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1、感知文体常识感知文体常识本单元的写作任务是写一篇关于实施急救的故事,属于叙事性文体。写作时要按时间顺序写,做到条理清晰。写作内容集中在实施急救的过程以及最终的结果。牢记写作素材牢记写作素材(一)增色词汇1.emergencyn.紧急情况2.woundn.伤口3.keep/staycalm保持镇静4.getinjured/drowned受伤/溺水5.dealwith处理6.give/performfirstaid实施急救7.feelrelieved感到宽慰8.furthertreatment进一步治疗9.makeadifference产生作用(二)精彩句型1.Ifapersonstopsbrea
2、thing,youshouldstarthis/herbreathassoonaspossible,usingthemouth-to-mouthway.如果有人停止了呼吸,你应该利用口对口的方式尽快让他/她呼吸。2.Ifapersonisbleedingbadly,youshouldapplypressuretothewoundtostopthebleeding.如果有人流血不止,你应该按住伤口来止血。3.Becarefulnottomovethevictimviolently.要当心,不要剧烈移动患者。4.Ifapersonispoisonedbythegas,openthedoorsand
3、windowstoletthefreshairinatonce.如果有人煤气中毒,立刻把门窗打开,让新鲜空气进来。5.Atthesametime,youmust/shouldcallforhelp.与此同时,你必须/应该打电话求助。6.Thestoryisagoodexampleinwhichfirstaidmakesabigdifference.这个故事是一个很好的例子,它证明急救的作用非常大。示例写作步骤示例写作步骤【写作要求写作要求】上周日下午,你和你的朋友在河边散步时,听到河中有人在喊救命。于是你们迅速地救起了他,并对他实施了必要的急救。请你就这件事写一篇80词左右的短文,投递到学校英
4、文报Youth,主要内容包括:1.描述事故发生的过程;2.实施急救的过程(让他平躺;实施口对口人工呼吸;联系救护车和他的家人);3.简要表达你对掌握一定急救知识的重要性的想法。【审题谋篇审题谋篇】体裁记叙文人称第一人称为主时态一般过去时话题实施急救框架第一段:描述事故发生的过程第二段:实施急救的过程第三段:感想及体会【遣词造句遣词造句】1.词汇喊救命把拉出来意识到实施急救让某人平躺实施口对口人工呼吸_苏醒过来因某事而感谢某人产生重大作用screamforhelppull.outbeawarethat.givefirstaidlaysbononesbackapplythemouth-to-mou
5、threscuebreathingcometooneselfbegratefultosbforsthmakeabigdifference2.句式(1)要点翻译上周日下午,我和朋友正在河边散步,突然听到河中有人在喊救命。LastSundayafternoon,myfriendandIwerewalkingalongtheriver_intheriver.当看到有人溺水时,我们毫不迟疑地跳进河里,把他拉了出来。Whenwesawadrowningperson,we_.whenweheardsomeonescreamingforhelpjumpedintotheriverwithoutdelayan
6、dpulledhimout一到河岸,我们意识到应该马上对他实施急救。Assoonaswereachedthebank,we_.通过这次事故,我们认识到懂得急救知识确实会产生很大作用。Throughthisaccident,werealizedthatcouldreallymakeabigdifference.wereawarethatweshouldgivefirstaidtohimrightawayaknowledgeoffirstaid(2)句式升级用动词-ing形式改写句用“on+doing”改写句用“do/does/did+动词原形”改写句Seeingadrowningperson,w
7、ejumpedintotheriverwithoutdelayandpulledhimout.Onreachingthebank,wewereawarethatweshouldgivefirstaidtohimrightaway.Throughthisaccident,werealizedthataknowledgeoffirstaiddidmakeabigdifference.【妙笔成篇妙笔成篇】LastSundayafternoon,myfriendandIwerewalkingalongtheriverwhenweheardsomeonescreamingforhelpintherive
8、r.Seeingadrowningperson,wejumpedintotheriverwithoutdelayandpulledhimout.Onreachingthebank,wewereawarethatweshouldgivefirstaidtohimrightaway.Welaidhimonhisbackandappliedthemouth-to-mouthrescuebreathingoverandoveragain.Meanwhile,myfriendcalledhisparentsandanambulance.Soonafterhecametohimself,hisparent
9、sanddoctorsarrived.Hisparentswereverygratefultousforourtimelyhelp.Throughthisaccident,werealizedthataknowledgeoffirstaiddidmakeabigdifference.针对训练假设你是李华。在下午放学回家的路上,你发现邻居Jack叔叔昏倒在路边。在路人的帮助下,你对他进行急救。一个路人叫来救护车,Jack被送往医院。请根据以上提示写一篇短文,记述整个过程。注意:1.词数80左右;2.请在相应位置作答。Iwaswalkinghomeafterschoolthisafternoonw
10、henInoticedmyneighbourUncleJacklyingbytheroadside,unconscious.Withthehelpofthepassers-by,Iclosedhisnosewithmyfingers,andbreathedintohismouthuntilhebegantobreathesmoothlyagain.Oneofthepassers-byofferedtocallforanambulance.Severalminuteslater,theambulancearrived,andtookhimtothehospital.ThedoctorsaidIhaddoneagreatjob,savingthelifeofUncleJack.Ifeltproudofit.
