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1、四级写作冲刺班ppt课件Stillwatersrundeep.流静水深流静水深,人静心深人静心深Wherethereislife,thereishope。有生命必有希望。有生命必有希望新浪微博：石雷鹏老师V新浪博客：http:/ the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbellow:1.一次性塑料袋曾被广泛地使用2.造成的问题3.限制使用的意义审题注意三个事项：1.英文指令：体裁+话题2.汉语提纲：英汉结合猜测生词3.字数：140-160词1.2 写作话题写作

2、话题2011-06:Online Shopping2010-12:How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?2010-06:Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling2009-12:Creating a Green Campus2009-06:Free Admission to Museums2008-12:Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags2008-06: Recreational Activities2007-12: What Electi

3、ves to Choose2007-06: Welcome to Our Club2006-12: On Spring Festival Gala 四级写作话题总结：1.非最热点话题2.四级必考话题：社会话题和大学生（教育）话题网络购物、网络购物、博物馆、塑博物馆、塑料袋、春晚料袋、春晚家长溺爱、单词拼写、家长溺爱、单词拼写、绿色校园、选修课、大绿色校园、选修课、大学生俱乐部学生俱乐部1.3作文类型论说文：9次应用文：1次图表作文：0次1.4写作测试的特殊性以TOEFL为例：环境类话题a.在你家周围建一个工厂，你是否同意？b.你认为科学家对人类的贡献大还是艺术家对人类的贡献大？c.你的职业梦想

4、是什么？d.如果让你发明一样机器，你会选择什么？e.如果你有一笔钱，你会用它来做什么？再以四级考试为例：题目：OnEnglishLearning提纲：1.英语学习很重要2.英语者所面临的困难3.如何学好英语Incontemporaryworld,Englishlearninghasgainedgreatpopularityanditisofgreatsignificance.(主题句)Firstly,basedonasurvey,amajorityoftouristsacknowledgethattheyprefertospeakEnglishwhentravelingaroundthewor

5、ld.(调查法表述)Secondly,comparedwiththepoorEnglishspeakers,goodEnglish-speakersaresuperiorinmanyways.(比较模板句式)However,Englishlearnersmayhaveavarietyofdifficultiesortroublesintheirlearning.(主题句)Forexample,itcanbenoticedthatalargenumberofstudentshavedifficultymemorizingwords.Sometimes,itisdifficultforthemto

6、understandtherulesofgrammar.Inaddition,thoughsomearegoodatreadingorwriting,theycannotexpressthemselvesfreelyinEnglish.Then,howtogetagoodcommandof(学好)thislanguage?Iamconvincedthatpracticemakesperfect.Onlypracticecanenableonetospeakandwritefluently.Anditisalsothroughpracticethatonecanmastertherulesofg

7、rammarandrememberwords,andthereisnootherway.(强调句式）以上范文灵活改编可以写如下作文1992-6 ：How I Overcame my Difficulties in Learning English1.你在英语学习中有哪些困难?2.你是如何克服这些困难的?1993-61.我最喜爱的电视(或无线电)节目是.2.这类节目的内容和特点3.我喜欢它的原因1994-61.人们对职业各有不同的理想2.我理想的职业是什么3.我怎样为我理想的职业做准备1997-11.怎样理解“熟能生巧”?2.例如：在英语学习中3.又如2000-1 ：How I Finance

8、My College Education1.上大学的费用(tuitionandfees)可以通过多种途径解决2.哪种途径适合于我(说明理由)2000-6：Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary1.很多人认为有必要举行英语口语考试，理由是2.也有人持不同意见.3.我的看法和打算2003.6：1.简单叙述一下这位同学生病(或受伤)的情况2.同学、老师和我是如何帮助他/她的3.人与人之间的这种相互关爱给我的感受是2003.121.建议报考的专业及理由2.报考该专业的基本条件3.应当如何备考2005.11.你认为自己具备了什么条件(能力、性格、爱好等)可以胜任学生会

9、主席的工作2.如果当选,你将为本校同学做些什么2005年6月1.向老师致以节日祝贺。2.从一件难忘的事回忆老师的教诲和无私的奉献。3.我如何回报老师的关爱2006-061.校学生会将组织一次暑期志愿者活动，现招募志愿者。2.本次志愿者活动的目的，内容、安排等。3.报名条件及联系方式2007年年6月：月：欢迎辞，Welcometoourclub1.表达你的欢迎；2.对你们俱乐部作一个简要介绍2007年年12月月1.各大学开设了各种各样的选修课2.学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课3.以你自己为例2010年6月：Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling1.

