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1、Analysis of the mid-term examination paper Writing (Part 2) 1Writing (Part 2) 2The type of writingThe basic elements of the story Step1 Understand the reading materialNarration 记叙文记叙文who? when? where? what? why? how?whowhen wherewhatwhyhowMy grandfather and I, a rooster and hens.In the chicken house
2、 on my grandfathers farm.My grandfather sent me to the chicken house to collect fresh eggs but I failed.One morning many years ago. (when I was young)I was scared by the roosters response/behavior.3Step2 Focus on the key informationOne morning my grandfather sent me to the chicken house to collect f
3、resh eggs. I failed because I was scared by the roosters response, however, in my grandfathers presence, it became gentle. I couldnt understand it, and my grandfather told me the reason.What would happen next?The main idea?4Step3 Consider the possible plot developmentFocus on the underlined key word
4、s.Tips: At least five of the key words that stand for the character(s) and some important information should be used in your writing. grandfather chicken house rooster scared took quiet hens notice came in people_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _5Focus on the 2 given sentences.Paragraph1: “That doesnt mean that the
5、rooster in us is bad or dirty, like the one you just experienced.Step3 Consider the possible plot developmentPay attention to what the grandfather said.“There will always be people who will try to lead your life and if you let them, you will become like the hens.” What did the grandfather want to te
6、ll me?To be a leader or a follower?6Paragraph2:Then he did the smartest move. Step3 Consider the possible plot developmentWhereWhoWhatchicken house grandfather, rooster, hens, peopleEnding?Q1: Who does this “he” refer to ?Q2: What was the smartest move?To collect fresh eggs.My grandfather.Put what I
7、 learned into practice to .I Tips: Read the two given sentences carefully to predict how the story will go on.研读所提供的段首句，确定写作方向。研读所提供的段首句，确定写作方向。7 One possible version Paragraph1: “That doesnt mean that the rooster in us is bad or dirty, like the one you just experienced. Thats just the way some peop
8、le naturally are, at least in their own minds. But did you notice the respect and the way he quieted down when I came in? He saw me in his sense as a bigger, stronger and probably smarter rooster than he is, which I am and so are you. But you didnt think or believe it strong enough for him to feel.
9、Next time before you walk in, believe that the rooster is just a tiny, sweet chick, and those hens are laying beautiful golden eggs that we can have for breakfast.”8 Paragraph2: Then he did the smartest move. He took me back to the chicken house, walked away and said, “Now go in and pick those eggs
10、for breakfast.” Strangely, even while I was still scared, I bravely walked into the chicken house, ignored the rooster and picked up our golden eggs for breakfast.9 Practice makes perfect! 10Tips on completing a narrative article:Step1 Understand the reading materialStep2 Focus on the key informationStep3 Consider the possible plot developmentStep4 Make a draft（草稿）（草稿）Step5 Check and copy your version Ending?Handwriting! 11Assignment:Finish and polish your writing.12
