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1、English Writing Part OneMade by Ye XiaolanMade by Ye Xiaolan 1谷风书苑I. Some Problems You Often Meet in Your Writing and the Way Out.1. Having too few vocabularies2. Do not know if the sentences are correct3. Translate the sentences in a Chinese way2谷风书苑The way out In order to write out good sentences
2、in English, you must try you best to learn the sentences you have learned before by heart. Read the texts again and again, use the sentences you have met in your text books, do not make a sentence in a Chinese way.3谷风书苑高考作文类型：高考作文类型： The types of compositions1. exposition 2. argumentation3. narratio
3、n4. description4谷风书苑影响高考英语书面表达得分的几个影响高考英语书面表达得分的几个因素因素1.语篇信息是否完整语篇信息是否完整2.行文是否连贯流畅，语言是否得体。行文是否连贯流畅，语言是否得体。3.是否使用高级词汇是否使用高级词汇4.是否使用复杂句是否使用复杂句5 .卷面整洁卷面整洁,书写工整书写工整5谷风书苑写作基本步骤：写作基本步骤：1.仔细审题，列举大纲。仔细审题，列举大纲。围绕要点，写出句子。围绕要点，写出句子。添加过渡，确保连贯。添加过渡，确保连贯。先求正确，再求灵活。先求正确，再求灵活。认真眷写，卷面整洁。认真眷写，卷面整洁。6谷风书苑现在正是春暖花开的春游时节。
4、你校学生以现在正是春暖花开的春游时节。你校学生以“高三学生要不高三学生要不要参加春游活动要参加春游活动”展开了讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，写一展开了讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，写一篇短文。篇短文。的学生认为的学生认为的学生认为的学生认为应该春游应该春游不应该春游不应该春游接触大自然，呼接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健吸新鲜空气，有利健康康高考临近，没有心高考临近，没有心情玩情玩活动是精神放松，活动是精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学大脑休息，有利于学习习春游耽误学习春游耽误学习7谷风书苑Introduction (topic)Body (supporting ideas)Conclusion8谷风书苑9
5、谷风书苑The outline of the writing:Conclusion paragraph: Introduction paragraph: Point 2BodyPoint 1supporting idea 1supporting idea 2supporting idea 1supporting idea 210谷风书苑Key words:1.introduction(topic):高三学生（senior 3 students）春游(go spring outing）讨论（discussion）2.body(supporting ideas): 接触自然（be close to
6、 nature） 呼吸新鲜空气（ breathe some fresh air ）精神放松（relax themselves ）大脑休息（rest their brains ）高考临近（ with college entrance examination drawing near ）没心情玩（dont feel like going ）耽误学习(waste the time)3.conclusion: in my opinion11谷风书苑Key words:中学生middle school students身体差in a poor state of healthIn bad conditio
7、n充足的睡眠enough sleep加强锻炼，增加户外活动take more exercise and do more outdoor activities定时吃饭少吃零食have three meals regularly,eat less non-staplefood.讲卫生12谷风书苑Form/develop the habit of hygiene13谷风书苑主题句的内容要明确具体，语言简洁，主题句的内容要明确具体，语言简洁，开门见山，句式力争多样性开门见山，句式力争多样性How will you start you passage?How will you start you pas
8、sage?问句：问句： 从句：从句： Introduction:（sample） Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. 14谷风书苑巧用过渡句，过渡词，理顺文章的逻辑巧用过渡句，过渡词，理顺文章的逻辑关系关系Pay special attention to the transition sentences:Opinions are divided on the question. 15谷风书苑The body partPoint1: 65%的人认为应该
9、春游（亮明观的人认为应该春游（亮明观点）点）Sentence pattern: Most of us (about 65%) hold the opinion that,since it tends to,which is unfavorable to Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing.16谷风书苑Reason1Reason1：接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空：接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健康气，有利健康Sentence pattern: They thin
10、k it good to do sth/ sth do good to sth In their opinion, it is of great benefit to do sth Eg:They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air 17谷风书苑Reason 2:活动是精神放松，大脑休活动是精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学习息，有利于学习 （注意：两个观点之间的连接）递进递进whats more ；besides ; moreover ; in addition；furthe
11、rmoreEg: they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic.18谷风书苑Conclusion: Conclusion: 小段总结，进一步亮小段总结，进一步亮明观点，前后呼应明观点，前后呼应。Eg: They think it will do good to their students.19谷风书苑Point 2:的学生认为不应该的学生认为不应该春游（亮明观点）春游（亮明观点）注意：使用过渡句，自然衔接句子和段落注意：使用过渡句，自然衔接句子和段
12、落（承上启下）（承上启下）Sentence pattern:However, others prefer toSome others have just the opposite opinion.On the other hand. Eg: On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea.20谷风书苑Reason 1:Reason 1:高考临近，没有心情玩高考临近，没有心情玩 Sentence pattern: They say/believe/hold the opinion that.Eg: They say that
13、with college entrance examination drawing near, they dont feel like going anywhere. 21谷风书苑Reason 2:春游耽误学习春游耽误学习 （注意：两个观点之间的连接）（注意：两个观点之间的连接）Eg:Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They cant afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies2
14、2谷风书苑 Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. Opinions are divided on the question. Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing. They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some
15、 fresh air and whats more, they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic. They think it will do good to their students. On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea. They say that with college entrance examination drawing near, they don
16、t feel like going anywhere. Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They cant afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies23谷风书苑 表示观点对比类写作套语表示观点对比类写作套语A.总起总起: Opinions are divided on this question.Different people hold different / opposit
