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1、论文发表专家一l书面表达别出心裁关键词：书面表达；出彩；词汇；句式；连接词在高考试卷上写出别出心裁、独具匠心的文章，博得阅卷教 师的好感，获得理想的分数，这不仅是学生思考的问题，也是高三 老师们讨论的重要内容。高考书面表达旨在考查考生根据题示运用 书面语进行交际的能力。考生应能：准确使用语法和词汇；使 用一定的句型、词汇，清楚，连贯地表达自己的意思。书面表达对 学生语言生成能力要求较高，考生要获得高分，应深刻理解书面表 达评分标准第五档的给分范围和要求，在打好句子表达基本功的基 础上采取一些相应的策略。一、尽量选用高级词汇、短语从评分标准可以看出，高考书面表达提倡与鼓励考生使用高级词 汇，因此
2、考生在考场书面表达中要尽可能使用一些高级表达方式以 提高文章的表达效果，提升文章的表达档次。例 1 一般表达：because it rained heavily, the sports meet ing was delayed.高级表达：it rained dogs and cats, as a con seque nee, the sports meeti ng had to be put off.例 2 一般表达： whe n he was young, he wan ted to lear n everythi ng.高级表达： as a young man, he had a stro
3、ng appetite foreverythi ng.二、句式表达力求灵活多变1. 使用分词（短语）、with复合结构，使句子简单明了，严密紧例 1 一般表达：our school lies at the foot of a mountain, there is a river flowing in front of it.高级表达： at the foot of mountain lies our school, witha river flowing in front of it.例 2 一般表达： when he walked out of the park, the old men h
4、appe ned to see the road accide nt.高级表达： whenwalking out of the park, the old manhappened to wit ness the road accide nt.2. 使用被动句式，突出表达中的重点例 1 一般表达：the local government should take measures to solve the problem.高级表达： effective measures should be take n by the local gover nment to solve the problem.例
5、 2 一般表达： we should do something to protect the en vir onment.高级表达：somethi ng should be done to protect the en vir onment.3. 使用倒装句，打破单一的“主+谓”或“主+系+表”结构，使 句序活泼、生动。例 1 一般表达： we can achieve our goal in this way.层次提升： on ly in this way can we achieve our goal.例 2 一般表达： as soon as we arrived, we began to
6、set up our tent.层次提升： no sooner had we arrived tha n we bega n to set up our tent.4. 使用强调句式，突出重点例 1 一般表达：his great efforts helped him out of the trouble.层次提升：it was his great efforts that helped him out ofthe trouble.例 2 一般表达：the other part of the student think they are ofte n disturbed by the no is
7、es in the classroom.层次提升：the other part of the students think it is thenoises in the classroom that often disturb them.5. 使用主从复合句，避免过多的简短句式，使句式复杂、多变、灵活。例 1 一般表达：to our surprised, the little girl knows so many things.层次提升： what surprised us most is that the little girl knows so many things.例 2 一般表达：i
8、t was quite an experienee for us both will n ever forget it for the rest of my life.层次提升：it was quite an experienee forus both, which i ll n ever forget for the rest of my life.6. 使用无生命主句，使句子更具生命力、感染力。例 1 一般表达：the 29th olympie gameswas successfullyheldin beiji ng in 2008.层次提升：the year 2008 saw the s
9、uccess of the 29th olympie games held in beiji ng.例 2 一般表达：in 2008 a destructive earthquake shook wen chua n.层次提升： wen chua n wit nessed a destructive earthquake in2008.7. 恰当运用成语、谚语，使语言更显魅力。女口 every coins has its two sides.（事物都具有两面性） where there is a will, there is a way.（有志者事竟成） all work andno play
10、 makes john a dull boy.（只学习不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻）等谚语。三、巧妙运用过渡性成份匸交发表专家一m国学朮发叢网过渡性词汇的准确而贴切使用，文章将显得更通顺，行文更流畅， 逻辑更严密。例 1 一般表达：the product is of good quality and the priceis low.层次提升：the product is of good quality ，besides，the priceis low.例 2 一般表达：it began to rain ， and at that time we gotlost.层次提升：it began to rain，worse still/ what was worse ，we got lost at the time.此类过渡性词汇很多，考生应注意多积累。四、规范书写清晰流畅的英文书写显然能给阅卷老师一个良好的印象。网上阅卷都是将考生试卷扫描上去，纸质卷面是什么样，电脑就显示什么样。字迹不清、涂涂改改可能影响得分。书面表达是英语学习中的重点和难点，正所谓“冰冻三尺非一日之寒”。要得高分，并非一朝一夕能办到的事情。只有在平时的写作练习中时时刻刻运用这些策略，方能决胜高考。
