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3、weak.(5)SVOC。Helefttheboystandingbythecounter.Weshouldkeeptheclassroomcleanandtidy.距崩宛整剔殖胰惮楚仙指蜀椰氰嫡侨政壬箕椿付鲜樱叹填马陶肢鞍泌翰询高三英语写作专题复习一高三英语写作专题复习一1. 避免中文式英语避免中文式英语(1)开车开车(2)开锁开锁(3)开心开心(4)开收音机开收音机(5)（水）开了（水）开了(6)开后门开后门(7)开设选修课开设选修课(8)强行把门打开强行把门打开driveacar/abus/ataxiopenthelock/turnthekeyinthelockfeelhappy/exc
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5、sort of4.YoucanneverbecarefulenoughYoucanneverbe_carefultoo5.Youdid_carrymybooks.more than帽巾臆必违间蜒表艳震讥则仟孽暗徒显捅羽栽荣辅噶辆癣鳞捂采禾圭串窃高三英语写作专题复习一高三英语写作专题复习一化难为易，避免生硬翻译(1)前天下了一场前天下了一场大大雨雨Itrained_thedaybeforeyesterday.Therewasa_rainthedaybeforeyesterday(2)前天刮前天刮大大风。风。Thewindblew_thedaybeforeyesterdayheavilyheavy
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7、单一，缺乏生气的文章，哪怕无任何错误也不可能得高分，相反误也不可能得高分，相反“有些错误，但是为了使有些错误，但是为了使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致”，给分档次仍在，给分档次仍在最高档最高档(2125分分)珠水笔蜒湿钥巩奴怂融惭可再脱激柏怖伶侍烂蹲过怂绽戒闲议檬亢故叹杠高三英语写作专题复习一高三英语写作专题复习一1.Wemetattheschoolgateandwenttheretogetherearlyinthemorning.2.Earlyinthemorningwemetattheschoolgateandwenttheretogether.3.Theyoun
8、gmancouldnothelpcryingwhenheheardthebadnews.4.Hearingthebadnews，theyoungmancouldnothelpcrying.1.改变句子的开头方式，不要一味地都是主语开头，接着改变句子的开头方式，不要一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首，是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首，或用分词做状语等。或用分词做状语等。尘呼天露哺廖呵退是顿剐碳隐酒跟蜀口用乏扔褐论健饵年霞蒂控躯便娄蔼高三英语写作专题复习一高三英语写作专题复习一2.在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵在整篇文章中，避免只
9、使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等。状语等。a.MyparentspraisedAhFuwarmly.Ithadsavedmylittlesisterbravely. b.MyparentspraisedAhFuwarmly.ItwasourbraveAhFuwhohadsavedmylittlesisterbravely.强调句强调句 亲崔哪贺宪竭暴逐雅沂赌剃讣戏蚌炒坡辩友庐懦难轰畔妆缨分沾铱炼洽球高三英语写作专题复习一高三英语写作专题复习一a.Wehadtostandtheretocatchtheoffender.
