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1、第五课时 Writing单元写作如何写好建议信.写作策略探究建议信要写出写信的原因、建议的内容及提出建议的理由和根据。理由要合情合理，语气一定要缓和。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。建议信一般采取“三段式结构”。1首段：针对对方对自己的信任简单表示感谢，亦可表明自己的诚意。建议信的开头必须指明建议的前提和事情的原委，对自己的立场作一些解释。建议信开头常用的句式和套话Im writing to express my views concerning.Thanks for trusting me.2中段：应围绕问题有条理、科学婉转地提出建议。注意充分考虑对方的实际情况，表达
2、时应选择得体用语。切忌用语生硬，泛泛而谈。通常以firstly，secondly, thirdly或to begin with, then, later等顺序陈述建议。表达建议常用的句式和套话I feel that it would be helpful if.If I were you, I would.As far as Im concerned.In my opinion.As for me.3尾段：简单表达希望。希望自己的建议能对对方有帮助。通常要在建议信的结尾部分阐明你所提供的劝告或建议仅供对方参考。建议信结尾常用的句式和套语I hope you will find these pr
3、oposals/suggestions/ recommendations practical/useful/helpful.I would be ready to discuss this matter with you in future details.写作题目要求假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Jack来信，就“如何交友”向你征求意见，请你给他回信，就该问题谈一谈你的建议。回信时间是5月1日。注意：1.词数120150； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_写作词汇热身1友谊 friendship2通过判断 judge.by.3信任 believe_in4盼望 look_forward_to写
4、作表达练习1在信中你问我如何交友。In_your_letter_you_asked_me_for_some_advice_on_how_to_make_friends.2少考虑自己，多考虑别人。Think_more_of_others_than_of_ourselves.3千万别相信那些我们有困难就离开我们的人。Never_believe_in_those_who_leave_us_when_we_are_in_trouble.4患难之交才是真正的朋友。A_friend_in_need_is_a_friend_indeed.参考范文May 1Dear Jack，Im glad to hear
5、from you. In your letter you asked me for some advice on how to make friends. In my opinion, friendship is very important to us all.Here are my suggestions：To make friends，we must be friendly to others. Smile at others and we are sure to get a smile in return. We should try to make a stranger feel a
6、t home.Think more of others than of ourselves and dont judge a person by his appearance. When we disagree with someone, dont quarrel but discuss with him. Besides, never believe in those who leave us when we are in trouble. Remember：A friend in need is a friend indeed.What do you think of my advice?
7、 Can you give me yours? Im looking forward to your reply.Best wishes.Yours ever，Li Hua名师点评1本文符合建议信的逻辑顺序和语言特点，范文分三段。首先提出友谊对每个人都很重要，然后讲了交友的三种方法并讲明“患难之交才是真正的朋友”。最后问对方是否同意自己的观点，并向对方求教。语气委婉利于对方接受。 2.文中使用了suggestion，in return，make a stranger feel at home，never believe in等高级词汇，丰富了文章语言。3文中还使用了to make friend
8、s，besides，remember等过渡语，使文章衔接自然。4此外文中还用了Dont judge a person by his appearance和A friend in need is a friend indeed等名句，增加了文章的说服力，是文章的一大亮点。选 做 题.短文改错I have been studied in No. 1 Middle School1._for the passed years. Im glad that I2._have made much progresses in my study3._and Im also very happy that I m
9、ade many4._friends here. The school life has given me5._many interesting things in my memory, Ill6._never forget. I havent decided what will7._do in the future, but I have made my mind to8._go to college after I leave school. In the9._coming year I have to work hard so to be ready to go to college.1
10、0._答案：1去掉been或studiedstudying此处应是主动语态。2passedpast或lastpass是动词；past才是形容词。3progressesprogressprogress是不可数名词，没有复数形式。4I后面加have时态应为现在完成时。5givenleft给我留下了许多回忆。6Ill前面加which此处为定语从句。7willto或what后加Iwhat to do将做什么，做decided的宾语；第二种做法是decided后接疑问词不定式作宾语。8made后加upmake up ones mind下定决心。910so后面加asso as to为了，目的是。.六选五根
11、据短文内容，从下面的选项中选出能概括每一段主题的最佳选项。选项中有一项为多余项。(2012南郑中学高一期中)Remembering names is an important social skill.Here are some ways to master it.1_When you hear a persons name and want to remember it, repeat it.Immediately say it to yourself several times without moving your lips.You could also say the name aga
12、in in a way that does not sound forced or artificial.2_You can let other people help you remember their names.After youve been introduced to someone, ask that person to spell the name and pronounce it correctly for you.Most people will be pleased by the effort youre making to learn their names.3_Adm
13、itting that you cant remember someones name can actually make people relaxed.Most of them will feel sympathy if you say “Im working to remember names better.Yours is right on the tip of my tongue.What is it again？”4_When meeting a group of people, concentrate on remembering just two or three names.F
14、ree yourself from remembering every one.Few of the people in mass introductions expect you to remember their names.Another way is to limit yourself to learning just first names.Last names can come later.5_Consider going early to conferences, parties and classes.Sometimes just a few people show up on time.There are fe
