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1、Time: April 24Place: Class 5 Senior IIILecturer:Zou Qing qianTitle: Tips on English writingTipsonEnglishwriting如何算是一篇好文章如何算是一篇好文章？ 1.覆盖了所有的要点覆盖了所有的要点2.应用了较多的语法结构应用了较多的语法结构和词汇和词汇3.有效地使用了语句间的有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑连接成分，使全文结构紧凑词汇词汇,句型句型和语法多和语法多样化样化要要点点全全连连接接词词XuanchengXuancheng Middle Middle SchoolSchoo
2、l二轮专题二轮专题CompositionComposition考试说明考试说明: : （内容和要求）（内容和要求）2 2。准确使用语法和词汇准确使用语法和词汇 语言的准确性是写作中不可忽视的一个语言的准确性是写作中不可忽视的一个重重要方面。要方面。 因为它直接或间接地影响到信息因为它直接或间接地影响到信息的准确传输。的准确传输。 应用语法结构和词汇的准确应用语法结构和词汇的准确程度是写作部分评分标准中一项重要内容。程度是写作部分评分标准中一项重要内容。3 3。清楚、连贯地传递信息、表达思想清楚、连贯地传递信息、表达思想 任何一篇文章都需要一个主题，作者应任何一篇文章都需要一个主题，作者应该围绕
3、该主题，借助一些句型、词汇等，清该围绕该主题，借助一些句型、词汇等，清楚、连贯地表达自己的思想。楚、连贯地表达自己的思想。XuanchengXuancheng Middle Middle SchoolSchool二轮专题二轮专题CompositionComposition说明：说明：。发表意见和观点。书面表达题。发表意见和观点。书面表达题对考生的要求如下：完成试题规定的对考生的要求如下：完成试题规定的任务；覆盖所有的内容要点；应用尽任务；覆盖所有的内容要点；应用尽可能多的语法结构和词汇；具备较强可能多的语法结构和词汇；具备较强的语言运用能力；有效使用的语言运用能力；有效使用句子间的连接成分，使
4、全文结构紧凑、句子间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑、语言规范。书写时，要注意大小写以及语言规范。书写时，要注意大小写以及书写工整。书写工整。XuanchengXuancheng Middle Middle SchoolSchool二轮专题二轮专题CompositionCompositionTip 1.Write in the words and sentences you are familiar with.*不盲目追求高级词汇和复杂句式不盲目追求高级词汇和复杂句式XuanchengXuancheng Middle Middle SchoolSchool二轮专题二轮专题CompositionCom
5、positionProperwordinproperplace,thatsstyle.-DanielDefoeXuanchengXuancheng Middle Middle SchoolSchool二轮专题二轮专题CompositionComposition1.Peoplefloodedthere.2.Hewanderedalldaylong,killingtime.3.Tobeornottobe,thatsthequestion.4.Hishandswerehotandstickyandhismouthfeltdry.5.SuchisMr.Wang,astrictbutkindteache
6、r.XuanchengXuancheng Middle Middle SchoolSchool二轮专题二轮专题CompositionComposition MoonMotherOnmyrightOnmyleftNeverleavemebehindPoemXuanchengXuancheng Middle Middle SchoolSchool二轮专题二轮专题CompositionCompositionYouandmeFromoneworldWearefamilyTraveldreamAthousandmilesMeetinginBeijingCometogetherPutyourhandinm
7、ineXuanchengXuancheng Middle Middle SchoolSchool二轮专题二轮专题CompositionCompositionTip2 Well begun, half done(A good beginning makes a good ending.) Ourschoolhastakenintoconsiderationallaspectsofthestudentsabilities.Ascanbeseenfromthechart,theteamworkis高三高三(上上)期末卷期末卷XuanchengXuancheng Middle Middle Schoo
8、lSchool二轮专题二轮专题CompositionCompositionAsweallknow,foodsafetyisofgreatimportanceinourdailylife.(合肥一模卷合肥一模卷)XuanchengXuancheng Middle Middle SchoolSchool二轮专题二轮专题CompositionCompositionTip3. Use grammatical structure to form a sentence （Dont think in Chinese )a.Therearemoreandmorebadfoodcomeintotheworld.
