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1、How to keep healthyHow to keep healthy写作课写作课 大王一中大王一中 陈娥陈娥作文题目： 健康一直是人们关注的问题，我校要举行以“关爱健康 ”为题的主题班会，请根据以下写作要求写一篇演讲稿，谈谈你的看法。 要求:1.中心明确。 2.内容可适当拓展； 3.80词左右（文章开头和结尾已给出，但不计入词数）。 Boys and girls,_ Thank you.Five stepsthe ways Pre-writing(15minutes) Pre-writing(15minutes) First,_Second,_Third,_Finally,_We sh
2、ould have healthy eating habits.be happy.Step2 列We should play sports.We should have healthy living habits.how to keep healthy First,healthy eating habits. Secend, play sports. Third, healthy living habits. Fourth,beFourth,be happy. happy. M Music makes people happy.eat fruit and vegetables drink wa
3、ter and milk dont eat junk food warm up before you exercise stay safe when you exercisedont work too hard.wash hands,brush teeth,take showers,change colthes keep the air freshkeep away from step 3加加 how to keep healthy Drink a lot of water.fruit and vegetablesWhat should we eat?Drink a glass of milk
4、.An apple a day keeps the doctor away.junk foodjunk drinksWe had better not havebe bad forWemustdosports.Wemustdosports.running eye exercisesbe good forhealthylivinghabitshealthylivinghabitswash handsbrush our teethWe should take showers change our clothes oftenkeep the air fresh.keep away from crow
5、ded places.stayawayfromsay no toHappiness is the best medicine.Care killed the cat.忧虑伤身忧虑伤身a nice heada strong bodyThe first wealth is health.Do you know how to keep healthy?Step4 连连while -writing(15minutes) while -writing(15minutes) skill threeHealth is happiness. 健康就是幸福健康就是幸福Good health is over we
6、alth. 健康胜过财富健康胜过财富Health is better than wealth. 健康胜过财富健康胜过财富The first wealth is health. 健康是最大的财富健康是最大的财富Without health ,life is lifeless. 没有健康，生活就无趣。没有健康，生活就无趣。适当运用名言或俗语适当运用名言或俗语As the proverb saysa nice heada strong bodyThe first wealth is health.Do you know how to keep healthy?a nice tailHealth is
7、 happiness.Lets enjoy healthy life together!step5美美Lets do it now.Wish you healthy.Lets take action right now.Dont put it off! Become a healthy person!I hope you all have a healthy life!Lets enjoy healthy life together! Boys and girls, Im very glad to share my ideas. I think the first wealth is heal
8、th.Do you know how to keep healthy? First,we should have healthy eating habits. we need to eat more fruit and vegetables and drink a lot of water. I usually have an apple everyday .As we know ,an apple a day keeps the doctor away.Second, we must do sports . Life is movement. In my opion,running is a
9、 good way to keep fit. Its good for our legs ,heart and lungs.Third,we should have healthy living habits.we should wash hands before meals.we should brush our teeth twice a day.whats more,we should take showers often and change clothes often. Finally, happiness is important for us.Remeber,be happy t
10、o be healthy. In short, health is happiness. Lets enjoy healthy life together! Thank you. 适当运用名言或俗语适当运用名言或俗语Health is happiness.Health is better than wealth.The first wealth is health.Without health ,life is lifeless.Water is the king of the food.Diet cures more than the docter.药补不如食补When the sun co
11、mes in,the docter goes out.The windows open more will keep the doctor from the door.常开窗户，医生不近门Care killed the cat.忧虑伤身A light heart lives long. 无忧者长寿Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy,wealthy and wise.早睡早起，聪明、富裕，身体好As the proverb says:Chek your composition in groups Chek your composi
12、tion in groups 1.单词拼写错误每个扣单词拼写错误每个扣0.5分分2.主谓搭配错误每处扣主谓搭配错误每处扣0.5分分3.语序有误，每处扣语序有误，每处扣0.5分分4.时态运用有误每处扣时态运用有误每处扣0.5分分Post-writing(5minutes)Post-writing(5minutes)AssessmentAssessment： 13-15 13-15分分_ _ 10-12 10-12分分_ 10 10分以下分以下_典型病例名词的单复数问题主谓一致问题时态和语态问题Chinglish问题行文的逻辑性问题词类错用名词单复数问题1.Junk food is bad for
13、 our body. Junk food is bad for our bodies.2.Doing eye exercise is good for our eye. Doing eye exercises is good for our eyes.3.We should take shower often. We should take showers often.4.Here are some advices. Here is some advice.词类错用1.Its important to keep health. Its important to keep healthy.2.Running is good for your healthy. Running is good for your health.3.Happy is the best medicine. Happpiness is the best medicine.4.Do sports is a good way to keep fit. Doing sports is a good way to keep fit. 审审列列加加连连美美 HomeworkHow to prevent the fluHow to prevent the flu