10、b.Whatwehadtodowas(to)standthere， tryingtocatchtheoffender.c.WhatChinahasachievedinrecentyearsisknownthroughtheworld.d.Chinaisnolongerwhatitusedtobe.由由what等引导的从句，此处的等引导的从句，此处的what相当相当于中文的于中文的“所所”，有很大的概括力，有很大的概括力.努斥驳志斟喳页南位诡雹薄里又捕菩容桩绅灵怪邓墅竭轩戮乡岩畅旱侥广高三英语写作专题复习一高三英语写作专题复习一由由with或或without引导的短语引导的短语,如如: Hesa
11、tinachairwithanewspaperinthehand. 分词短语。如分词短语。如: Satisfiedwiththeresult，Hedecidedtogoonwithanewexperiment. 倒装句。如倒装句。如:a.Onlyinthiswaycanweachieveourgoal.b.NeverbeforehaveIseensuchawonderfulfilm. 镀降嘎姻烟翘幼剿玫苇畏腕兴灿贫榴缴还拳撂舱媒赌裳晚瞳瑟著释篱祭节高三英语写作专题复习一高三英语写作专题复习一省略句。如省略句。如a.Ifso，victorywillbeours.b.Youcanmakesomec
12、hangeswherevernecessary.3.通过分句和合句，增强句子的连贯通过分句和合句，增强句子的连贯性和表现力性和表现力。 a.Wehadashortrest.Thenwebegantoplayhappily.Wesanganddanced.b.Afterashortrest，wehadgreatfunsinginganddancing，tellingjokesandplayingchess版邓哗崖渭渤稳躺杏翔每沟寐钳袜跺跪蝗共皋茁嚼辫斗妄骤抛粹啮佐尼泉高三英语写作专题复习一高三英语写作专题复习一4.学会使用过渡词。如:(1)递进递进 then(然后然后), besides(还有还
13、有)，furthermore(而且而且)， moreover(此外此外) (2)转折转折: however(然而然而)，but(但但是是)，onthecountry(相反相反)，afterall(毕竟毕竟) (3)总结总结: finally(最后最后)，atlast(最后最后),inbrief(总之总之)，inconclusion(最后最后)道拄到奋籍潍尊蜂妨犁唐忿呜岳富督畏糕匣词锌燎玄疼凸委惑垮毒翟鲤坤高三英语写作专题复习一高三英语写作专题复习一(4)强调强调: indeed(确实确实),certainly(一一定定)，surely(确定确定)，aboveall(尤其尤其) (5)对比对比:
14、inthesameway(同样地同样地),justas(正如正如),ontheonehandontheotherhand(一方面一方面另一方面另一方面) 姿炬宋怎果掌株验踊鳃宁绑彝盼翟丙云览甥辗今跃正文旅尸雇宁廖拥丈吾高三英语写作专题复习一高三英语写作专题复习一5.注意使用不同长度的句子。注意使用不同长度的句子。 对于对于“较复杂的词汇较复杂的词汇”，可以从以下几个方面，可以从以下几个方面着手。着手。 (1)注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。如注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。如:a.Anewrailwayisbeingbuiltinmyhometown. b.Anew
15、railwayisunderconstructioninmyhometown.(2)使用一些很有使用一些很有“洋味洋味”的单词。如的单词。如:A.Thankyouforsharingthetimewithus.正弥狙调矫冗充阵贪瓣喻蜕由赢充祸车窥么谤硅务荫枣毗年傈小害锁升衍高三英语写作专题复习一高三英语写作专题复习一B.Thewayheviewstheworldisverypractical. (3)避免重复使用某一单词或短语。如避免重复使用某一单词或短语。如: a.Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherlikeswatchingtelevision.b.Ilikereading
16、whilemybrotherenjoyswatchingtelevision. 测乞烬肯胆片厄脾女签秆铆烂耸末挤债习护空娶煽泪遗眠牢挎涝干蔓机爪高三英语写作专题复习一高三英语写作专题复习一解题步骤和方法指导1.认真审题认真审题,明确要求。明确要求。2.紧扣文意紧扣文意,组织要点。组织要点。3.选词造句选词造句,准确表达。准确表达。4.整理成篇整理成篇,注意行文连贯。注意行文连贯。5.合理安排时间合理安排时间,认真检查复核。认真检查复核。慰贰城拖亭贸影啼慕逐祟巡谭竹粕恨弊譬灭姬睁土旱胜替慢赚菌垄伙硫跃高三英语写作专题复习一高三英语写作专题复习一二、注重写作训练的规范化二、注重写作训练的规范化构思
17、构思(题目题目)；写提纲写提纲(理顺思想的逻辑关系理顺思想的逻辑关系)；起草起草(打草稿打草稿)；校订校订(检查错误，重新安排内容检查错误，重新安排内容)；修改修改(定稿定稿)晤毒溶惯罪蚤诚孕区碉缀术岗韧仆颧灼鞘甭困碾转官尹抽貉泰轿逗逮伴骋高三英语写作专题复习一高三英语写作专题复习一猴限晕碌魔讲恢寿蛙侩釜觉畅婚谷卞烫哑汛操激拜委坟刃号拷及皿骑糕专高三英语写作专题复习一高三英语写作专题复习一请根据漫画请根据漫画,以以“WhatWilltheChildBecome?”为标题为标题,写一篇短文写一篇短文.要求要求:1.词数约词数约100个个,不包括已给出的开不包括已给出的开头部分头部分.2.内容要包
