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1、基础写作基础写作 之之 赢取高分策略赢取高分策略五个步骤1、审题审题：题材、人称、时态、要点题材、人称、时态、要点2、以词及点以词及点：用一两个单词或短语写出每句：用一两个单词或短语写出每句话的细节要点。话的细节要点。3、联词成句联词成句：用联词成句的方法将上述要点：用联词成句的方法将上述要点的词语扩展成句子。的词语扩展成句子。5。联句成文联句成文：主语和谓语主语和谓语背景（适当增加时间、地点条件等）背景（适当增加时间、地点条件等）逻辑关系逻辑关系开头与结尾开头与结尾语篇衔接语篇衔接6、检查修改，规范抄写检查修改，规范抄写4。合并句子合并句子：可利用从句，非谓语动词：可利用从句，非谓语动词，独
2、立主格结构和连词等。独立主格结构和连词等。基础基础写作写作基础写作的评分标准？1234句子内容的完整性完整性句子结构的正确性正确性句子结构的连贯性连贯性句子内容的多样性什么是好的作文？v下面先来阅读两篇作文作文作文1 1给澳大利亚的朋友写一封信，谈谈减负给学生的学习和生活带来的变化。Iwilltellyouthechangesofmylife.Before,wehadmanyclasseseveryday.Ihadtodoalotofhomeworkafterschool.Iwenttobedat11:30intheevening.Ihadnotimetoplay.Iwasverytired.
3、NowIcanvisitmuseums.Icanlearncomputeranddrawing.Intheevening,IcanreadbooksandnewspapersandwatchTV.Igotobedat10:00now.Just so so!作文2Imverypleasedtotellyouthechangesinmylifesince our homework has reduced. Before that,learningduringthedaywasverysimple.Havingclassanddoinghomeworkwas the only thing wesho
4、ulddo.Intheevening,wealsohadalotofhomeworktodo.Wecouldnotgotobed until11:30.Nevertheless,sincereducingthelearningload,mylifehasbecomemuch moreinteresting.Ioftenvisitmuseumsandcomputerroomsanddrawpicturesin my spare time. Intheevening,I alsohavetimetowatchTVandreadnewspapers.Ino longer stayuplate;on
5、the contrary,Igotobedatabout10pm.In short,Iamquitesatisfiedwithmylifenow.Wonderful！两篇作文的区别在哪？v1，句式单一，句式单一v2，连词欠缺，连贯性差，连词欠缺，连贯性差v3，用词简单，用词简单v。那如何写出好的作文？技技巧巧1.使用较高级的词汇使用较高级的词汇3.使用恰当的连接词使用恰当的连接词词汇反映你知识贮存量的词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。的一个重要标志。运用得当的句子结构可以运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因
6、此而生辉整篇文章因此而生辉 。使用恰当连接词，对写一使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有篇有“英语味英语味”的文章很的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。自然、紧凑。增强书面表达效果的技巧增强书面表达效果的技巧2.使用较丰富的句式使用较丰富的句式今天我们来学习今天我们来学习1.Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.2.Weallthinkheisagreatman.3.SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea.(occurred to/struck)4.Thestudentsthereneedntpa
7、yfortheirbooks.5.Asaresulttheplanwasafailure.The plan turned out to be a failure.Thanks to the good weather,ourjourneywascomfortable.一、怎样使用较高级的词汇一、怎样使用较高级的词汇Weallthink highly of him .A good idea occurred to me. / A good idea suddenly struck me.Books are free for the students there.6.Whensheheardheha
8、ddied,shewentpalewithsorrow.(at/on)7.ShewenttoAustriainordertostudymusic.(purpose )8.Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.9.Inourschool,therearetwenty-sixclassrooms.10.Youcanfindmyhouseeasily.ShewenttoAustria for the purpose of studying music.At the news of his death, shewentpalewithsorrow.The more
9、he spoke, the more excited he felt.Our school is made up of twentysix classrooms.Youll have no trouble finding my house.丰富的句式：丰富的句式：( (常用到的句型结构）常用到的句型结构）利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采。1.感叹句e.g.HowhappyIwaswhenIreceivedyourletter!Whatakindboyheis!Howdisappointedhewas!2.强调句e.g.Itwasthisyoungboythathelpedthe
10、oldgranny.Idohopeyoucancomeifpossible.3、倒装句e.g.Onlyinthiswaycanyousolvethisproblem.There comesthepolicecar.Hardlyhadtheygottothestationwhen theymettheyoungman.4、省略句e.g.Theyreadwhilewalkingorridingonabus.Cometomeifnecessary.5、with短语e.g.Isawayoungladywalkingslowlyinthestreetwithahandbaginherhand.6、定语从
11、句e.g.Inmyopinion,cybercafesshouldbeaplacewherewecanfindmuchusefulinformation.Letscometothemainteachingbuilding,atthebackofwhichstandstheschoollibrary.7、各种名词性从句e.g.ThatswhatIshoulddo.Weshoulddoafavourtowhoeverneedshelpatpresent.8、各种状语从句e.g.Timepassedquicklybeforeweknewit.Themomentwereachedthefarm,weg
12、otdowntoharvesting.Solongasweworkharderatourlessons,wellcatchupsoonerorlater.DocallmebeforehandsothatIcanmeetyouattheairport.Theyhadtowaitbecausetherainwasgettingmoreandmoreheavily.1Whenhearrives,pleasegivemeane-mail.（使用V-ing形式）.2.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.（使用名词性从句）3.ThoughImweak,
13、Illmaketheeffort.(使用倒装句)4.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用强调句型)5.Ipassedthephysicsexambecauseofyourhelp.(用虚拟语气）On his arriving, please give me an e-mail.What surprises him is thatthe little girl knows so many things.Practice怎样使用较丰富的句式怎样使用较丰富的句式Weak as I am, Ill make
14、 the effort. It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.I couldnt have passed the physics exam but for your help.6.Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.(使用过去分词)7.Theysangandlaughedastheywentbacktoschool.(使用V-ing形式)8.Iwontbelievewhathesays.（使用状语从句）
15、9.Ifyoustudyhard,youwillmakerapidprogress.（用并列句）10HehadnosoonercomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.(使用倒装句)No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.Singing and laughing, they went back to school.No matter what he says, I w
16、ont believe.Study hard and youll make rapid progress.11.Thebellisringingnow.12.Iftheweatherpermits,Illcometomorrow.(独立主格结构独立主格结构)13.Weweregladtoseethecropsandvegetablesgrowingverywell.（感叹句）（感叹句）Theregoesthebell.Weatherpermitting,Illcometomorrow.Howgladweweretoseethecropsandvegetablesgrowingverywell!