10、如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写。2.出现这种情况的原因。3.如何避免这一问题请记住内容上：请记住内容上：熟悉什么熟悉什么就写什么就写什么神马内容你最熟悉？赠言：尽最大努力（Tryyourutmost）得最大成功（Achievegreatersuccess）冲刺总体方略：背写：单词标点一个都不错。第二章、冲刺提分方略2.1功能段落写作法概论冲刺阶段，背诵模板不是最有效的方法，因为模板的写作思路是固定的，然而很多时候试题的命题思路可能与所背模板思路不同。但是，无论四级写作话题如何变化，一般都对应三个或两个汉语提纲。只要按提纲要求去写相应的内容段落，就做到了紧扣主题。历年写作提纲可以总结为六种功

11、能段落。是以，提出“功能段落写作法”的冲刺提分方略。因此，掌握好六种功能段落，也就掌握了所有作文的写作。2.2功能段落破解写作2011-06Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Online Shopping. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:1现在网上购物已成为一种时尚2网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题3我的建议2010-12Directi

12、ons：Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledHow Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切2.为了让孩子独立,父母应该2010-06Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicofDue Attention S

13、hould Be Given To Spelling.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:1.如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写2.出现这种情况的原因3.为了改变这种状况，我认为2009-12Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicofCreating a Green Campus.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:1.建设绿

14、色校园很重要2.绿色校园不仅指绿色的环境3.为了建设绿色校园，我们应该2009-06Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minute to write a short essay on the topic of Free Admission to Museums. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given bellow:1.越来越多的博物馆免费对外开放的目的是什么？2.也会带来一些问题3.你的看法？2008-12Directions: For this p

15、art, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.1.一次性塑料袋的使用2.使用一次性塑料袋带来的问题3.限制一次性塑料袋的意义2008-06Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minute to write a short essay

16、on the topic of Recreational Activities. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given bellow:1.娱乐活动多种多样，2.娱乐可能使人们受益，也可能有危害性，3.作为大学生，我的看法。六种功能段落总结建议建议观点（利弊）观点（利弊）意义（利）意义（利）现象现象危害（弊）危害（弊）原因原因篇章层面：六种功能段落的排列组合1.问题解决型：2010年6月、2010年12月2.观点对比型（利弊分析）：2011年6月3.现象阐述型：2009年12月2.3观点对比型作文必背观点对

17、比型作文必背段落组成：现象+利弊+建议2011-06:OnlineShopping1现在网上购物已成为一种时尚2网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题3我的建议1现在网上购物已成为一种时尚现象描述段：思路：引出话题+具体描述Incontemporarysociety,ithasbecomeaprevalenttrendforindividuals topurchasevariousgoodsfromtheInternet.Inthemeanwhile,anincreasingnumberofpeoplefinditconvenientandinexpensivetodoso.Takingalook

18、around,wecanfindagreatmanyshoppingwebsites:Taobao,DangdangandAmazon.2网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题（利）Anumberofpeoplefavoronlineshopping.Intheireyes,withoutit,itisimpossibleforthemtostayathomeandgettheirfavoriteclothes,booksandsoon.Inaddition,theyarguethatshoppingonlinecanhelpthemexpandtheirscopeofshoppingchoice

19、sandenrichtheirlife.(下页续)（接上页）(弊)Evenso,othersholdadifferentviewthatonlineshoppingcarriessomerisks.Firstly,itcallsfortime,energyandmoneytoshoponline;however,thequalityofgoodsisnotalwaysassatisfactoryasexpected.Besides,whatworriesmanyshoppersisthattheirprivateinformationmaybestolenandmisused.3我的建议（主题

20、句）Asacustomer,Iamconvincedthattherearevariouswaysinwhichwecanenhanceonlineshopping.（建议1）First,itisessentialthatregulationsshouldbeworkedoutandenforcedtoregulatetheonlinetransactions.（建议2）Then,weshouldeducate,advocateandencourageourfriends,classmates,andacquaintancestobealertwhenshoppingonline.（展望未来）

21、Ifwetryourutmosttodoso,thefutureofshoppingonlinewillbepromising,hopefulandrosy.完美写作冲刺法：第一步：背写：思路+表达第二步：翻译：英译汉汉译英对比第三步：限时训练：写改对比2.4 问题解决型必背范文Directions：Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledHow Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowing

22、theoutlinegivenbelow.1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切2.为了让孩子独立,父母应该两个提纲三个提纲三个功能段落1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切2.该现象产生原因3.为了让孩子独立,父母应该首段现象描述：1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切(主题句)Incontemporarysociety,ithasbecomeatrendformanyparentstodoeverythingfortheirkids:food,clothes,tuition,andevenmarriage.(事实描述)Inthemeanwhile,anincreasingnumberofchildrenfindi

23、tdifficultortroublesometoliveontheirownwithoutparents.(举例描述)Takingalookaround,wecanfindagreatmanyparentsandchildrenlikethis.现象、原因、建议、危害、利弊分析逻:一个中心，四个基本点：以孩子（学生、事件）为中心，以家长（老师、相关人员）、家庭（学校、管理机构）、社会、法规（道德意识）为基本点孩子家家长社社会会法法规（道德意（道德意识）家庭家庭学生老老师社社会会法法规（道德意（道德意识）学学校校网络购物买方方:顾客客社社会会法法规（道德意（道德意识）卖方方2.该现象产生原因(

24、主题句)Itisevidentthatthecausesofthisphenomenonisdiverse.(原因1：家庭)Tobeginwith,thechangeoffamilystructureistherootcause.(原因1体现)Atypicalexampleofthisisthatinmostfamilies,thereisonlyonechildwhoislovedbynotonlyparents,butalsograndparents.(原因2)Inaddition,theincorrectsenseofparentsloveconstitutesanothermajorc

25、ause.(原因2体现)Tobespecific,asparents,theyareconvincedthatlovingmeansgivingchildrenalltheywant.万能原因补充：1.Inaddition,socialprejudice/ignorance/emphasis/concernplaysacriticalroleinthismatter/issue.2.Furthermore,therelatedpolicybeingcarriedoutinChina(doesnot)enables_toattachimportanceto_.3.为了让孩子独立,父母应该(主题句

