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1、 如何写好如何写好 英语作文英语作文Task 1 分析材料 组织结构 1998年 洪灾（events） - para 1洪灾原因（reasons）-para2解决方法（solutions/measures） -para3Task 2 语言运用描述：happened/ worst/ caused great losses/ damaged /washed away/ got drowned/ swallowed/ victims/ homeless;原因：kept raining/ deforestation/ cut down illegally/ topsoil/ washed away/
2、turned into/ blocked;措施：take measures to/ protect/ trees along the rivers/ rebuild/ dams/ turn back intoTask 3 过度词选择（joiing words）1.引导从句的连词：which, that, when, as, where, what, how, whatever, who, whoever etc.过度连词：and, but,yet,while,as,as soon as, generally speaking, in my opinion besides, except, in
3、 spite of, despite, however, in a word, on the other side etc.插入语：by the way, that is to say, to make things better/worse etc.Task 4 Writing: 1998 floods In the summer of 1998,disasting floods happened in China, which were the worst ones in this century, causing great losses. Fields were drowned; ho
4、uses were damaged; many victims were swallowed in them and a large number of people became homeless. Afterwards, the scientific anylysis showed the reasons for the floods lied in three main facts done by men themselves. First, it had kept raining for months. Second, many treeswere cut down illegally
5、 and the topsoil was washed away. Finally,some lakes had been turned into fields and the waterways got blocked seriously. Therefore its urgent to take some measures to provent floods from happening again. For example, the trees along the rivers should be well protected; old dams should be rebuilt an
6、d fields be turned back into lakes .Task 5 check 检查 找出明显的时态和语态的错误；找出拼写错误；找出明显的语法错误；找出语病 也就是有否中式英语；Check The floods happened in 1998 was the worst one during the century. Our country was attacked. This floods happpened because the long time raining, which lasted several months. But this is not the ma
7、in reason, which the things what people had done. Lots of people cut down the trees ner the Yellow River and they turn the lakes into land to plant more things what they need. from this case, we must learn about what we done do harm to the enviaonment. From now on, we must protect the trees near the river and buried more banks. We must start now.
