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1、 人教版九年级人教版九年级下下写作素养提升练写作素养提升练 Unit 11 Sad movies make me cry. 人教版九年级人教版九年级下下美妙的音乐使人感到舒适;精彩的影片使人感到兴奋;阴沉的天气使人感到压抑我们的情绪受到周围事物的影响。同学们,对此你有什么看法?你有过这样的经历吗?写作任务写作任务不同的人对幸福有着不同的理解:有人认为身心健康是幸福,有人认为生活条件好是幸福,有人认为关系和谐是幸福请你以“How to Make Our Life Happier?”为题,从好的生活习惯、健康的饮食习惯、良好的身体状况和保持乐观(stay optimistic) 等方面写一篇英语短
2、文。要求:1. 请根据以上要点进行合理发挥;2. 词数:80 左右。思路点拨思路点拨谋篇布局:理清文章要素,构建文章结构。谋篇布局:理清文章要素,构建文章结构。提出观点 enough sleep, try not to stay up late.具体描述Healthy eating habitsright kinds of food; stay away from smoking and drinking.Good healthtake exercise, build up.Stay optimistic talk about your problems with.总结,提出希望hope, m
3、ake our life happier.思路点拨思路点拨遣词造句:就结构图中的要点和词语写出句子。遣词造句:就结构图中的要点和词语写出句子。1. 我们应该有充足的睡眠,不要熬夜。We should _.2. 我们最好吃健康食品,远离垃圾食品、吸烟、喝酒。Wed better _.get enough sleep and try not to stay up late have the right kinds of food and stay away from junk food, smoking and drinking思路点拨思路点拨3. 我们应该多锻炼来增强体质。We should _
4、.4. 当我们遇到不愉快的事情时,我们应该跟父母或朋友谈谈。When we meet unhappy things, we are supposed to _.take more exercise to build up our bodiestalk about them with our parents or friends思路点拨思路点拨巧妙衔接:利用连接词,使上下文意思连巧妙衔接:利用连接词,使上下文意思连贯。贯。利用 first, second, third, finally 可以使文章的层次十分清楚。佳句妙用:添加谚语、名言等精彩句子。佳句妙用:添加谚语、名言等精彩句子。Money
5、and fame dont always make people happy.金钱和名望并不总是使人快乐。思路点拨思路点拨 连句成连句成篇:篇:Different people have different ideas about happy life._思路点拨思路点拨【范文欣赏范文欣赏】Different people have different ideas about happy life. In my opinion, keeping healthy will make our life happier.After all, money and fame dont always ma
6、ke people happy.First, good living habits are necessary. We should get enough sleep and try not to stay up late. Second, we should have healthy eating habits. Wed better have the right kinds of food and stay away from junk food, smoking and drinking. Third, we should思路点拨思路点拨take more exercise to bui
7、ld up our bodies. Finally, its important to stay optimistic every day. When we meet unhappy things, we are supposed to talk about them with our parents or friends.I hope by doing these we can be healthier and we can make our life happier.写作实践写作实践假设你是李华,你的朋友刘明在学习、生活等方面遇到了一些问题和困难,所以他经常感到焦虑和郁闷。请你根据以下内容
8、给他发一封电子邮件,帮助他克服焦虑情绪,轻松、快乐地学习和生活。内容包括:1. 每个人都会有苦恼、焦虑的时候;2. 一定要告诉别人你的烦恼;3. 遇到困难时,与同学交流并和老师、家长及时沟通;4. 可就如何轻松、快乐地学习和生活进行适当发挥。写作实践写作实践要求:1. 不得逐句翻译,不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名;2. 语句连贯,词数80 左右。作文开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:焦虑的 anxious 与沟通 communicate with 变得轻松 get relaxed 解决问题 solve problems写作实践写作实践Dear Liu Ming,Eve
9、ryone may feel worried or sad sometimes._Yours,Li Hua写作实践写作实践_Dear Liu Ming,Everyone may feel worried or sad sometimes. Its all right to tell others when you are anxious. Its good to communicate with your classmates, teachers or parents when you are in trouble. Thus, you can solve the problems from
10、study or life easily. Listening to music or taking part in outdoor activities is another way to help you get relaxed.写作实践写作实践_Try to smile at yourself and never keep silent about your problems. Please do remember: Youre not alone. No matter how many difficulties we have, I believe all of them can be overcome in the end. Yours,Li Hua