：1）Not only is he interested in science, but also he has a gift for music.2）He set a new world record of swimming, which won a gold medal for China Team.注意尽量用非谓语动词注意尽量用非谓语动词,使文章精使文章精炼炼尽量用复合句倒装尽量用复合句倒装,非限定定语从句等，润色文章非限定定语从句等，润色文章E评估：评估：2）He is one of the greatest novelists
23、in China and will be always remembered as an outstanding man.注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组二、如何做到句式灵活？二、如何做到句式灵活？1)1)并列句并列句2)2)复合句复合句 ( (定语从句、状语从句、名词性从句定语从句、状语从句、名词性从句) )3)3)强调句型强调句型4)4)非谓语动词非谓语动词5)5)倒装句倒装句6)6)其他句型及结构其他句型及结构三、如何使文章连贯？三、如何使文章连贯？(过渡词的使用过渡词的使用)1)时间：时间：soon,then,suddenly,meanwhile
24、,before,after,earlier,inthemorning,afterwards,later,immediately,next,theotherday,nowadays,gradually2)空间空间:above,below,up,down,under,near,farfrom,infrontof,behind,beside,beyond,ontheright/left,around,inside,outside,oppositeto,nextto,ontopof,across.3)列举：列举：forexample,suchas,first(ly),second(ly),finall
25、y,besides,apartform,foronethingforanotherthing4)比较比较:like,unlike,onthecontrary,incontrastto,ontheonehandontheotherhand,than,notsoas,asas,while,similarly,theformer,thelatter,someothers,onetheother,comparedwith5)逻辑关系：逻辑关系：a.并列：并列：and,aswellas,alsob.转折：转折：but,however,yetc.递进：递进：besides,apartfrom,inaddi
26、tion,whatsmore,furthermore,moreover,tomakethingsworsed.原因：原因：because,becauseof,as,since,forthatreasone.结果：结果：so,therefore,thus,asaresultf.让步：让步：though,although,inspiteof假如你是记者，最近对在华外国志愿者进行采访时间：上周末对象：中国农村教书的志愿者卢安克主题：志愿者之路内容：1968年生于德国汉堡1990年夏天三个月的旅程让他深深爱上中国农村。从教过程：1999，在广西的一个农村成为志愿者，发现中国家长只重视成绩却忽视孩子的天
27、性和兴趣。教育理念：如果一个人只是为了别人的理念而生存，他就永远找不到自己的方向和力量。 Last week, I am very lucky to interview a foreign volunteer teaching in rural China, EckartLoewe, talking about his way of volunteering. Eckart Loewe, born in Hamburg, Germany in 1968, began to love the countryside of Guangxi after 3-month tour (3 months
28、tour)in China in the summer of 1990. Since1999,hehasbeen a volunteer teacher in a village there. During teaching in China, he finds that Chinese parents always pay attention to their childrens grades, but ignore their natures and interests. In his opinion, if a person lives only for others ideas, he will never find the direction and power of himself.
