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1、 2022年6月英语六级考前热点高分(六)1)近年来越来越多的大学生开头使用信用卡2)分析产生该现象的缘由3)针对大学生使用信用卡提出你的建议 Credit Cards on Campus_行文思路此题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析产生该现象的缘由，提纲第3点要求针对该现象给出“我”的建议，由此可推断本文应为现象解释型作文。依据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述大学生使用信用卡的现状;分析大学生信用卡用户增加的缘由;针对大学生使用信用卡提出“我”的建议。高分范文Credit Cards on CampusIn recent years, credit cards
2、 have 1gained more popularity among college students. 2With banks more focus on college market, 3an increasing number of college students have applied for a credit card and begun to consume by it.4The following three factors can account for the popularity of credit cards in college. 5Firstly, a cred
3、it card provides overdrawing service, 6which is 7a big attraction for those students who have no much money for their domination. 5Secondly, a credit card can help release financial burdens on those poor students, and 8hence reduce the risk of their dropping school for lacking money. 5Besides, many
4、banks make some preferential policies on credit cards, like sending a gift, lowering year cost. 7Drawn by these policies, many college students apply for credit cards.5As far as I am concerned, it is not a bad thing for college students to own credit cards. 5However, there is misuse of credit cards
5、among college students. Many students use credit cards to buy luxurious things they dont need really, and even some of them owe a big credit cards debt. 5Therefore, schools and banks have responsibility to let college students learn how to use credit cards properly. 9Only in this way can college stu
6、dents enjoy really the advantages of credit cards.【亮点点评】1“越来越流行”。2“随着”，介词。3“越来越多的”。4用于引出缘由。5过渡连接词语，使文章条理清楚、连接严密。6which引导非限制性定语从句。7表示“吸引”的两种不同的方式，用词富于变化。8“由此，因此”。9“only+状语”位于句首，引起句子局部倒装。佳句临摹1.佳句：With banks more focus on college market, an increasing number of college students have applied for a credi
7、t card.临摹：随着市场经济的快速进展，金钱在社会中扮演着越来越重要的角色。_.2.佳句： A credit card can help those poor students pay their tuition and fees, and hence reduce the risk of their dropping school.临摹：一些同学盼望通过社会实践提高自己的力量，并由此来增加就业时机。3.佳句：Drawed by these policies, many college students apply for credit cards.临摹：在就业压力的迫使下，一些大学生开头
8、自主创业。_.【KEY】1. With the rapid development of market economy, money plays a more and more important role in the society.2. Some students hope to enhance their practical abilities by attending social practice, and hence increase their chances of employment.3. Forced by employment pressure, some college graduates begin to set up their own businesses.