26、)Therearevariouswaysinwhichparentscanhelptheirteenagerstobeindependent.(建议1)First,itissuggestedthatparentsshouldstrengthentheawarenessoflovingchildrenappropriately.(建议2)Then,theyshouldeducate,advocateandencouragetheirkidstodealwiththeirownproblemsindependentlyinlifeandstudy.(展望未来)Ifallparentscantryt

27、heirutmosttodoso,thefutureofournextgenerationwillbehopeful,promisingandrosy.2.5 现象阐述型范文(参考)Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicofCreating a Green Campus.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:1.建设绿色校园很重要（意义段：利）2.绿色校园不仅指绿色的环境（现象段：描述）3.为了建设绿色校园，

28、我们应该（建议段）Creating a Green Campus1.建设绿色校园很重要（意义段：利）Theideaof“GreenLife”hasgainedwidepopularityamongChinesepeople,anditisofgreatsignificanceforuniversitiestobuildgreencampuses.Withoutgreenenvironment,itisimpossibleforcollegestudentstohaveanenjoyablelifeintheIvoryTower.Inaddition,greencampusmaybroaden/

29、consolidatestudentsawarenessofenvironmentalprotection.2. 绿色校园不仅指绿色的环境（现象段：描述）主题句：Inadditiontothegreenenvironment,greencampusesalsorefertostudentsbehaviorsorethics.However,(举例)takingalookaround,wecanfindagreatmanyexamplesofinappropriatebehaviors：(下页续)（接上页）(排比)somediscardlitterseverywhere;somestudents

30、cheatintests;somewastefoodoncanteens;somearealwayslateforclasses;someguysevenwatchpornographicorviolentfilmsindorms.Infact,ithasbecomeatrendformanystudentstoturnablindeyetotheirownbadacts.3. 为了建设绿色校园，我们应该（建议段）(主题句)Accordingly,itisimperativeforustotakemeasurestomaintaingreencampuses.(建议1法规)First,itis

31、essentialthatregulationsshouldbeworkedouttobanthesenegativebehaviors.(建议2发动群众)Then,weshouldeducate,advocateandencourageourclassmates,friendsandacquaintancestorefusealluncivilizedacts.(未来展望)Ifwetryourbesttodoso,thefutureofourcollegelifewillbehopeful,promisingandrosy.2.6 高分冲刺细节1.内容相关（按照提纲要求、涵盖要点信息）2.结

32、构清晰（新闻联播三段论：主题句+拓展句）3.语言精彩（通顺、连贯、句子结构词多变）2.7语言第一位通顺、连贯、句子结构词多变2.7.1连贯：1)句子衔接：and,but,so;however,nonethelessTheideaof“GreenLife”hasgainedwidepopularityamongChinesepeople.Itisofgreatsignificanceforuniversitiestobuildgreencampuses.Theideaof“GreenLife”hasgainedwidepopularityamongChinesepeople,anditisofg

33、reatsignificanceforuniversitiestobuildgreencampuses.2) 逻辑衔接：起承转合起：Incontemporarysociety,onmanycampuses,currently,first,tobeginwith,firstandforemost,firstofall承：Second,Third,Last,Next,Then,finally,meanwhile,inaddition,furthermore,besides,inthefirst/secondplace,foronething,foranother,lastbutnottheleas

34、t转：However,but,onthecontrary,Ontheotherhand,yet,although,bycontrast,while,whereas,instead,nevertheless,otherwise合：（因此)Asaresult,Therefore,Thus,hence,accordingly,consequently,asconsequence,asaresult;(总之)：Inaword,Inshort,onthewhole,inconclusion,tosumup,inbrief,insummary,toconclude,tosummarize,中英文文篇章结构

35、：以汉语四六级阅读为例天涯远不远？不远！人就在天涯，天涯怎么会远？明月是什么颜色？是蓝的，就像海一样蓝，一样深，一样忧郁。明月在那？就在他的心，他的心就是明月。题目：概括本段中心思想2.7.2遣词广度：avarietyof1）同义词2）同根词3）范畴词：上义词下义词相关词4）代词替换深度：弃用第一反应词academicexceedingly,extremely,intensely替换veryanarmyof/agreatmany/ahostof替换alotofAdvancement替换developmentpositive,favorable,promising(有希望的),perfect,p

36、leasurable,excellent,outstanding,superior替换goodgiveriseto,leadto,resultin,trigger替换cause.harbortheideathat,taketheattitudethat,holdtheviewthat,替think(因为是书面语,所以要加that)beneficial,rewarding替换helpful,bearinmindthat替换rememberenjoy,possess替换haveshopper,client,consumer,purchaser,替换customer2.7.2造句被动句状语从句定语从

37、句名词从句同位语：身份Itis句式设问强调句式排比V-ing状语2.8考场写作时间安排考场写作时间安排总计：30分钟1.审题:识别提纲功能2-3分钟2.以关键词形式打草稿3-4分钟3.正文写作18-20分钟4.检查修正2-3分钟：单复数、时态、语态、拼写2. 以关键词形式打草稿以关键词形式打草稿3-4 分钟分钟例题：OnTVShows1.时下电视真人秀（如超级女声、达人秀）非常受欢迎2.有人认为这类节目很好，可以展现自己，分享阅历，有人反对3.我的看法1.时下电视真人秀（如超级女声、达人秀）非常受欢迎关键词：trend,examplesTrendIncontemporarysociety,it

