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1、【典例】（2015全国卷I ）假定你是李华, 你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文 请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿, 要点如下:1. 栏目介绍;2. 稿件内容;3. 稿件长度: 约400词;4. 交稿日期: 6 月28日前。注意: 1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;3. 开头语已为你写好。【解题思路】第一步: 依体裁谋篇章 结构对第一关内容写信邀请美国朋友为学校报纸投稿段落第一段表达邀请；第二段说明稿件要求；第三段表达期待第二步: 列要点选句式 要点全及格线要点一 : 表达约稿邀请 Id like to ask you to write an a
2、rticle for our schools English newspaper.要点二: 栏目介绍 The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper includes articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.要点三: 稿件内容 We would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the li
3、fe of American high school students.要点四: 稿件长度及交稿日期 400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28?要点五: 表达祝愿 Im looking forward to hearing from you.第三步: 扣主题拓展句 句式美优秀分 要点二拓展: 栏目介绍+栏目影响（非限制性定语从句） The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper includes articles written by foreign fr
4、iends about the cultures of their home countries, which is extremely popular among us students. 要点三拓展: 稿件内容+理由（原因状语从句）We would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students, for we students are greatly eager to know
5、your wonderful cultures.【现场阅卷作文升格】学生答卷加/urn 加俶;我来阅卷该生习作为四档作文, 得分为 18 分。能覆盖所有内容要点; 大部分句子基本正确, 可以适当增加复合句的使用; 文章词汇表达基本正确, 希望能更多使用一些高级词汇; 衔接 成分太少, 可以适当添加一些过渡词。1. 第二句 have 应改为 has, our schools English 是一个组织, 谓语应改用单数。2. 第三句应改为 The foreign cultures and the life of local people come out in the section. come
6、 out 为不及物动词短语, 其后不能跟宾语。3. 第三句和第四句可以合并成一个含定语从句的复合句: The foreign cultures and the life of local people come out in the section, which are often written by our foreign friends.4. 文章句子可以适当加入过渡词: what is more, in addition, and, besides, also, furthermore, too, moreover, as well as, additionally 等。五档作文Dea
7、r Peter,Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper.The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper includes articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries, which is extremely popular among us students. We would especially welcome articles
8、 about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students, for we students are greatly eager to know your wonderful cultures. You can write anything relevant to it so long as its interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your art
9、icle beforeJune 28?Im looking forward to hearing from you.Yours,Li Hua二、书信邮件类作文常用词汇、短语及句型（一）常用词汇/短语1. announcement n. 通知3. activity n. 活动5. course n. 课程7. vacation n. 假期9. potential n. 潜力11. information n. 信息13. pressure n. 压力15. conference n. 会议17. trust vt. 信任19. benefit vt. 使受益21. look forward to
10、 期待2. popularity n. 受欢迎, 流行4. volunteer n. 志愿者6. accommodation n. 住宿8. dormitory n. 宿舍10. behavior n. 行为12. charity n. 慈善14. preparation n. 准备16. organize vt. 组织18. attend vt. 参加20. confident adj. 有信心的22. give sb. a hand 帮某人忙23. take regular exercise 经常参加体育锻炼24. control the temper 控制脾气26. be helpful
11、 to 对有帮助28. be around the corner 即将来临30. in addition/whats more/besides 另外25. remain optimistic/calm 保持乐观/冷静27. be grateful to 感激29. make a huge success 取得巨大成功31. promote the friendship 促进友谊32. express warm welcome to sb. 对某人表达热烈欢迎33. develop sb. s interest 培养某人的兴趣 34. consist of 由组成35. benefit from
12、 从中获益36. wish sb. a pleasant time 祝某人玩得愉快37. compared with 和相比38. achieve a goal 实现目标39. develop a habit 培养习惯40. get along well with sb. 和某人很好地相处41. enjoy a colorful and fruitful life 享受多彩和充实的生活42. prepare for 为做准备43. spare no effort to do sth.不遗余力做某事44. raise the awareness of. . . 提高的意识45. make a b
13、ig difference 产生很大作用 46. succeed in 在成功47. make full use of 充分利用48. in need of 需要（二）常用句型1. 精彩开头 （2015全国卷 II ）Id like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home nextSaturday for the Double Ninth Festival.我想邀请您一起去参观（表达邀请） （2014新课标全国卷 I ）I am a student in China and I plan to go to
14、Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.我是一名的学生，我打算在假期（用于自我介绍） （2014新课标全国卷 I ）I have seen your advertisement and Id like to know somethingmore about your six-week English course.我看了你们的广告，我想更多地了解（表达询问） （2014北京 高考）I remember we planned to visit Yunnan in July but now because my left foot
15、 is injured, I cannot go with you as planned. 我记得我们原计划, 但是现在由于 我不能够和您如期前往。（用于陈述理由） （2014安徽高考）Im sorry to know that youre having such a hard time at the moment.得 知此刻我深感遗憾。（表达同情）2. 正文佳句 （2015全国卷II ）Well also spend some time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy. （活动内容）我们将一起花费一些时间, 我希望这会让他们高兴。 （2014新课标全国卷 I ）I would like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.我想知道是否（表达询问） （2014新课标全国卷II）In my free time, Ill continue to take regular exerc
