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1、2004高考英语满分作文1. 【试题回放】假设你是李华，你在报上看到北京电视台今年七月将举办外国人“学中文，唱中文歌”才艺大赛。你的美国朋友Peter正在北京一所大学学中文，你觉得他应去试一试。请按以下要点给他写信告知此事，并表示可以提供帮助。比赛时间：7 月18日 。报名时间：截止到6月30日。报名地点：北京电视台注意：1.词数：100左右 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3.参考词汇：才艺大赛talent showDear Peter,I read in a newspaper today that a “Learn Chinese, Sing Chinese Songs” Foreig
2、ners Talent Show will be held in Beijing Television Station on July 18. I know you like singing, and you are in Beijing during that period. I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent, and how well youve learned Chinese. If you would like to try, you ll have to go to the TV sta
3、tion to sign up before the end of June. If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help.Yours,Li Hua名师点评从整体上说，本文书写得简洁明快。语言简单平实，要点囊括齐全，结构完整。本文的主要特点是让步状语从句的使用，最后两句话，采用了if引导的让步状语从句，结合将来时使用。2.【试题回放】假设你是李华，加拿大一所学校将于今年暑假组织学生来你校访问。其间，Andy Smith将借住你家。请你代表全家写信给Andy，欢迎他的到来，并告知有关事宜。信的要
4、点如下：1. 上午：学校活动2.下午：游览市区3. 晚上：看电视，玩游戏，聊天注意：1. 词数：100左右2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯3. 参考词汇：安排arrangeDear Andy,Im so glad that youll be here with me and my family for the summer holiday. Im writing to express our warm welcome and introduce the activities during your stay here.In the morning ,some activities at sc
5、hool will be arranged. Youll visit our classrooms, reading rooms, labs, and so on. Well take this opportunity to exchange our views, talking about school life, and so on.In the afternoon, you can tour around the city. And Ill act as your tour guide. Our city has changed a lot and takes on a new look
6、. You can see what is our city like with your own eyes.At night , we can watch TV, play games and talk about what were interested in. Im sure youll enjoy yourself. Im looking forward to your coming.Yours sincerely,Li Hua名师点评本文行文自然流畅，文章要点齐全，意思表达真切。详略得当，重点突出。从语言使用的角度来说，不但使用了一些生动的动词，准确的名词，同时为了使本文串联自然，又
7、使用了时间状语为连接词，将文章按照时间顺序叙述完整。3.【试题回放】假设你是李越,你的加拿大笔友Steve来信说,他和他的一些同学正在学中文,请你推荐两本学中文的词典.根据下表提供的信息,请你给他写一封回信.1. 英汉/汉英词典新华字典 2. 收词(字)18,000(英语) 20,000(汉语)10,0003.价格52元11元 4.特点大量例子、用法说明,适合初学者中国最常用的汉语字典参考词汇: 推荐 recommend (V.) 新华字典 Xinhua Dictionary (XD)英汉/汉英词典 The English-Chinese Chinese-English Dictionary
8、(ECCED)Dear Steve,Im so pleased to learn that you and your classmates are learning Chinese.Id like to recommend the following two dictionaries.The English-Chinese/Chinese-English Dictionary is really a good one for beginners. It has 18,000 English words and 20,000 Chinese words. Besides plenty of ex
9、amples, it has many notes telling you bow to use a word. Xinhua dictionary is the most popular Chinese dictionary , and it has a vocabulary of 10,000 words. It may also be useful to some advanced learners of Chinese. Of the two, ECCED is the more expensive, costing 52 yuan, and XD costs 11 yuan.Plea
10、se let me know if you want me to buy these dictionaries.Yours,Li Yue名师点评本文要完成的是书信的主要部分，因此不需要注意格式，但是不能遗漏要点。本文要点齐全，内容完整，详略得到。介绍的时候，层次清晰，逐一举例。文章流畅而连贯。有很多关于词汇和字典的表述，值得我们积累。4. 【试题回放】假设你是下图的李华。请根据图画所提供的信息，写一篇英语作文，描述昨天晚上邻居看足球赛影响你学习的情况，并描写你随后与邻居交涉的过程(如：你向邻居提出要求，对方向你表示歉意等。)注意：1. 词数：80120 2. 可以编写对话或其它叙述方式描写你与
11、邻居的交涉过程About 9 oclock last night, I was doing my homework. Suddenly I heard my neighbor shouting and laughing loudly. He was watching a football game on TV. I couldnt go on studying and became impatient. I covered my ears, trying to keep the noises out, but failed. So I had to go my neighbor.I knock
12、ed at his door and said, Good evening, Mr. Yang! Could you please turn down your TV a bit? I am doing my homework.“Oh, Im really sorry to have disturbed you. Well do as you say.” My neighbor said politely.“Thank you very much.” I said and went back to continue my study.名师点评这篇文章从整体上来看，内容完整，要点齐全。在准确领悟
13、题意的基础上，用平实的语言，将文章娓娓道来，连贯而流畅。句式搭配长短结合。文章对对话的描写，很生动，让人有种身临其境的感觉。2005高考英语满分作文5. 【试题回放】假定你是李华，正是英国牛津参加短期语言培训，计划星期天去伦敦旅游。互联网上一则广告引起了你的注意，但一些具体信息不明确(箭头所指内容)。请给该旅行社发一封电子邮件，询问有关情况。注意：1.词数100左右，信的格式已为你写好。2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.参考词汇：牛津Oxford 费用feeDear Sir/Madame,Im writing for more information about the day
14、 tour to London.As a student at Oxford University, Id like to know if you have any special price for students. As for the money you charge, does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places listed? What about lunch? Is it included? Or do I need to bring along my own food?How long will the tour
15、 last? Since I need to prepare my lessons for the nest day, Id like to know the time to return. Besides, is there any time for shopping? I really want to have a look at the big stores in London.Yours,Li Hua名师点评本文是根据画面的提示来写一封电子邮件。作者在文章中首先把握了全部的要点，叙述较为完整;其次，作者运用一些过渡句和衔接词将文章串联，意思连贯。文章中采用了第一人称和一般现在时，这是值得肯定的地方。全国卷(四川、云南、陕西等地区用)6. 【试题回放】假设你是李华，最近国内一家英文报纸正在讨论北京动物园是否应迁出市区。以下是你所在班级讨论的情况。请你给该报写一封信，反映讨论结果。赞成迁出： 1.游客多，交通堵塞 2.郊区环境好 反对迁出： 1.建于1906年，中外闻名 2.搬迁易造成动物死亡注意：1.词数100字左右，信的开头已为你写好。2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.参考词汇： 郊区suburbDear Editor , Recently ,in our class there has been a heated discussion