38、hasbecomeatrendformanyTVchannelstoholdavarietyofTVtalentshows.ExamplesTakingalookaround,wecanfindahostofexampleslikethis:SuperGirls,ChinasGotTalentandsoon.第三章、冲刺话题预测3.1 志愿者活动志愿者活动Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minute to write a short essay on the topic of On Volunteering. You should wr

39、ite at least 120 words following the outline given bellow:1.越来越多的人从事志愿者工作2.志愿者工作对需要帮助的人和社会都有好处，对志愿者自身也有好处3.我的看法。首段现象描述：Incontemporarysociety,ithasbecomeaprevalenttrendforChinesepeople,especiallytheyoungsters,totakepartinvariousvoluntaryactivities.Taking/Turningalookaround,wecanfindagreatmanyvoluntar

40、yactions:voluntaryteachers,OlympicGamesvolunteersandsoon.志愿者活动意义：Apparentlyenough,itisofgreatimportance/significance/value/benefitsforyoungpeopletogetinvolvedinsocialvoluntaryservices.First,theseactivitieswilldefinitelyenhancetheover-alldevelopmentoftheharmonioussociety.Second,volunteerscanenrichthe

41、irsocialexperienceandbroadentheirvision/horizoninthisprocess.Last,withoutvolunteers,itisimpossibleforpeoplewhoareinneedtogetaid/assistancetimely.Infact,peopleinmountingnumbershavecometorealizethesignificanceofvolunteers. 我的看法：Asacollegestudent,Iamfirmlyconvincedthatallpeopleareadvisabletoparticipate

42、involuntaryactivities.Firstly,itisessentialthatlaws/regulations/rulesshouldbemade/workedouttosupportvolunteers.Secondly,weshouldadvocate,educateandencourageourfriends,classmates,andacquaintancestooffervoluntaryservicestosociety.Ifwetryourutmosttodoso,thefutureofoursocietywillbepromising,hopefulandro

43、sy.3.2电视选秀Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minute to write a short essay on the topic of On TV Shows. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given bellow:1.时下电视真人秀（如超级女声、达人秀）非常受欢迎2.有人认为这类节目很好，可以展现自己，分享阅历，有人反对3.我的看法首段：描述现象Incontemporarysociety,TVtalentshowshavegainedwi

44、depopularityamongaudience,anditishasbecomeatrendformanyTVchannelstoholdsuchprograms.Typicalexamplesinclude:SuperGirls,ChinasGotTalentandtheforth.Thousandsofpeopleareattractedtoparticipateinsuchshows.2. 有人认为这类节目很好，可以展现自己，分享阅历，有人反对 利弊分析二段：前半段（利）：(设问)Whyareagreatmanypeopleinterestedinsuchprograms?Suppo

45、rtersharborthisidea:(排比)theseshowsbroadentheiropportunitiestoenrichtheirlife,tosharetheirexperienceandtoshowtheirspecialty.后半段（弊）：Evenso,othersholdadifferentviewthatTVshowscarrysomedoubts.Theycriticizethem,arguingthattheseshowsmeanawasteoftime,moneyandenergy.Inaddition,whatworriesmanyparentsisthatth

46、eirchildrenstudymaybedisturbedbytheseshows,sincekidsoftenpourmuchattentiononthem.3. 我的看法观点：支持=利；反对=弊Byandlarge,theadvantagesderivedfromtheseshowsfaroutweighthedisadvantages.SincetheybringhappinesstothoseparticipantsandmostoftheTVaudience,theyareexpectedtobecontinued.3. 我的看法观点：中立型Obviously,TVshows,li

47、keanythingelse,havemorethanoneside.Whiletheyareindispensableforsomeaudience,theyalsoresultinsomeproblems.Itisonlyhopedthatwe,whiletakingfulladvantageofTVshows,canfindsatisfactorysolutionstotheproblems.3.3扶不起的社会Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minute to write a short essay on the topic of

48、 To Help or Not to Help?. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given bellow:1.帮助别人是一种美德2.但是帮助陌生人容易使自己陷入麻烦3.我的看法1. 帮助别人是种美德In contemporary society, it should be avirtueforindividualstoofferhelptothosewhoareinneed.Without thismorality,it is impossible forthesocietytobenamed“Harmon

49、y”.Apparently enough, it is of great importance/ significance/ value/ benefits for people tohelpeachother,especiallyindifficulties.2.有时帮助陌生人容易使自己陷入麻烦However, a host of people find it hard or troublesome toofferhelpstostrangers.We have been frequently informed that（A typical example is that）awarmhear

50、tedman-wholendsahandtoanoldladygetshimselfintrouble.(Consequently, based on a recent report, a minority of people admit thattheyarenotwillingtoofferaidwhentheoldmanorwomanfallsdownonstreet.)Sincehelpingothersmaytriggertrouble,afewpeoplerefusetoofferhelptimely.And if we let/allow this situation to co

51、ntinue as it is now, we would not know wherecivilizedsocietywill be in the forthcoming future.3. 我的看法(或建议)Ascollegestudents,weshouldbearinmindthisvirtue.However,itisessentialthatregulationsshouldbeworkedouttosupportthisvirtue.Inaddition,itissuggestedthatweshouldofferaidtostrangersinasafeway,suchasdi