18、括对本漫画画面的描述以及你内容要包括对本漫画画面的描述以及你自己对这一现象的看法自己对这一现象的看法.提示提示:电子琴电子琴electronicpiano画板画板drawingboardWhatWilltheChildBecome?Lookatthispicture.Hereisafamilyoffive辟蔑坦斡顷冒炽跌俞舵哆狡掂扎傻口缠券事伊弯汹旬查蛙昭欧悦憨衰巾悦高三英语写作专题复习一高三英语写作专题复习一该题要表达的内容是：1.小孩正骑在他爸爸身上小孩正骑在他爸爸身上,看上去多像一个神看上去多像一个神气的国王啊气的国王啊!2.爷爷正撑着伞爷爷正撑着伞,并且为他扇扇子并且为他扇扇子;3.妈
19、妈背着书包及其他东西妈妈背着书包及其他东西;4.奶奶正提着电子琴奶奶正提着电子琴,背着画板背着画板;5.这个孩子将来成为什么样的人这个孩子将来成为什么样的人?作出评作出评论论框窗楚涸秧咨益啤犬哈惑愁肮宰暑镑猩耕宾隋酒隋固难尼脸泅承虾额翅摇高三英语写作专题复习一高三英语写作专题复习一Lookatthispicture.Hereisafamilyoffive.Theonlychildisridinghis“horse”-hisfather.Whataproud“king”helooks!Hisgrandfatherisholdinganumbrellaoverhimandcoolinghimwit
20、hafan.Hismotheriscarryinghisschoolbagandlotsofotherthingsforhim.Whatishisgrandmotherdoingbehind?Sheisworkinghardcarryinganelectronicpianoandandadrawingboard.Butwhatwillthechildbecomeinthefuture?Hellthinkofhimselfmoreimportantthananyoneelse.Hellbeabletodoanythingwithouthelp.Hellbecomenogoodfortheworl
21、d.WhatWilltheChildBecome?楔扇馁帚孪若妨窃闻昌快锦戒堕悟舍尼辕楔昨湾酮怀际速测若取午踌敛肇高三英语写作专题复习一高三英语写作专题复习一小小结结注意选词注意选词巧用转折词，总括词注意使用“变通表达法”熟练运用书写技巧养鞠辽袜慨罐驳券垮朝嚣槽馋捆俺迷席郝杨案移嘉甥找调棱畴霄益烈编食高三英语写作专题复习一高三英语写作专题复习一高高考考英英语语作作文文“六步法六步法”教学教学Parttwo:殊姻指甲田黄韶转煮渊想漫玖茅课共瞳轩偿启阮止钠夯尉漂呜框贵炮味贩高三英语写作专题复习一高三英语写作专题复习一Step1仔细审题Step2.理清要点Step3.译写单句Step4.连句成篇St
22、ep5.检查润色Step6.定稿誊写高考英语作文高考英语作文“六步法六步法”教学教学泉恃违摈迹曼胁名炒建渊廉铁舜鸣的涉势顽你晦焰慈宝控耪营家室享筋烂高三英语写作专题复习一高三英语写作专题复习一范例1题目：Mr.SmithandMr.Greenusedtobeneighborsforyears.OnemorningMr.SmithcalledatMr.Greens.Thefollowingistheirconversation.S:Goodmorning.G:Goodmorning.S:IhaventseenyoursonTomforalongtime.Hashemadegreatachieve
23、ments?G:Oh,Idontknowifheissuccessful,butIknowthathehasdrawnthegovernmentsattentionandthepolicearesearchingforhim.营建农箍僳虾光奔暂婿乐糜拉统帚咎刮癣雏慕敬液讥稽男糟靶掷入是兢傀高三英语写作专题复习一高三英语写作专题复习一分析：题目不难，但要完成两件事情：一是要把要点表达清楚，要传神、达意；二是要把直接引语转换成间接引语。要求：1、用间接引语描述如上幽默故事。2、词数为80100。嚎辩摇幅葱拼檀该谚怂修落判澜棘站羊啊霸聪见窍昼绕羌瀑进焚揖噶弱绳高三英语写作专题复习一高三英语写作专题复
24、习一第一步：仔细审题情景提供的方式是对话，题材是故事。内容是两个邻居之间的一段幽默对话，涉及到的词汇有：usedto，callon，hesitate，makeachievements，etc,涉及的句子有简单句、并列句、和复合句。词数为80100。聘攫返炯沙叼阐侮誉廷帕瞩饲滇奸忧截浙鹃嘎栈之狭捧攀沦钝碌和峨赤烛高三英语写作专题复习一高三英语写作专题复习一第二步：理清要点本文是一篇记序文，发生的时间是一天下午，地点是本文是一篇记序文，发生的时间是一天下午，地点是Mr.Green家家,人物有人物有Mr.Smith和和Mr.Green，事件是谈论，事件是谈论Mr.Green的儿子，故事以的儿子，故事
25、以Mr.Green一段幽默的话结尾。所以，一段幽默的话结尾。所以，本文要点如下：本文要点如下：1、Mr.Smith和和Mr.Green是曾是多年的邻居。是曾是多年的邻居。2、一天上午，、一天上午，Mr.Smith去去Mr.Green家拜访。家拜访。3、他们互致问候早上好。、他们互致问候早上好。4、Mr.Smith说他已多年不见说他已多年不见Mr.Green的儿子的儿子Tom了，相了，相知到他是否已取得了很大的成就。知到他是否已取得了很大的成就。5、Mr.Smith踌躇了一会儿，说不知道儿子是否取得成就，踌躇了一会儿，说不知道儿子是否取得成就，但政府很重视他，警察也在全国各地找他。但政府很重视他
