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1、作文课13iwanttosay 第一遍： 自主通读全文，思考出文章的优点. 2015年二模徐汇区作文 I want to say “ Be brave” to myself。 I want to say these words to my myself because I am too shy to get along well with others and live a satisfying school life. For example ， I am afraid of asking teachers for help when I cant understand their word
2、s clearly。 Beisides， it is hard for me to communicate with others and exchange my ideas with them。 Because of this， I have few friends at school。 This words means couuage to me。 It enables me to face these problems bravely no matter how many difficulites I have met。 By saying these words to my self，
3、 I am brave enough to get along well with my classmates。 Life is full of ups and downs， and I should have a positive attitude towards life。 Be brave, and I will live a happier life. 第二遍: 理解并内化老师的点评 2015年二模徐汇区作文 I want to say “ Be brave” to myself。 （言简意赅，回到第一个问题)（以下红的文字是对第二个问题的回答，斜体字主题句,剩下的句子是对主题句的进一
4、步阐释。构成了总-分的结构 ） I want to say these words to my myself because I am too shy to get along well with others and live a satisfying school life. For example ， I am afraid of asking teachers for help when I cant understand their words clearly. Beisides， it is hard for me to communicate with others and ex
5、change my ideas with them. Because of this, I have few friends at school. （以下绿色的字体是对第三个问题的回答，斜体字是主题句,剩下的绿色字体是对主题句的阐释, 构成 总-分的结构） This words means couuage to me. It enables me to face these problems bravely no matter how many difficulites I have met. By saying these words to my self, I am brave enoug
6、h to get along well with my classmates. Life is full of ups and downs， and I should have a positive attitude towards life。 Be brave, and I will live a happier life。 （最后一段点题，起到了画龙点睛的作用） 第三遍： 写英语作文，就是在内容提纲把握准确的情况下，如何运用平时讲过的词组，词组用好了,文章就分高。 I want to say “ Be brave” to myself. I want to say these words
7、to my myself because I am too shy to get along well with others and live a satisfying school life. For example , I am afraid of asking teachers for help when I cant understand their words clearly. Beisides， it is hard for me to communicate with others and exchange my ideas with them. Because of this
8、， I have few friends at school。 This words means couuage to me。 It enables me to face these problems bravely no matter how many difficulites I have met. By saying these words to my self, I am brave enough to get along well with my classmates. Life is full of ups and downs, and I should have a positive attitude towards life. Be brave， and I will live a happier life。