52、aling12oor110forhelp.(后续)3. 我的看法(或建议)(接前)Then,weshouldeducate,advocateandencourageourclassmates,friendsandacquaintancestobebothwarmheartedandalert.Ifwetryourutmosttodoso,thefutureofoursociety/civilizationwillbepromising,hopefulandrosy.四级翻译冲刺四级翻译冲刺主讲教师：石雷鹏主讲教师：石雷鹏四级翻译冲刺四级翻译冲刺1.命题形式特点2.评分细则展示3.快速破题攻略4

53、.考点枚举解析1.命题形式1.1命题形式时间5分钟，5道题全部为汉译英，占5%，共36分。在答题卡2上作答。句长为15至30个词，其中有部分英语词汇给出,需添入的部分也只有3到8个单词，考生只需按照英文句子意思把汉语部分翻译成英文。2.考题特点考点的生活化考点的重复性考点的陷阱性考点的生活化2007-06：89.Becauseoftheleginjury,theathlete_(决定退出比赛).答案：decidedtoquitthematch2010-06:91.Theyrequestedthat_(我借的书还回图书馆)bynextFriday.答案：booksIborrowed(should

54、)bereturnedtothelibraryI(should)returnthebookIborrowedtothelibrary考题的重复性：考点直接重复2006-06：87.Havingspentsometimeinthecity,hehadnotrouble_(找到去历史博物馆的路).答案：findingtheway/roadtotheHistoryMuseum.2010-06:87.Becauseofthenoiseoutside,Nancyhadgreatdifficulty_(集中注意力在实验上).答案：(in)concentratingontheexperiment/focus

55、ingherattentionontheexperiment.2009-06:87.Soonafterhetransferredtothenewschool,Alifoundthathehad(很难跟上班里的同学)inmathandEnglish.答案：difficulty(in)catchingupwithhisclassmates考题的重复性：考点与题干重复07-12:89.Iamgoingtopursuethiscourse,（无论我要作出什么样的牺牲）.2009-12:88.Despitethehardshipheencountered,Marknever_(放弃对知识的追求).201

56、0-06:91.The16-year-oldgirldecidedtotravelabroadonherowndespite_(她父母的强烈反对).考点的陷阱性2007-65.Pleasecomehereattentomorrowmorning_(如果你方便的话).ifyouareconvenientforyou()答案：ifitisconvenientforyou应对策略：切忌逐字翻译2011-0690.Georgecalledhisbossfromtheairportbutit_(接电话的却是他的助手).答案：washisassistantwhoansweredthephone.2.评分细

57、则例1：Bycontrast,Americanmothersweremorelikely_(把孩子的成功归因于)naturaltalent.1整体内容和语言均正确，满分满分。2结构正确，但整体意思不确切、信息不全或用词不当，得一半分值一半分值。3整体意思正确但语言有错误，得一半分值一半分值。4整体意思完全错误，即使结构正确也不得分。5大小写错误及标点符号忽略不计。该题目有两个固定搭配考点：1)belikelytodosth;2)oweto/attributeto答案：toattribute/owetheirchildrenssuccessto3. 快速破题攻略第一步：浏览句子、判定考点第二步：

58、判定动词、切块翻译第三步：结构组合、检查修正关注三方面：关注三方面：词性词性、单复数、动词（时态、语态、语气）4. 考点枚举解析宏观两大考点：核心语法固定搭配（词汇）核心语法被动、从句知识（名从、状从、被动、从句知识（名从、状从、定从）、倒装结构、虚拟语气、定从）、倒装结构、虚拟语气、比较结构比较结构、强调结构强调结构实例1：2010-690Itissuggestedthattheairconditioner_(要安装在窗户旁).【考点剖析】本题是典型的语法题目。重点考查考生对虚拟语气和被动的掌握。(should)befixed/installedbythewindow例2：(大纲样题)2.N

59、otonly_(他向我收费过高),buthedidntdoagoodrepairjobeither.didhechargemetoomuchdidheoverchargeme语法考点：1.被动2006-0691.Thoughaskilledworker,_(他被公司解雇了)lastweekbecauseoftheeconomiccrisis.第一步：由Thoughaskilledworker,lastweekbecauseoftheeconomiccrisis.可以推出，划线处应该补全完整主句，时态由lastweek确定为一般过去时态。第二步：1.切块翻译：“解雇”=befired(注意被动)

60、；“他”=he；“公司”=company2.重新组合：正确答案：hewasfiredbythecompanyfiredismiss2008-0687.Oureffortswillpayoffiftheresultsoftheresearch_(能应用于新技术的开发).考点：固定搭配和被动语态“applyto”canbeappliedtothedevelopmentofthenewtechnology2010-1288.Themagnificentmuseum_(据说建成于)aboutahundredyearsago.【结构分析】主语为thesignificantmuseum，谓语（据说建成于）

61、aboutahundredyearsago为时间状语。【考点】被动语态:主语museum与动词build之间为被动关系;且bulid这一动作发生在过去。据说besaidto；besaidto+动词不定式的完成时，表示不定式表示的动作已经完成。【答案】：issaidtohavebeenbuilt语法考点：2.定语从句定从翻译步骤：a.写出正确简单句，并确定中心话题(名词)b.中心话题后加入定从，关系词：who/whose/which/where/when；若关系词在从句中做宾语，可省略。2007-0688.ThepreventionandtreatmentofAIDSis_(我们可以合作的领域)