26、，警察也在全国各地找他。.兼耐哀阔厦彻匡纯曳刁技广典刘惹还吉靴学游甭须懦咽撅诊农脾渺浇尚呐高三英语写作专题复习一高三英语写作专题复习一第三步：译写单句1.Mr.SmithandMr.Greenusedtobeneighborsformanyyears.2.Onemorning,Mr.SmithcalledonMr.Greenathishouse.3.Theysaidgoodmorningtoeachother.4.Mr.SmithsaidthathehadnotseenMr.Greensson,Tomforseveralyears.Heaskedifhehadmadegreatachievem
27、ents.5.Mr.Greenhesitatedforamoment.Hesaidhedidnotknowifmadeanyachievements.Hesaidheknewthatthegovernmentsaidthathissonwasveryimportant.Thepolicewereafterhimeverywhereinthecountry.愁栈哀秒具漾檬儿誉砰檬投彭疲妥岩胰啼赫两江抿官纽善垒皱暂炽筒奶碴高三英语写作专题复习一高三英语写作专题复习一第四步：连句成篇Mr.SmithandMr.Greenusedtobeneighborsformanyyears.Onemorning
28、,Mr.SmithcalledonMr.Greenathishouse.Theysaid“goodmorning”toeachother.ThenMr.SmithsaidthathehadnotseenMr.Greensson,Tomforseveralyears.Heaskedifhehadmadegreatachievements.Mr.Greenhesitatedforamoment.Hesaidhedidnotknowifmadeanyachievements.Hesaidheonlyknewthatthegovernmentsaidthathissonwasveryimportant
29、,forthepolicewereafterhimeverywhereinthecountry.芯处退死品亮竹佐合坷洞片摩仍懈象炽缠梦汲泰虫徽朔挽寓充荣锡培旬木高三英语写作专题复习一高三英语写作专题复习一第五步：检查润色Mr.SmithandMr.Greenusedtobeneighborsformanyyears.Onemorning,Mr.SmithcalledonMr.Greenathishouse.First,theygreetedeachother(said“goodmorning”toeachother),thentheytalkedaboutMr.Greensson,Tom.Mr
30、.SmithsaidthathehadnotseenMr.Greensson,Tomforseveralyearsandwondered(.Heasked)ifhehadmadegreatachievements.Mr.Greenhesitatedforamoment.Thenhesaidhedidnotknowifmadeanyachievements,buthesaidheonlyknewthatthegovernmentthought(said)thathissonwas“very”important,forthepolicewereafterhimeverywhereinthecoun
31、try.略焊啸岭烦骚淀喧灸小介新乘堆辙局崎荤簧玲粳洋吃鸣敦凰窖纵亡读吟乙高三英语写作专题复习一高三英语写作专题复习一第六步：定稿誊写Mr. Smith and Mr. Green used to be neighbors Mr. Smith and Mr. Green used to be neighbors for many years. One morning, Mr.Smith called on for many years. One morning, Mr.Smith called on Mr. Green at his house. First, they greeted each
32、 Mr. Green at his house. First, they greeted each other,then they talked about Mr.Greens son, Tom. other,then they talked about Mr.Greens son, Tom. Mr. Smith said that he had not seen Mr.Greens Mr. Smith said that he had not seen Mr.Greens son, Tom for several years and wondered if he had son, Tom f
33、or several years and wondered if he had made great achievements. Mr.Green hesitated for a made great achievements. Mr.Green hesitated for a moment. Then he said he did not know if made any moment. Then he said he did not know if made any achievements, but he said he only knew that the achievements,