9、(Therearemanygraduatesneedtofind.) b.Moreandmorepeoplearepayattentiontotheproblemsc.Theyonlyinordertogetmoreprofit.XuanchengXuancheng Middle Middle SchoolSchool二轮专题二轮专题CompositionCompositiond.Isitwhatreasonsonearththatcausetheserioussituation?e.Theyaremoredifficulttobeemployed.f.,thenewgraduatesared
10、ifficulttosatisfyallkindsofabilitiessocietyneeds.g.carriesoutthepolicyofenlargingthestudents.h.Studentswillbeharderandhardertofindjobs.XuanchengXuancheng Middle Middle SchoolSchool二轮专题二轮专题CompositionComposition简单句的五种基本句型简单句的五种基本句型:1。 主语主语 + 谓语谓语2。 主语主语 + 谓语谓语 + 宾语宾语3。 主语主语 + 联系动词联系动词 +表语表语4。 主语主语 +
11、谓语谓语 + 间接宾语间接宾语 + 直接宾语直接宾语5。 主语主语 + 谓语谓语 + 宾语宾语 + 宾语补足语宾语补足语XuanchengXuancheng Middle Middle SchoolSchool二轮专题二轮专题CompositionComposition1.Inordertoreducethecostandmakemoreprofits,manyfactoriesusebadmaterialleadtomanyproductsofbadqualitygetintothemarket.2.somebusinessmenareinordertogainmuchprofitandre
12、ducethemoneywhichshouldbepaidonproducts.XuanchengXuancheng Middle Middle SchoolSchool二轮专题二轮专题CompositionCompositionTip 4 Make sure that words or phrases that connect sentences are properly used.XuanchengXuancheng Middle Middle SchoolSchool二轮专题二轮专题CompositionComposition(1)表示总结的过渡词语：表示总结的过渡词语：tosumup,
13、onthewhole,allinall,inshort,inbrief,inaword等。等。表示添加的过渡词语：表示添加的过渡词语：and,also,too,again,besides,moreover,inaddition,aswellas,whatismoreworsestill,apartfromthis(these)等。等。Idontmindpickingupyourthingsfromthestore.Besides,thewalkwilldomegood.XuanchengXuancheng Middle Middle SchoolSchool二轮专题二轮专题Compositio
14、nComposition(3).表示列举时使用：表示列举时使用：a.first,second,third.finally;b.foronething,foranotherc.ononehand,ontheotherhand等等(4).表示转折时使用：表示转折时使用：however,while,onthecontrary等。等。XuanchengXuancheng Middle Middle SchoolSchool二轮专题二轮专题CompositionComposition表示原因的过渡词语：表示原因的过渡词语：because,for,since,as,becauseof,dueto,owin
15、gto,thanksto等。等。a.Owingtoalackoffunds,theprojectwillnotcontinuenextyear.b.ThankstotheInternet,todayyoucandoallyourChristmasshoppingfromhome.XuanchengXuancheng Middle Middle SchoolSchool二轮专题二轮专题CompositionComposition(6)表示强调的过渡词语：表示强调的过渡词语：afterall,aboveall,mostimportant,asamatteroffact,infact等。等。Xuan
16、chengXuancheng Middle Middle SchoolSchool二轮专题二轮专题CompositionCompositionTip 5 Good handwriting helps you a lot in getting an ideal grade.XuanchengXuancheng Middle Middle SchoolSchool二轮专题二轮专题CompositionCompositionXuanchengXuancheng Middle Middle SchoolSchool二轮专题二轮专题CompositionComposition半开放性作文的写作半开放性作
