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1、Error Analysis After examining the students compositions, the author discovered that the students committed different kinds of errors. The errors in each of the compositions were identified and categorized in groups based on English linguistic rules and writing conventions. Several types of errors a
2、re sorted out. There are not only linguistic errors but also errors in content, organization and style of students writings. The following errors are taken from their compositions (Note: sentences with * in this part are wrong sentences): (1)Morphological and syntactical errors （词法和句法错误或者用词用句错误）: a.
3、 *I did a good work in the high jump practice in a PE class. I did a good job in the high jump in the PE class b. *Sporting is not only health to our body but also beneficial to our mental. Sporting is not only good to our body but also beneficial to our mind. c. *With the promoting of living standa
4、rd, waste becomes more serious day by day especially on campus. With the improving of living standard, waste becomes more serious day by day especially on campus. d. *But there raises a question that we should buy or borrow books But there arises a question whether we should buy or borrow books e. *
5、In the library, there various books. It need no money to read them. In the library, there are various books which you can read for free. f. *Its no doubt that books are very important in our life. In addition that so many people are interested in selecting and keeping books Theres no doubt that book
6、s are very important in our life. In addition, so many people are interested in selecting and keeping books. g. *Most of all, someone should choose what is suit for himself, and do ones best. Above all, someone should choose what is suitable for him, and do his best. h. *They think new books can be
7、more benefit to their learning. They think new books can be more beneficial to their learning. i. *By reading these books, I can relax myself in the intensity day. By reading these books, I can relax myself in my busy and tense life. (2) Collocation errors which make it hard to be understood （搭配错误）:
8、 a. *Up to now, I have contacted (接触了) a lot of teachers. Up to now, I got to know many teachers. b. *I made fun from football when he had class. I had fun in playing football in his class. c. *There is a general discussion today about the issue of buying or borrowing books, the purpose that people
9、acquiring a book is to read it. There is a general discussion today about the issue of buying or borrowing books, the purpose of possessing a book is to read it. d. *And if you buy a new book there will be no spots on the paper which will interfere you to read the book. And you can put the book fore
10、ver too And if you buy a new book there will be no stains on the papers which will hinder your reading. And you can keep the book forever too e. *Some people are in favor of the idea of borrowing books. On one hand, they submit it will avoid waste and be healthy to the environment. On the other hand
11、, they think they can take full use of time by borrowing books. Some people are in favor of the idea of borrowing books. On one hand, they acknowledge that it will avoid waste and be good to the environment. On the other hand, they think they can make full use of time by borrowing books. f. *Many pe
12、ople like books, they trend to buy the book they like. They regard books as fortune of knowledge. Meanwhile, many books in the room make a phenomenon of study. Many people like books; they tend to buy the books they like. They regard books as mental wealth. Meanwhile, many books in the room make a k
13、ind of scholastic atmosphere g. *Further study can enrich my knowledge and broaden my eyesight. in the eyes of employer, relevant further study could prove a candidates success. Further study can enrich my knowledge and broaden my horizon. In the eyes of employer, relevant further study can ensure a
14、 candidates success. h. *In the case of them, they can get a further degree so that they can gain more opportunities to find a better job and get a well-pay. In their case, they can get a higher degree so that they can have more opportunities to find a better job and get a handsome pay. i. *Nowadays
15、, our country is influenced by the financial crisis. Nowadays, our country is affected by the financial crisis. j. *It is a great opportunity for them to create their own business. It is a great opportunity for them to start up their own business. k. *There is no doubt that live off campus will gain
16、 our parents burden. There is no doubt that living off campus will increase our parents burden. l. *There are some benefits that living on campus. First, they can comprehend with classmates more deeply. m. There are some benefits of living on campus. First, they can communicate with classmates more intimately. n. *I think time management is easier if living off cam