62、.第一步：浏览句子，判定考点：定语从句第二步：1.补充完成主句，注意单复数.thefield,2.完成定语从句写作：判定动词,切块翻译答案：thefieldwherewecancooperate或者：thefieldinwhichwecancooperate2010-1291.Theyrequestedthat_(我借的书还回图书馆)bynextFriday.books(thatIborrowed)shouldbereturnedtothelibrary语法考点：3.名词性从句a.宾语从句b.主语从句c.表语从句d.同位语从句宾语从句2007-1291.ManyAmericansliveonc

63、redit,andtheirqualityoflife_（是用他们能够借到多少来衡量的），nothowmuchtheycanearn.衡量：measure错误答案：ismeasuredbyhowmuchcantheyborrow.正确答案ismeasuredbyhowmuchtheycanborrow.b.主语从句2008-12：88.(大多数父母所关心的)isprovidingthebesteducationpossiblefortheirchildren.所字结构=what从句（what在从句中作宾语）Whatmostparentsareconcerned about2009-0690.(

64、很多人所没有意识到的)isthatSimonisaloverofsports.andfootballinparticular.90.Whatmanypeopledontrealize使字结构=what从句（what在从句中做主语）写作常用句式：Ithinkthat=whatconvincesmeisthat2010-1290._(给游客印象最深的)wasthefriendlinessandwarmthofthelocalpeople.Whatimpressedtouriststhemost语法考点：4.状语从句状语从句：让步、时间、条件、目的、原因、地点、结果、方式和比较小重点：让步状语从句a

65、. no matter + what/ who/ when/ where/how what/ who/ when/ where/ how + ever区分：No matter what VS whateverNomatterwhat:只能充当状语Whatever:引导名词性从句或状语从句简单办法：有逗号=nomatterwhat无逗号=whatever2007-1289.Iamgoingtopursuethiscourse,_（无论我要作出什么样的牺牲）.参考答案：nomatterwhatkindofsacrificeIhavetomake2008-689.Leavingonesjob,_(不

66、管是什么工作),isadifficultchange,evenforthosewholookforwardtoretiring.89.Leavingonesjob,_(不管是什么工作),isadifficultchange,evenforthosewholookforwardtoretiring.【解析】第一步：待译内容是让步状语(从句)。“不管是什么”可以译作nomatterwhat或whatever。第二步：切块（翻译）组合：nomatterwhatjobitisnomatterwhatthejobiswhateverjobitis2(无论谁在这抽烟)willbepunished.(主语从

67、句)答案：Whoeversmokeshere（不能用nomatterwho）语法考点：5.倒装在英语中在英语中,主语和谓语有两种顺序主语和谓语有两种顺序: 一是主语在前一是主语在前,谓语在后谓语在后,称为称为自然语序自然语序( Natural Order ).反之反之,如果谓语在主语前面如果谓语在主语前面,就是就是倒装语序倒装语序( Inverted Order ).倒装原因：语法结构的需要；强调。倒装原因：语法结构的需要；强调。倒装语序倒装语序全部倒装全部倒装部分倒装部分倒装Full InversionPartial Inversion部分部分( (半半) )倒装倒装:(:(一般疑问句语序一

68、般疑问句语序) )a.表否定的副词或短语位于句首，主句半倒装Iwillneveragree.NeverwillIagree.HardlycanIagree.notuntil,never,hardly,scarcely,seldom,neither,little,innocase(决不),此外：onnoaccount,bynomeans,rarely,undernocircumstances,undernocondition,innoway(决不),neither(nor),nosooner(than),hardly(when),barely(仅仅，几乎不),innocircumstances(

69、决不),notabit,nowhere,notonlybutalso。(大纲样题)Notonly_(他向我收费过高),buthedidntdoagoodrepairjobeither.正常语序：hechargedmetoomuch答案：didhechargemetoomuchdidheoverchargeme2010-0688.Themanagerneverlaughed;neither_(她也从来没有发过脾气)didshelosehertemper.didshebecomeangry.语法考点：虚拟语气a.(should)+动词原形的情形b.if或butfor等引导的条件句c.wish,if

70、only的用法a1.(should)+动词原形的情形:表示“命令”、“建议”、“要求”名词性从句：动词suggest,order,demand,propose,command,request,desire,insist,require,decide,promise,resolve,argue,maintain,determine,recommend,advise,advocate,persuade等。3.Theprofessorrequiredthat_(我们交研究报告)byWednesday.第一步：由Theprofessorrequiredthat_,可以推出，划线处应该填写句子，并且是虚

71、拟语气。第二步：1.切块对应翻译：“交”=handin；“研究报告”=researchreports（名词注意单复数）；“我们”we2.重新组合：正确答案：we(should)handin（submit）ourresearchreportsb.if或butfor等引导的条件区别：if引导从句butfor=without:加名词、代词、动名词b1:if引导的虚拟语气 条件从句条件从句 结果主句结果主句 与现在事与现在事实相反实相反 动词过去式动词过去式(be动词用动词用were) would+动词原形动词原形 与过去事与过去事实相反实相反 had+过去分词过去分词(had done) would

