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1、写作专项提升第三讲必须要掌握的读后续写情节 构思4维度英英 语语维度一 如何利用两段首句利用“两段首句定一框,二框二首正能量”确定续写方向。1.两段首句定一框:即根据第一段首句关键信息与第二段首句关键信息确定续写部分第一段的续写框架,同时注意情节发展合情合理;2.二框二首正能量:即用第二段首句关键信息推测第二段情节和情感发展,并结合正能量结尾的续写原则确定第二段的续写框架。典型例题阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。(2021浙江1月卷改编)Pumpkin(南瓜)carving at Halloween is a family tradition.We v
2、isit a local farm every October.In the pumpkin field,I compete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin.My dad has a rule that we have to carry our pumpkins back home,and as the eldest child I have an advantageI carried an 85-pounder back last year.This year,it was hard to t
3、ell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14-year-old brother,Jason,was the winner.Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides,but I was determined to prove my point.All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table,with my mom filming the annual event.Im unsure now why I
4、 thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter,but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time.With the pumpkin resting on the table,hole uppermost,I bent over and pressed my head against the opening.At first I got jammed just above my eyes and then,as I went on with my task,unw
5、illing to quit,my nose briefly prevented entry.Finally I managed to put my whole head into it,like a cork(软木塞)forced into a bottle.I was able to straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting on my shoulders.My excitement was short-lived.The pumpkin was heavy.“Im going to set it down,now,”I said,and wi
6、th Jason helping to support its weight,I bent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest.It was only when I tried to remove my head that I realized getting out was going to be less straightforward than getting in.When I pulled hard,my nose got in the way.I got into a panic as I pressed firmly
7、against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle,but it was no use.“I cant get it out!”I shouted,my voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosed space.注意:续写词数应为150左右。I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer._That video was posted the day before Hallo
8、ween._思路分析 原文大意 一个女孩的头塞进南瓜却被卡在里面的趣事原文两情线情节线:挑完南瓜却忘记称重思考通过把头塞进南瓜来证明南瓜大成功地将头塞进南瓜却被卡住试图将头从南瓜中拿出情感线:determined,competitiveunsureexcitedfrightened叙事意图 通过叙述一个有趣的经历,体现一个生活教训:三思而后行利用首段1.两段首句定一框(1)根据第一段首句和第二段首句中关键信息“That video was posted”可逆推出,作者的头从南瓜里弄出来了。第一段应叙述作者如何脱困,可描写作者害怕得哭了,引来父亲或兄弟姐妹的帮忙。(2)第一段尾句衔接第二段首句中
9、的“That video was posted”和原文第二段中的信息“my mom filming the annual event”,可描述妈妈录视频的情景。2.二框二首正能量(1)第二段内容衔接第二段首句中的“That video was posted”,可叙述视频录好,发到网上后网友的反应和作者的感悟。(2)文章尾句应体现正能量:吸取教训三思而后行。【参考范文】I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer.Growing more panic,I began to cry.Fortunately,hearin
10、g me crying,my dad came and helped me lay my head on the table,so my neck could rest for a while.Then he said to me,“Listen,honey.I have to cut this pumpkin in half.”I had no choice but to keep still with my eyes tightly closed and listen to the knife moving on the pumpkin.Moments later,my head was
11、finally released from this horrible pumpkin cage.Then my mom told me she had just filmed me managing to pull my head out of the pumpkin.That video was posted the day before Halloween.Surprisingly,it became a hit that the video started racking up hundreds of thousands of views.At the very beginning,h
12、ardly could I contain my embarrassment when I was recognized as the one in the video.However,with time going by,my life was back on track.Whenever I thought about the day on which I got my head stuck in a pumpkin,I couldnt help but laugh out loud.I would say I learned my lessonlook before you leap!维
13、度二 如何营造故事冲突故事最令人津津乐道的部分往往是它的情节。故事首先是“事故”,换句话说,情节中的冲突孕育了故事。阅读时,我们总是被冲突或一连串的冲突“牵引”,与主人公“同呼吸,共命运”。一个好故事,本质上就是对冲突的记录。冲突存在于对立的两股力量主角与反派,不同的观点或截然不同的道德选择等。它可以是外在的,也可以是内在的。冲突推动情节发展,走向高潮,最终得到解决。下面介绍三种增加故事冲突的途径。途径1增加外部冲突增加外部冲突是一种明显有效的可以达到故事高潮的方式。冲突带来紧迫感,将故事推向顶点。1.角色之间的冲突示例On the fourth or fifth night,we had t
14、rouble finding a hotel with a vacancy.After driving in vain for some time,Mom suddenly got a great idea:Why didnt we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there?David and I became nervous.分析:开车找旅馆徒劳无功母亲建议搭帐篷David和我倍感紧张,心有不悦(母子的观点不一)2.角色与环境之间的冲突示例Then Mac heard q
15、uick and loud breathing behind him.he saw instantly that it wasnt a dog at all,but a wolf,quickly catching up with him.Macs heart jumped.,he fired the spray at the wolf.A bright red cloud enveloped the animal,and to Macs relief,it fell back,shaking its head.But a minute later,.Then it.,tearing open
16、his tent bag.He fired at the wolf a second time,and again,it fell back.分析:人(角色)狼(环境)大战:Mac骑车独行,路遇饿狼,与之搏斗,险象环生。3.时间刻不容缓,决策变得紧急示例The car abruptly stopped in front of him.“Get into the car.”Paul shouted at Mac.Mac jumped off the bike and slid into the car without delay as the wolf was just two steps away and was about to tear Mac into pieces.What a narrow escape!分析:汽车突然停在面前Mac紧急上车避险饿狼近在咫尺(此情此景,刻不容缓)4.增加意外情节,营造困难境地示例But before we jumped off the horses,we found that we had been off the beaten track a
