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1、高考英语写作提升课堂：求助信写作攻略初试锋芒假定你是李华，在英语学习方面遇到了困难。请你根据以下内容给你的美国好友Mark写一封求助信，请他给你一些建议。要点如下：1. 在高中学习已经半年多，虽然在英语学习上用功不少，但没有进步;2. 你在外语学习方面存在两个主要问题：不会读单词和记不住单词。注意：1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Mark，Yours，Li Hua文体攻略当你遇到困难或麻烦时寻求他人帮助是高考写作中一种常见的考查情境，其采用的考查形式就是应用文中的求助信。求助信应开门见山，直截了当地把你遇到的难题或
2、者困惑告诉对方，并向对方求助。一般分为三个步骤进行写作：第一步，询问对方情况，说明写信目的;第二步，说明困难，请对方帮忙;第三步，表达期盼之情。此外，写求助信时应注意：1. 正确把握时态，保证语言准确性写英文求助信的原因就是目前自己在某一方面存在困难，因此应用一般现在时表达文意，当然描述对方的帮助将会对自己产生的影响时应用一般将来时表达文意。同学们一定要牢记求助信的这些时态特点，并增强错误防范意识，养成错误防范习惯，确保语言准确性。2. 熟悉常用句型，提高文章整体美感写英文求助信时首先做自我介紹，此时可用“My name is . I m writing to you for some hel
3、p.”或“I m writing a letter to you to get some help.”。接着可简要交代自己所面临的困难，可用“I have met much difficulty in .”句型。请求对方做某事时可用“Would you like to.so that .？ ”“In the meanwhile/At the same time， I beg you to.so that.”“Also， I would like you to.”等句型。展望获得帮助后自己的进步时可用“I m sure with your help I can make great progre
4、ss.”。这些句型不但使用频率高，而且语气委婉，态度谦恭，符合求助信的语言特点。3. 贴切使用过渡性词汇，提高文章逻辑性列举自己所碰到的困难时可用first、 besides、 what s more等过渡性词汇。请求对方提供一系列帮助时可用in the meanwhile、 at the same time、 in addition、 also等过渡性词汇。这些过渡性词汇是英文求助信的特色过渡性词汇，应增强使用意识，养成使用习惯。4. 适当使用高级表达方式，提高文章表达档次写英文求助信时除使用常规高级词句之外，还可重点考虑几处高级表达方式。表达“面临巨大困难，所以只好求助”时可用现在分词作状
5、语，例如“Facing so much difficulty， I have to ask you for some help.”，也可使用过去分词作状语，例如“Faced with so much difficulty， I have to ask for your help.”。表达请求对方帮助以便自己能够有所进步时可使用so that或in order that引导目的状语从句。这个句型有很大的表达容量，它既可表达求助内容，又能表达对方给予帮助后对自己的积极影响，可谓一举两得。Dear Sir or Madam，I m Li Hua， an exchange student from C
6、hina. I took FL899 to London on January 1， 2020， and I remember having left my new black wallet on the chair. My ID card and two credit cards， as well as a 1，000 dollar bill are in my wallet. Would you be kind enough to send me the wallet to No.1 Black Road， London by mail if you find it？ Please ema
7、il me at if needed.I would greatly appreciate your timely help.Yours，Li Hua素材积累篇首句：点明身份并直接说明写信的求助目的。1. My name is Li Hua and I m writing this letter to seek your help. 我是李华，我写信是想寻求您的帮助。2. I m writing to you to ask whether you could do me a favor. 我写信是想问您是否能帮我一个忙。3. I m sorry to bother you， but I ha
8、ve some difficulties here and I need your help. 很抱歉打扰您，但我有些困难需要得到您的帮助。4. I am a middle school student and I am writing to tell you my problem which has troubled me for a long time. 我是一名中学生。我写信是为了告诉您一个困扰我很长时间的问题。篇中句：说明自己存在的困难、困惑并请求对方的帮助。1. I long to learn English well， but I don t know how， which mak
9、es me upset. 我渴望学好英语，但我不知道怎么学，这使我很沮丧。2. I have some difficulty in doing.which bothers me a lot. So I have no choice but to turn to you for help. 我在做方面有困难，这很困扰我。所以我别无选择只能向您求助。3. I seem not to be able to fit in well with others here. 在这儿似乎我不能与他人融洽相处。4. I dont feel quite accustomed to the life here. 我觉
10、得我没有完全习惯这儿的生活。5. I couldnt t concentrate on my lessons these days， and I failed in the last exam， which worries me a lot. 这些日子我不能专心学习，上次考试我没有及格，这使我很着急。6. I often feel left out in this school， and I don t know why. 在这所学校我经常感到受到冷落，我不知道这是怎么回事。篇尾句：表达期盼之情。1. Thanks for your kind consideration and I look
11、forward to receiving your earliest reply. 謝谢您的关照，期待收到您尽早的回复。2. I would be grateful if you really give me a hand. 如果您能帮我，我将十分感激。3. I m eager to get your timely help.I m eager for your timely help. 我渴望得到您及时的帮助。4. I would appreciate it if you could offer me a hand. 如果您能帮助我，我将感激不尽。5. Faced with/Facing s
12、o many difficulties， I have to turn to you for help.面对如此多的困难，我不得不向您求助。6. I wonder if you could do me a favor. 我想请您帮个忙。他山之石假定你是李华，从北京乘坐FL753航班抵达伦敦后发现钱包遗失。请给航空公司写一封邮件说明情况并寻求帮助。内容包括：1. 行程信息;2. 钱包特征;3. 联系方式。注意：1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。本文结构清晰，句式语言运用准确到位，语意流畅。文章分为三段，每个段落都能落实此类信件要求。行文连贯，层次分明，让人一目了然。在意
13、思表达方面，考生表达准确、生动，这些都为文章增色不少。此外，本文最大的特点是运用了很多自然得体的过渡，达到了写作要求，是一篇非常优秀的习作。求助信写作攻略 答案初试锋芒Dear Mark，How are you getting on these days？ I m writing to ask you for help.As you know， it has been more than half a year since I began to study in high school. However， I haven t made any progress in my English st
14、udy though I ve tried my best. Now I have two problems. One is that I don t know how to pronounce new words. The other is that I have difficulty memorizing words. Can you give me some advice on how to solve these problems？ I really need your help and I m looking forward to your early reply.Yours，Li
15、Hua他山之石Dear Sir or Madam，I m writing to report the loss of my wallet. I had it with me when I boarded FL753 from Beijing to London on October 23. I found it missing when trying to pay for the taxi as I arrived at my apartment. I think I may have lost it on the plane. If anyone finds a brown leather wallet with student ID card， credit card， bus pass and some cash， please contact me at 1361234567. You can t imagine how grateful I will be if I can have the wallet again， which means a great deal to me.Thank you very much for the favor you ll do to me.Sincerely yours，Li Hua学科网（北京）股份有限公司
