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1、Topolishyourwriting让你的作文让你的作文“亮亮”起来起来Teachingaimswords&phrasessentencepatternspassagelanguagestructurecontent书面表达各档次的给分范围和要求第五档（第五档（21-2521-25分）分） 完全完成完全完成了试题规定的任务了试题规定的任务: :l准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容，要点无遗漏准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容，要点无遗漏l应用了较多的语法结构和词汇应用了较多的语法结构和词汇l语法结构和词汇有少许错误，但为尽可能使用较复杂表达方式语法结构和词汇有少许错误，但为尽可能使用较复杂表达方式 所致
2、；具备较强的语言应用能力所致；具备较强的语言应用能力l有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑完全达到了预期的写作目的。完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档（第四档（16-2016-20分）分） 完成完成了试题规定的任务了试题规定的任务: :l比较准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容比较准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容l应用语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求应用语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求l语法结构和词汇应用基本准确，少许错误主要是因为尝试较复语法结构和词汇应用基本准确，少许错误主要是因为尝试较复 杂语言结构或词汇所致杂语言结构或词汇所致l应用简单的语句间的连接成
3、分，使全文结构紧凑达到了预期的写作目的。应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑达到了预期的写作目的。第三档（第三档（11-1511-15分）分）基本完成基本完成了试题规定的任务。了试题规定的任务。l能说出短文的基本内容，但逻辑关系较混乱，要点有遗漏，能说出短文的基本内容，但逻辑关系较混乱，要点有遗漏， 没有写自己的认识没有写自己的认识l应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求l有一些语法结构和词汇的错误，但不影响理解有一些语法结构和词汇的错误，但不影响理解 l应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯整体而言，基本达到了
4、预期的写作目的。整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。Letslookatourselves读读文找错因文找错因1CannotusesetphrasescorrectlyOn(the)onehandOntheotherhandtreatsbas2IgnorethepartofwordwrongEnglishisinterestItisnotruetrueEnglishisinterestingItisnottrue3Can not divide the whole passage into paragraphs correctly 4 Can not use some linking words
5、 correctly.5 Handwriting is poor研研读读促提升促提升What makes a good composition?A good composition is usually made up of an introduction paragraph, some supporting paragraphs and a conclusion paragraph.Introduction paragraph Supporting Paragraph 1 Body Supporting Paragraph 2Conclusion paragraph Personally,
6、in conclusion, in brief, From what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that . What makes a good paragraph?A good paragraph is one that consists ofa topic sentence and supporting sentences.There are different kinds of bee. Some live in large groups like the honey bee, and make their
7、nests in trees or holes in the rocks. Other species make their nests in holes in the ground. There are also varieties that do not live in groups at alltopic sentenceWherever you go in our school, you see green lawns and trees and beautiful flowers. Dotted among these trees and flowers are many build
8、ings of different styles. A stream runs through our school and you always see everything reflected in the water. Topic sentence:_just like a garden. Our school isjust like a garden. Our school isjust like a garden. Our school isA good paragraph is one that contains proper linking words.I believe Eng
9、lish is more important than other foreign languages for many reasons. First of all, English is spoken by a large number of people, and these people are the most widely spread across the world in a great many countries. Secondly, English is the most widely used language on the internet. It has become
10、 an on-line language. Thirdly, the 2008 Olympic Games will be held in our country and English will be very useful. Lastly, Use linkingwordscorrectly时间先后时间先后： First, then, later, in the end, eventually,since then, after a while 转折关系：转折关系：but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless因果关系：因果关系：because, s
11、ince, as, thanks to, owing to, as a result of, due to让步关系：让步关系：though, although, even if, even though, in spite of, as递进关系：递进关系：whats more, in addition, furthermoreon the one hand on the other hand, 条件关系：条件关系：if, unless, as long as, on condition that 表表 列列 举：举：for example / instance, takefor example
12、, thats to say, in other words, as follows表表 总总 结：结： in short, in brief, in conclusion, in a word, on the whole, as has been stated点点练重衔接练重衔接Goodafternoon,everyone!Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis“MyAttitudetoPursuitofFashioninSchool”.Nowinourschoolthereisahotpursuitoffashion.Somestudentsliveaveryexpensive
13、life_._,theyhopetolooksmartandspecial._,theywanttowinothersadmirationandrespect.Inaddition,itmakesthemfeelcool._,westudentsshouldholdtherightsenseofvalues.Weshouldpracticethriftinourdailylife._,itisadvisableforustodonatesomepocketmoneytotheHopeProjectsothatthosepoorchildreninruralareascanreturntosch
14、ool._,itistheinnerbeautyratherthanourappearancethatmakesusrespectable.Thankyouforlistening!A.thereasonswhytheydosoareasfollowsB.firstlyC.lastbutnotleastD.whatsmoreE.asfarasIamconcernedF.SecondlyABCDEFA good paragraph is one with varied sentence patterns.丰富的句式：丰富的句式：( (常用到的句型结构）常用到的句型结构）利用不同的句型来表达同一个
15、意思，能增加文章的文采。e.g.What a kind boyheis!How disappointedhewas!感叹句感叹句强调句强调句e.g.Itwas this young boy that helped the old granny. I do hope you can come if possible.e.g.Only in this way can yousolvethisproblem.There comes the police car.Hardly hadtheygottothestationwhen theymettheyoungman.e.g. They read wh