17、e opinions. People have taken/adopted different attitudes towards People have different opinions on this problem. People take different views on this question.B.表达观点一表达观点一: of them hold the opinion that . of them are in favor of the idea that People who are for the idea think 24谷风书苑C.表达不同观点之间的衔接表达不同
18、观点之间的衔接:However, of them hold a different view. / of them hold the opposite opinion. People who are against it dont think so. However, every coin has two sides. Different from those., people think .On the other hand, people think .D.结尾常用套语结尾常用套语: In my opinion/Personally, As far as Im concerned, In
19、short/ in brief/ in a word, 25谷风书苑 Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. Opinions are divided on the question. Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing. They think it good for their health to be clo
20、se to nature and breathe some fresh air and whats more, they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic. They think it will do good to their students. On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea. They say that with college entrance exami
21、nation drawing near, they dont feel like going anywhere. Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They cant afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies.Opinions are divided on the question.Most students, about 65%, are for the idea thatOn
22、 the other hand, about 35% students areagainst the idea.26谷风书苑表列举说明的关联词表列举说明的关联词:Firstly/ First of all/ To begin with, . Secondly ThirdlyIn the first place In the second place In the third place Finally/ Last but not least/, .表示递进、强调的关联词表示递进、强调的关联词. Besides/Apart from/ Whats more/ In addition/ Furth
23、ermore/ Moreover/worse still/ to make matters worse 27谷风书苑 Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. Opinions are divided on the question. Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing. They think it good fo
24、r their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and whats more, they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic. They think it will do good to their students. On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea. They say that wit
25、h college entrance examination drawing near, they dont feel like going anywhere. Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They cant afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies.Opinions are divided on the question.Most students, about 65%,
26、 are for the idea thatOn the other hand, about 35% students areagainst the idea.whats more,Besides28谷风书苑A A、运用高级词汇或短语、运用高级词汇或短语B B、增加形容词或副词、增加形容词或副词C C、灵活运用各种句型、灵活运用各种句型 亮点点拨亮点点拨29谷风书苑 Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. Opinions are divided on
27、the question. Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing. They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and whats more, they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energeti
28、c. They think it will do good to their students. On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea. They say that with college entrance examination drawing near, they dont feel like going anywhere. Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They cant afford the ti
29、me. They think they should fix their attention on their studies.be close toenergeticfeellike goingaffordfix theirattention onheatedfresh30谷风书苑 Notes to your writing1. Use direct, simple and short sentence e.g. It is frequently her custom to come and see us on Sunday. She frequently comes to see us o
30、n Sunday. It is her custom to come and see us on Sunday.2. Avoid too many pronouns e.g. Tom and Rose are classmate. He likes swimming, while she likes skating. One day she and he went out together, she talked much but he said no words.31谷风书苑3. Use more active voice sentences and less passive voice s
31、entences e.g. English is being learned by us. The text is read every day. We are learning English, and we read the text every day. 4. Try to take in the sentence patterns and idioms, do not use too many slang words. Ive walked so much today my dogs are really killing me. Ive walked so much today tha
32、t my feet are really hurt.32谷风书苑5. Make use of quotations properly “Never too old to learn”, we have so much to learn in the future.6. Avoid the short form of the words I dont know. (informal) I do not know. (formal) 7. When practice writing, use double space for your easy correcting. I was much dis
33、appointed not to be able to went to the jazz concert on last Friday. I was very disappointed not to be able to go to the jazz concert last Friday.33谷风书苑8. Use sentence patterns and idioms e.g. There is (are) . China has a large number of beautiful places. There are a large number of beautiful places in China. 34谷风书苑Homework: Finish and improve your composition and hand it in tomorrow.35谷风书苑