72、 have done 与将来事与将来事实相反实相反 一般过去时一般过去时/were+不定式不定式/should+动词原形动词原形 would(should)+动词原形动词原形 a.与现在的事实相反：If-+were/did-,-+would/mightdo-如果我爸是李刚，我相撞谁撞谁。IfmyfatherwereLiGang,IwouldcollidewithanyoneIlike.2.与过去的事实相反：If-+haddone-,-+would/mighthavedone-如果我生于比尔盖茨家族，我将会买好几辆公交车。IfIhadbeenborninBillGates,Iwouldhaveb

73、oughtseveralbusesasmyprivatecars.3.与将来的事实可能相反：If-+should/weretodo-,-+would/shoulddo-假如世界末日在2012年到来，我会Ifthedoomsdayweretocomein2012,Iwould3.Thevictim_(本来会有机会活下来)ifhehadbeentakentohospitalintime.第一步：由Thevictimifhehadbeentakentohospitalintime.可以推出，划线处应该填写谓语动词和宾语使得主句完整，并且主句形式、时态根据后面的ifhehadbeentakentoho

74、spitalintime确定应该采取虚拟语气，是对过去的虚拟。第2步：1.切块对应翻译：“本来有机会-”=wouldhaveachancetodosth，“活下来”=survive2.重新组合：wouldhavehadachancetosurvive.b2. but for/without=ifitwerenotfor/ifithadnotbeenfor真题再现：89.Therewouldbenolifeonearth_(没有地球独特的环境).withoutitsuniqueenvironmentbutforitsuniqueenvironmentc.wish后的宾语从句用虚拟语气与现在事实相

75、反与现在事实相反 were或动词的一般过去或动词的一般过去与过去事实相反与过去事实相反 Had done或或would/could have done将来没有把握或不将来没有把握或不太可能实现的愿望太可能实现的愿望 would/should (could, might)+动动词原形词原形 C.2.Ifonly（但愿）与wish情况类似（从句分三种情况）：wish均可用Ifonly代之，含义大致相同。如：Xiao Qiang wishes I were with him in CET-4. If only Sky were with XQ. 语法考点：比较级1.SincemychildhoodI

76、havefoundthat_（没有什么比读书对我更有吸引力）（06.12）答案：nothingismoreattractivetomethanreading四级翻译提分利器1.留心生活：游戏、手机、商品包装2009-12.87.Youwouldnothavefailedifyouhad_(按照我的指令去做的话)四级翻译提分利器1.判定考点：虚拟语气2.判定动词：followed/done3.切块翻译：followedmyinstructions/donebasedonmyinstructions2.精研真题：题干、考点3.背诵翻译：逐字理解、翻译、背诵2007：Iwouldprefershop

77、pingonlinetoshoppinginadepartmentstorebecause_(它更加方便和省时).答案：theformerismoreconvenientandtime-saving四级翻译提分利器1.留心生活：游戏、手机、商品包装2.精研真题：题干、考点3.背诵翻译：逐字理解、翻译、背诵4.考场不抛弃、不放弃牢记：背写是提高写作翻译最有效的方法永远的朋友：新浪微博：石雷鹏老师新浪博客：百度搜索：石雷鹏补充习题题目：MyViewonDoubleBADegree提纲：1.现在大学生读双学位的现象很常见2.对此，人们看法不一3.我对这一现象的看法首段现象描述Onmanycampus

78、es,ithasbecomeaprevalenttrendforcollegestudentstohavetwomajorsatthesametime.Meanwhile,ahostofteachersandparentsencourageoradvocatestudentstoattendthesecoursestogainafavorablejobaftergraduation.Takingalookaround,wecanfindagreatmanystudentslikethis.二段观点对比：（前半部分）Anumberofstudentspreferorfavorpursingdou

79、bleBAdegrees.Intheireyes,studyingtwomajorswillenhancetheirdevelopmentandcompetitiveness,becauseanothermajorwillenrichtheirknowledgeandbroadentheirhorizons.二段后半部分Evenso,othersholdadifferentviewthatstudyingfordoubleBAdegreesmaycarrysomerisks.First,learninganothermajorcallsforplentyoftime,energy,andmon

80、ey;however,thequalityoflearningisnotalwayassatisfactoryasexpected.Then,whatworriesmanyteachersisthatstudentsmajorcoursesmaybeaffectednegatively.我的看法（建议评论）Byandlarge,Iamconvincedthattheadvantagesderivedfromanotherdegreefaroutweighthedisadvantages.Withoutthisexperience,itisimpossibleforstudentstohavem

81、oreopportunitiestoacquiretheknowledgebeyondtheirmajors.Therefore,aftermasteringtheirmasteringprofessionknowledge,studentsareadvisabletoattendothercoursestogainanotherdegree.以上话题作文还可以写如下话题：一、ComputersinStudentsDorms1).现在大学生宿舍几乎人手一台电脑2).有些人认为会促进学生的学习，有些人认为会影响学生的学习3).你的看法首段现象描述：Onmanydorms,ithasbecomea

82、prevalentphenomenonforonecollegestudenttopossessaPCoranotebook.Meanwhile,ahostofparentsorteachersencourageandadvocatecollegestudentstousecomputersintheirlifeandstudy.Takingalookaround,wecanfindagreatmanystudentsanddormslikethis.利弊分析（支持方观点+反方观点）Anumberofindividualspreferorfavorthephenomenon“Onestuden

