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1、(建议用时：10分钟/篇)1Recently campus safety has become public concern since a series of violent attacks happened，which causes serious damage.It makes us aware of the fact that safety should always come firstly in our daily life.In this case，we should take effective measure which can solve this problem.Firs
2、tly，our students should realize we must follow our school or traffic rules，and pay attention to food safety，because many incidents happen just because of we are too careless.Secondly，you should take training of security so that we can keep calm if faced with conflicts.Thirdly，our government and scho
3、ols should provide surroundings that our students can bury themselves in their studies.As far as I am concerned，improving campus safety is very important that we all should try our best to make anyone on campus safe and sound. 2Dear Tim，I am Li Hua.This is my last year of high school，and Ill graduat
4、e this summer.Im eighteen year old.There is three people in my family and Im the only one child，who is very common in Chinese families.My father work in a factory and my mother is a teacher.We lived a happy life together.Im cheerful boy.Besides my courses，I have much hobbies，like playing football，ba
5、sketball and swimming.In the past，I collected in a lot of stamps，which are very preciously now because we seldom post a letter nowadays.I wonder if you can tell me something about myself，your family and daily school.Best wishes，Li Hua 3Today，my foreign teacher Tim and I went to the Peoples Park toge
6、ther.We take a taxi and it wasnt long before we arrived at the park.At seeing the green trees and beautiful flower，Tim couldnt wait to take pictures.It was at that moment when we found his camera was missing.He was very worried but searched all over his backpack.Sadly，he just couldnt find it.Suddenl
7、y it struck to me that he might have left it in the taxi.So I immediately got touch with the taxi company.About half an hour later，the driver returned the camera.Both of us were gratefully to the driver，and Tim，in particular，insisted on have a photo taken with him.Tim and I enjoyed themselves during
8、 the rest of the day. 4Dear Mom，As Mothers Day is approaching，Id like to share with you a great many word.First of all，I want to tell you I am very grateful to you for which you have done for me.Thank you very much for bring me up to be happy and brave in a often difficult society.You not only give
9、me a precious life，and teach me how to tell right from wrong.It is you and Dad who encourage me to follow my dream as I will grow.And all the time you have been helped me to step forward towards my goal.As you know，the College Entrance Examination is just around the corner.I think I am good prepared
10、 for it，so I will face it bravely.Please dont worry about me.Im sure I can make it and will be admitted by my dream university.Dear Mom，may you happy every day!Yours sincerely，Li Yue 5One cold evening during the holiday season，a little boy about six or seven was standing out in the front of a store
11、window.The little child has no shoes and his clothes was just rags.A young woman passes by saw the little boy and could read the desire in his pale blue eyes.She took the child by the hand and led him into the store.There she bought her some new shoes and a complete suit of warmly clothing.They came
12、 back outside into the street，so the woman told the child to go home and have a happy holiday.The little boy looked her and asked how she was God.She smiled and replied that she was just one of his child. 6Our government is built a “harmonious society”It is our duty to work hard to achieve this goal
13、s.First of all，we should love our motherland，caring about the development of our hometowns and take an active part our schools activities.Secondly，we should respect the old and love the young，included our parents and teachers.We should also unite the student around us and help each other.Above all，w
14、e must be honestly and reliable in our daily life.Last but not least，we should try our best to saving energy and protect against our natural environment.Lets start right now and spares no effort to do a little bit every day! 7Travelled abroad，you should follow the customs of the country where you ar
15、e visiting.When you invited，it is good manners to refuse or accept an invitation，either by writing or by telephoning.If you go to the party，it is polite to reach on time.It is good manners to shake hand with your host.You can take a present if you like，possibly a bottle of wine，a box of chocolates and some flowers.However，it was not bad manners to take nothing.It is not polite to stay too late before the other guests have gone.Also，it is suggested to write or telephone a day or two late to