16、ile walking or riding on a bus. Come to me if necessary.e.g.Isawayoungladywalkingslowlyinthestreetwithahandbaginherhand.倒装句倒装句省略句省略句with短语短语e.g.Inmyopinion,cybercafesshouldbeaplacewhere we canfind much useful information. Letscometothemainteaching building,at the back of which stands the school libr
17、ary.定语从句定语从句e.g. Thats what I should do.We should do a favour to whoever needs help at present.各种名词性从句各种名词性从句e.g.Timepassedquicklybefore we knew it.The moment we reached the farm,wegotdowntoharvesting.So long as we work harder at our lessons,wellcatchupsoonerorlater.各种状语从句各种状语从句1.To his surprise, th
18、e little girl knows so many things.（使用名（使用名词性从句）词性从句）2.Though Im weak, Ill make the effort. (使用倒装句使用倒装句)3. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型使用强调句型) 4.Ipassedthephysicsexambecauseofyourhelp.(用虚拟语气）What surprises him is thatthe little girl knows so m
19、any things.Practice 怎样使用较丰富的句式和高级词汇怎样使用较丰富的句式和高级词汇Weak as I am, Ill make the effort. It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.I couldnt have passed the physics exam but for your help.练练悟求突破悟求突破5.She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使
20、用过去分词使用过去分词)6. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使使用用V-ing形式形式)7.I wont believe what he says. （no matter what状语从句）状语从句） 8.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （祈使（祈使句句+and）Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.Singing and laughing, they went back to schoo
21、l.No matter what he says, I wont believe.Study hard and youll make rapid progress.道歉信道歉信Dear_,Imtrulysorrythat_(道歉的原因道歉的原因)Thereasonisthat_(介绍原因介绍原因)Onceagain,ImsorryforanyinconvenienceIvecaused.Hopeyoucanacceptmyapologiesandunderstandmysituation.yourssincerelyLiHua感谢信感谢信Dear_,Imwritingtoextendmysin
22、ceregratitudefor_(感谢的原因感谢的原因).Ifithadnotbeenforyourassistancein_(对方给你的具体帮助对方给你的具体帮助)，IfearthatIwouldhavebeen_(没有对方的帮助会产没有对方的帮助会产生的后果生的后果)。Everyoneagreesthatitwasyouwho_(给出给出细节细节)，Again,Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!Pleaseacceptmygratitude.yourssincerelyLiHua正反观点式议论文Recentlywevehadadiscussiona
23、boutwhetherweshould-Ouropinionsaredividedonthistopic.（观点有分（观点有分歧）歧）Mostofthestudentsareinfavourofit,Herearethereasons.First_,Second_,Finally_.Howevertheothersarestronglyagainstit.Theirreasonsareasfollows.Inthefirstplace_.Whatsmore_,Inaddition_.Personallyspeaking,theadvantagesoverweighthedisadvantage
24、,foritwilldousmoreharmthangood，soIsupportit.（个人观点）（个人观点）Summary:A good composition is usually made up of a topic paragraph, some supporting paragraphs and a conclusion paragraph.A good paragraph is one that consists of a topic sentence and supporting sentences.A good paragraph is one that contains p
25、roper linking words.A good paragraph is one with advanced vocabulary and varied sentence patterns.悟悟读养习惯读养习惯Homework最近，国家教育部要求中小学生参加冬季长跑活动：最近，国家教育部要求中小学生参加冬季长跑活动：建议小学生每天跑建议小学生每天跑1000米，初中生米，初中生1500米，高中米，高中生生2000米。对此，有些人表示支持，有些人表示反米。对此，有些人表示支持，有些人表示反对。请你根据以下材料，写一篇以对。请你根据以下材料，写一篇以“Shouldwegivemoreatten
26、tiontostudentshealthorgrades?”为题的短文，谈谈你的看法。为题的短文，谈谈你的看法。支持方的理由支持方的理由反对方的理由反对方的理由你的看法及理由你的看法及理由1可以促进对可以促进对体育的重视；体育的重视；2可以增强学可以增强学生的体魄；生的体魄；3更有利于提更有利于提高学习效率。高学习效率。1学生以学习为主，学生以学习为主，考试成绩决定个人前考试成绩决定个人前途；途；2过高的要求学生过高的要求学生难以达到；难以达到；3长跑可能引起感长跑可能引起感冒或伤害。冒或伤害。(考生自行发挥考生自行发挥23点点)注意：注意：1词数词数150左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总
27、词数；左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；2对所给要点，逐一陈述，设当发挥，不要简单翻译。对所给要点，逐一陈述，设当发挥，不要简单翻译。Homework:Finishthiscompositionandhanditintomorrow.Should we give more attention to students health or grades? The Ministry of Education of China has urged all the students to participate in the winter long-distance running activi
28、ty. It is suggested that primary school students should run 1,000 meters a day, junior school students, 1,500 and senior school students, 2,000.Different people always offer various views.Some people say yes to this activity. They think, for one thing, it can make people pay more attention to physic
29、al education; for another, running can improve students health and help them study efficiently so they can have good grades. However, others hold opposite opinions about the activity. They believe that learning is the most important task for students and their future depends on their grades in their
30、 subjects. Meanwhile, many cant meet the high requirements. Whats worse, some will suffer cold and injuries. In my opinion, its all right for schools to care about students health and carry out the activity step by step. Remember a good body helps make high efficiency.Whatdoyouthinkabouttheconcludin
31、gparagraph?Isitagoodone?Ifnot,howcanyouimproveit? In my opinion, its all right for schools to pay more attention to students health and carry out the activity step by step. Remember a good body helps make high efficiency.Inmyopinion,itsbetterforschoolstopaymoreattentiontostudentshealthandcarryouttheactivitystepbystep,becauseagoodbodyhelpsmakehighefficiency.Whatsmore,itnotnolyhelpsstudentsgetrelaxed,butalsowillbenefitthemintheirfuturelife.
