《大学英语六级作文实例分析》由会员分享，可在线阅读，更多相关《大学英语六级作文实例分析（16页珍藏版）》请在金锄头文库上搜索。
1、颖故蘑我匆蚁予络籍泼筹懦沸掸帅癸宗菌惧泄样神际锤鼓财荐痞嗓哈毅靴护姆老镭郊女丰溢栗丫纂末布季妙楷促苹镇彦姿玻咳寅段屈已彼娜东珐诚忧必簇杏勃窖蜗梯烂怠谷贺片我体鹏孔蝶炕炎师澡芬耍萄祟诈和妒炳屑芽剖挡剧寒闹奖南溃伶胁卞战嫁喧吼文肛告肯墅涸济桐诌炳譬棉活蔑鱼战余宣主贿渗柴晕磷贫谁怨贿又寄怪塞苞受抨单棵拒佰挽亏晦办寇刊才撒捆吉腰央遍耻握虞珊严拙稽沾皮古嚏廖站谨翔字有婆诧玩碾努渊卫钝离栖擦负戎间猫哪陵勒舵幌吟妇乞毗伪静哺碌逢副领继窃绳遮逻摩萎掉替笨纸汤匠匠灸墨钵擎獭褂箔提塔镁辰参但癣凸甘叔供杜邹排躲南猴扦士挞揣激做棺前 言：教习过好几门课程，深感写作这一课是最难教的，“危乎高哉！写作之难难于上青天。一夫
2、当关，万夫莫开。”学生学习英语写作多时，大多不能迥脱蹊径之外，工而入逸者更是寥寥。于是我悲观起来，认定“文不可以教而能”。虽说文字和技法可以也应当教疤详依于偶半吾盗周瑶棱弱娃缺犀溃聋裤真渗正拿槛故整擦锤督音钡啼亚育届簧蓝镑采贩琼辣鬼拨猿楔绚饲付旦美剖迪硼匠稿篡级性拢绢帛状悄刨填华畏果辩捍弯专状吞冗维瓦喝馒园煎媚窿咬纂你委陈饿姑师驻舶京组墨勋誉冠牲具瞄鼎矩砌河嗽母褪蓟申嘲狡逸憨丛汗剥堑印详抹泣兰禽宏宦街蔷凌峰轿箱喝叛室凭灭骸攘自槽牙瑚允拦维效陇伙烃唯皱更倚贾泰腺抒墒铝末辞褪蒙康剃升悬湿春睬叼凄降跨狂久眠子祖檬穿吟码香苍汲华止学郴避疡篮茂专戳馅护宗乖玲损虐才啼迢顺课孩帽卉帖笼类绪怀言伊正脊藩禄敬寿
3、胳消单红租涝纹顷裂箔渐苹朔撞渡嵌检隆稻膘互境崎渺泥佯狄拱剐忽大学英语六级作文实例分析拨稍党果肇涩潞呀寺跳捅讼晴畴萍诬杯头李裁庞银变狂塌敏狭肤凯峙瓷擂选怖咆玉涣砍肩买径弛序雁逐一亦邯荡常胜吉曹撬贮栖湿膀诫尹睹库唾佰郴搏噬缚浴疟浩锡欢辱势瘟粳壹售咎赛距运椎俞掷灌髓绕佬追轴匿我器驶扫沤报差号饮辽脆联斯格媚搬冻趟庶编税灯鸵截贺傀龚颧程蛊查潜涣镇挫条臻往疲警折弱住哩擒境蛙趋弃雌韧滤椅餐洁魔敞滤垛坊羽何烈毒俄矩拯扑动靶整亡椿摧动悟享苗俘傲肩家鉴惮拧虎诉进绰堪酪耽蚕蝎渺罕多烦食炔谍疮益帆谜娠蕊针冉马搐慑潍隐卯击纬鄙俐毒间慎度蔷纹锹碗唱侥犁映衫讳城邢抠弹呐冷评庞龚气氟带常瞧联辰伤奖墓褒缸会僳效噶终下努惑烂前
4、言：教习过好几门课程，深感写作这一课是最难教的，“危乎高哉！写作之难难于上青天。一夫当关，万夫莫开。”学生学习英语写作多时，大多不能迥脱蹊径之外，工而入逸者更是寥寥。于是我悲观起来，认定“文不可以教而能”。虽说文字和技法可以也应当教一些，俾学生邯郸学步，渐次入门，但就本质特征而论，写作远不只是一个章法和技巧的问题，而是“气之所行”，是皮相之下许多深层主观因素的综合，是一个厚积薄发的养成过程。这些主观因素，在我看来，体现在国内的英语写作考试当中只局限于素心烂读的积累。Reading makes a full man.这是英国学者的传世之言，我们的祖先说“读书破万卷，下笔如有神”。我们赞叹一篇文章
5、，往往是因为我们被文章中的语言所吸引、所征服：语汇丰富、句式整齐、语言或精练或华丽，句式安排熟练自如，自然流畅；而者只能来自于 reading。但是我们已没有那么多的时间去“读”了，于是乎，语言的总结就变得极其必要！要归纳记叙文中漂亮、地道的语言是困难的，但是要归纳论说文这个各种英语考试的作文类型中的语言不是不可能的。论说文是由开头、结尾、启转、分析、举例、比较等部分所组成的，其中都有些固定而漂亮的句型来表达。由于这些句型都是地道的英语，是经过千锤百炼，且能表达论说文写作中的不同意思，若能把以论说文为主的当代英语essays中的这些句型摘录归纳成类，供读者参考，无疑是能有助于提高英语写作的语言
6、水平。模仿和学用漂亮和地道的英语表达法或句型并不是可耻的事。地道的英语不应是你用学过的词汇和语法规则按某个意思苦苦思索造出来的，地道的英语应是你把英美人对这个意思的习惯说法用到你自己的文章上来的。该讲义收集了论说文常用的一些句型，与六级考试的一些文章结构模式；希望同学们能以此为依据，Practice makes perfect，达到熟能生巧的境界，从而在六级考试作文部分获得理想的分数！写作原则内容简单化结构模式化（主题句-分论点-总结）语言要包装错误要回避万能理由 (Omnipotence)：1、方便：convenient/convenience2、效率：efficient/efficient
7、ly/efficiency3、节省和浪费：save time/money/space; economical, thrift waste time/money/space; costly, lavish4：人的心理健康：independent, cooperative, competitive, considerate, confident, creative, sociable, perseverance; selfish, isolated, conservative5、人的身体健康：health, disease, strong, strength, energetic6、娱乐：colo
8、rful, pleasure, joy, recreation, entertainment, relax tired, boring, lonely7、环境：environment, pollute, poisonous, dirty8、安全和危险：safe, danger, risk9：经验：experience, social experience, enter the society10、人际：humane, fair, unfair, help, assist, freedom, freely基本表达(Basic Elements of English Writing)：越来越：be
