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1、 Lets watch the videoIts very important and helpful to know how to describe a person!本节课的学习任务本节课的学习任务:写一篇描述人的外貌写一篇描述人的外貌 (look)、性格性格（characters）、）、爱好爱好 （hobbies）的文章的文章Describe a person with a word .shorttallthinfatbeautifuluglyfriendly funnysmart outgoing Describe a person with a sentence.She is a s
2、hort woman.He is a very tall man.He is tall and thin.He is short and heavy.She has long straight hair.She has short curly hair.He likes driving.He likes singing when he is happy.She likes exercising every morning. Word collection: 描述外貌的单词：描述外貌的单词： 描述穿着的短语：描述穿着的短语： short tall thin strong sick handsom
3、e beautiful ugly fat heavy of medium height of medium build good-looking nice wear a T-shirt wear a pair of jeans wear a red sweater wear a blue dress wear a pair of glasses 描述性格的单词：描述性格的单词： 描述爱好的短语：描述爱好的短语： kind friendly outgoing cute lazy smart shy polite quiet strict serious like reading like pla
4、ying basketball like dancing like singing like drawing like helping others sentence collection: Her name is Alice.She is 16 years old. She is of medium height and medium build.She has short curly hair.She is always friendly and helpful.She is a little shy.She likes reading and swimming.Write somethi
5、ng about this boy. 提示词：提示词：medium height and medium build，black hair;wear shorts and a T-shirt;outgoing, like runningWhat does he look like?namefavorite foodlookthings he likescharacterage things he likes to dofavorite classeshobbycontentsName Lin TaoAge15Looktall，thin，black hair, wear shorts and a
6、T-shirtFavorite food hamburgers，fried chicken Favorite classesscience, art, PE Things he likeslittle animals Things he likes to doplay with his good friends, help others Character (性格性格)kind-hearted, polite Writing task: 根据表格所提供的信息写一篇短文，描述根据表格所提供的信息写一篇短文，描述你的笔友林涛，你的笔友林涛，80个左右的单词。个左右的单词。 写作步骤写作步骤1)审题
7、审题2)列纲列纲3)连句连句4)修饰句子修饰句子 组织文章组织文章5)检查纠错检查纠错（定体裁、人称、格式、时态）（定体裁、人称、格式、时态）（加上主谓宾，把短语连成完整的句子）（加上主谓宾，把短语连成完整的句子）（适当运用承上启下的过渡词（适当运用承上启下的过渡词,使使文章更完整更精炼）文章更完整更精炼）（字数、内容要点、主谓一致、（字数、内容要点、主谓一致、习惯用法、单词拼写、大小写习惯用法、单词拼写、大小写及标点符号）及标点符号）（用单词、短语列出内容要点）（用单词、短语列出内容要点） Lets share some compositions. Lin Tao is my pen pal
8、. He is 15 year old. He is tall and thin. He have black hair and he likewears shorts and T-shirts. He looking very cute. He very much likes hamburgers and fried chicken . yearshaslikeswearinglooksHe likes hamburgers and fried chicken best.He likes hamburgers and fried chicken very much. His favorite
9、 classes is science, art and P.E. He likes little animals. He often plays with his good friends at school and help others. He is very polite and kind-hearted. He is a good boy. I very like him.I like him very much.arehelps Lin Tao is my pen pal. He is 15 years old. He is tall and thin. He has black
10、hair and he likes wearing shorts and T-shirts. He looks very cute. He likes hamburgers and fried chicken best. His favorite classes are science, art and P.E. He likes little animals. He often plays with his good friends at school and helps others. He is very polite and kind-hearted. He is a good boy
11、. I like him very much.Pair-correction:Exchange your composition with your partner and correct the mistakes with your red pen. Write your compositions again after the corrections. Later, hand in your compositions to me. Lets enjoy another composition. My English teacher I have met many excellent tea
12、chers in school. One of them is my English teacher. Her name is Ms Li. She is 35 years old. She is tall and beautiful with long curly hair. In her free time, she likes reading ,singing and dancing. She also enjoys playing sports. In the school , when we ask her questions, she is always very patient. Every time we have trouble, she is very friendly to help us. She is a good teacher. She is like not only our friend but also our mother.Homework Write a short passage about your best friend.
