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1、2022年茂名一模读后续写之野外救助动物一、理解文章，设计情节（情节不用过于复杂）（10-12句）Para 1 ：However, it was really not easy for them to find it.然而，对他们来说，真的不容易找到它。 1. （抓住所给词“not easy”进行进一步描写）浓雾来临，看不见前方，缓慢前行。2. 弯下来盯着地上寻找线索。3. 累，担心，时刻关注周围。4. （进一步细节情感描写）仍然一无所获，绝望。5.（转机）突然，不远处传来痛苦的吼声。6. 他们喜出望外，发现Unicom。7. Unicom受伤非常严重（抓住第二段所给词：do first ai
2、d)Para 2: Without delay, Harry knelt down to do first aid on its wound with David holding the flashlight.没有延误, 哈利跪下来给它的伤口做急救，大卫拿着手电筒。8. David 温柔安抚Unicom，而Harry 立刻熟练地动手术。9. Unicom很安静，终于, 血止住了。10. 及时抢救，Unicom得救 11. 他们松了一口气，激动开心，挥手告别。12. 不知不觉已天亮，希望forest，wildlife也能迎来光明和希望。二、列举续写常用13大句式：（重温上一次的读后续写）句式1：
3、With +复合结构”又称为“with结构”At the thought of the fact that she didnt have lucky spikes, she felt more anxious with her heart beating fast and her feet sweating.一想到自己没有幸运的钉子，她就更加焦虑，心跳加速，脚出汗。Thrilled and joyful, Jodie hugged her teammates tightly with tears rolling down her face.Jodie 激动而高兴，紧紧地拥抱着队友，泪水从脸上滑
4、落。句式2 ：并列谓语，细化动作When the announcer said “Next up is the girls 100-meter hurdles”, Jodie took a deep breath and walked to the starting line slowly.当播音员说“接下来是女子100米栏”时，朱迪深吸一口气，慢慢地走到起跑线上。句式3 ：句子+ing/ed或ing/ed+句子用于表示动作伴随，原因或结果Jodie wore her brand-new spikes, waiting for her turn nervously and anxiously.
5、 Jodie穿着她崭新的钉子，紧张不安地等待着轮到她。句式4 巧用生动的无灵主语：All of a sudden, a familiar green glow caught her eye, it was Marisol who was approaching with her lost lucky spikes.突然，一道熟悉的绿色光芒吸引了她的目光，是Marisol带着她丢失的幸运钉子向她走来。句式5 ：情感形容词+句子Relieved(=breathing a sigh of relief), Eric thanked the man and switched the frequency
6、 back, “Mac, help is coming!” But there was no response.埃里克松了一口气，向那个人表示感谢，并将频率调回，“麦克，救命来了！”但没有回应。Thrilled and joyful, Jodie hugged her teammates tightly with tears rolling down her face.Jodie 激动而高兴，紧紧地拥抱着队友，泪水从脸上滑落。句式6：巧用时间状语，表达情节After what seemed like a century, Eric heard another voice. It was Sli
7、de Mountain Rescue who finally came!好像经历了一个世纪之后，埃里克听到了另一个声音。终于来了，是雪山救援队！句式7：. “一就”的表达法：as soon as, hardly/scarcelywhen, no sooner than, the moment/minute/second/instant, immediately/instantly/directly, on/upon+n.doing。The moment the announcer announced “Number 11, Jodie Nymble, takes the gold for Ri
8、verside Middle School”,thunderous cheers and laughter filled the Hidden Park. 当播音员宣布“11号，Jodie Nymble，为Riverside Middle School夺金”的那一刻,雷鸣般的欢呼和笑声充满了 Hidden Park.句式8：巧用“某人想到”:At the thought of the fact that she didnt have lucky spikes, she felt more anxious with her heart beating fast and her feet swea
9、ting.一想到自己没有幸运的钉子，她就更加焦虑，心跳加速，脚出汗。句式9 ：主句，which从句（定语从句）As a result, the sauce splashed onto the girls skirt, which was ruined completely. 结果，酱汁溅到了女孩的裙子上，裙子完全毁了。句式10 ：描写气氛或者氛围的句子。（情感词+ fill +地点）Worry and anxiety filled the air.空气中弥漫着忧虑和焦虑。句式11： 关于情感句子的积累:(表达情感的形容词+动作具体描写),用sothatJodie was so excited
10、and refreshed that she yelled out “My lucky spikes”.朱迪非常兴奋，神清气爽，她大叫“我的幸运钉”。1.兴奋:I was so excited/thrilled that I gave a jump in the air.我动得跳了起来 2.开心： I was so happy/cheerful that I jumped up and down.我高兴得上跑下跳 3.感动: I was so moved that I failed to say a word.我感动得一句话也说不出来 4.悲伤: I was so sad that I hid
11、 my face in my hands我难受得用手捂住了脸。 5.(生气)I was so angry that I failed to say a word我气得一句话也说不出。 6.（害怕） I was so scared/frightened that my palms sweated and my heart pounded. 我害怕得手心汗,心怦怦直跳。 7.（羞愧） I was so ashamed that I could feel my face burning.我羞愧得感觉自己的脸在燃烧。 句式12：副词修饰动词或句子（1）Jodie wore her brand-new
12、spikes, waiting for her turn nervously and anxiously. Jodie穿着她崭新的钉子，紧张不安地等待着轮到她。（2）When the announcer said “Next up is the girls 100-meter hurdles”, Jodie took a deep breath and walked to the starting line slowly.当播音员说“接下来是女子100米栏”时，朱迪深吸一口气，慢慢地走到起跑线上。（3）Thrilled and joyful, Jodie hugged her teammate
13、s tightly with tears rolling down her face.Jodie 激动而高兴，紧紧地拥抱着队友，泪水从脸上滑落。句式13：倒装或强调Not until then did Jodie realize that luck would always favor her as long as she spared no effort to do it.直到那时，朱迪才意识到，只要她不遗余力地去做，运气总是会眷顾她。呼应主题常用句式直到.才.(1) 倒装句：not until+时间状语 did sb realize that+主题从句(2) 强调句：it was only
14、 then that sb realized that+主题从句还记得某人的话，某人的话还在脑海中Ones words echoed/ rang out in ones ears that+主题三、巧用句式，写好句子Para 1: 然而，对他们来说，真的不容易找到它。1. 那是因为浓雾thick fog笼罩blanket了森林，几乎覆盖了一切。他们很难看到前面的地方，慢慢地走着。（无灵主语、句子+Ving、并列谓语 、副词使用)_2. 他们别无选择 have no choice but to do，只能弯腰 bend down to do寻找血迹或脚印等线索，这让他们走得更慢。（句子+which表示结果，“这”,副词的使用）_3. 他们又累又担心，总是盯着 fix their eyes on周围的环境。（情感形容词+句子）_4.尽管他们深入go deep into森林，但仍然没有找到，这使他们处于绝望的边缘(on the vergevd of despair)。（让步状语从句，句子+which表示结果，“这”）_5. （转机）突然，（转机）突然，救援人员听到了痛苦的吼声。All of a sudden, painful roars came to the rescue