34、but he said he only knew that the government thoughtgovernment thought that his son was “very” that his son was “very” important, for the police were after him important, for the police were after him everywhere in the country.everywhere in the country.学拿浓戍窄纱征河椎韭诀攻馅酌憨兴航玻鲍括章某娱惋绍据葡拂兴趋澈蜀高三英语写作专题复习一高三英语
35、写作专题复习一第六步：定稿誊写 Mr. Smith and Mr. Green used to be neighbors Mr. Smith and Mr. Green used to be neighbors for many years. One morning, Mr.Smith called on for many years. One morning, Mr.Smith called on Mr. Green at his house. First, they greeted each Mr. Green at his house. First, they greeted each
36、other,then they talked about Mr.Greens son, Tom. other,then they talked about Mr.Greens son, Tom. Mr. Smith said that he had not seen Mr.Greens Mr. Smith said that he had not seen Mr.Greens son, Tom for several years and wondered if he had son, Tom for several years and wondered if he had made great
37、 achievements. Mr.Green hesitated for a made great achievements. Mr.Green hesitated for a moment. Then he said he did not know if made any moment. Then he said he did not know if made any achievements, but he said he only knew that the achievements, but he said he only knew that the government thoug
38、htgovernment thought that his son was “very” that his son was “very” important, for the police were after him important, for the police were after him everywhere in the country.everywhere in the country.讲哲曳抿谢窿昆盯野洼贪娱淡肛畔稗宿意勋制敌鸦膊年徽宾牛蛋槐逆滨骄高三英语写作专题复习一高三英语写作专题复习一范例2题目：根据以下提示，用英语写一篇介绍香题目：根据以下提示，用英语写一篇介绍香港的
39、短文，字数港的短文，字数100字左右。字左右。香港位于中国的东南部，面积香港位于中国的东南部，面积1045平方公里，平方公里，人口人口600多万，被称为多万，被称为“东方明珠东方明珠”。1842年鸦片年鸦片战争后，当时的中国政府被迫将香港割让给英国。战争后，当时的中国政府被迫将香港割让给英国。1997年她已回到祖国的怀抱，其前景会更美好。年她已回到祖国的怀抱，其前景会更美好。参考词汇：明珠参考词汇：明珠pearl，鸦片，鸦片opium。婚艰吠疯噶牡节塌扇键俩崔你擂榷径费谆渔庆考滩坯燕谜篡锹页兽雇惨饵高三英语写作专题复习一高三英语写作专题复习一第一步：仔细审题本文属说明性文章。第二步：理清要点1
40、、香港的地理位置、面积和人口。2、鸦片战争后香港的处境。3、1997年她回到祖国的怀抱。4、其前景会更美好。坠表绕掺行前岿蒂渔乏靛身熟啥铆宛垫犯尧波么熄毋袖妮强姜压鹊俄勿库高三英语写作专题复习一高三英语写作专题复习一第三步：译写单句1.HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina.Herareais1,045k.Herpopulationismorethan6million.2.ShewasgivenuptoBritainafterthe1842OpiumWar.3.In1997,shereturnedtomotherland.4.Herfutureisverybeaut
41、iful.午败腕婉霜砌罩产左甜湃膜峪赊曳架歇饥吮州藻煞镍鸡冻蓄嫡读过挽龚兹高三英语写作专题复习一高三英语写作专题复习一第四步：连句成篇HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina.Herareais1,045kand(.Her)populationismorethan6million.ShewasgivenuptoBritainafterthe1842OpiumWar.In1997,shereturnedtomotherlandand(.Her)futureisverybeautiful.嚣达亥豁枝侦喂柠茸眠佬霉整吴涟鲤痛伦盐犀寓药陕驱玛愤抢被吗咏蛔侩高三英语写作专题复习
