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1、How do you spend your money?I mean your living expenseshousing 80%Food, drink 10%clothing 5%others 5%My living expensesStep 1 认识图表认识图表表格表格Table2006 2007 2008 2009Food , drink and clothing40%35%30%25%Transport and entertainment10%15%20%25%Education and housing30%35%38%40%others20%15%12%10%yearitem某地区
2、居民近某地区居民近4年的消费变化年的消费变化 曲线图曲线图 Line Graph记忆规律曲线图记忆规律曲线图Bar Chart / Graph 柱形图柱形图/条形图条形图某校某校2006-2009年学生中拥有年学生中拥有QQ号人数的调查号人数的调查 25% housing 18%food &drink22%food &drink32% housingotherother (a)Percentage of Average Family Expenses in 1997 (b)Percentage of Average Family Expenses in 2002饼状图饼状图Pie Chart下
3、面表格是某地区居民近下面表格是某地区居民近10年的消年的消费变化，化，请根根据要求写一篇文章，要求描述据要求写一篇文章，要求描述变化并得出化并得出结论，词数数100左右。左右。199820002003 2007Food , drink and clothing40%35%30%25%Transport and recreation10%15%20%25%Education and housing30%35%38%40%others20%15%12%10%Step 2 范例引路范例引路范例引路范例引路 关键词：关键词：show, change, fall / increase from to o
4、n decrease / on rise reasons on one hand on the other hand扩写句子扩写句子Showchangefall / increase from to As is shown from the tablegreat changes have taken placethe expenses on food, drink and clothing fell from 40% to 25%The expenses on transport and recreation , education and housing have been on riseo
5、n decrease / on risereasons on one hand on the other handThe reasons are as followsPeoples living standard has been improvedpeople paid much more importance to education and living conditions.连句成篇连句成篇 As is shown from the table, great changes _ in peoples expenses from 1998 to 2007. The expenses on
6、food, drink and clothing _ from 40% in 1998 _ 25% in 2007. On the contrary, the expenses on transport and recreation , education and housing have been _. For the former, only 10% was spent on it in 1998, but the rate _ in 2007. The same also goes for the latter. The rate _ from 30% in 1998 _ 40% in
7、2007. From the above, we can see that peoples living level has been rising greatly in the past 10 years. The reasons are as follows: on one hand, peoples living standard has been improved. on the other hand, people paid much more importance to education and living conditions. As is shown from the ta
8、ble, great changes have taken place in peoples expenses from 1998 to 2007. The expenses on food, drink and clothing fell from 40% in 1998 to 25% in 2007. On the contrary, the expenses on transport and recreation , education and housing have been on rise. For the former, only 10% was spent on it in 1
9、998, but the rate doubled in 2007. The same also goes for the latter. The rate rose from 30% in 1998 to 40% in 2007. From the above, we can see that peoples living level has been rising greatly in the past 10 years. The reasons are as follows: on one hand, peoples living standard has been improved.
10、on the other hand, people paid much more importance to education and living conditions.第一步：第一步：点明主题点明主题第二步：观察图表中数据的第二步：观察图表中数据的 增减总趋势，分类式阐明增减总趋势，分类式阐明第三步：说明原因，第三步：说明原因， 得出结论得出结论. 一、开头一、开头 简要描述图表，点明主题简要描述图表，点明主题 Describing二、正文二、正文 分析数据分析数据 Analyzing 三、结尾三、结尾 说明原因，得出结论说明原因，得出结论 Coming to a conclusion
11、Step 3 总结规律总结规律 图表式作文写作分图表式作文写作分三步三步：请根据根据对某校某校2004-2007年年这段段时间学生中学生中拥有有QQ号人数的号人数的调查写一篇文章，要求描述写一篇文章，要求描述变化并化并得出得出结论，词数数100左右。左右。Step 3 实战演练实战演练写作步骤写作步骤Process Writing1. 罗列关键词罗列关键词(Listing)2. 展开关键词展开关键词(Developing)3. 打草稿打草稿(Drafting)4. 修正稿修正稿(Revising)5. 定稿定稿(Editing)开头常用句型：开头常用句型： 1. As is shown in
12、the chart, . 2. The graph/chart/table above shows that 3. From the above graph/chart, it can be seen that.分析数据常用句型：分析数据常用句型：1.There was a great /slight increase /rise in2.It decreased/ fell/ increased from to3.The number /rate has nearly doubled, 说明原因常用句型：说明原因常用句型：1.The reason foris that2.The reason
13、s are as follows:3. There are several causes for the change: First of all, . besides, whats more. As is shown in the chart, the rate of students who own QQs increased in the past four years from 2004 to 2007. Back in 2004, only 20% of them have QQs; one year later, the rate becomes twice larger; com
14、pared with about 50% in 2006, the rate in 2007 rose to 60%. Clearly, it is tending to increase. The reasons are as follows: for one thing, the widespread use of the Internet makes it convenient for students to communicate with each other. For another, QQ provides all kinds of entertainments, such as
15、 playing games and enjoying music. Whats more, QQ has gradually become the main means for the public to know the latest news. Personally, students should make proper use of and not be addicted to QQ, and only so can it serve its purpose beautifully.根据下面所给两幅图根据下面所给两幅图,完成完成100词左右的一篇短文词左右的一篇短文(首句已首句已给出
16、给出).参考词汇参考词汇:expenses (n.) 支出，费用支出，费用25% housing 18%food &drink22%food &drink32% housingotherother (a)Percentage of Average Family Expenses in 1997 (b)Percentage of Average Family Expenses in 2002 The Average Family Expenses The average family income in the u.s. has increased._Step 4 课后练习课后练习开头常用句型：
17、开头常用句型： 1. As is shown in the chart, . 2. The graph/chart/table above shows that 3. From the above graph/chart, it can be seen that.分析数据常用句型：分析数据常用句型：1.There was a great /slight increase /rise in2.It decreased/ fell/ increased from to3.The number /rate has nearly doubled,说明原因常用句型：说明原因常用句型：1.The reas
18、on foris that2.The reasons are as follows:3. There are several causes for the change: First of all, . besides, whats more. The Average Family Expenses The average family income in the U.S. has increased. The way the average family spends its income has also changed.In 1997, 25 percents of the income
19、 was spent on housing and 18% on food and drink.57% was used to meeting other expenses. In 2002,32% was spent on housing, a big increase. Food and drink consumed 22%.The remained expenses amount to 46%. Its clean from the charts that as incomes increase people can afford to live more comfortably and
20、 eat much. The Average Family Expenses The average family income in the U.S. has increased. The way the average family spends its income has also changed.In 1997, 25 percents of the income was spent on housing and 18% on food and drink. 57% used to meet other expenses. In 2002, 32% was spent on house, a big increase. Food or drink consumed 22%.The remained expenses amount to 46%. Its clear from the charts that with incomes increase people can not afford to live more comfortably and eat much.1_2_3_4_5_6_7_8_9_10_itspercentwashousingandremainingasmorenot
