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1、 2022年6月英语六级考前热点高分(九)1)科学毕竟带给我们什么?这个问题始终备受争议2)许多人认为科学带来了许多问题，比方污染、核武器3)你对此的看法是What Does Modern Science Bring us?_行文思路此题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一个有争议的话题，提纲第2点针对该话题提出一种反面观点，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”的看法，由此可推断本文应为比照选择型作文。依据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出关于科学的争议，简洁阐述科学带来的问题;说明“我”对科学的正面看法，阐述科学带给我们的好处;得出结论：科学进展利大于弊。高分范文What Does Modern Sci
2、ence Bring us?The question “What does modern science bring us?” has always 1provoked great debate. Some people argue that science should 2been responsible for pollution and has brought us the nuclear bomb that threatens our existence. 3In addition, they point out that cloning has shaken the foundati
3、on of moral codes.3However, 4compared with the negative aspects, 5I think, the blessing of science is more evident. As we see, the vast improvements made in the field of medicine have served to lengthen our life expectancy and to reduce the rate of infant morality. 3Whats more, the discovery of mech
4、anization, better seeds, better technique of irrigation and pest control has worked to increase the productivity levels on farms. As to transportation, the railway, modern ocean liner, jet plane, and motor vehicles have made our lives more comfortable and convenient, 6as well as provide more chances
5、 for commercial and industrial development. 3Besides, the invention of the computer has assisted a lot in our life and work.3In general, 7the advantages of science far outweigh its disadvantages. And in most cases, 8it is not science itself but human beings misuse of it that brings us undesirable re
6、sults. 3Therefore, 9it is no doubt that we should continue developing science and 10take full advantage of it.【亮点点评】1“引起极大的争议”。2“对负责，是的缘由”。3过渡连接词语，使文章条理清楚、连接严密。4“与相比”，过去分词短语作状语。5“插入语”。6“也，还”，表示并列。7“利大于弊”。8强调句型，此处强调的是notbut连接的并列主语。9“毫无疑问”。10“充分利用”。佳句临摹1.佳句：Compared with the negative aspects, I think,
7、 the blessing of science is more evident.临摹：我认为，与传统的字典相比，电子字典携带和使用起来更加便利。_.2.佳句：Motor vehicles have made our lives more comfortable and convenient, as well as provide more chances for commercial and industrial development.临摹：了解一个人，我们可以看他交什么样的朋友，也可以看他读什么样的书。_.3.佳句：It is not science itself but human b
8、eings misuse of it that brings us undesirable results.临摹：一个人的胜利不是取决于他的外貌而是取决于他的力量。_.【KEY】1. Compared with traditional dictionaries, I think, electronic dictionaries are more convenient to carry and use.2. A man may usually be known by the books he reads as well as by the company he keeps.3. It is not ones appearance but his capability that decides his final success.