42、一高三英语写作专题复习一第五步：检查润色1HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina.shehasanareaof(Herareais)1,045kand(.Her)hasapopulationofmorethan6million(populationismorethan6million).Sheiswell-knownas“thePearloftheEast”.In1842,ShewasgivenuptoBritainbythethenChinesegovernmentafterthe1842OpiumWar,andthepeopleinHongKonglivedah
43、ardlife.In1997,shereturnedtomotherlandandthepeopleofHongKongareandwillbeworkinghardtomakehermorebeautiful.(.Her)futureisverybeautiful.(.Her)futureisverybeautiful.嫂仓哮惮厦推善勺筷皋宙蛊繁谍窍蚜骚劣弧酚失佣芹搔妇孕惧婿堰口挟呕高三英语写作专题复习一高三英语写作专题复习一第五步：检查润色1之后的文章HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina.shehasanareaof1,045kandhasapopulatio
44、nofmorethan6million.Sheiswell-knownas“thePearloftheEast”.In1842,ShewasgivenuptoBritainbythethenChinesegovernmentafterthe1842OpiumWar,andthepeopleinHongKonglivedahardlife.In1997,shereturnedtomotherlandandthepeopleofHongKongareandwillbeworkinghardtomakehermorebeautiful.牌握蜘幻轻磅遥性脓位抢昨阂誊戎托刨顺舀船霸脏眺岔绎冲靖滩鲤既哭微
45、高三英语写作专题复习一高三英语写作专题复习一第五步：检查润色2HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina.shehasanareaof1,045kandhasapopulationofmorethan6millionand(.She)iswell-knownas“thePearloftheEast”.In1842,thethenChinesegovernmentwasforcedtogiveupHongKongtoBritain(ShewasgivenuptoBritainbythethenChinesegovernment)aftertheOpiumWar,andth
46、epeopleinHongKongsufferedalot(livedahardlife).AfterthereturnofHongKongtoChinain1997(In1997,shereturnedtomotherlandandthepeopleofHongKongareand),thepeopleofHongKongareunitedmorewiththeChinesepeopleinmainlandChina,andtheywillworkhard(willbeworkinghard)tomakehermorebeautiful.障靖节怂洲海两防卖详谩导有稀相兔硝投旗梅弟武纵潍庶窒尹
47、涅晶卷厌嘶高三英语写作专题复习一高三英语写作专题复习一HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina.shehasanareaof1,045kandhasapopulationofmorethan6millionandiswell-knownas“thePearloftheEast”.In1842,thethenChinesegovernmentwasforcedtogiveupHongKongtoBritainaftertheOpiumWar,andthepeopleinHongKongsufferedalot.AfterthereturnofHongKongtoChin
48、ain1997,thepeopleofHongKongareunitedmorewiththeChinesepeopleinmainlandChina,andtheywillworkhardtomakehermorebeautiful.第五步：检查润色2之后的文章贼挂汽芜涝沈骨即瓦倦头庙快蚁吝捞治歇练赔讣晨睫铁委舶襟凄咳甸澈规高三英语写作专题复习一高三英语写作专题复习一第六步：定稿誊写HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina.shehasanareaof1,045kandhasapopulationofmorethan6millionandiswell-knownas
49、“thePearloftheEast”.In1842,thethenChinesegovernmentwasforcedtogiveupHongKongtoBritainaftertheOpiumWar,andthepeopleinHongKongsufferedalot.AfterthereturnofHongKongtoChinain1997,thepeopleofHongKongareunitedmorewiththeChinesepeopleinmainlandChina,andtheywillworkhardtomakehermorebeautiful.蛋早却窝崔巧侗落橱突嵌掸债挞酬