17、高考大纲中常用的高考大纲中常用的连接词连接词1.表示递进表示递进;在同一话题上补充内容在同一话题上补充内容另外，还有whatismore;besides;also;moreover;inaddition,worsestill。2.表示转折关系表示转折关系但是，然而，相反：but;however;yet;instead;ontheotherhand;nevertheless(然而),inspiteof,onthecontrary.3.表示因果关系表示因果关系因为，因此，所以:since;as;because(of);so;thus;therefore;asaresult;owingto,duet
18、o,thanksto,onaccount(理由)of.4.表示条件关系表示条件关系如果，只要:if;oncondition(that);aslongas除非:unless否则:orelse5.表示时间关系表示时间关系当的时候:when;while在之后:after在之前:before直到:until一就:assoonas后来，然后:later;afterwards不久:soon近来:lately;recently自从:since从那时起:fromthenon6.表示特定的顺序关系表示特定的顺序关系首先，最主要的:aboveall其次:secondly然后:then;next最后:finally
19、;intheend7.换一种方法表述换一种方法表述换句话说:inotherwords;thatistosay;8.进行举例说明进行举例说明例如，比如:forinstance;forexample;like;suchas9.用于陈述事实用于陈述事实实际上:infact;actually;asamatteroffact跟你说实话:totellyouthetruth10.对一个话题进行总结对一个话题进行总结总而言之，总的来说:onthewhole;inshort;allinall;ingeneral;inaword11.其它常用到的副词其它常用到的副词Therefore;otherwise;fina
20、lly;furthermore;Thus;namely;although;afterwards;personally;三、使用恰当的连接词三、使用恰当的连接词PracticePractice1 1 请在下列句子中（间）填上恰当的关联词或意思有联系的短语。1.XiaoMingwaswalkinginthestreet_heheardsomeonecryforhelp.2.HeadvisedthatIhireacar_Icouldtravelaroundinthewest.3.Itwasnotlong_thepolicecame.4._heheardthecryforhelp,hejumpedin
21、tothewatertosavethegirl.wheninorderthatbeforeAssoonas5.Doyouagreewithmyarrangement?_,dowritetomesoon.6.Wecangodowntownanddosomeshopping._,wecanpayavisittosomeplacesofinterest.7.Isharedthecostofthegaswithmyfriends._,Isaved$80.8.Eatingsugarisbadforourteeth._,itmaymakeusfat.Ifnot/soInadditionAsaresultW
22、hatsworsePractice2请你给中国日报写一篇稿件，谈谈农村儿童失学的主要原因及你的看法。原因原因：1、家庭贫穷，供不起儿童上学，他们不得不在家赚钱养家。2、部分家长认为女孩上学无用，不愿让她们上学。3、部分儿童对功课不感兴趣，不愿上学。看法看法：1、每个儿童包括女孩都应有受教育的机会。2、全社会都应重视儿童教育，他们对国家的未来将起到重要的作用。1.Nowinthecountryareas,therearemanychildrenoutofschool.2.Mostfamiliesarepoorandcantaffordtheireducation.3.Theyhavetostay
23、athomeandmakemoney.4.Someparentsthinkdaughtersneedntgotoschool.5.Theydontletthemgotoschool.6.Somechildrenarenotinterestedintheirstudiesandwouldntliketogotoschool.7.Allthechildrenincludinggirlsshouldbeeducated.8.Thewholesocietyshouldpayattentiontoit.9.Theyllplayanimportantpartinthefutureofourcountry.如何用五个句子表达？欢欢 迎迎 你你 的的 光光 临临请请留下宝贵建议留下宝贵建议Thankyou!