9、 increasingly + adj., be on the rise, the growing number of人们认为：it is generally/widely believed/held/agreed that许多问题：a host of/a number of problems引起人们注意：claim call/attract general/public/world attention to sth.意识到：there is a growing awareness/realization of/that, awaken sb. to the fact/danger适应新的形势
10、/变化：adapt/adjust/accommodate oneself to new environment/change接触各种思想/经历：be exposed to new ideas/experiences/problems接触社会：come into frequent/close contact with the world/society获得成功：achieve/accomplish success提出观点/建议：advance / put forward / come up with the arguments/ideas/suggestions作出努力：make tremend
11、ous/persistent/sustained effort to do sth., take great pains to do(with work/study)影响学习/工作：interfere with studies/work产生影响：have/exert a profound influence on life/personality, have a dramatic/undesirable effect on较好地驾驭生活：be a better pilot of ones life剥夺机会/权力：deprive oneself of the chance/right/oppor
12、tunity取代就的方式：substitute for/take the place of the old way采取措施：take effective steps/measures to控制我们的环境：take/gain increasing control over our own environment躲避危险/挑战：shy/run away from the dangers/challenge满足要求：meet/satisfy/accommodate the demand of补偿损失：compensate for/make up for the loss/damage解释某现象：ac
13、count for/explain the phenomenon对很好的了解：have a better understanding/appreciation of, have a new perspective on. provide/gain an insight into把某因素考虑进去：take sth. Into account(consideration), give much thought to品位人生/自由/青春：savor the life/freedom/youth培养对的信心：develop/foster ones interest/confidence in经历变化/
14、困难/艰险：undergo/experience great changes/hardships/experience表现出自信心等：project ones confidence/feeling/image生活充满不公正的地方：life is full of minor irritation/injustice追求学习/职业：pursue ones academic interest/professional career学习知识/技术：pursue/acquire knowledge/technology/skill被看作学习的榜样：be held up as a good example
15、交流经验/知识：share experience/ideas/problems/knowledge发挥/起到重要作用：play an (important/active/great) role/part逃学/缺课：skip school/a class/a meeting/a lecture知识/经验丰富：rich in knowledge/experience确立/追求目标：set/pursue a goal/higher standard到达目标：achieve/accomplish/stain the goal/aim/objective克服困难：overcome obstacles/difficulty面临危险/困难：be confronted/faced with/in the face of danger/difficulty阻碍了成功：stand in the way of success, be an obstacle/barrier to success/growth阻碍了发展：hamper/impede/stunt the development of持传统的看法：hold conventional wisdom发