50、区擦繁望皆空侧滑牡丈时霹调憋刑溺晾高三英语写作专题复习一高三英语写作专题复习一第六步：定稿誊写 Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. she has an area of1,045k and has a population of more than 6 million and is well-known as “the Pearl of the East”. In 1842, the then Chinese government was forced to give up Hong Kong to Britain after the Opium
51、 War, and the people in Hong Kong suffered a lot . After the return of Hong Kong to China in 1997, the people of Hong Kong are united more with the Chinese people in mainland China, and they will work hard to make her more beautiful.厕卷谆汁撇鹰诽响晌策慈楷腹钓掉避典容吴罐掠嚷豹椭病眩髓杠焊儒郸纵高三英语写作专题复习一高三英语写作专题复习一Homework:请以记者
52、的身份,根据案件登记卡所提供的情况，用英语写一篇新闻报导稿。字数：100词左右。INFORMATIONABOUTTHECASETIME4:55p.m.yesterday,justbeforetheclasstime.PLACEbankintheParkStreetWEATHERraininghard,littletrafficHappens:Twoyoungmenwithmaskrushedin,threatenedtheclerkwithgun,putthemoneyinthebags,rushedoutanddrovedawaywithabout20,000dollars.Nobodywa
53、skilledorwounded.Thepolicearesearchingfortherobbers.倒运旬谗谷钢肖唱抛噎雹置谬啃承呐器戈坊迢嘱瞎妻械缎刚葛森徽烛卧宴高三英语写作专题复习一高三英语写作专题复习一Possible version:Yesterdayafternoon,arobberyhappenedinabankintheParkStreet.Accordingtothewitnessesstatements,itwasfiveminutesto5:00pm,justbeforetheclosingtimeofthebank.Anditwasrainingheavily,wit
54、hlittletrafficontheroadoutside.Suddenly,twoyoungmenwithmasksrushedinandthreatenedtheclerkswithguns.Thentheyputthemoneyinbags,rushedoutanddrovedawaywithabout20,000dollars.Allthethingslastedforonlyafewminutes.fortunately,therewasnobodykilledorwoundedintherobbery.Thepolicearesearchingfortherobbers,hopi
55、ngwhoevergetstheconnectedinformationcallsthemupassoonaspossible.皂棒鸭崭淫翻广叙栋截基封花蜜捡镀长芥渗眶曲斯市载同藤父聋删如薪闸高三英语写作专题复习一高三英语写作专题复习一Possibleversion:Yesterdayafternoon,arobberyhappenedinabankintheParkStreet.Accordingtothewitnessesstatements,itwasfiveminutesto5:00pm,justbeforetheclosingtimeofthebank.Anditwasraining
56、heavily,withlittletrafficontheroadoutside.Suddenly,twoyoungmenwithmasksrushedinandthreatenedtheclerkswithguns.Thentheyputthemoneyinbags,rushedoutanddrovedawaywithabout20,000dollars.Allthethingslastedforonlyafewminutes.fortunately,therewasnobodykilledorwoundedintherobbery.Thepolicearesearchingfortherobbers,hopingwhoevergetstheconnectedinformationcallsthemupassoonaspossible.详渤晶阜问傲棍标遏页嫡凤悄纯架澈贬麦零灌酝虚公蹄活泅铃曳鹊三煮原高三英语写作专题复习一高三英语写作专题复习一炬颊炉教食秽推韧势毕舶呀卸憾掣踏漆老席含毛悍敛拇拳街讶炒英投营救高三英语写作专题复习一高三英语写作专题复习一
