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1、 2022六级考试作文写作专项训练7Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Is Thrift Still a Good Virtue? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)随着人们生活水平的提高，一些人认为节省和朴实的生活方式已经过时了 2)但是许多人反对这种说法 3)你的看法是，
2、为什么? Is Thrift Still a Good Virtue? 行文思路 此题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一种观点，提纲第2点提出另外一种相反的观点，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”的观点，由此可推断本文应为比照选择型作文。 依据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：提出第1种观点：节省和朴实的生活方式已经过时了，并说明理由;提出第2种观点：节省和朴实仍旧是一种美德，并说明理由;说明“我”对节省的看法，并说明理由。 高分范文 Is Thrift Still a Good Virtue? With the improvement of the living standards, many peop
3、le are 1no longer interested in the simple life style 2and some of them even feel ashamed to be thrifty. What they pursue is the latest fashion. In their eyes, thrift is already out of style. 3However, still other people insist that thrift is a good virtue. They say that the unprecedented power of p
4、roduction doesnt mean that we are entitled to a life of extravagance, because our natural resources are limited 2and some of them even are 4on the decline. 5Moreover, they hold that waste may lead to degradation of social atmosphere and environmental pollution as well. 6As to me, I prefer the latter
5、 opinion. I believe 7 “Waste not, want not.” The truth of this saying is 8not to give up comfort but to enhance efficiency. 5In fact, economic growth depends enormously on saving. 5Besides, there are still millions of Chinese 9living under poverty line. We can never afford reckless waste. 5Therefore
6、, 10it is no doubt that thrift is still a good virtue that we should not give up. 【亮点点评】 1“不再”。 2表示递进。 3引出另外一种观点。 4“在下降”。 5过渡连接词语，使文章条理清楚、连接严密。 6用于引出自己的观点或选择。 7引用谚语“俭以防匮”。 8not. but连接并列构造，意为“不是而是”。 9现在分词短语作后置定语。 10“毫无疑问”。 佳句临摹 1.佳句：Our natural resources are limited and some of them even are on the d
7、ecline. 临摹：车祸使人们的财产患病极大的损失，甚至还夺走了很多人的生命。 2.佳句：The truth of this saying is not to give up comfort but to enhance efficiency. 临摹：我们永久都不应当低估自己的力量，而应当信任一句谚语：“有志者，事竟成。” 【KEY】 1. Traffic accidents have caused great damages to peoples properties and even taken away thousands of peoples lives. 2. We should never underestimate our abilities but should believe in the proverb: “Where there is a will, there is a way.”