17、文的写作XuanchengXuancheng Middle Middle SchoolSchool二轮专题二轮专题CompositionComposition 目前，地球面临水资源危机，请根据目前，地球面临水资源危机，请根据一下提示写一篇一下提示写一篇100100词左右的短文。词左右的短文。1. 1. 人们以为淡水是取之不尽的人们以为淡水是取之不尽的2. 2. 实际上淡水是非常紧张的实际上淡水是非常紧张的3. 3. 人类应该怎样办人类应该怎样办XuanchengXuancheng Middle Middle SchoolSchool二轮专题二轮专题CompositionComposition1
18、.Manypeoplebelievethattheworldssupplyoffreshwaterwillneverbeusedup.2.Asamatteroffact,theearthisshortoffreshwater.Or:Infact,theearthsfreshwaterisverylimited.(可能错用可能错用:nervous,)XuanchengXuancheng Middle Middle SchoolSchool二轮专题二轮专题CompositionComposition展开展开:1.Theythinkthatfreshwatercomesfromsuchavariet
19、yofsourcesthatitisalwaysenoughforuse.(thatwilllastforever.)Suchanopinionleadstoasurprisingwasteofwater.XuanchengXuancheng Middle Middle SchoolSchool二轮专题二轮专题CompositionComposition2.Withtherapidgrowthoftheworldpopulation,therisingdemandforwaterbyindustry,andtheseriouspollutionofoursurroundings,theworl
20、disfacingthedangerofrunningoutoffreshwater.Actually,insomebigcities,freshwatercannotmeetthedailyneeds.XuanchengXuancheng Middle Middle SchoolSchool二轮专题二轮专题CompositionComposition3.Therefore,tofindnewwaystosavewaterisanurgenttask.First,weshouldpassstrictlawstocontrolanywasteofwater.Second,scientistsmu
21、stworkhardertopurifyseawater.(toreuse/recyclewater.)Third,peoplemustbeeducatedtotreasurewaterintheirdailylife.XuanchengXuancheng Middle Middle SchoolSchool二轮专题二轮专题CompositionComposition对立观点展开议论的写作对立观点展开议论的写作 这种题型一般会给出两个或两个以上的对立这种题型一般会给出两个或两个以上的对立的观点，要求考生发表自己的看法或见解。的观点，要求考生发表自己的看法或见解。这类题型的基本模式可分三段：这类
22、题型的基本模式可分三段：1、有人认为、有人认为2、有人认为、有人认为3、我的看法是、我的看法是XuanchengXuancheng Middle Middle SchoolSchool二轮专题二轮专题CompositionComposition第一段：第一段：1.SomepeopleagreetoA,becausetheyusuallythinkthat.Inaddition.2.SomepeoplethinkthatAisrightbecause.3.Somepeoplesuggest/saythat.Atthesametimetheypointoutthefactthat.Whatsmor
23、e.4.Somepeopleprefer.IntheiropinionXuanchengXuancheng Middle Middle SchoolSchool二轮专题二轮专题CompositionComposition第二段：第二段：1.Ontheotherhand,somepeopleholdtheviewthatBisright.Theythink.2.Butmanymorepeopledontagreewiththem.TheypreferB.Theysaythat.Thereasonisthat.3.Onthecontrary,somepeopleholdtheviewthat.4.
24、SomepeoplethinkthatBisbetter.Itisclearthat.Whatsmore,.Also.XuanchengXuancheng Middle Middle SchoolSchool二轮专题二轮专题CompositionComposition第三段：提出自己的见解并且加以论证第三段：提出自己的见解并且加以论证1.Inmyopinionisbetterthan.Thereisnodoubtthat.2.IsupportA.Thereasongoesasfollows.3.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iagreetothelatter.4.PersonallyIthinkthateverythingistwo-sided.5.Fromthepointofmyview,6.Eachcoinhastwosides.XuanchengXuancheng Middle Middle SchoolSchool二轮专题二轮专题CompositionComposition