83、t,OnePC”.Intheireyes,studyingwiththehelpofcomputerswillenhancestudentsover-alldevelopmentandcompetitiveness,becauserichinformationontheInternetwillenrichtheirknowledgeandbroadentheirhorizons.Evenso,othersholdadifferentviewthatusingcomputersmaycarrysomerisks.First,buyingPCcallsforplentyofmoney;howeve

84、r,thequalityoflearningisnotalwaysassatisfactoryasexpected.Then,whatworriesmanyteachersisthatstudentsacademiclearningmaybeaffectednegativelybyavarietyofcomputergames.我的看法（或建议）Byandlarge,Iamconvincedthattheadvantagesderivedfromthepopularityofcomputersfaroutweighthedisadvantages.Withoutthismachine,itis

85、impossibleforstudentstohavemoreopportunitiestoacquiretheknowledgebeyondtheircampuses.However,studentsareadvisabletousethePCinasensibleway.二、OVerseaStudyatanEarlyAge1.很多低龄学生出国留学2.低龄学生出国留学的利弊3.我的看法首段现象描述：Incontemporarysociety,ithasbecomeaprevalentphenomenonforyoungstudentstopursuetheiroverseastudyatan

86、earlyage.Meanwhile,ahostofparentsorteachersencourageandadvocatetheirkidstopreparefromprimaryschool.Takingalookaround,wecanfindagreatmanyparentsandchildrenlikethis.Anumberofindividualspreferorfavorstudyingabroadatanearlyage.Intheireyes,thisnewexperiencewillenhancestudentsover-alldevelopmentandcompeti

87、tiveness,becauseadvancededucationindevelopednationswillenrichtheirknowledgeandbroadentheirhorizons.Evenso,othersholdadifferentviewthatthispracticemaycarrysomerisks.First,studyingabroadaschildrencallsformoremoney;however,thequalityoflearningisnotalwaysassatisfactoryasexpected.Then,whatworriesmanyteac

88、hersisthatstudentsChineseculturelearningmaybeaffectednegativelybytheirlivingenvironmentinforeignnations.我的看法（或建议）Byandlarge,Iamconvincedthattheadvantagesderivedfromkidsoverseastudyfaroutweighthedisadvantages.Withoutthisexperience,itisimpossibleforstudentstohavemoreopportunitiestoacquiretheknowledgeb

89、eyondtheirnations.However,studentsareadvisabletoputthesameemphasisonChineselearningandoverseacultures.三、MyOpiniononCampusLectures1.大学校园里的讲座丰富多彩2.听讲座的益处3.你对在大学校园里听讲座的评论首段现象描述：Onmanycampuses,ithasbecomeaprevalentphenomenonforcollegestoholdvariouslectures.Meanwhile,ahostofparentsorteachersencourageanda

90、dvocatecollegestudentstoattendtheselecturestogainafavorablepositioninacademiclearning.Takingalookaround,wecanfindagreatmanylectureslikethis:lecturesaboutjob-hunting,cet-46andsoon.利分析（支持方观点）Anumberofindividualspreferorfavorholdinglectures.Intheireyes,thesewideopportunitieswillenhancestudentsover-alld

91、evelopmentandcompetitiveness,becauselecturesbyfamousprofessorswillenrichtheirknowledgeandbroadentheirhorizons.Then,holdinglecturescallsforlesstime,energy,andmoney;however,theresultoflearningisalwaysassatisfactory.Then,whatexcitesmanyteachersisthatstudentsacademiclearningmaybeaffectedpositivelybymuch

92、extra-curriculuminformation.我的看法（或建议）Byandlarge,Iamconvincedthattheadvantagesderivedfromlecuresfaroutweighourexpectation.Withoutthem,itisimpossibleforstudentstohavemoreopportunitiestocultivatetheirabilityandacquireknowledge.Therefore,studentsareadvisabletoattendtheselectures.四、StudentsRatingonTeache

93、rs1.很多学生实行学生评教2.对此人们看法不一3.我的看法首段现象描述Onmanycampuses,ithasbecomeaprevalenttrendforstudentstorateonteachersteaching.meanwhile,ahostofeducationalexpertsorprofessorsencourageoradvocateuniversitiestocarryoutthispolicy.Takingalookaround,wecanfindagreatmanycollegeslikethis.Anumberofindividualspreferorfavort

94、hissystem.Intheireyes,thisnewexperiencewillenhancecollegesover-alldevelopmentandcompetitiveness,becausethispracticewillstimulateteachersmotivationandenthusiasm.Evenso,othersholdadifferentviewthatthispracticemaycarrysomerisks.First,ratingteacherscallsformoresensibleattitudes;however,thequalityofratin

95、gisnotalwaysassatisfactoryasexpected.Then,whatworriesmanyteachersisthatteachersnormalteachingmaybeaffectednegativelybystudentsirrationalrating.Byandlarge,Iamconvincedthattheadvantagesderivedfromthisratingsystemfaroutweighthedisadvantages.Withoutthis,itisimpossibleforstudentstohavemoreopportunities/rightstoexpresstheirideasonteaching.However,studentsareadvisabletorateteachersinasensibleway.五、CampaignforStudentLeaders1.很多大学生参加竞选学生干部2.对此，人们看法不一3.我的看法